That's another good point.
Pike really should have known this before Kirk...
How could he?
He was missing a huge chunk of information?
That's another good point.
Pike really should have known this before Kirk...
Don't be plot hole paranoid.
The story has certain needs and primarily Kirk making this discovery was deemed a NEED by the writer even though it may not make perfect sense. The only real problem is working out the deduction that Narada was lying in wait.
Don't be plot hole paranoid.
The story has certain needs and primarily Kirk making this discovery was deemed a NEED by the writer even though it may not make perfect sense. The only real problem is working out the deduction that Narada was lying in wait.
That is still not a plot hole.
But it makes Pike and Starfleet both look incredibly ignorant...
- Starfleet receives report on incident and no one does any research on "lightening storms in space". They have the original Kelvin reports. No one knows how to use 23rd century Google?
- Pike receives the orders and reads them. Nothing in them jogs his memory that he'd written a report on a similar incident.
- Pike listens to the mission briefings en route and it still doesn't jog his memory about the Kelvin incident that he did his dissertation on.
- Once Kirk is on the bridge Pike refers to Spock about the situation Kirk is reporting on, still seemingly lost.
Everyone is made to look idiotic so Kirk can come to the bridge and be heroic. It may not be a plothole but it destroyed this viewers suspension of disbelief.![]()
Does Pike know enough at least to realize that Enterprise could be warping into a trap?
Saquist said:You used the exact words...Klingon-Federation Border numerous times.
Saquist said:The false logic you've used is that if it's not Romulan then it must be Federation. There is no indication either way whose space they were in or it's proximity to what other space.
Saquist said:Stop thinking 2 Dimensionally.
Saquist said:The movie doesn't comment on where the Kelvin was specifically. In order for it to be repositioned it would have to have an original position which the film doesn't establish.
Saquist said:There is only one Neutral Zone in Trek 2009.
The fact is self evident.
Saquist said:At no time were they ever called. RMBHs.
Saquist said:If it's not in the movie then it's not included in the plot, then it didn't happen.
Saquist said:Indeed it does.
Saquist said:The movie certainly needs a rewrite but the intention is irrelevant.
Saquist said:It is the proper understanding of what you wrote.
Don't be plot hole paranoid.
The story has certain needs and primarily Kirk making this discovery was deemed a NEED by the writer even though it may not make perfect sense. The only real problem is working out the deduction that Narada was lying in wait.
That is still not a plot hole.
Everyone is made to look idiotic so Kirk can come to the bridge and be heroic. It may not be a plothole but it destroyed this viewers suspension of disbelief.![]()
This is a typical formula in Star Trek. The heroes do the heavy lifting, while everyone else is an NPC.
Shall we consider why a half-Vulcan recently resurrected and not working on all thrusters can figure out an alien probe's transmission at the drop of a hat, while the rest of Starfleet has had a lot longer to pool all their collective resources but is still stumped? See The Voyage Home for an answer.
I used those words, but I never said the film used those words.
When the film makes no comment at all on what border they are on.The film alone made it sufficiently clear that they were near the Klingon-Federation border.
Patrolling is your description.Why is a Federation ship patrolling non-Federation space, or even potential enemy territory, without this being mentioned anywhere in the film in any way?
I've rewritten nothing.Furthermore, you typically go too far in assuming you can casually rewrite everything about this point in the film. Their proximity to Klingon space is established.
You are.I'm not. The retcon-ploy of "they're not in Federation space" is not an issue of three dimensions vs. two dimensions.
I didn't say it was a flaw.In order for your positioning to generate a legitimate flaw in the plot, it would have to be conclusively established by the film.
It's already proven.It may be evident to you, but this is just more revisionist speculation which you cannot prove.
There is already precedent as the Federation knows what the Romulans look like even though TOS has no knowledge of their visual appearance which Pike displays.There is no particular reason to assume that STXI departs from the canon Trek reality of at least two Neutral Zones, and no particular rationale for why the writers would want it to.
I take the KNZ citation as the only mention of any Neutral Zone...period.You can't take the citation of the KNZ in the Kobayashi Maru scenario as indication that the RNZ does not exist;
We don't know what they are.I know, that's what I'm calling them, because that's what they are: generated by red matter.
I would agree with that if the characters didn't behave as if they were anything other than normal black holes and singularities. Hence in order for them to be the exotic tool that you or the writers suggest they are or might be then the characters MUST follow that logic aswell...which they don't. According to the characters everything happens as they expect black holes and singularities to behave.The point is that we've never seen red matter before, so these "black holes" ( or whatever they are ) which are generated by red matter can presumably operate in whatever way the writers want them to.
Which is completely irrelevant to the plot.Wrong. By that logic these "humans" that we see on screen never have to use bathroom facilities, ever.
Indeed I do.If you say so...
Saquist said:The movie certainly needs a rewrite but the intention is irrelevant.
Questioning a series of contradicting behavior and stated intentions is not a rewrite.Not when you rewrite what happened in the film by bringing Nero's intention into question.
He was either indecisive or deceptiveYou claimed that Nero was indecisive, which is not supported by the film.
Strawman can only be evoked against an opponent in debate. There was no strawman against you. And from the clumsy method of how you applied it no "strawman" exist against the film since we're talking about what the film..."DIDN'T" say.Don't try and hide behind bogus "strawman" claims, just admit you were wrong.
They were your words by equal meaning.By insisting on putting words in my mouth
You invoked an appeal to populous through your own appeal to majority populous. You said:My argument against the stance I called "appeal to minority" is not itself an appeal to majority; if it were, those would be the only two options, which would be a false dichotomy.
We're breaking down the logic and the explanation by factual deduction and you insert the evidence of "made sense to many viewers."...as though many viewers are looking for the film to make sense...These things were adequately explained and made sense to many viewers.
My remarks there were primarily intended to show the making all of Starfleet except the heroes look incompetent is nothing new.I don't think so...
It's one thing to contrive for a main character but it's completely another to contrive ignorance for main characters against other main characters.
Good point!Does Pike know enough at least to realize that Enterprise could be warping into a trap?
How could he? Admiral Ackbar wasn't there!
My remarks there were primarily intended to show the making all of Starfleet except the heroes look incompetent is nothing new.
As to making Pike look like he was having a slow day - yes it does, and I conceded that it might be fairly called some sort of flaw, but it's not bad enough to be a plot hole.
But it makes Pike and Starfleet both look incredibly ignorant...
- Starfleet receives report on incident and no one does any research on "lightening storms in space". They have the original Kelvin reports. No one knows how to use 23rd century Google?
- Pike receives the orders and reads them. Nothing in them jogs his memory that he'd written a report on a similar incident.
- Pike listens to the mission briefings en route and it still doesn't jog his memory about the Kelvin incident that he did his dissertation on.
- Once Kirk is on the bridge Pike refers to Spock about the situation Kirk is reporting on, still seemingly lost.
Everyone is made to look idiotic so Kirk can come to the bridge and be heroic. It may not be a plothole but it destroyed this viewers suspension of disbelief.![]()
This is a typical formula in Star Trek. The heroes do the heavy lifting, while everyone else is an NPC.
Shall we consider why a half-Vulcan recently resurrected and not working on all thrusters can figure out an alien probe's transmission at the drop of a hat, while the rest of Starfleet has had a lot longer to pool all their collective resources but is still stumped? See The Voyage Home for an answer.
But it makes Pike and Starfleet both look incredibly ignorant...
- Starfleet receives report on incident and no one does any research on "lightening storms in space". They have the original Kelvin reports. No one knows how to use 23rd century Google?
- Pike receives the orders and reads them. Nothing in them jogs his memory that he'd written a report on a similar incident.
- Pike listens to the mission briefings en route and it still doesn't jog his memory about the Kelvin incident that he did his dissertation on.
- Once Kirk is on the bridge Pike refers to Spock about the situation Kirk is reporting on, still seemingly lost.
Everyone is made to look idiotic so Kirk can come to the bridge and be heroic. It may not be a plothole but it destroyed this viewers suspension of disbelief.![]()
This is a typical formula in Star Trek. The heroes do the heavy lifting, while everyone else is an NPC.
Shall we consider why a half-Vulcan recently resurrected and not working on all thrusters can figure out an alien probe's transmission at the drop of a hat, while the rest of Starfleet has had a lot longer to pool all their collective resources but is still stumped? See The Voyage Home for an answer.
Precisely. ST 09 is just as badly plotted as any other Star Trek episode or movie. It's never going to win an academy award for writing. They're not that kind of movie. SFX? Sure. Costuming? Perhaps. Writing? Not a chance in hell. But it's in good comapy with the other summer blockbusters in that regard so just enjoy it for what it is.
Pointing out the various failings of the plot does not mean it's not enjoyable. It just means "don't think about it too much".
"The Federation is a peacekeeping armada" anyone?
I guess that is why I didn't "see" any plot holes. This movie seemed like a very good Star Trek movie. Character driven, great special effects and a good story with about the same implausibility ratio as any other star trek series or movie.
I saw the holes, I just didn't let them distract me any more than usual. I put this move roughly in the middle of the pack of the Trek movies, sometimes it moves up or down depending on my mood. Still don't like this version of Kirk but the rest of the characters came across fairly well.
Special effects were nothing jaw dropping and in some places looked like a 21st century version of some of the stuff from TFF but overall the effects worked.
Story wise, who goes to Trek for the story?![]()
Saquist said:You were wrong and still are wrong.
Saquist said:You're assuming it has to be SOMEBODIES Territory
Saquist said:or that because you think it's Romulan that it must be immediately next door and noone else can be in the same vicinity so that's a lack of 3 Dimensional perspective.
Saquist said:I didn't say it was a flaw.
My assertion was that this is the Hobus star.
You said that was a flaw and tried to prove dimensionally that it wasn't.
Saquist said:It's already proven.
Saquist said:I would agree with that if the characters didn't behave as if they were anything other than normal black holes and singularities. Hence in order for them to be the exotic tool that you or the writers suggest they are or might be then the characters MUST follow that logic aswell...which they don't. According to the characters everything happens as they expect black holes and singularities to behave.
Saquist said:Which is completely irrelevant to the plot.
Saquist said:Questioning a series of contradicting behavior and stated intentions is not a rewrite.
Saquist said:And didn't save Romulus.
Saquist said:Strawman can only be evoked against an opponent in debate. There was no strawman against you. And from the clumsy method of how you applied it no "strawman" exist against the film since we're talking about what the film..."DIDN'T" say.
Saquist said:They were your words by equal meaning.
Saquist said:Then an strawman fallacy as you crudely attempted to evade the accusation by claim of a phantom appeal to authority on my part
It does, and did. And when Kirk and Sulu materialized several feet above the floor, the gravity aboard the Enterprise prevented them from just hanging weightless above the transporter pad, and instead caused them to fall those several remaining feet to the transporter deck. Something that would still occur even though their previous momentum had been fully cancelled.William Wallace said:Either the transporter can cancel momentum or it can't.
Saquist said:You were wrong and still are wrong.
There is no basis for that statement whatsoever.
In neither scenario am I proven to be necessarily wrong about the location.
Negative:Wrong, you're still putting words in my mouth. Saying "not in Federation space" covers everything but the outcome you reject.
You assumed one or the other and never considered neutral territory. You added Federation-Klingon Border when no such term exist in the film. Sorry. Your Red-Herring objection is dismissed.Once again, the "3 dimensional" red herring is a useless tactic because I never assumed the borders are 2 dimensional and it is immaterial to my argument.
My conclusion concerning the Hobus star was out of logic. Otherwise it's nothing more than an extremely improbable event (among many in the film) that Narada happened upon the Kelvin. Space is too large and empty to just...(whoops heres a ship with Captain Kirk as a baby on it.)The whole purpose in pretending it was the Hobus star in the first place was presumably to manufacture a supposed flaw in the film ( see thread title ). Or are we now intended to believe that it was just brought up out of context for no reason at all that had anything to do with plot holes?![]()
Thanks.I think you're just saying that you convinced yourself. Congratulations.
Movies must stand on their own in plot discussions.Unfortunately, that's not the standard of "proof" I was referring to. "Only one Neutral Zone" is only your revision of the plot, which flies in the face of established Trek canon and really has no validity in this film. It is not proved.
Not my concern.This makes no sense at all.
I'm not concerned, you can believe what you want.And yet 100% relevant to your bogus "didn't see it, didn't happen" theory, which it debunks.
Fallacy.Sorry, you did more than question, you rewrote. He was never portrayed as unable to decided exactly what he wanted an how he wanted to go about getting it done at any point in the film.
Exactly.Because you didn't see it, so it didn't happen.
Confidence statement.No, you're just taking your rewriting spree beyond the confines of the film's plot and rewriting my positions.
The appeal you invoked does not exist.Actually, I didn't say anything about an appeal to authority.
You held the majority up as evidence of a sound plot.I attempted to clarify that rejection of your stance cannot itself constitute an appeal to majority
That is argumentum ad populum., because the point is not that a majority disagrees with you, but that at least one other person "got" the things you seem to have a problem with.
Then at the least...it's Strawman argument because I never said anything about equating a real problem with the film plot with one person. I always used the accepted writing expectations and standards through out the whole argument, quoting the definition and rigidly using it it more than 6 times so far. I've always made my case on the facts the accepted definitions while you've wandered into the script to justify the film.That's not an appeal to majority. It merely says that one person having a problem with the film's plot does not necessarily equate to a real problem with the film's plot.
It does, and did. And when Kirk and Sulu materialized several feet above the floor, the gravity aboard the Enterprise prevented them from just hanging weightless above the transporter pad, and instead caused them to fall those several remaining feet to the transporter deck. Something that would still occur even though their previous momentum had been fully cancelled.William Wallace said:Either the transporter can cancel momentum or it can't.
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