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ST: Gibraltar - Gravity

Re: Gravity - Chapter 3, Part 1

The more I read of Junt, the more I like him. Also, I liked your putting Sub-Commander Trivius in a utilitarian jumpsuit with his insignia just sloppily put on--not to mention his name: Trivius=trivial? Very apropos symbolism for the decline of the Empire--nice touch.

The last scene with Sandhurst was incredibly powerful and moving--Donald has turned a corner here--pity it took the loss of Liana for that to happen.
 
I concur, Junt (IMHO) is what Ferengi should have been.

It's good to see Sandhurst starting to get out of his funk. Now, if he's smart, he'll start rebuilding some bridges.
 
Great scenes resulting from great writing! It's good to see Donald come to grips with his inner demons - and prevail. He'll carry scars and hurts, but I think he's going to be okay. It's a testimony to your character development that I feel such an affinity for a fictional character - well done! :)
 
I, too, am glad that Sandhurst is on his way to finding some kind of peace with himself over past events. This is a man who deserves to be able to just go ahead someday and be the good commander we know he can be.
 
Good assessment of the pre-NEM Romulan Empire. Also, the scene with Sandhurst and Liana was poignant and a very concise account of the Hell Donald has been through the last year and how he's come through it.
 
well written and insightful bit about Sandhurst "coming to terms". And you can put me in the "love Junt" column too.
 
Absolutely just great writing. As others have said, the scene with Sandhurst over Ramierz coffin is just exactingly correct and one could well with tears for the cost of it to Sandhurst but also to how it seems he has reached a turning point, he's crossed the Rubicon, he's coming to terms with what the war and the Baron has done to him and seen he is still the kernel of himself for all that. Brilliant.

But there's so much more besides - a deadly operative who can hide in other people's heads and make good their escape and although I'm skipping some of my Gibraltar stories in reading this - I will get there but they are mammoth stories! - the origin on the operative is very mysterious to me especially with the line:

However, hiding within the mind of a Vulcan had certain advantages, chief among them being that no one would question his returning to his homeworld on leave. Once there, she could take Verrik to Mount Seleya, to the very place where her unlikely journey had begun.

On top of that there is Junt whom we all collectively agree is a great character - something you are great at doing. But also our stoic Bolian and his family issues; the mining / particle fountain story and just who is behind the possible sabotage - great intrigue and politics.

Well done.

P.S. I liked it.
 
Gravity - Chapter 3, Part 2

Tramordian Spire Construction Zone
Yenesh-Itsich Provincial Habitation
Bolarus IX
Circa 2357


Ashok stood fast against the bracing, blustering winds that seemed determined to scour every last grain of silt from the once fertile alluvial plain that surrounded the gargantuan construction rig. He stood apart from his father, who was surrounded by a gaggle of fellow engineers, as well as various government and corporate representatives, all clamoring for a moment of the great Hakaseus’ time.

At fourteen years, Ashok already towered over his father, a fact that the famed architect had claimed was a favorable omen for a man laboring to build the planet’s first transatmospheric structure.

The young man quietly observed the noisy throng of sycophants surrounding his father, all the while rehearsing how he might go about telling the man that he had failed his entrance exams to the prestigious Daystrom affiliated prep-school on Alpha Centauri. Ashok’s father had attended that very school, crediting it as the first stepping stone to his admission to the Vulcan Science Academy’s elite School of Architectural Studies.

Ashok had been groomed since birth to follow in his father’s footsteps. It was his destiny to assume the mantle of his family’s long service to the state, the builders of temples, palaces, universities and now, this latest triumph, the embodimenet of the Bolian peoples’ collective will and fortitude. Hakaseus knew that he would never live to see the completion of the spire, but his only son would stand in his stead, finishing the project and forever inscribing their family’s name in the annals of history.

His father’s flock eventually dispersed, and Hakaseus moved towards him as he sealed the neckline of his greatcoat against the persistant wind. “I hired an army of functionaries to keep these jackals from me, and what good has it done?” His broad smile belied the statement; Ashok knew his father reveled in the attention, in the celebrity of his accomplishments.

Ashok fell into step alongside the man, careful not to outpace him. “Father... I have news.” He’d blurted it unexpectedly, so anxious to be done with the inevitable confrontation.

“And...” Hakaseus prompted, “speak.”

The young man blew out a frustrated breath, “And... I was not accepted at the Vadran School. I failed the entrance exam by twenty-seven points.”

That stopped his father in his tracks. The man said nothing for a long moment and merely stared at the parched earth beneath his feet. “Unacceptable,” he said finally.

“I would agree,” Ashok offered, “but I must wait another half-cycle before reapplying.”

Hakaseus turned on him, “How could you allow this to happen? How could you let yourself become so sidetracked that you could upset your schedule?”

“My schedule,” Ashok echoed. That was what his father called it. Ashok was expected to attend the same schools in the same succession in the same timeframe as his father had. It was ‘their’ schedule.

“I will redouble my efforts, Father. I will study harder...”

Hakaseus waved the notion away with an impatient hand. “That will set you back another two semesters prior to your graduation, which fouls your start date for your internship with the Construction Fellowship...”

“Father, forgive me, I--”

“No,” Hakaseus hissed with exasperation, “enough. If I didn’t know better, I would think this was a deliberate tactic by you to re-examine that ridiculous notion of yours about Starfleet.”

Ashok winced as if physically pained. His father had already made his opinions on Starfleet service crystal clear. “I would never go against your wishes, Father. You know this.”

Hakaseus pointed an accusatory finger at his son. “I will not suffer to see you in a military uniform, Ashok. Even working for their design corps is unthinkable. We are as much artists as engineers, and the thought of you slaving away as a journeyman tinkerer on their utilitarian, pedantic designs is simply too awful to consider!"

“Of course, Father,” Ashok sighed dejectedly.

His father’s querulous response was drown out by a persistent chime that grew more troubling until it had intruded completely into the dream.

Ashok found himself staring up at the ceiling from his bed, his eyes fixed to the luminous hologram of the Tramordian Spire that he’d placed directly above his sleeping alcove. He reached out and silenced the alarm, prepared to meet another day where no matter what he accomplished he would be just good enough.

Only just.

*****

Juneau stepped through the door at Sandhurst's invitation and moved to place the padd atop his ready room desk. "Another new possibility, sir."

Sandhurst pushed away the computer terminal and looked over the padd. "T'Ser," he said, pronouncing each syllable distinctly. He appeared intrigued, and bade Juneau to take a seat as he scrolled through the padd's contents. "Ah, she's one of Akinola's. I think I remember her vaguely from my brief time aboard the Bluefin."

Juneau leaned forward, her expression expectant. "She's a catch by anyone's definition, sir. Scuttlebutt has it that a number of captains are already interested, which is unusual considering that she's spent most of her career in the Border Service."

"Yes," Sandhurst nodded slowly, but appeared reluctant. "T'Ser's got the chops for command, that's not in question."

"Problem, sir?"

He smiled thinly as he set the padd down and turned his expression towards his acting exec. "Akinola's not exactly my biggest fan. This could cause some bad blood. If I offer and he objects, I could inadvertently create a rift between T'Ser and her captain."

"That's her choice to make, isn't it? And with respect to your standing with other captains, well, technically speaking, Picard isn't crazy about you either." Juneau raised a hand, ticking off fingers as she counted, "Or Glover, or Littlefoot, though Aubrey and Shelby sort of tolerate you..."

Sandhurst smirked, "Okay, okay, I take your point."

"You've never cared before, Captain. Why start now?"

He favored her with a genuine smile, a rarity of late. "I'll take it under consideration, Lieutenant. Thank you for your diligence in this task."

"Happy to help, sir."

The captain inclined his head towards the bridge, "What do you make of our new security chief?"

She shrugged, "He's your typical Vulcan on the surface. I've found that with their species, you really have to serve with them awhile to get a grasp of their underlying personality. As for what's going on in his head," she said with a wry smile, "I have no idea."

"That's pretty much my assessment as well," Sandhurst confirmed. "ETA to the Barisa system?"

"Another three days," she relayed, a hint of weariness in her voice.

"Updates?" he queried.

"Their engineering teams are continuing to put the finishing touches on the particle fountain, but there's been some kind of labor slowdown. The company’s representatives are being very cagy about the particulars, though."

Sandhurst pursed his lips thoughtfully, "I suppose I shouldn't be surprised that we might be walking into a situation that's not exactly as Command had advertised."

Juneau grinned broadly, "Who, us?"

He pulled the computer terminal back to him as he chuckled, "Dismissed."

*****
 
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Very nice background with Ashok. Nothing like not living up to your parents expectations.
 
Re: Gravity - Chapter 3, Part 2

Ironic that Juneau would have no idea what's going on in Verrik's head when in fact they have very much the SAME thing going on!!

And MAN...no wonder Ashok has issues! If I were him, I wouldn't blame him one bit for not wanting to show up at that ceremony...
 
Re: Gravity - Chapter 3, Part 2

Oh man...Ashok has layers--and I thought Liz had daddy problems! And T'Ser waits just off stage...
 
Re: Gravity - Chapter 3, Part 2

Continue to love the focus on Ashok here. You must have really taken it to heart when a few of us called him a rather uninteresting character when you did your survey.

Well, no longer. This guy has suddenly become one of the most fascinating people on board. Of course it helps (him) that Pava and Ramirez are gone.
 
Yep really looking forward to see what happens with Ashok. As others say he has deeper layers than we've had a chance to see so far.

On top of that Sandhurst points out - their mission may have deeper layers than they realise - at least he's getting wise to his run of luck:

Sandhurst pursed his lips thoughtfully, "I suppose I shouldn't be surprised that we might be walking into a situation that's not exactly as Command had advertised."

Juneau grinned broadly, "Who, us?"
 
Perhaps you should change the name of this story from Gravity to Head Cases. :lol:

Seriously, a great segment and a fascinating look into Ashok's past. You have to feel for the guy.
 
Yeah, I'm liking what you're doing with him, too. And I can't wait to get your take on T'Ser.
 
Re: Gravity - Chapter 3, Part 2

Continue to love the focus on Ashok here. You must have really taken it to heart when a few of us called him a rather uninteresting character when you did your survey.

Well, no longer. This guy has suddenly become one of the most fascinating people on board. Of course it helps (him) that Pava and Ramirez are gone.
Thanks! :bolian:

This was an occasion where I had to wait quite awhile for this particular character to 'speak' to me. We've seen that Ashok's always harbored an inferiority complex, especially where Sandhurst is concerned, and I always rather figured it was something along the lines of what I've portrayed here that was to blame. But until some of the other major players moved into the background, our quiet, introspective, introverted Ashok wasn't going to come out to play.
 
Gravity - Chapter 4, Part 1

Chapter 4

Hades' Apex Station, in orbit of Planet Acheron
Barisa System


Telam Yarliss entered the union shop only reluctantly, determined to hear Kubler out but dreading what was certain to be the latest conspiracy theory in the man's ongoing fit of paranoia. He presented his credentials to the two bodyguards out of habit, he'd known both for years, and was admitted to Kubler's cluttered office.

"You called?" he asked dryly.

Johannes Kubler looked up from an assortment of padds and printout flimsies. "Yarliss, it's about time. I called for you an hour ago.'

He shrugged in reply, "I was having dinner and my company was more enjoyable than you by far." He offered a weak smile, "Prettier, too."

Kubler ignored the jibe and slid a padd over to Yarliss as the man sat down across from him. "Read that and then tell me I'm imagining things!"

Yarliss sighed but picked the padd up anyway. The first paragraph caught his attention immediately. It took him another ten minutes to read the entire document, and his mind churned with the enormity of what Kubler had apparently stumbled upon. Finally, he held the padd aloft and waved it as he inquired, "Where did you get this? Two Starfleet officers' service records and multiple Corps of Engineers internal memos?" His gaze hardened. "Don't tell me you're still flirting with those old Maquis contacts of yours."

"Where and how isn't important," Kubler snapped back. "What's crucial is the fact that we now know this incoming starship is a real and present danger to the union and our interests here."

"Damn," Yarliss fumed. Always the voice of reason, and so often seemingly the only one, this latest news put him in a nearly untenable position. "The Starfleet captain is an expert in particle fountain mining technology."

Kubler nodded knowingly. His own place in the union hierarchy had gone from that of fringe fanatic to prescient prophet in mere hours with this revelation. "There was never any doubt the Federation would intervene here, Telam." He pointed at the padd in Yarliss' hands. "Starfleet doesn't just snatch a promising young officer on the command track off an admiral's staff and put her aboard a washed up escort ship without cause. Hell, maybe they even arranged her death to help bring this scheme of theirs to fruition."

Yarliss scrolled through the documents again and tried to tune Kubler out. The older man continued, "Anyway, now we at least have a glimpse of their game plan."

"And you think that's... what, exactly?"

"Send this starship here as muscle. They've got more than enough weapons and personnel to reinforce Ramirez's security goons, which guarantees that we'll keep our mouths shut while their engineering expert captain helps bring the siphon on-line."

Yarliss blew out a frustrated breath, “And that puts us, all of us, out of work.”

“Exactly.”

He shook his head in disbelief and then Yarliss threw the padd back onto Kubler’s desk. “I’m still not convinced Starfleet’s coming to bring the hammer down on our membership.” Kubler started to interject, but Yarliss held him in check with a mollifying hand. “Hear me out. I do agree that it's in the Federation's national interest to get the siphon functioning, and that they'll do whatever they have to in order to see it through to fruition."

Kubler locked eyes with him. "We're on the same page, then?"

Yarliss nodded and this time he evidenced no hesitation. "I'm with you." He took a deep breath. "So, what's next?"

"It's clear to me that Ramirez and his people are behind these disappearances and mysterious equipment failures. It's the perfect smoke screen under which to collude with the Federation. It gives them the excuse to come in here and put their boot on our collective neck while appearing to maintain the moral high ground."

Yarliss was not sold, but he had committed himself. "You've got something in mind?"

"First, we're going to put together a warm little reception for our Starfleet friends. Then, I'll bring in our ace-in-the-hole."

"You went outside the union?" Yarliss was intrigued.

Kubler smiled menacingly. "I hired the one person within six sectors with ears big enough to hear everything that happens around here."

From behind raised eyebrows, Yarliss queried, "You hired Junt? That's got to be expensive."

"When you want top quality, you've got to pay the going rate," Kubler said with a joyless chuckle.

"You going to tell me the price?" Yarliss' expression darkened.

"Let's just say for now that should his services be needed, after the dust settles the new administration governing this operation will be offering DaiMon Junt some very favorable pricing."

*****

USS Gibraltar
On approach to Hades' Apex Station
Barisa System


Sandhurst pulled his white dress uniform jacket from his closet. He handled the garment almost reverently, determined to make each action and gesture involved with donning it a testament to his regard for Liana Ramirez. The fastening of every zipper, snap and button became a precise intimation of his veneration for the sacrifice she had been called upon to make. He had not put on a uniform in this fashion since his final day as a cadet, and though his movements would have been considered laughably imprecise by the academy's command master chief, they were the best his atrophied skills in that area could muster.

He had given her eulogy weeks ago, and would have thought this task might have been made somewhat easier by the passing of the intervening weeks. It had not. Though he had made peace with the circumstances surrounding her death, the idea of facing Ramirez's father filled him with a deep anxiety. Bad enough to have some stranger bring your estranged daughter's remains home, but to have the one who quite literally killed her standing before you mouthing trite words of condolence?

Nevertheless, it was his duty carry out this task; honor demanded no less. Suffering through the experience would not be pleasant, but it would be a damn sight more survivable than what Sandhurst had inflicted upon Liana.

Finished, he tugged the jacket straight and ran his hands down the front to smooth out the last creases. He stood prepared for the moment that he had been dreading since Gibraltar had left Deep Space Nine.

His compin beeped. It seemed uncommonly loud in the silent cabin.

"Go ahead."

"We've arrived at Hades' Apex, Captain," Juneau announced from the bridge. "The service detail is forming up in transporter room one."

"Acknowledged. On my way."

*****

Hades' Apex Station, in orbit of Planet Acheron
Barisa System


Ch'har's reptilian features were set in a perpetual glower as he observed the surly crowd of employees gathering on the commerce concourse. He turned to his security supervisor, "This can't be a coincidence. I told Ramirez we shouldn't have announced the time and location of their arrival. He thought some of the old timers and their families might want to pay their respects to Liana. Instead, we get a bunch of malcontents with an agenda."

The security man frowned, "I can call in reinforcements."

"Do it," Ch'har instructed. "And have Ops contact the ship and arrange new beam-in coordinates. The conference center should do nicely."

*****

The orders were transferred to the Operations center aboard Hades' Apex, where a low level administrative clerk with union sympathies promptly 'forgot' to contact Gibraltar to re-arrange their embarkation coordinates. She suppressed a dark smile as the starship signaled in preparation for transport.

*****

The honor-guard detail and Captain Ramirez's casket materialized at the predetermined location on the shopping concourse, the largest gathering area available aboard the station. Sandhurst, Verrik, Taiee, and a group of six security personnel flanked the flag-draped torpedo casing.

As Sandhurst adjusted to the new surroundings, it became immediately obvious that something was wrong. Rather than the quiet, dignified gathering he had been expecting, he and the others faced a boisterous mob over a hundred and fifty people strong. Many held signs emblazoned with unflattering commentary on the Federation in general and Starfleet in particular.

"Mister Verrik, this is where they instructed us to beam in, correct?" Sandhurst suddenly felt naked without a sidearm.

Verrik nodded once, definitively, as his dark eyes scanned the surrounding tumult. "Yes, Captain. We are precisely where the company's administrator requested."

Taiee looked uneasy and the security detail shifted uncomfortably as they collectively shared the captain's desire for the cold comfort and dubious protection offered by a phaser.

Various taunts issued forth from the crowd and without warning a paint-laden balloon arced overhead and caught one of the security pall bearers in the shoulder. Blood red paint spattered across the man's crisp dress jacket and stained the sky blue Federation flag draped across Ramirez's casket.

Sandhurst could only stare at this horrific insult, his eyes wide with a mix of outrage and disbelief. "Son of a--"

He was so fixated on the despicable marring of his man and Liana's casket that he did not see the spanner that had been thrown at his head. Fortunately, Verrik did see it and moved to intercede. The Vulcan officer bolted forward and knocked Sandhurst to the floor just in time to catch the weighty wrench-like device in his left shoulder blade.

Verrik fought to control the pain of the blow as he assisted Sandhurst to his feet. "Captain, I suggest we beam back immediately." The security team had positioned Taiee behind them, forming a protective wall to shield both her and the torpedo casing.

Sandhurst nodded numbly as the mob began to pelt the Starfleet contingent with even more seemingly random objects. "Yeah... I think that'd be for the best."

As Verrik contacted the ship to initiate an emergency beam out, Sandhurst looked up in time to see a platoon of security personnel rush to the railing along the upper deck of the concourse and take aim at the riotous crowd below. As the transporter beam engulfed him, Sandhurst could just make out the first volley of fire into the throng.

*****
 
Yikes that did not go well. already the Gibraltar cannot get a break and others have strnage ideas as to the ship's motovation and purpose - obviously all means trouble.

This I pictured perfectly in my head imaging some haunting theme subtly in the backgound. One paragraph but it said so much:
Sandhurst pulled his white dress uniform jacket from his closet. He handled the garment almost reverently, determined to make each action and gesture involved with donning it a testament to his regard for Liana Ramirez. The fastening of every zipper, snap and button became a precise intimation of his veneration for the sacrifice she had been called upon to make. He had not put on a uniform in this fashion since his final day as a cadet, and though his movements would have been considered laughably imprecise by the academy's command master chief, they were the best his atrophied skills in that area could muster.

Excellent - heart went Lurch
 
Oh, man...poor Sandhurst--and poor Gibraltar crew!

And as if the situation between Ramirez and the union weren't bad enough, the way they've desecrated Liana's casket is guaranteed to drive tensions up even further. You can bet now Ramirez isn't going to back down for ANYTHING.
 
That just escalated things nicely. Now there's practically no room for compromise--which is exactly what Kubler wanted.
 
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