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Gravity - Chapter 5, Part I

Chapter 5, Part I

"Thank you, Captain Sandhurst," Aldo Ramirez said, his voice carefully modulated for public consumption, "for bringing my daughter home."

Sandhurst clasped Ramirez's hand firmly, his eyes searching those of Liana's father for any sign of emotion. The man remained very much like his handshake: warm, dry, and utterly perfunctory.

Thus concluded the hastily rescheduled memorial ceremony in the now heavily guarded conference center aboard Hades' Apex. A mix of company and shipboard security personnel surrounded the event, working in conjunction to assure the earlier incident was not repeated.

The assembly of corporate and Starfleet officers splintered into a milling throng as people made introductions, initiated conversations or made their way to the refreshment tables set along one wall. Sandhurst had just barely surrendered his grasp of Ramirez's hand when the CEO took him by the elbow and maneuvered him insistently towards one of the large viewing ports set into the outer bulkhead.

"Again, Captain, I wish to apologize for that unconscionable outrage when you arrived," Ramirez's features were suddenly tight with repressed anger.

Sandhurst took a moment to gaze out the viewport at the roiling, mesmerizing specter that was the planet Acheron. "If anyone owes an apology here, Mr. Ramirez, it's me."

Ramirez actually had to think about that statement before its meaning sunk in. His expression softened marginally. "I've been made aware of the circumstances surrounding Liana's death, Captain. I bear you no ill-will. She died as she lived, fighting."

Sandhurst was caught desperately trying to come up some kind of cogent response to that when Ramirez forged ahead. "If you can be spared, Captain, my engineering team aboard the particle fountain is eagerly awaiting your assistance. They've been pouring over your project evaluations from Tyra and can't wait to speak with you in person."

Blindsided by the unexpected shift in topics, Sandhurst stared blankly at the man for a long moment. "Yes," he finally murmured, sounding tentative. "Of course. Whatever help I can offer."

"Excellent," Ramirez responded, his earlier pique now apparently banished.

The remainder of the wake went by in a blur of expressed condolences and awkward conversation until such time as Sandhurst could gracefully bow out.

*****

"Come in." The response was muffled and listless, and as she entered his quarters, Issara Taiee found Sandhurst sitting at his work desk with an untouched glass of what she guessed to be liquor in his hand.

"Tarkalian ale?" she inquired as she stepped into the cabin.

"Whiskey, neat," he corrected.

"I didn't think you liked whiskey," Taiee noted as she moved unbidden to take a seat on the sofa facing his desk.

"Can't stand the stuff," he affirmed dourly. "I wanted something with some bite to it." He glanced down, swishing the amber liquid around in the glass.

She prompted, "And?"

He sighed and set the glass down atop the desk, pushing it away from him. "It won't help." He turned in his chair to face his Chief Medical Officer as he plastered on a forced smile. "What brings you around, Doc?"

"A little birdie mentioned to me that you looked a little rattled after the memorial ceremony. The person said you got out of there as soon as you could."

Sandhurst nodded slowly. "Yeah. That whole thing was... " he trailed off, at a loss for words.

Taiee merely sat there but did not press the issue. She had a knack for listening that rivaled that of the ship's former security chief.

"I was prepared for Ramirez to be enraged, spiteful, even vindictive towards me given what I did to his daughter." Sandhurst stared off into space, his expression vacant. "What I wasn't prepared for was the man's utter ambivalence."

"Really?" Taiee looked surprised and troubled by the revelation.

Sandhurst shook his head fractionally. "He was more concerned with my getting aboard his damned siphon station than he was with his daughter's memorial and wake. If anything, he seemed like the whole situation with Liana was an unwanted distraction."

"That's a shame," Taiee sighed. "Living with a man like that couldn't have been easy. It probably explains why she left home as soon as she could to pursue an appointment to the academy."

Sandhurst reached out a hand to turn his tabletop data terminal towards Taiee. On the display screen was a headshot of Liana Ramirez along with her service record. "I've been reading this over since I got back. Do you know that despite the fact that she had a stellar career, there are very few indications that Liana had very many close friendships?"

"She was on the fast track," Taiee offered. "She never struck me as having much time for anything that detracted from her quest for a captaincy."

He locked eyes with Taiee. "Could it be that we few are the only ones who will mourn Liana's passing? How fundamentally wrong is that? She's supposed to have a loving family who should be wailing and gnashing their teeth at the injustice of it all. Instead, all she's got is a group of people who barely knew her, the crew of a ship she never wanted to serve aboard."

"Perhaps that will have to do," Taiee said softly. "Liana was a force of nature, and she had a singular focus. What was it that Shakespeare wrote? 'I am constant as the Northern Star.' That's a pretty accurate epitaph for Captain Ramirez."

Sandhurst replied with a humorless smirk, "So what you're saying is the candle that burns twice as bright burns half as long?"

Taiee gave her captain a supportive smile. "That too."

*****

Lt. Verrik noted the loathsome looks both he and Ch'har received from the various passers-by as he and the company's Xindi reptilian chief of operations walked along the station's commercial promenade. Damage to various shops and kiosks from the short-lived riot was nearly repaired, and life seemed to be returning to normal, or what passed for normal on the emotionally charged outpost.

"What was the outcome of your security team's intervention during the earlier incident?" the Vulcan inquired stolidly.

The sensory vanes on Ch'har's head waved with agitation. "My men stunned over a dozen of the most violent protesters. The rest abandoned their cause rather quickly and departed the area. My staff are continuing the investigation and conducting interviews with identified participants in the disruption."

"Does this happen frequently here?" Verrik attuned his senses to observe Ch'har's reaction to the question.

The reptilian maintained a calm facade. "Not usually, but such incidents have been occurring with greater frequency of late due to company's financial situation and the union's perception of the particle fountain rig as a threat to their members' well being."

"I find it intriguing that something as mundane as currency-based economics could incite such behavior in otherwise rational humanoids."

Ch'har grunted disconsolately. "They see their livelihood at risk, and though they are incorrect in that assessment, humanoids have been known to go to war for far less."

Verrik considered that briefly. "I would be remiss if I did not point out that this entire situation could have been avoided by your company's incorporating within the Federation's economic markets."

That caused Ch'har to stop in his tracks to face the Starfleet officer. "The Ramirez family has built this company over generations, and one of the founding pillars of that enterprise was the idea that the corporation would be a for-profit industry outside the economic vacuum of the Federation. Your rules and regulations would have been a death sentence for this project."

"Vacuum?" Verrik looked very nearly displeased with that assessment. "As a citizen of the Federation, I can assure you that neither I nor my family have ever wanted for anything. Our needs are well met, freeing each of us to pursue such endeavors as pleases our individual natures."

"But what of those who want more?" Ch'har probed. "To limit an individual's potential wealth is stifling to some, regardless of what 'opportunities' the Federation tries to ply as compensation for that restriction." Ch'har eyed Verrik warily, "I don't find your outlook to be especially in keeping with your people's espousal of Infinite Diversity."

"Please to not presume to tell me how I should believe based on my genetics," Verrik parried, "or shall I point out that as a reptilian of the Xindi species, you should have become enraged with this topic of conversation thirty seconds ago and should by all rights have attempted to initiate a physical confrontation with me as a result."

This made Ch'har smirk. "What sort of Vulcan are you, Lieutenant?"

"An opinionated one," was Verrik's reply.

Ch'har laughed out loud at that. "I like you, Lieutenant. I may disagree vehemently with you on nearly every point we've touched on, but I find your divergent outlook... refreshing."

Verrik turned to examine a work-crew making repairs to a kiosk on the level below. "If only everyone shared that same appreciation," he observed with only the slightest hint of irony in his tone.

*****
 
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Re: Gravity - Chapter 5, Part I

Ahh, very nice...I like Ch'har indeed! He articulates his viewpoint quite well, and I think he has something that deserves thought.

And what a poignant reflection on the passing of Ramirez and the awful behavior of her father. Man, I wish I could've been there to help comfort Sandhurst! I like the guy so much--it sucks to always see him hurting. :(
 
Re: Gravity - Chapter 5, Part I

Ahh, very nice...I like Ch'har indeed! He articulates his viewpoint quite well, and I think he has something that deserves thought.

And what a poignant reflection on the passing of Ramirez and the awful behavior of her father. Man, I wish I could've been there to help comfort Sandhurst! I like the guy so much--it sucks to always see him hurting. :(
Thanks. :) He's getting better, honest he is. Liana's father's lack of a reaction just took him off guard, as he'd been prepared to either get screamed at or cold-shouldered.
 
Wow! I found Mr. Ramirez' blase response to his daughter's death to be jarring. I can certainly understand Sandhurst's response - he expected just about anything but that.

Sandhurst sometimes has a tendency to brood. It's part of what makes him such an interesting character, but it might push him back into the dark place if he's not careful.

I enjoyed the back and forth between Ch'har and Lt. Verrik. Those that live out in the borderlands might tend to take Ch'har's side of the argument. A very nicely written exchange.

Okay, enough with the kudos - get back to work! :lol:
 
I like it. I like it a lot. I really like the approach you're taking with Ramirez, and Sandhurst's counterpoint to it. Donald's conversation with Taiee seems like it might just be the first small step on the path toward truly understanding Liana's life and of forgiving himself.

And, as others have commented, I really enjoyed that last conversation. I liked that you're introducing us in more depth to a member of the Xindi, and especially that we're getting another unique Vulcan.

Very nice.

Now, as TLR said ..., back to work, you! *cracks the whip* :evil:

And, as for me, it's on to TLR's latest installment. :D
 
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This is going to be tough in Sandhurst. I think he half-expected and half-hoped that Ramirez's father would rail against him and that probably would soothe some of his harboured guilt. The fact he didn't means to say Sandhurst doesn't get to punish himself that way - so it may mean more self hurting but his conversation with Taiee might prove his is on the road to recovery.

Liking the last interaction. Verrick is so funny with his Vulcan responses that are so blunt and brutally to the point. Hee hee
 
Wow! I found Mr. Ramirez' blase response to his daughter's death to be jarring. I can certainly understand Sandhurst's response - he expected just about anything but that.

Sandhurst sometimes has a tendency to brood. It's part of what makes him such an interesting character, but it might push him back into the dark place if he's not careful.

I enjoyed the back and forth between Ch'har and Lt. Verrik. Those that live out in the borderlands might tend to take Ch'har's side of the argument. A very nicely written exchange.

Okay, enough with the kudos - get back to work! :lol:

I agree with all of this. And I always find myself feeling for Sandhurst when I read your stuff. He's easy to sympathize with, as long as you're inside his head, which thanks to you, we are. :techman:
 
I agree with all of this. And I always find myself feeling for Sandhurst when I read your stuff. He's easy to sympathize with, as long as you're inside his head, which thanks to you, we are. :techman:
Thanks! :) He's got a lot to sort out on this mission, though I hope that in the end he'll be stronger for the experience.
 
Wow, that was a long time coming, wasn't it? Well worth the wait though.

It is becoming quickly obvous that Ramirez was nothing like her father. They didn't get along when she was alive and he seems to care little for her even now that she's dead.

As Liana Ramirez is one of the great (unsung) heroes of the Federation, it leads one to believe that her father is going to turn out as one of the great villains.

Tragic but totally fascinating stuff.
 
That was not the reception I thought Donald was going to get. Good piece and looking forward to more.
 
Well worth the wait indeed. I like the conversation between Ch'har and Verrik. This story, along with Redshirt's is giving us some very good insights into the relationship between the core and the frontier of the Federation--in many ways, we're seeing the evolution of two different societies...
 
Gravity - Chapter 5, Part II

Chapter 5, Part II

Sandhurst stood near the ramp to the shuttle Kon-Tiki and waited patiently as the deck crew loaded the last of the equipment pallets aboard the craft. With the particle fountain rig’s impeller matrix energized, beaming to and from the orbital platform would be impossible, thus Sandhurst had sought to bring with him every piece of equipment and tool that he thought might possibly be needed.

Ashok sat in the pilot’s seat, finishing the pre-flight check on the shuttle’s systems.

Sandhurst’s compin chirped. “Bridge to the captain.”

He tapped the combadge reflexively with one hand while affixing his thumbprint to a padd containing a materials requisition order being extended to him by one of the cargo specialists. “Sandhurst, go ahead.”

“Sir, you’re receiving a priority-one diplomatic communiqué from Bolarus IX on subpace.”

As Sandhurst made his way to an LCARS panel located in a secluded alcove just off the flight deck, he frowned warily. “Understood. Please send the transmission through to terminal Baker-Four.”

The screen came to life, briefly displaying the logo of the Federation’s Diplomatic Corps before the face of a middle aged Bolian woman took shape.

“Captain Sandhurst?” the woman inquired hopefully.

*****

Aerie-class Patrol Scout USS Harrier
Barisa System
In orbit of Planet Acheron


Harrier was of the same class as the ill-fated SS Raven, the civilian research craft which had gone missing in the nearer reaches of the Delta Quadrant some decades earlier. The military variant of that series of craft, she was outfitted with more discerning long and mid-range sensors, in addition to a formidable weapons suite for a ship her size. Thus Harrier and her sister ships served to fill the gap between automated sensor buoys and the various cutters employed by the Border Service to patrol the boundaries and spacelanes of the Federation. With a crew of six, Harrier could be dispatched to reconnoiter, investigate, and report back on specific incidents or phenomena, while fielding better sensors and defenses than the more vulnerable classes of runabouts.

Lieutenant Darcelle Trumbley of the Border Service stooped to look at the display over the shoulder of Ensign Thomas ‘Tommy’ Booker. “Still nothing?”

Booker suppressed a yawn, but only just. “Yeah,” he said numbly before he remembered he was speaking to his commanding officer. “I mean, yes, sir,” he corrected earnestly, causing Trumbley to smirk.

She patted the young man’s shoulder. “Relax, Mister Booker. This assignment is proving every bit as exciting for me as it is for you.”

“Grid Gamma-Seven-Two clear of anomalies,” announced Petty Officer Huu’Sau-Nuwi from the abbreviated collection of control panels that comprised the scout’s cramped science station. “Proceeding to grid Gamma-Seven-Three.” The Tiburonian non-comm looked over at Trumbley and rolled his eyes theatrically. “All the other border-dogs in the sector are sharpening their knives on the Tzenkethi border. Remind me again how we pulled this shit detail?”

Trumbley rubbed her eyes and sighed as she made her way back to the seat that served as both captain’s chair as well as the ship’s operations station. “We can’t all be assigned to the Dragonfire, Hoos,” she replied, employing the man’s dreaded nickname. "While Captain Slayd is busy bloodying the big cats’ noses, someone has to mind the store.”

Booker glanced back from his station, his expression one of undisguised frustration. “But sir, there’s a starship here in orbit with us. Why are we even here when they could be carrying out the exact same mission?”

Gibraltar has her own priorities,” Trumbley explained. “Rumor has it they’re returning the body of a fallen officer to Hades’ Apex.”

“And that precludes them from turning on their sensors… how?” Huu’Sau-Nuwi pressed with a thin smile.

The novelty of the conversation had now faded for Trumbley, who resumed her seat and pulled her console interface back into place in front of her. “I follow orders, Hoos. If Starfleet wants us to sit here above Acheron and scan for possible anomalies, then that’s what we’ll do.”

“Aye, sir,” Booker sighed, before adding under his breath, “I’d just like to see a little action is all.”

Trumbley shook her head with a bemused expression. “Trust me, Ensign. The first time you end up in combat with the Tzenkethi, you’ll regret those words.”

*****

As Kon-Tiki cleared the shuttlebay doors, Sandhurst glanced over at the silent Bolian at the helm. “So,” he said conversationally, “I received an interesting comms transmission just before we left.”

Ashok minded the flight controls stolidly as he waited for the captain to elaborate.

Right, Sandhurst assessed silently. He’s not going to make this easy.

“Your mother used a priority diplomatic channel to plead with me to send you home for the dedication of the spire,” he declared bluntly.

It would have been nearly impossible to miss the shudder that seemed to pass through the engineer’s large frame at this pronouncement. Ashok sighed heavily, momentarily at a loss for words. Finally, he rumbled, “I apologize for her… earnestness in this matter, Captain. Misappropriating a priority comms frequency for personal use is a violation of several—”

“That’s not the issue,” Sandhurst countered, cutting Ashok off with a firm yet surprisingly non-confrontational tone. “I’m going to take what I said earlier about staying out of your business and toss it out the airlock.” He took a moment to consider his next words carefully, fully aware that Ashok might shut him out or close down completely if he were not sufficiently succinct.

“Ashok, your mother needs you right now. However you felt about your father, whatever his feelings towards you, he’s gone. Your mother, however, is still here, and what she wants from you is for you to honor your father’s memory with her on a very important occasion.” He turned his head to look at the larger man’s profile as Ashok continued to pilot the shuttle without comment. “Let this be about her, rather than your father and his legacy.”

Again, Ashok remained silent, his thoughts unknowable but for the deep cerulean blush that had suffused his features.

“Don’t look back on this decision with regret later in life after she’s gone too,” Sandhurst said with finality.

*****

USS Harrier

“Now moving to grid… grid…“ Huu’Sau-Nuwi stared blankly at his terminal’s screen as his fatigued mind sought the next set of coordinates. Suddenly, he felt something tickling at the edge of his consciousness, a nearly euphoric sensation that seemed to percolate through his entire body simultaneously. The Tiburonian opened his mouth to say something, but no sound issued forth.

Then the lights went out, and the world became chaos.

*****

Shuttle Kon-Tiki

The awkward silence between the two men seemed to stretch into the subspace realm as Aldo Ramirez’s vaunted particle fountain grew larger in the forward viewport. Sandhurst struggled to find something to say to change the subject, but then thought better of it. Perhaps Ashok needed time and silence to let his words sink in, Sandhurst thought.

Both men nearly jumped at the unexpected trill of the comms panel. “Gibraltar to Kon-Tiki, be advised that we are declaring an in-flight emergency on behalf of the Border Service scout Harrier at bearing one-four-four, mark three-two-nine. The ship appears to have lost attitude control and its thrusters are pushing it into Acheron’s upper atmosphere.”

“Come hard about,” Sandhurst ordered as he toggled the comms. “Gibraltar, are you in tractor range?”

“Negative, sir,” Juneau replied. “We’re vectoring towards Harrier now, but you’re closer by a good two minutes.”

“Setting an intercept course now,” Sandhurst confirmed as Ashok swung the shuttle around in a tight turn and accelerated towards the dark, outermost surface of the gargantuan planet below.

*****

USS Harrier

Lieutenant Trumbley gasped for breath as the weight of six-gravities pressed her against the ceiling of the bridge. That Harrier had lost all power was not in question, and now as the ship plummeted deeper into the gravity well of Acheron the vessel’s inertial dampeners had failed utterly.

The one small part of her mind not clouded by the grip of adrenaline-fueled terror surmised that the ship’s movements seemed indicative of some propulsion source, likely a malfunctioning control thruster.

As the increasing g-forces and the wild gyrations of the ship pummeled her into unconsciousness, Trumbley’s last errant thought was that young Mister Booker should have exercised greater restraint in what he wished for…

*****
 
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Yay! More story! What a cool treat to start my morning!

Loved the scene between Ashok and Sandhurst. Ashok is so infuriatingly quiet, but he's one of your most interesting characters because of it. I could just picture his mom calling on that priority channel and begging Sandhurst to make him attend the dedication. Nice scene.

And then we have the Harriet ... be careful what you wish for, indeed! I hope Sandhurst or the crew of Gibraltar can intervene in time!

I'm excited to see another chapter from you!
 
Glad to see you writing again! :D

I have to say, that is very worrisome--something that looks like a telepathic intrusion and now they're being pulled into Acheron's atmosphere. Either our union boys got themselves a new and deadly weapon (or for that matter, the Ramirez family)--or the mining has awakened a sleeping giant on the planet below.

(Or even a third external force--soooooo much mystery!!!)
 
Ok, I see what's going on here. You're going to torture us by feeding us a little chapter every six months or so, aren't you?

In any case, an interesting new dimension to this story. I'm going to go on a limb here and say that Harrier's trouble is no random accident and somehow connected with this fountain. Hopefully we find out how and why soon.

Great stuff and looking forward to more all-new Gibraltar!
 
Please, sir, may I have another? :D

Wow, what a nice jump back into Gravity! Thanks for the shout-out to Slayd & Co. on Dragonfire. I like the use of the Aerie-class vessel as a Border Service scout. (scrawls note to self . . .).

Asok's stubborn streak may cause him the pain of regret if he ignore's his mother's wishes. Nice to see Sandhurst take on the "fatherly" role (though he's not particularly thrilled with it.)

Now Harrier is in a death-spiral and Kon-Tiki is their only hope, underscoring the "gravity" of the situation. *ducks*

Great segment! Like CeJay, I hope we don't have to wait another 6 months. :lol:
 
Gibraltar rides again! Yay! I like the concept of the Harrier, that kind of ship. It makes sense for Border Service, y'know? Hope this one survives...
 
Oh very interesting developments. The Harrier somehow crashing into the planet's atmosphere - it does seem as if possession or telepathy is involved but who knows when it comes to one of your stories. A neat shout out to the Dragonfire and Slayd's war on the Tzekenthi. The touch about the small border scout is fitting and cool too.
But what really rocks is Ashok and Sandhurst. A brief little conversation between the two of them and Sandhurst choosing to involve himself in the personal affairs of the reticent Ashok. Oh dear, that's as like to cause more trouble and grief than anything else that is going to go down. Well from Ashok's point of view anyway. Hee hee.
A glorious return.

More please...
 
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