Twilight's End
Positives:
- A commendable emphasis on making the scientific aspects of the story believable. No technobabble magic wands here.
- I love the idea of a tidally locked planet as the setting for the story. I also enjoyed the exploration of how a society forced to exist in a small band that encircles the globe would develope. I wish there had been an even more in-depth exploration of that culture.
- I like how the two leads of the competing stratums of society weren't just white hats vs black hats. They both had their own not completely unselfish reasons for the things they did.
- I like the title. Don't know why, it just sounds cool. The cover is solid if not spectacular.
Negatives:
- Someone on Amazon remarked that this would have been better as a non-Trek original work, and I agree with them. You have a ridiculously daunting task for the Enterprise crew to tackle and the story plays out with only 4 main characters seeming to take on this impossibly complex task. Spock is knocked out of commission in a redshirt mission, Kirk is sidelined in a weak kidnapping storyline. McCoy, Sulu, and Scotty get stuck doing lab work. no one else really does anything. There just aren't enough interesting things for the guys to do.
- There is very little suspense. Imo, where the tension should have been focused is in the debate between the two proposed methods of saving the planet and not so much on finding out if the plans ultimately work. Granted, there is some of that, but the method mentioned on the cover blurb is the only one exciting enough to be the one chosen.
- Kirk's kidnapping plot was a real dud. The bad guys were so inept that he should have just challenged them to a game of Fizzbin and got the rescue mission over with. Instead, we have a tiresome plot about Kirk attempting to get his captors drunk. In Voyages of Imagination the author says the editor wanted Kirk to improvise an explosive and they compromised by having him jury-rig a Molotov cocktail. He should have listened to his editor; the scene comes across as something found on the cutting room floor of a MacGuyver script.
So this was a bit of a curate's egg, I suppose. I enjoyed the world building and the commitment to hard(er) science, but the execution of the story was mundane.
Traitor Winds
I didn't finish this one.
This starts off great. It's a completely Earthbound espionage/man on the run story with a focus on Sulu, Chekov, and Uhura. It was very exciting, imo, and it was great to see what these characters were doing pre TMP.
Early on it seemed tightly plotted, but then characters just seemed to be dropped into the story out of the blue. In one scene, four different characters walk into Uhura's office in succession to advance the plot. #1 enters, says his piece, leaves. #2 immediately walks in and does the same thing. It's like every character in the book is in her waiting room reading old magazines just waiting their turn to spell out the next piece of the story.
After this scene the writing never gets back to the quality of the opening chapters. Kirk makes a huge mental leap and somehow figures out one of the main motives of the bad guy. More and more characters just seem to show up when needed with little to nothing in the way of a plausible reason for being where they are.
What made me put the book down was how obvious the identity of the mystery bad guy was. It's telegraphed from his first scene, but I was hoping that since the writing was so good in the opening chapters that he was just a red herring. When the quality dipped, and didn't improve, I skipped ahead to see if the mystery villain was who I (and anyone else who has ever watched Scooby Doo) suspected. No, it wasn't Old Man Jenkins; just his equivalent. No need to go back and finish the book properly at that point.
This was the second book I've read by the L.A. Graf team. The first was
Time's Enemy. Both books have several excellent qualities, but neither hold together once you start asking yourself "What is this character's motivation? How did this character/ship get here? Would an intelligent character really do actions X, Y, and Z?"
Ghost-Walker
Let's just get this out of the way right now
Ok if you've managed to recover from your fit of simultaneous giggling and screams of terror we can proceed.
This is actually a pretty good book. This is the second Trek book by Barbara Hambly that I've read, the other being Crossroad. I have enjoyed both. Like Crossroad, there is a vein of horror running through Ghost-Walker. Hambly has a knack for adding horror to Trek while still keeping the cast in character.
Positives:
- I liked Kirk's love interest, Helen. You can't go too in-depth with a new character in this type of book, but she was more than just a cardboard cutout only there to give Kirk a motivation. I found her interesting and sympathetic.
- I liked how the author mixed some darker elements into the story while keeping the TOS feel. I couldn't help but compare Helen to Rand in The Enemy within.
- The aliens may not look cool, but their society is very interesting to me.
- The villain, Yarblis Geshkerroth, was also a highlight. He starts out as your typical hard headed alien, turns into a "monster of the week" but ends up being much more complex than your average psycho psychic space rooster.
This is one I'd recommend.