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MIRI-cannibals??

Adrian Spies didn't completely ignore the food issue.

MIRI
We just had -- foolies...
(getting up, forcing a big grin)
If we were hungry, we just took something... there are lots of mommies and cans.
KIRK
Mommies?
MIRI
Can opener things.
Didn't make it into the final cut, but it did make it into the Blish adaptation.
 
Better still if Balok showed up for some reason.:D

....or his alter ego.

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Didn't make it into the final cut, but it did make it into the Blish adaptation.
Just to be clear, this scene, from the final draft, was not shot because it wasn't in the script that went before the cameras. The "shooting" draft script was the revised final dated August 18,1966. Blish obviously was not working from the revised final draft script when he wrote his adaptation of "Miri."
 
Explain to me exactly why doesn't it make sense.

Well, for one thing...Jahn, Miri and some other kid happen to hijack a Starfleet ship and go on a rampage with it? :guffaw:

And it's not surprising that it doesn't fit with the novelverse continuity, since at the time it was written, there wasn't any. Plus, the author was ordered to remove all references to Miri's world being a duplicate of Earth (for reasons I have yet to determine).
 
Just to be clear, this scene, from the final draft, was not shot because it wasn't in the script that went before the cameras. The "shooting" draft script was the revised final dated August 18,1966. Blish obviously was not working from the revised final draft script when he wrote his adaptation of "Miri."

Yes, the Blish novelization is MUCH different from the TOS episode.
 
Well, for one thing...Jahn, Miri and some other kid happen to hijack a Starfleet ship and go on a rampage with it? :guffaw:

And it's not surprising that it doesn't fit with the novelverse continuity, since at the time it was written, there wasn't any. Plus, the author was ordered to remove all references to Miri's world being a duplicate of Earth (for reasons I have yet to determine).

Okay, thanks for clearing that up.
 
Kirk and co. land on a planet where all the adults are dead and hand full of kids roam around,they find out that they tried to create a fountain of youth that backfired, all the adults died but the kids were spared because they hadnt gone through puberty yet,note this is the 60's and watch mr.
spock delicately try to bring the subject up.We'll ignore the fact that everyone has neat haircut and the cloths dont look too bad for being 300 years old or that Miri is 22 and pollard was 27 ,The problem viewers have with the show is only a small handful of kids remain and there is no way there was a 300 year supply of food somewhere and the kids dont seem like they have much interest in farming.The only explanation I can see isnt a pleasant one --the had to resort to cannibalism.

If it were made today, sure. But when originally aired, no. Spam and Twinkies last forever.
 
Another thing Blish had, that the episode-as-filmed-and-aired didn't, as I recall, was a reference to the portable biocomputer being the "cat brain" model.
 
Couple of points:

Unlike the real world, cannibalism between the Onlies is a non-renewable resource. You can't breed more Onlies. Every death is one step closer to the extinction of their species. Granted, canned food is also non-renewable in this instance, but there are probably way more cans than people. And yeah, cans would go bad in less than 300 years, but...

The Life Prolongation Project was what caused the kids to live 300+ years. In addition to massively slowing down the aging process, the Onlies perhaps didn't have to eat so much, and could tolerate and metabolize all sorts of things we can't imagine. Like expired food stuffs, or even random trees, bushes, bricks and mortar, who knows.
 
That's neither in the final draft nor the revised final draft. I think that's a Blish creation.

I guess that is a little Blish joke, describing a biocomputer, a computer for biologial research and calculations, as a biological computer using a biological brain to calculate.:)

M'Ress learns this and thinks, "You monsters!" :mad:

I'm not certain that M'Ress would considered a catlike sub intelligent critter from another planet to be any sort of close relative, anymore than you would consider a sub intelligent apelike critter from another planet be any sort of close relative.
 
In my mind it was only 30 years not 300. I can't see food, clothing, shelter staying around for 300 years.
Well maybe farming kids could work the orchards and milk cows for 300 years for a small group.

I also can't see the older kids having the patience for 300 years of looking after infants who never age.
I suppose all the babies would have died of neglect..
 
Maybe they didn't need food, or needed much-much less food than we do?

How can Miri have been acting so sexually innocent, when it's likely that she had eaten for dinner buckets and buckets of sex organs over the last few centuries? Maybe she was sexually immature because she did not want to have sex with her food supply?

(Normally it's the other way around: We do not want to eat our sex supply.)
 
....or his alter ego.

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And people thought shoulder pads weren't big until the 1980s? :D

Nicely remastered photo. From the Roddenberry Vault, I presume... Kept the neg in a proper storage environment and had the print hanging in a picture frame on the wall next to his wife and others.

Kirk and co. land on a planet where all the adults are dead and hand full of kids roam around,they find out that they tried to create a fountain of youth that backfired, all the adults died but the kids were spared because they hadnt gone through puberty yet,note this is the 60's and watch mr.
spock delicately try to bring the subject up.We'll ignore the fact that everyone has neat haircut and the cloths dont look too bad for being 300 years old or that Miri is 22 and pollard was 27 ,The problem viewers have with the show is only a small handful of kids remain and there is no way there was a 300 year supply of food somewhere and the kids dont seem like they have much interest in farming.The only explanation I can see isnt a pleasant one --the had to resort to cannibalism.

From recollection, I thought there was dialogue reflecting on food supplies running low. Kirk alluded to it in a Captain's Log as a post-commercial recap, so there were stocks of stored and preserved food items. Perishables still go bad over time, but it's 300 years in the future and developments may have taken place... was there electricity for a refrigerator? Or maybe all they ate were twinkies... Time for a rewatch on my part...

And later to the kids in what's a proper frightening speech:

Captain Kirk said:
And the little ones. What's going to happen to them after you've gone, after you've turned into creatures like Louise? Oh, they'll still be here, but not for long, because the food's all gone. You've eaten it. Maybe six months left, that's all, and then nothing left to eat, nobody left to take care of them. They'll die, too.
 
In my mind it was only 30 years not 300. I can't see food, clothing, shelter staying around for 300 years.
Well maybe farming kids could work the orchards and milk cows for 300 years for a small group.

I also can't see the older kids having the patience for 300 years of looking after infants who never age.
I suppose all the babies would have died of neglect..

Maybe the things that cause the normal degradation and "rot" of foodstuffs and natural fibers was killed by the new disease, it could have been part of how it was supposed to work. A virus that kills off the disease killing bacteria, but then it also kills off the people, too.
 
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