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ST: Independence 10 - "Machines of War"

Shit!

The Decepticons have really pissed Aurelia off now. They are going to SERIOUSLY wish they weren't ever built, and soon. :evil:
 
Ok, hot shot pilot killed? Check. Warp core stolen? Check. Main computer compromised? Check. Sintina annoyed? Check. Probable outcome? Working.......................Decepticons wiped out by insane StarFleet captain=98% probability.;)
 
Well, that went rather badly, didn't it? At this rate, all Captain Aurelia and her crew will be able to do is give the Decepticons the one-fingered salute!

But I imagine our irate Captain has something more effective up her sleeve! (At least, I sure hope she does! :eek: )
 
Here I was thinking we were closing in on the home stretch but this little (mis)-adventure hasn't even begun yet.

Like every well crafted story you have mananged to get our heroes into some serious trouble. The real interesting part (and it has been very interesting so far) is to see how Aurelia is going to get them out. My guess is that the Autobots still have a role to play in this one.

Good stuff!
 
Holy crap! :eek: Talk about a no-win situation. Stranded in hostile territory, no warp core, no antimatter, and taking more casualties by the hour.

Just catching up with this story, and now I have to catch my breath. For a time, it appeared Indy’s shields were an impregnable barrier to the Decepticons… but they got around them by being… deceptive. Who knew? :lol:

Aurelia’s holding it together, but only barely. Having just lost a ship, she’s undoubtedly freaking out on the inside at the possibility of losing this one as well. That was a good gut and ego check by Nidal, allowing Windslow to make the call, despite his inherent mistrust of the man’s decision making capabilities.

A very effective dogfight outside the ship, lots of action and very well paced. I’ve been gone from this story for awhile, but you’ve pulled me back in effortlessly. Well done!
 
CHAPTER 14

Supplemental
USS Independence, Conference Lounge
In Orbit of Cybertron

The room was lit only with lanterns and star light. The crew appeared particularly motley at this meeting. Captain Aurelia, Tang, and D’nas were still in their white EVA under suits. First Officer bin Nadal was armor-clad. The rest of the senior officers, Windslow, Kimula, Zo’Kama, Hatora, Operations Manager Dorian, and the temporary tactical chief, Ensign Lemipil wore the standard duty uniform.

Aurelia didn’t sit. She immediately blurted as the last of the crew assembled, “Report.”

Normally, bin Nadal would begin, but he gestured to Windslow as he had been the de facto CO during most of the action.

The chief engineer interlaced his fingers and rested them on the table, “Including Virak, five are KIA.”

“Another three are being treated for exposure,” inserted Zo’Kama.

Dorian reported, “So far, three of seven armed shuttles have been destroyed.”

“How many unarmed do we have?” questioned the captain.

“Three Type-15 shuttlepods.”

“Arm them,” coldly ordered Sintina.

The ops manager responded, “It’ll take an hour or two, ma’am,” as he made a note on a padd.

“Fine,” she turned to Tang, “What about that damned virus?”

“As I said, ma’am,” he apologetically began, “I’ve tried every counter measure and isolation algorithm I can think of. …I can’t stop it.”

Picking up on his previous statement, Aurelia assumed, “But you think that other faction on the planet can?”

“Yes, ma’am. I’d have to think the Autobots have dealt with this type of attack before,” the science officer concluded.

The captain crossed her arms and sighed deeply. “…Alright, we don’t have much of a choice anyway. At this point, we’ll either die from lack of oxygen or freeze to death…”

The Arkonian doctor leaned in, “Oh, we’d die of asphyxiation first…in about two days… Captain.”

All eyes in the room momentarily found Zo’Kama. After an interesting pause, Sintina continued, “Right. …So we contact the Autobots and get rid of this virus first. Then we get our core back.”

“Captain,” started Windslow, “We’re about twenty light years away from Tamarian space. We should have one of the shuttles send a distress call. They might have a ship in range.”

Aurelia realized that would be one of the first things most Starfleet captains would do. If she had a failing, asking for help was it. Her crew looked at her expectantly. They all knew it was the right course of action. She knew it too…but not yet. She said, “If our first attempt at recovering the core fails, then we’ll send out a general distress call. Not before.”

There were subtle reactions in the group, but no one pressed the issue.

The officer in grey armor raised another point, “There’s something you should know, Captain.” He uncomfortably informed her, “The Autobots are expecting us to provide them with power generators for saving Tang and D’nas.”

Sintina deliberately placed her hands on the marble table and looked into her first officer’s eyes. “I’d be willing to give them a lot more than that if they help us.”

*****

Karim approached the Honduran captain as she made final adjustments to her TEVA in the darkened locker room. He made sure no one was in ear shot. “Sintina,” he began.

She knew exactly what he was going to say and she was in no mood to beat around the bush. She didn’t look up, “I watched Virak explode, Karim. One of these…Autobots was shot at point black range as he reached to save me.” Aurelia ran a check of the tricorder interface. “Their actions speak volumes.” She listed off, “They defended us against Shockwave, they evacuated two of my officers, and they allowed them to go home.”

The Persian observed, “The Decepticons allowed you to go home too.”

Sintina gave him an annoyed look, “Do you really think the Autobots are the bad guys?”

“That’s too easy,” countered Karim, “In real life, there is no such thing as ‘good’ guys and ‘bad’ guys.”

The captain retrieved a pulse phaser rifle from the arms locker. “Fine…but they haven’t tried to kill us.”

Bin Nadal paced a bit. “Will you ask them to help us recover the warp core as well?”

“Yes.”

“And what if they ask for weapons?” he prodded.

Sintina looked up at him from under her brow. She walked over and grabbed a helmet. Then, she moved to exit to the room. Without looking back, she said, “The ship is yours, Commander.”

*****

Lieutenant Kimula entered the locker room a minute later. She regarded Karim with a smirk as he began pulling his black duty uniform pants on over his underwear. “You in command of the boat for now?” she asked.

Bin Nadal was only slightly embarrassed as he turned toward her. “Yeah, I guess so. Sintina’s shuttle just left.”

The Andorian stated, “Since internal comms are out, Windslow wanted me to tell you, the shuttlepods should all be armed with two type-IV phaser arrays in about an hour.” She gestured to the bulkhead, “But you could probably go next door and figure that out.”

Karim zipped up his red undershirt. “Yeah…oh well.”

Kimula stepped forward. She responded to his inflection, “What do you think she’s going to do?”

He paused as he was slipping on his black and grey jacket. “I think she’s going to start a war.”

*****

Captain Aurelia saw three vehicles emerge from their hiding places as the shuttle landed. Before the hatch could open, the trio had amazingly reformed themselves into humanoid robots. The sight was rather spectacular, now that she wasn’t being shot at.

Aurelia, Hatora, Tang, and a couple of security personnel exited the craft. They all wore the more advanced extra-vehicular activity suits. And all were armed.

As they rounded the shuttle, Kup approached them. “You’re back. You’ve managed to surprise and old ‘bot.”

“I’m Captain Sintina Aurelia of the United Federation of Planets. I’m in command of the ship in orbit.”

Sideswipe prompted, “Have you brought the energy?”

She pointed to the security officers. Each went to the shuttle and returned carrying a duffle-sized power generator. “These are microfusion generators. Each will provide about 600 gigawatts of power before the fuel runs out.”

Wheeljack walked up. He got on all fours and scanned the devices. “These generators can power all the Autobots and Iacon for centuries.”

Her heart raced just being in the presence of the colossal beings. Her trepidation…and excitement…was muted, however, by the urgency of their situation. She offered, “There’s more where that came from…if you help us.”

The five meter tall Kup cautiously said, “I told the other one, we can’t get you into Kolkular.”

“I have two problems,” elaborated Sintina. “Your…our enemies have stolen my ship’s main reactor, and they uploaded a virus into my ship’s computer.”

The Autobot engineer volunteered, “I can handle the virus; if you can get me to your ship.”

“As for the reactor,” said Kup, “there’s only one place the ‘cons would take it.”

“To Vector Sigma,” finished Sideswipe. He looked at his comrades, “They’re going to start making new Decepticons.”

Hatora deduced, “Then our problem is your problem.”

Captain Aurelia walked closer to the towering robots. She stated with steely resolve, “If you help us…I promise you…Kolkular will be razed to the ground. What’s that worth to you?”

END OF CHAPTER 14
 
Sintina is playing a dangerous game. Her pride has precluded her seeking assistance from the Tamarians. Now she wants to get involved in the civil war between the Autobots and Decepticons. She seems hell-bent on revenge. Understandable, but not necessarily wise. Still, seeking the help of the Autobots appears to be their only viable option for the moment.

Good stuff! :)
 
Aurelia is her own worst enemy when her pride has been bruised... such as right now. She's playing fast and loose with the rules, and denying her crew the assistance of the Tamarians because she wants to fix this outrage on her own. Here's hoping Independence doesn't burn on the pyre of her ego's flame.
 
Aurelia is playing a dangerous game, but I almost feel sorry for the Decepticons. They're going to get their exhausts kicked...hard.

And she's not getting involved in the war, she was forced into it. The 'Cons will be real sorry they stole the core.
 
I feel bad because I had to laugh at the line "if Aurielia had one failing it was asking for help." .... excuse me, one failing? :lol:

Hey, we all know she ain't perfect but I think going to the Autobots was her only real option, save for abandoning yet another ship.

She's angry right now but she'll calm down a bit eventually once things start going right. And if she doesn't, well at least there'll be some nice fireworks.
 
I feel bad because I had to laugh at the line "if Aurielia had one failing it was asking for help." .... excuse me, one failing? :lol:

LOL, very true. I should have said, "One of Aurelia's major failings..." :)
 
Pride goeth before a fall...

Having said that, she's willing to go to the Autobots for help,s o there's hope for her yet. Also, I have the Decepticons are going to wish they'd have just let her go...
 
CHAPTER 15

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Shuttle Bay
In Orbit of Cybertron

Shuttlecraft Sharlin glided effortlessly into the deserted bay. All activities had to cease, due to the arriving shuttle and the lack of an external force field. In its tractor beam was a white vehicle, Wheeljack. Its cargo was gently placed on the deck moments before the shuttle itself came to rest.

Once the area was repressurized, several crew members delayed returning to their duties as their new passenger altered his form. The shift was so smooth…yet chaotic. The two story tall bay fit the mechanical being rather comfortably. He seemed to be just as interested in the various Federation races as they were of him. It took most people a few seconds to realize they were staring.

A helmetless Aurelia strode out of the shuttle hatch. Emotionless, she looked up at the Autobot. “Can you access our computer now?”

“I’ve already made the interface,” confirmed the robot.

“How long will it take you to eliminate the virus?” the Latin American captain asked impatiently.

The automaton made a shrugging gesture. “I can’t say for sure. Definitely less than six hours.”

“Six hours?” repeated Aurelia.

“No, I said less than that. Would you rather I lie?” rejoined the Autobot.

The response…not to mention the imposing figure…took her down a notch. “No…no, of course not. I’m sure you’ll do your best.” She turned to Hatora, who joined her, and said in a murmur, “Watch him.”

The peach-skinned Illyrian nodded.

Aurelia then moved with a purpose. She strode passed the engineers finishing the modifications on the shuttlepods and exited through the heavy interior hatch.

*****

Captain Aurelia convened yet another conference. This time, she and Tang were the only ones out of their duty uniforms.

“I’m not willing to sit with my thumb up my ass for six hours,” Sintina determined.

Commander Windslow leaned in, “What else can we do?”

The captain crossed her arms…as much as her armor would allow. “I’m getting the core back.” She slowly made a lap around the table as she elaborated. “The Autobots have agreed to be part of our assault. They’re convinced our warp core is near a computer they call Vector Sigma. It’s half a kilometer beneath the surface. We’ve confirmed the intel with our own scans. An m/am reactor’s power signature is hard to hide, even with the interference.”

“Do the Autobots have a plan of attack?” questioned bin Nadal.

Aurelia continued, “Kup assured me it would be well guarded. So we’re going to have to draw the Decepticons out.”

“How, ma’am?” queried the Tamarian helm officer.

The captain laid down her bold plan with a tone that left no room for debate. “We’re going to launch a full scale assault of Kolkular, the Decepticon stronghold. That will be the distraction. A smaller team will recover the warp core from the underground chamber.”

The room became dead silent. Many jaws were slack and eyes were wide.

Sintina took advantage of the hush and began issuing orders. “I want to pack all the shuttles with security personnel and anyone else with combat training. We’re going down with a full load out. One shuttle will serve as a rotating transport. The rest will provide supporting fire once they unload.

The Sharlin will hold the team that goes after the core.” She focused on Windslow, “I’ll need our best engineer on that team. So you’re going. If anyone gives you crap…well I don’t care, just do it.”

The disgraced captain acknowledged solemnly.

“Where will the Autobots be during all this?” asked Karim with a hint of cynicism.

The captain replied quickly, “Kup called for assistance, but apparently, the Autobots on planet are restricted to ground travel. So, they may not be there in time. But to answer your question: Kup will meet up with the Vector Sigma team, Sideswipe is part of the Kolkular assault team, and Wheeljack is going to continue to work on the virus up here.” She added, “Let’s be clear. The Autobots will be able to help, but we are the main fighting force.”

Zo’Kama wasn’t as intimidated by the bullheaded captain as some of the others. She bluntly pointed out, “Do you realize how bloody this might turn out to be?”

“People die in war, doctor,” was the equally frank response. “If you don’t think the shuttle is adequate to evacuate the wounded, feel free to set up a pressurized medical shelter on the surface.”

After a short, but intense moment, the Arkonian said, “I’ll do that, Captain.”

“If there’s nothing else,” concluded Aurelia, “let’s make it happen.” Without fielding anymore questions, she walked out.

Everyone’s gaze found bin Nadal. He stood and said in a practiced command voice, “You heard her. Get moving.”

The rest of the officers began to file out of the dark conference lounge. Kimula pleaded to Karim with her eyes. He understood and in a glance agreed with her. Windslow was less subtle.

“Commander, this is going to be messy. There is no reason why we can’t delay the attack…at least until the computer and weapons are back up.”

Karim nodded, “I know. I’ll talk to her.”

“I hope you have better luck changing her mind than I did,” the chief engineer said as he walked away.

On a purely rational level, bin Nadal knew his promotion to XO would strain his friendship with Sintina. But now, that fact resonated on a much deeper level. He emotionally prepared himself for the confrontation to come.

*****

With a soft hiss, the door to Aurelia’s ready room slid shut behind Karim. Like the rest of the ship, it was dark.

Sintina leaned over her desk in her TEVA suit. “What is it, Karim?”

He decided to start civil, though he anticipated it wouldn’t stay that way. “I recommend you delay the attack until we’re back up to one hundred percent, ma’am.”

She gave him a frigid look. “One hundred percent?” she repeated. “That’s not going to happen, not without a warp core, not without Virak, not without the others dead.” She picked up a padd and appeared to be distracted by it. “No, we can’t wait.”

It was then bin Nadal decided to cross a line he had managed to side step so many times before. There was no way to avoid it this time. He assumed the position of ‘at ease’ in preparation of what he knew would come next. “With all due respect, ma’am, the course of action you’re taking is reckless and ill-conceived. This assault would have a better chance of success if…”

She venomously cut him off, “I don’t need this shit! Not from you. Not now!”

“I think you do need it,” he said coldly, “it’s the role of the first officer to point out alternatives and…”

“…And when to know to shut the hell up!” she spat. “I’ve made my decision, now get out.”

“No.”

Aurelia’s brows went up. She was nearly is shock. “No?”

“You may have the rest of the crew fooled, Sintina,” he started in a surprisingly calm…almost gentle voice, “You go to so much trouble to make yourself look like a cold, tough as nails bitch. But Kimula and I see through that façade. We’ve fought with you. We’ve seen you when your guard was down. We know you’re terrified.”

“What?” she muttered.

Karim continued as if she hadn’t spoken, “Terrified of failure. Terrified of looking weak. Terrified that you really are incompetent.”

“Get out!” she roared.

The Persian was unphased. “I can imagine what it must be like for you. Half the senior brass thinks you’re a loose cannon. During the war, that trait earned you medals; now, the same people who praised you would rather you not even have a command. That must screw with your confidence.”

Sintina wasn’t sure to be enraged or not. She stood, confounded.

“It must have been horrible for you, being taken away by that metal monster. It must have been your worst nightmare come to life. For that period of time, you were weak and helpless.”

Her jaw began to tremble. She felt water forming around her eyes. Her fists were clinched.

He looked at her intently. “I know all this…and I don’t believe you’re incompetent. I don’t think you’re weak. But I do think you’re ego is very sensitive.” He came closer, “No one will think less of you if you change your mind. Caution and re-evaluation is not weakness. And as much as you want to punish the Decepticons for so blatantly showing you your faults, it’s not worth going in half-assed and getting slaughtered.”

He had said his peace. Without waiting for a reaction, Commander bin Nadal turned and walked out, leaving Sintina to struggle with her own demons.

*****

Several long and silent minutes passed on the…for the moment, useless bridge. Officers manned their stations, but there was little to do but stare off into the darkness. Karim had assumed the center seat since leaving the ready room. He sat there, nearly motionless. It was beginning to get rather chilly in the ship.

His compin chirped on, “Captain Aurelia to all department heads. Continue preparation for deployment to the surface. The operation, however, will be postponed until ship’s functions are back on-line and our allies on the surface are closer to the target locations. That is all.”

The first officer grinned in the dimmed light.

END OF CHAPTER 15
 
Karim cut right to the core of Aureilia here, didn't he? Pretty amazing stand. But sometimes you just gotta do what's right and thankfully Aurelia has seen the light before it's too late.

Very good work on the interaction between those characters, particuarly Karim. He hasn't been doing this for long but he's clearly cut out for the job.

I'm not sure I agree with putting so many boots on the ground for a full out assault but I'm looking forward to it nevertheless.
 
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Go Karim! Its about time someone slapped her down-she can't be a loose cannon forever. A captain that doesn't grow is a danger to her people. I'm glad Sintina is willing to learn-even if it is a "kicking and screaming" process.
 
Very nicely written out dialogue sequence--you brought out the strengths and flaws of both Karim and Sintina here. We're seeing Sintina evolving--fitfully and painfully--into being a good captain as Karim also evolves into a command officer.

Very well done.
 
I can't add much to what's already been said. Aurelia finally enjoys a good relationship with an XO that she can confide in, and one that can call her on her bullshit. That wasn't an easy conversation for Karim to have with her, nor for Sintina to have to hear, but it's the XO's responsibility to offer her other options.

Watching Sintina pull herself back from the edge gives me hope that the headstrong young captain can be tempered. If not, the new Independence won't last much longer than her predecessor.
 
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