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Secret Deleted Scene

Starfleet cadets picking bar fights and beating the crap out poor farm boys, yet apparently receiving no disciplinary action whatsoever and being assigned to the Federation flagship for their actions.

Weak. You have no proof they weren't punished. And I'll gladly remind of you Captain Picard getting in a drunken bar fight as a cadet and getting command of the Enterprise. Next?

Dr. McCoy having no place to go except to Starfleet after his divorce even though he has a fear of space and flying.

What does that have to do with anything?

Starfleet officers being "banished" to God-forsaken ice worlds with no real food for months at a time as punishment. For either of those things to happen, there must be something seriously wrong with society.

Nope, not really. Sorry.
 
Enlightenment does not mean that all the ills of human society have been eradicated. It's possible that as a whole, the people of AbramsTrek's future are better than us when it comes to prejudice and other social ills, but just as vindictive as we are on a personal level. McCoy's case certainly sounds like he was involved in a particularly nasty divorce, while Scotty apparently killed an Admiral's dog, something that would really a head on a platter.

Excellent. This is pretty much where much of society fancies itself to be today. We abhor racism and desire to eliminate the pain and suffering of the vulnerable. Regardless of the politics of healthcare you'd be hard pressed to find someone who thinks poor useless drug addicts should be allowed to die in the street. Much of what we take for granted as how an enlightened society should be didn't exist in other centuries to the same extent. Life was ruled by class and hierarchy. People were owned. Now advance these ideas a few hundred years into the future and perhaps we actually will be a better society with a higher standard by then. However we will still be people and personal issues will still leave us jealous, angry etc.. it's just these emotions are no longer enacted by governments on a grand scale.

"We're human beings with the blood of a million savage years on our hands, but we can stop it. We can admit that we're killers, but we're not going to kill today. That's all it takes. Knowing that we won't kill today."
Kirk - A Taste of Armageddon

Well there you go. We are still the same at heart but the standards of society can evolve.. and in the end each individual must make a choice.
 
Skin has recently "acquired" certain items belonging to an individual he will call "John Jacob Anderson." Among these items were several (dozen) parabolic mirrors, one and one half kilograms of high-test Peruvian "marching powder", four gerbils in a Zip-Loc bag (taped to a plastic funnel) and a solid state hard drive.

On the solid state drive, Skin found an amazing piece of video footage from Star Trek XI. For legal reasons, Skin was unable to upload the video footage for posting here. Instead, Skin has transcribed the scene verbatim for the entertainment and education of you, his most devoted confidantes.

Kirk enters the Engineering section at a run.

KIRK
Scotty! Scotty, are you all right!

Kirk looks around anxiously. He is approached by a cadet with a large object in both hands. He addresses the cadet.

KIRK
Cadet, have you seen a goofy, balding dork who thinks this ship is exciting?!

CADET RODDENBERRY
I don't think anyone in their right mind would find this ship exciting, sir.

KIRK
Hey, what's that you've got there?

Cadet Roddenberry favors the object in his hands with an affectionate look.

CADET RODDENBERRY
It's hope, sir.

KIRK
Hope?! Hope for what?! Where are the glowing blue lights?

Cadet Roddenberry flashes a look of confusion.

CADET RODDENBERRY
It... doesn't need them. It's hope for a brighter future for mankind, sir.

Kirk slaps it out of the Cadet's hands and it shatters on the floor.

KIRK
The hell with hope! Hope isn't cool! Rebuild it with glowing blue lights!

Kirk storms into a lens flare and EXITS.
I would like to have seen that! Coolness!
Also, shade of the Batman
maybe that's why it wasn't used.....
 
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Starfleet cadets picking bar fights and beating the crap out poor farm boys, yet apparently receiving no disciplinary action whatsoever and being assigned to the Federation flagship for their actions.

Weak. You have no proof they weren't punished. And I'll gladly remind of you Captain Picard getting in a drunken bar fight as a cadet and getting command of the Enterprise. Next?

Dr. McCoy having no place to go except to Starfleet after his divorce even though he has a fear of space and flying.

What does that have to do with anything?

I'll concede a modicum of weakness on these points. I had to think fast and I haven't seen the movie in quite a while.

Starfleet officers being "banished" to God-forsaken ice worlds with no real food for months at a time as punishment. For either of those things to happen, there must be something seriously wrong with society.

Nope, not really. Sorry.

However, on this one, YEP, REALLY, SORRY. That would never happen in the real world. Or any other world for that matter. No real military would be allowed to banish someone like that. Yeah, I know, this ain't the real world, it's Star Trek XI. But that is just stoopid.
 
That would never happen in the real world. Or any other world for that matter. No real military would be allowed to banish someone like that. Yeah, I know, this ain't the real world, it's Star Trek XI. But that is just stoopid.

He was put in charge of a lonely ol' Starfleet outpost. He wasn't in prison, he wasn't mistreated, and he was given food rations. Boo hoo. Scotty's complaints were based on a luxury issue. This does happen in the real world and in no way constitutes some silly commentary on "Society."
 
In other words, XI was more like TOS then the spin off shows. Despite revisionist history, TOS was NOT a utopia. TOS depicted humans largely like they are today except they didn't descriminate against one another. There were still prejudices however. Humans used money, sometimes swore, disagreed, and could have actual issues. Please provide proof that XIs future was so much worse off than TOS.

^^ Best post in this thread..IMO.

Roddenberry, the 60s version, had the right formula, once he figured it out. FUN FUN FUN along with BOOBS BOOBS and more BOOBS. And, somewhere in there, a good story with a message here and there.

The 70s Roddenberry? He lost his way, and thankfully, IMO, Phase Two never got made because, again IMO, the stories were boring. TMP, though it had some flashes of fun, was just bogged down, and the fun aspect was totally wasted.

Rob
 
In other words, XI was more like TOS then the spin off shows. Despite revisionist history, TOS was NOT a utopia. TOS depicted humans largely like they are today except they didn't descriminate against one another. There were still prejudices however. Humans used money, sometimes swore, disagreed, and could have actual issues. Please provide proof that XIs future was so much worse off than TOS.

^^ Best post in this thread..

Roddenberry, the 60s version, had the right formula, once he figured it out. FUN FUN FUN along with some sexy girls here and there. And, somewhere in there, a good story with a message here and there as well.

The 70s Roddenberry? He lost his way, and thankfully, IMO, Phase Two never got made because, again IMO, the stories were boring. TMP, though it had some flashes of fun, was just bogged down, and the fun aspect was totally wasted.

Rob
 
^^ Best post in this thread..
So good, you had to reply to it twice? :vulcan:


Starfleet cadets picking bar fights and beating the crap out poor farm boys, yet apparently receiving no disciplinary action whatsoever and being assigned to the Federation flagship for their actions.

Weak. You have no proof they weren't punished. And I'll gladly remind of you Captain Picard getting in a drunken bar fight as a cadet and getting command of the Enterprise. Next?



What does that have to do with anything?

I'll concede a modicum of weakness on these points. I had to think fast and I haven't seen the movie in quite a while.

Starfleet officers being "banished" to God-forsaken ice worlds with no real food for months at a time as punishment. For either of those things to happen, there must be something seriously wrong with society.
Nope, not really. Sorry.

However, on this one, YEP, REALLY, SORRY. That would never happen in the real world. Or any other world for that matter. No real military would be allowed to banish someone like that. Yeah, I know, this ain't the real world, it's Star Trek XI. But that is just stoopid.
Meh, if Starfleet ever stuck close to what would happen in a "real military," it was out of story convenience more than it was anything else. Besides, "Reassigned to Antarctica" is a very familiar trope in fiction, both written and on the big and little screens, and plausible because it has happened in "real military" organizations; if you're going to take issue with it here, you'll also have to take issue with it in a lot of other stories, some pretty highly-regarded. There's really no problem with seeing this movie's Delta Vega as Starfleet's galactic analogue to Bumfuck, Egypt - that ultimate "nowhere and way too much time to think about it" posting for the sole transgression of seriously displeasing a superior officer.

This objection isn't any stronger than your other two.
 
^^ Best post in this thread..
So good, you had to reply to it twice? :vulcan:


I'll concede a modicum of weakness on these points. I had to think fast and I haven't seen the movie in quite a while.

Nope, not really. Sorry.

However, on this one, YEP, REALLY, SORRY. That would never happen in the real world. Or any other world for that matter. No real military would be allowed to banish someone like that. Yeah, I know, this ain't the real world, it's Star Trek XI. But that is just stoopid.
Meh, if Starfleet ever stuck close to what would happen in a "real military," it was out of story convenience more than it was anything else. Besides, "Reassigned to Antarctica" is a very familiar trope in fiction, both written and on the big and little screens, and plausible because it has happened in "real military" organizations; if you're going to take issue with it here, you'll also have to take issue with it in a lot of other stories, some pretty highly-regarded. There's really no problem with seeing this movie's Delta Vega as Starfleet's galactic analogue to Bumfuck, Egypt - that ultimate "nowhere and way too much time to think about it" posting for the sole transgression of seriously displeasing a superior officer.

This objection isn't any stronger than your other two.

You would be amazed at how much went unpunished in the military. I am not in active service anymore, but I work with the military quite often. These days, and I think for good reasons overall, most of the stuff that went on when I came in wouldn't be tolerated today, and it isn't. It is a sign of the times.

In fact, even though we are wrapped up in two wars, the military will bounce you out now for the slightest reasons. Mainly because they are starting to slowly but surely downsize their numbers. The Navy Base I do much of my work on requires so much of these young people, in terms of quals and colateral training, that if they don't do it or keep up..they're out. So, getting into fights in today's military can get you tossed out. Not sure if that is good, or bad, but its the way it is and everyone knows.

The worst trouble I got in, and it was years ago, was driving onto base, drunk, and driving over the guard's foot with my car. I got lippy and ended up in restriction for about a month. Later, after getting into a fight, nothing happened..go figure.

It use to be when you got shore duty, things were not as complicated as sea duty. Not so now. If you want to succeed , you have to keep up, do online college, to show your chain of command that you have an ambition to improve yourself and not just stay put where you are.

The bar fight scene in TREK XI may have seemed extreme, and it was, especially since Kirk wasn't even in the military and those who beat him up were. But I have seen far worse and the discipline was light, if at all.

Rob
 
^^ Best post in this thread..
So good, you had to reply to it twice? :vulcan:


I'll concede a modicum of weakness on these points. I had to think fast and I haven't seen the movie in quite a while.



However, on this one, YEP, REALLY, SORRY. That would never happen in the real world. Or any other world for that matter. No real military would be allowed to banish someone like that. Yeah, I know, this ain't the real world, it's Star Trek XI. But that is just stoopid.
Meh, if Starfleet ever stuck close to what would happen in a "real military," it was out of story convenience more than it was anything else. Besides, "Reassigned to Antarctica" is a very familiar trope in fiction, both written and on the big and little screens, and plausible because it has happened in "real military" organizations; if you're going to take issue with it here, you'll also have to take issue with it in a lot of other stories, some pretty highly-regarded. There's really no problem with seeing this movie's Delta Vega as Starfleet's galactic analogue to Bumfuck, Egypt - that ultimate "nowhere and way too much time to think about it" posting for the sole transgression of seriously displeasing a superior officer.

This objection isn't any stronger than your other two.

You would be amazed at how much went unpunished in the military. I am not in active service anymore, but I work with the military quite often. These days, and I think for good reasons overall, most of the stuff that went on when I came in wouldn't be tolerated today, and it isn't. It is a sign of the times.

In fact, even though we are wrapped up in two wars, the military will bounce you out now for the slightest reasons. Mainly because they are starting to slowly but surely downsize their numbers. The Navy Base I do much of my work on requires so much of these young people, in terms of quals and colateral training, that if they don't do it or keep up..they're out. So, getting into fights in today's military can get you tossed out. Not sure if that is good, or bad, but its the way it is and everyone knows.

The worst trouble I got in, and it was years ago, was driving onto base, drunk, and driving over the guard's foot with my car. I got lippy and ended up in restriction for about a month. Later, after getting into a fight, nothing happened..go figure.

It use to be when you got shore duty, things were not as complicated as sea duty. Not so now. If you want to succeed , you have to keep up, do online college, to show your chain of command that you have an ambition to improve yourself and not just stay put where you are.

The bar fight scene in TREK XI may have seemed extreme, and it was, especially since Kirk wasn't even in the military and those who beat him up were. But I have seen far worse and the discipline was light, if at all.

Rob

Great replies.

Also if we are going to start holding Star Trek up to a "real military," then we are going to see some real issues with Starfleet.
 
I.. Have Had... Enough.. of YOU...- Kirk-The Search For Spock

Sigh.

Once again: Kruge was actively trying to kill Kirk when Kirk said this--and Kirk had twice offered Kruge a truce, the second time when Kruge was helpless and Kirk could have walked away. Nero, by contrast, was apparently powerless.

There is a difference and it's a pretty big one.
 
I.. Have Had... Enough.. of YOU...- Kirk-The Search For Spock

Sigh.

Once again: Kruge was actively trying to kill Kirk when Kirk said this--and Kirk had twice offered Kruge a truce, the second time when Kruge was helpless and Kirk could have walked away. Nero, by contrast, was apparently powerless.

There is a difference and it's a pretty big one.

Why do people not 'get' that. And, in Khan, when Kirk shoots that ceti-eel, some people think Kirk did a bad thing. That's what I liked about kirk. Something does this to one of his crew, and he kills it.

Rob
 
I will say this: Nero had killed billions of people, including Amanda and George. No way did I want to see him taken into custody. Still, the Kruge scene gives us the perfect fig leaf for our (okay, my) lust for vengeance: why not have the Narada lock tractor beams or, this being Trek XI, grappling chains on the Enterprise. Then it really would have been an "I have had enough of you!" moment. As it's played, Kirk almost loses the Enterprise because he stopped to unload on a seemingly unarmed opponent and then wait around for a crucial couple of seconds to gloat. Say what you will about Nero being a proven threat who needed to be neutralized, it still comes off as cold-blooded and reckless. How many kegs--I mean, warp cores--did they have to jettison to break free?
 
I will say this: Nero had killed billions of people, including Amanda and George. No way did I want to see him taken into custody. Still, the Kruge scene gives us the perfect fig leaf for our (okay, my) lust for vengeance: why not have the Narada lock tractor beams or, this being Trek XI, grappling chains on the Enterprise. Then it really would have been an "I have had enough of you!" moment. As it's played, Kirk almost loses the Enterprise because he stopped to unload on a seemingly unarmed opponent and then wait around for a crucial couple of seconds to gloat. Say what you will about Nero being a proven threat who needed to be neutralized, it still comes off as cold-blooded and reckless. How many kegs--I mean, warp cores--did they have to jettison to break free?

I think they would have needed to break free regardless, the Narada was already being swallowed up by the red matter black hole, so Enterprise was likely caught in its wake, just no one had tried to go to warp until after Nero got fully consumed by it.

Kirk and friends would have been next.
 
I will say this: Nero had killed billions of people, including Amanda and George. No way did I want to see him taken into custody. Still, the Kruge scene gives us the perfect fig leaf for our (okay, my) lust for vengeance: why not have the Narada lock tractor beams or, this being Trek XI, grappling chains on the Enterprise. Then it really would have been an "I have had enough of you!" moment. As it's played, Kirk almost loses the Enterprise because he stopped to unload on a seemingly unarmed opponent and then wait around for a crucial couple of seconds to gloat. Say what you will about Nero being a proven threat who needed to be neutralized, it still comes off as cold-blooded and reckless. How many kegs--I mean, warp cores--did they have to jettison to break free?

Yes, this bothered me quite a bit. It was unnecessarily bloodthirsty, particularly since Spock signed off on it. Sure, Nero killed his mother but Vulcans are pacifists - while that doesn't mean they never use violence, it does make this kind of revenge killing seem more inappropriate... almost like Vulcans from Enterprise! Actually, koon-tut-kali-fee or whatever was pretty poor too: Death - by snoo snoo! :rolleyes:

I'm first in line to argue that Han Solo should get to shoot first - because he's pirate scum and it's in character. Federation crew less so. I agree that there should have been tweaks to the scipt - an acknowledgment that Nero's ship might survive or a tractor beam as suggested. Or an attempt to beam off Narada's crew that failed due to gravitational forces or something...
 
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