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New TAS comic

Awesome, I finally got a chance to catch up! Love the art and the story too!

...two proofreading catches:

p. 12: Competition, not compitition [top right]
p. 26: Represent, not represet [bottom left]


...once you spend some time proofreading, it never goes away. :D
 
Might want to do a little dialogue editing. "I'm game" sounds like a way too human phrase for an alien to say.
 
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