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October Challenge: The Hoary Cliche

Kegek

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Summary: Star Trek cliches. If you'd like an elaboration, read on.

The Hoary Cliche

I'm going to take a wild guess and assume most of the people writing here like Star Trek. But I'm sure we can all agree that, over ten films, four live-action TV series and a cartoon, Star Trek has often indulged in cliches. These included dramatic cliches in general, cliches of sci-fi/fantasy origin, and even some cliches peculiar to Star Trek (such as the holodeck malfunction.)

Of course, moving into the realm we inhabit, that of fan fiction, there are numerous cliches here as well. It was from Star Trek fanfiction that the Mary Sue was born, and how many series have we seen with the brilliant, newly comissioned supership and her ultra competent crew? Or Orion sex slaves? It's acceptable to use a cliche from Star Trek fanfiction instead. Even the novels and comics, but I'll draw the line at games and similar only partly narrative licensed material.

So, for this month's contest, your story must include a cliche. This cliche must also have been used in Star Trek, enough times to count as a cliche, in at least one series, or in fanfiction at large. If your use of the cliche is so clever readers might not pick up on it, please leave a footnote at the end. The same applies if it's a somewhat uncertain cliche, one that exists only in fanfic or licensed materials such that the reader may not be familiar with it.

The actual kind of cliche is as broad as the term means, anything from overused plot devices to overused characterisations and so on. You can use canonical characters, characters from licensed material (novels etc.) or original characters who may be from an ongoing fanfic. You may also use no characters, and if you do, good luck to you on that.

It can be of a reasonable length - no novellas, people, short stories, even fairly long ones.

So, isn't it intriguing to live long and prosper, or is today a good day to die if risk is our business and he's dead Jim anyway? ;)
 
The last day of October. I'll put the voting poll up on the first of November... which in my case will be after a day-long Halloween movie marathon. As I'm living in GMT, which is around five hours behind east coast time, I hope that isn't too much of a problem.
 
d'oh! *slaps forehead*

i'm doing a spoof of fan-fiction in general with some specific cliches thrown in from TOS, TNG/VGR and my fic
 
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Knock yourself out!

captcalhoun said:
d'oh! *slaps forehead*

i'm doing a spoof of fan-fiction in general with some specific cliches thrown in from TOS, TNG/VGR and my fic

Uh, so what's the problem? That's definitely within the guidelines. :)

And apologies for the time thing. I always screw up stuff like that... well, anyway, you get the idea.
 
Hmm. I may finally have to write up an idea that I've had for a long time.

The cliches in question would be: "time travel"; "Voyager defeats the Borg"; and "the reset button".

Sounds highly un-promising, I know. But I think it could actually be pretty good.
 
Kegek said:
Uh, so what's the problem? That's definitely within the guidelines. :)

And apologies for the time thing. I always screw up stuff like that... well, anyway, you get the idea.

the 'D'oh' was cuz i was correcting YOU on time differences and then got it wrong MYSELF.
 
I have a whole bunch of Mary Sues from when I first started writing... most of them are NC17 too, though. :(
 
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Well, if you find any that'll be fit to print, I'd welcome them. Last month's entry was interesting and well-written, though I'm not much a fan of romantic fanfic.

Camelopard said:
The cliches in question would be: "time travel"; "Voyager defeats the Borg"; and "the reset button".

Sounds highly un-promising, I know. But I think it could actually be pretty good.

On the contrary, I thought your light VOY satire / murder mystery episode of Supermax was an interesting read.

In part I proposed this out of a curiosity as to what people would do with the cliches - one can twist them around into something new, one can use them to satirise their overuse, and one can even play them entirely straight. I think the third would probably be the hardest, and it'll be interesting to see what the results are. :)
 
Kegek said:
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Well, if you find any that'll be fit to print, I'd welcome them. Last month's entry was interesting and well-written, though I'm not much a fan of romantic fanfic.

I'm looking forward to reading some fun stories with this particular challenge.

Romantic fan fiction is the perfect fodder for clichés, because shipper-fic is loaded with them. My coauthor and I take great delight in twisting, upending or just plain old spoofing the genre's clichés. :devil:

My story "Incendiary" is loaded with thinly veiled potshots at romance novels. There is a scene where Picard takes one of Vash's romance novels, reads and comments to her on it. For the made-up romance novel's passages, I mirrored romance novel clichés along with certain things I do with the Picard/Vash pairing while taking the usually lovely lavender shade of Whoa Nellie prose to a deep, deep purple, even using the term sword of masculinity. :guffaw:

My stories are written for pure fun and if my tongue were any more firmly in cheek while writing these stories, it would break through the skin. :)

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Edited to add: After reading captcalhoun's following post I realized it looked like I was planning to enter my story "Incendiary" in this month's challenge. I am not entering the story into this month's challenge. It was written way back in 2002 and the scene in question would have to be edited out anyway because of naughty bits. I only mentioned it as an example of how shipper-fanfic lends itself to clichés. I apologize for any confusion.
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Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie

Whoa Nellie's Picard/Vash Romance Fan Fiction website is at:
http://www.geocities.com/TimesSquare/Galaxy/7926/

Whoa Nellie's Sci-Fi Romance Fan Fiction website is at:
http://www.geocities.com/whoa_nellies2000/
 
my story features digs at SF in general, TOS and TNG in particular and even my own fic.

it's currently with my sister for copy-editing
 
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If it's not clear what cliches you used, yes. That might be the case if it's very unorthodox. Listing them at the start or the end would be fine.
 
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