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This doesn't seem like a great distinction, but just ask Sargon what it's like to be a brain-in-a-box and it's limitations...

OTOH, a starship is far from sessile or limbless. Most preceding AIs (if any exist) would probably have very nonhumanoid bodies, because the 23rd and 24th centuries apparently have no use for the artificial human form with or without intelligence: there are no dumb automatons in the rough human form, either. But there are automatons, such as self-cleaning starship corridors. And holodecks are a perfect example of a nonhumanoid automaton of great intellect and great capacity for understanding and imitating human thought. Perhaps through dull number-crunching and various ways of "cheating", but the Turing test is still passed with flying colors.

In any case, even having had decades to study Data, Starfleet doesn't seem either interested or capable of reproducing the feat, and it still seems to be seen with a certain amount of awe...

Starfleet can produce brain prosthetics out of positronics, though, as per "Life Support". I'd tend to argue that Starfleet is merely disinterested in creating further Datas, not incapable of it. Duplication of the already existing really isn't Starfleet's thing: its officers even have the right to kill their illegal clones at sight! (I do wonder why Riker didn't exercise that right when running in problems with his alter ego in "Second Chances"...)

How long a time, really, was it between Lore's creation and the Entity's attack? As far as I know, that's a very open question.

Indeed. But "little time" for my hypothesis could be years, as Soong had to be absolutely certain that his one and only chance of redeeming his reputation would not be a "chance" at all, but a surefire thing.

Apparently, a mere B-4 wouldn't do it. This could be either because rudimentary AI in humanoid body was nothing new to the UFP, or simply because B-4 was needlessly comical. We can't even be sure Soong would have been satisfied with Data: for all we know, that unrealistic-looking dullard was but another step on Soong's road to perfection, while Juliana Tainer was more like the real thing. And Soong still didn't release Tainer, so perhaps he was aiming even higher.

In any case, it would help if we knew what was so different about positronics that distinguishes it from duotronics, isolinear chips, or bioneural gel paks.

Definitely. I might say compactness, but the exocomps apparently used isolinear chips or optronics or whatever standard computing tech for their own variety of compact intelligence. Perhaps compactness combined with flexibility? The exocomps used replicators to modify their bodies to modify their minds, apparently; positronics could perhaps do self-modifications on a more microscopic level, allowing for a brain that is flexible on hardware and not just software level.

Uh-oh, gotta go. Be returning to the other points later tonight... This is very interesting stuff overall.

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OTOH, a starship is far from sessile or limbless. Most preceding AIs (if any exist) would probably have very nonhumanoid bodies, because the 23rd and 24th centuries apparently have no use for the artificial human form with or without intelligence: there are no dumb automatons in the rough human form, either. But there are automatons, such as self-cleaning starship corridors. And holodecks are a perfect example of a nonhumanoid automaton of great intellect and great capacity for understanding and imitating human thought. Perhaps through dull number-crunching and various ways of "cheating", but the Turing test is still passed with flying colors.

Ah, but then Graves would have been just fine after transferring himself into the Enterprise computer... instead, he just became sterile data (no pun intended). One does wonder why he didn't at least transfer himself to the Holodeck or something like that... It really doesn't make a lot of sense, unless Data's brain is set up to closely track a human one (which could explain why Troi is capable of 'sensing' Lore and Data w/Emotion chip.

Starfleet can produce brain prosthetics out of positronics, though, as per "Life Support". I'd tend to argue that Starfleet is merely disinterested in creating further Datas, not incapable of it. Duplication of the already existing really isn't Starfleet's thing: its officers even have the right to kill their illegal clones at sight! (I do wonder why Riker didn't exercise that right when running in problems with his alter ego in "Second Chances"...)

The problem there is the same as above. Bariel wasn't the same with those implants, he became dehumanized, soulless, and they pulled the plug. Again, one does wonder why that happened, when I think the dialogue went out of it's way to state that the implants were duplicating the neural functions exactly. Of course, the real reason is that it would be an easy way to Transhumanity, which ST seems keen on avoiding.

]Indeed. But "little time" for my hypothesis could be years, as Soong had to be absolutely certain that his one and only chance of redeeming his reputation would not be a "chance" at all, but a surefire thing.

Of course, how long would have been long enough? The man wasn't young anymore, and he apparently had years to work on the problem after leaving Omicron Theta. Maybe he had a different goal in mind, after all.

Apparently, a mere B-4 wouldn't do it. This could be either because rudimentary AI in humanoid body was nothing new to the UFP, or simply because B-4 was needlessly comical. We can't even be sure Soong would have been satisfied with Data: for all we know, that unrealistic-looking dullard was but another step on Soong's road to perfection, while Juliana Tainer was more like the real thing. And Soong still didn't release Tainer, so perhaps he was aiming even higher.

Again, it would have been nice to know what Soong would have identified as success. It seems that he eventually came to accept Data as that success, but that could just be settling for the best of his creations, instead of what he envisioned doing.

Definitely. I might say compactness, but the exocomps apparently used isolinear chips or optronics or whatever standard computing tech for their own variety of compact intelligence. Perhaps compactness combined with flexibility? The exocomps used replicators to modify their bodies to modify their minds, apparently; positronics could perhaps do self-modifications on a more microscopic level, allowing for a brain that is flexible on hardware and not just software level.

Indeed, I think you're right. Positronic intelligence does seem a lot more flexible and less literal-minded than most other forms of AI. It's ability to operate a humanoid body allows it to socialize much better with humans and relate to crew members. It may not be the best computationally, but it does seem to be the most flexible for building an android... as well as the most capable of embracing sentience and abstractions like intuition and emotional understanding and given how useful Data has been to Starfleet, it really doesn't make sense they they'd not take the attempt to understand, duplicate, or improve his technology more seriously. They don't have to take him apart to do it, but you'd at least think they would devote more resources to figuring it out. While they may have 'better', he has certainly been 'useful'... and useful is always valuable. This No plans, No backup method of dealing with advanced technology is quite ridiculous.
 
Ah, but then Graves would have been just fine after transferring himself into the Enterprise computer... instead, he just became sterile data (no pun intended). One does wonder why he didn't at least transfer himself to the Holodeck or something like that... It really doesn't make a lot of sense, unless Data's brain is set up to closely track a human one (which could explain why Troi is capable of 'sensing' Lore and Data w/Emotion chip).

Another possible explanation is that Graves desired emotional oblivion at that point, having suffered through a lot of postmortal emotional troubles. Clearly, the mechanism of consciousness transfer can't have been the stumbling block, because Graves could rig up a transfer system with Data basically at the drop of a hat. And it sounds as if Graves desired to transfer his whole emotional baggage even originally, when his intended destination was a computer of his own devising. At least he spoke highly of his emotions, and as if he were taking it all with him.

If Graves wanted, he should have been able to interface with the E-D computer similarly to how he interfaced with Data; the former is never depicted as a more limited computer than the latter.

The problem there is the same as above. Bariel wasn't the same with those implants, he became dehumanized, soulless, and they pulled the plug. Again, one does wonder why that happened, when I think the dialogue went out of it's way to state that the implants were duplicating the neural functions exactly.

Actually, the dialogue leaves open the possibility that Bashir was merely using positronic prosthetics on the vital mechanisms of the brain - midbrain rather than frontal lobes. No consciousness was being transferred to the prosthetics, nor was this ever the intention.

Kira says Bashir replaced half of Bareil's brain. Bashir argues that if he replaces the other half, the "spark of life" will be gone. That would make sense if Bashir replaced the "simple mechanics" - cerebellum, corpus callosium, hypothalamus - and did nothing with the cerebral cortex. If he already messed with 50% of the cerebral cortex and still managed to keep Bareil's personality more or less intact, he should not be stating absolutely that the second identical operation will spell doom. He should be hopeful that if it goes as well as the first one, most of Bareil's personality will still be there!

Of course, the real reason is that it would be an easy way to Transhumanity, which ST seems keen on avoiding.

All sorts of cybernetic implants are still part and parcel of the TNG era Trek, even after the Borg put an evil twist on those. So avoidance of cyberpunkish visions isn't all that active; DS9 later on dabbles in direct neural interfaces on several episodes, such as "A Simple Investigation" and "Honor Among Thieves" (although, as the titles suggest, in the context of somewhat criminal use).

Again, it would have been nice to know what Soong would have identified as success. It seems that he eventually came to accept Data as that success, but that could just be settling for the best of his creations, instead of what he envisioned doing.

Quite. But he did create Tainer after Data, and we have no proof he stopped there. Granted he never went public or officially redeemed his reputation - but at the rate he was going, I wouldn't wonder a bit if he built a couple more perfect humanoids and then finally made himself immortal by creating a duplicate Soong or ten.

Positronic intelligence does seem a lot more flexible and less literal-minded than most other forms of AI.

We must accept, though, that the other forms of AI encountered have been servants, to much greater degree even than Starfleet officer Data. A software-based AI like Vic Fontaine is pretty flexible, as is Moriarty - but both came to be as the result of a desire to create entertainment with specific parameters. Data was allowed to be more of a blank slate.

...given how useful Data has been to Starfleet, it really doesn't make sense they they'd not take the attempt to understand, duplicate, or improve his technology more seriously.

Then again, they never did that with Picard. Duplicates of him would have been quite useful, let alone improved versions. Perhaps the same mentality that still enforces the centuries-old ban on genetic improvement is reinforcing the resistance to superior machines, or superior anything? Perhaps the straw man argument used to topple Commander Maddox in the subject episode was indeed taken seriously - perhaps duplicates, triplicates and v2.0s really worry the UFP to no end?

Whether hardware or software, something is non-reproductable. Even Data couldn't pull it off, as Lal died of cascade failure days after activation, a problem he never seemed to find a solution for, and, in fact, Soong appears to be the only one who knows how to compensate for it, since according to Data himself, he shouldn't work (see his discussion of faith in 'Birthright'). Admittedly, I'm not sure what 'cascade failure' is, exactly, but it would appear to be the main hurdle for creating stable, positronic matrices that no one other than Soong has managed to work around.

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If true (which I have no reason to believe it's not), that's just ridiculous. No wonder colonies drop by the truckload, if Starfleet forensics isn't even up to the task of finding out WHY colonies and people drop dead beyond saying 'Huh, would you look at that.' Not criticizing your point, which is valid, just that it's a dead-stupid way of handling things that I wouldn't expect from Starfleet. I can imagine how the plot of The Doomsday Machine would have gone if the Enterprise had adopted that attitude...

We have to consider that the Tripoli probably had missions of more serious nature scheduled. They find a seeming former colony of unknown size wiped out... Fine. Quarantine the planet and don't send further colonies there, because apparently things don't work well there.

Also note that when the E-D pays a revisit a dozen years later, LaForge comments on the death of the local vegetation as if it were news to him. Apparently, the Tripoli crew didn't notice this phenomenon - which, instead of painting them as complete idiots, could suggest that the phenomenon only develops gradually after a Crystalline Entity strike. So the Tripoli would only have found minor surface remains of the colony, and then Data on his altar. No telling what type of habitation had been there previously. Kirk would never have stopped to seriously investigate something like that.

My only problem with this logic is that we saw exactly this kind of investigation going on ALL THE TIME in the show. Or is the Enterprise the only ship with the personnel capable of investigating such things (must have been, since they were the one's that figured out what happened with Omicron Theta... thirty some odd years later).

Notice that they weren't specifically sent to investigate. They were paying a visit because their schedule allowed for this. Probably Omicron Theta lay far off the beaten path (by choice of the isolationist inhabitants), another reason for the Tripoli not to loiter. Starfleet can't be hunting down all of the galaxy's bad guys or nasty diseases or space storms - it should concentrate on those that actually threaten the UFP, rather than distant alien or dissident worlds.

When did Kirk investigate things like this? Only when the spoor was fresh, or the UFP was under immediate threat. Or, in the rare case of "Obsession", when he had a personal fish to fry.

We don't know anything about the ease or difficulty of holoprogramming, whether the 'personalities' are coded by hand or the result of some kind of synaptic scanning or neural emulation or some such. As well, we don't know how personalities are 'customized', though I suspect it's not easy... otherwise, Voyager could have saved itself some headaches by just saying 'Decrease EMH snarkiness by 90%'.

This rather goes against the idea of holotainment. Surely holonovels must be easily mass-produceable, and at least the ones Janeway played with were clever and interactive, featuring independently thinking characters like DaVinci.

Sure, Riker was surprised that Minuet had a personality - so this could be an aspect only introduced in the 2360s. But there's never really been a hint that holocharacters would be scanned from real people, except in a couple of cases where such scanning was considered extremely bad form ("Hollow Pursuits", "Meridian")!

As for human emulation being a later addition, I don't see why. It's obvious that Tainer's 'rebirth' was an application of Ira Graves synaptic scanning technique that the old man himself used to hijack Data's body.

Agreed that Soong probably borrowed a lot from Graves, and that Data in turn borrowed from them. But Data only understood a fraction of it - he was no Soong, and hence whatever he was unable to do should not be used as proof that Soong would have been equally powerless.

But considering his megalomania and narcissism, I highly doubt he'd change his appearance... that just doesn't seem in character. And why, really? He wasn't a criminal, just a disgrace. Obviously, he wouldn't be a celebrity to the 'man on the street'. but I imagine to his peers and contemporaries at Daystrom, he'd be recognizable, like Henry Ford knowing the face of Nikola Tesla.

And the ENT arch on Arik Soong confirms the appearance issue. So the question does remain, why wasn't Data's appearance considered proof for his origin or ancestry? And the possibility still exists that the connection was seen and dismissed as too obvious - a mere prank by one of Soong's professional enemies, perhaps.

It is possible that certain people knew Data was Soong's brainchild and had a positronic brain - but that these very same people had no interest in shouting this fact from rooftops. The less proof that Often Wrong Soong got it right this once, the better... Data himself might have been too childish to understand what was being talked around him during his early years, and by the time he enrolled in the Academy he had adopted an identity that did not include memories of Soong, nor of memories of speculation on his ancestry.


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Another possible explanation is that Graves desired emotional oblivion at that point, having suffered through a lot of postmortal emotional troubles. Clearly, the mechanism of consciousness transfer can't have been the stumbling block, because Graves could rig up a transfer system with Data basically at the drop of a hat. And it sounds as if Graves desired to transfer his whole emotional baggage even originally, when his intended destination was a computer of his own devising. At least he spoke highly of his emotions, and as if he were taking it all with him.

If Graves wanted, he should have been able to interface with the E-D computer similarly to how he interfaced with Data; the former is never depicted as a more limited computer than the latter.

I don't have access to 'The Schizoid Man' at the moment, but did we actually see the system Graves was looking to transfer to? If we did, was it a bulky, mainframe-esque deal, or something more compact? If it was compact, I really have to pause to wonder why he didn't try to create his own android to transfer to, since, if he had the brain, the body should have been cake (as we seem to both agree upon)... and it's obvious he found value in having a body, otherwise he wouldn't have tried to hijack Data.

I do wonder just how immediately familiar Graves might have been with Data's systems... Given how much he and Soong presumably spent together, it might not have taken much to reconfigure his work to interface with Data's brain, as I don't see any reason to believe his brain uses anything other than standard interfaces to connect to other computers, but I don't have any way of knowing that other than I don't see why Soong would make Data's connectors and interfaces 'proprietary' if computer interfacing would be one of his basic functions. So it might make sense that Graves could quickly re-rig his equipment without a lot of time, just due to his familiarity with Soong's engineering paradigms, which Graves himself probably had considerable insight into.

On the subject of Graves, one wonders just what became of the information that he eventually dissolved himself into. Surely it had to have had some technological value, since he still seemed to be regarded as a great scientist.

Yet more questions... they keep cropping up like weeds...

Actually, the dialogue leaves open the possibility that Bashir was merely using positronic prosthetics on the vital mechanisms of the brain - midbrain rather than frontal lobes. No consciousness was being transferred to the prosthetics, nor was this ever the intention.

Not all human experience resides in the cerebral cortex, though... the midbrain is where a great deal of our more basic emotional drives and responses come from... in fact, interestingly, many of the emotional responses and stimuli that Data sought in his quest are functions that, in humans, usually generates from the midbrain (fear, fight or flight responses, rage, sexual desire, etc.), not the cerebral cortex.

Kira says Bashir replaced half of Bareil's brain. Bashir argues that if he replaces the other half, the "spark of life" will be gone. That would make sense if Bashir replaced the "simple mechanics" - cerebellum, corpus callosium, hypothalamus - and did nothing with the cerebral cortex. If he already messed with 50% of the cerebral cortex and still managed to keep Bareil's personality more or less intact, he should not be stating absolutely that the second identical operation will spell doom. He should be hopeful that if it goes as well as the first one, most of Bareil's personality will still be there!

Of course, the 'half-brain' figure could also be referring to the left-right brain fallacy, wherein the left brain controls 'logical' functions like computation, memory storage, etc. with the right brain doing abstract thought, linguistics, creativity, etc. That model doesn't hold much water today (it's a bit more complex than that), but it still has a large prescense in popular science, like the whole '90% of your brain' fallacy that people still seem to believe is true... and I believe Trek has used itself (The Nth Degree, maybe?). In any case, they could be referring to the idea of using positronics to replace the left half of the cerebral cortex, being more computational in nature, and thus, easier to emulate, but positronics not being up to the task of handling right brain intuitive functions....

That's just an alternative explanation based on nothing more than hunches, so take that as you will.



All sorts of cybernetic implants are still part and parcel of the TNG era Trek, even after the Borg put an evil twist on those. So avoidance of cyberpunkish visions isn't all that active; DS9 later on dabbles in direct neural interfaces on several episodes, such as "A Simple Investigation" and "Honor Among Thieves" (although, as the titles suggest, in the context of somewhat criminal use).

"Extreme Measures" is an even better example, I think. While cybernetics are perhaps fairly common, they're typically used for replacement (Nog's leg, Picard's heart, etc.) and not necessarily enhancement. Geordi's VISOR was probably the best example of and 'enhancement' used in this regard... possibly McCoy's body circa TNG, but it's not really made clear if he's running on biology or cybernetics at that point (knowing him, probably biology).

Even so, these developments didn't really extend to the human brain, with the only species that dabbled in that sort of thing usually ended up following the Borg template (the Bynars are the only species that comes to mind that did that sort of thing without being evil, but it still led them to act antagonistically in the episode featuring them).



Quite. But he did create Tainer after Data, and we have no proof he stopped there. Granted he never went public or officially redeemed his reputation - but at the rate he was going, I wouldn't wonder a bit if he built a couple more perfect humanoids and then finally made himself immortal by creating a duplicate Soong or ten.

Which only raises the question of to what possible end would he have done this? Creating a self-sustaining android population? Nefarious purposes? Just the sheer, unadulterated hell of it? And of course, the question of what happened to them... ESPECIALLY if he maintained his tradmark narcisissm with his later creations... Soong himself may not have been a celebrity, but I'm fairly certain Data is in his own right... People would have noticed another one of him running around (and before anyone mentions Lore, I might remind you that he didn't really spend any time around civilization. Floating in space, taking a Pakled ship and joining up with the Borg doesn't really take him anywhere near the Federation).



We must accept, though, that the other forms of AI encountered have been servants, to much greater degree even than Starfleet officer Data. A software-based AI like Vic Fontaine is pretty flexible, as is Moriarty - but both came to be as the result of a desire to create entertainment with specific parameters. Data was allowed to be more of a blank slate.

This is most certainly true, however, as Fontaine, Moriarty, and the Doctor show, even subservient AI can expand beyond it's original parameters, even without the sort of philosophical imperatives that seemed to drive Data. Of course, that might be an inevitable side effect of being modeled on human behavior patterns... To make a convincing enough simulation of humanity, it may be impossible to not imbue said creations with some sort of genuine humanity, however one wishes to define the term beyond simple biology.



Then again, they never did that with Picard. Duplicates of him would have been quite useful, let alone improved versions. Perhaps the same mentality that still enforces the centuries-old ban on genetic improvement is reinforcing the resistance to superior machines, or superior anything? Perhaps the straw man argument used to topple Commander Maddox in the subject episode was indeed taken seriously - perhaps duplicates, triplicates and v2.0s really worry the UFP to no end?

I doubt that the Federation is run by total Luddites in this regard. In any case, their technology is certainly not static, and in a constant state of improvement, so they're not afraid to push the boundaries when it comes to increasing their capabilities. And if they were that afraid of the possibility of rogue AI's and computers turning against their masters, they'd have burned every holodeck in the galaxy with fire by now, since it seems that it really IS out to kill them at every opportunity.

You mean cloning Picard? Or making an army of transporter duplicates or something? That does seem quite silly, doesn't it? But in any case, I'm sure the people involved would react with extreme disgust with that possiblity. After all, didn't Riker and a bunch of others overreact and murder a bunch of their clones in cold blood after finding out the genetic material was stolen from them in one episodes... They're obviously tetchy about such things.

Data would be a different matter... by his very nature, he is a machine. Those standards and feelings don't really apply to him, especially as I don't think he'd see a duplicate of himself as an affront to his identity, as most human characters seem to whenever it happens to them. If there were a non-destructive means for Starfleet to learn ALL of his secrets to allow mass production, I don't think Data would have a problem with that, as long as those creations would be treated with the dignity afforded to sentient beings and not soulless automata belonging to Starfleet.

Of course, that could be the real reason Starfleet isn't interested... They're in a legal corner. They can't keep a tight rein on manufactured androids without creating another civil rights fiasco. But it doesn't make sense for them to expend resources making androids that might choose a life other than Starfleet, or worse, choose to work for other civilizations, enemies, or worse, go bad and join the Borg or something. And since Starfleet keeps a fairly tight lid on research regarding Data's engineering, they're likely the only ones who know enough to accomplish the feat regardless, aside from the Daystrom institute, who likely have the own reasons for not doing the same... or have they?

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We have to consider that the Tripoli probably had missions of more serious nature scheduled. They find a seeming former colony of unknown size wiped out... Fine. Quarantine the planet and don't send further colonies there, because apparently things don't work well there.

Also note that when the E-D pays a revisit a dozen years later, LaForge comments on the death of the local vegetation as if it were news to him. Apparently, the Tripoli crew didn't notice this phenomenon - which, instead of painting them as complete idiots, could suggest that the phenomenon only develops gradually after a Crystalline Entity strike. So the Tripoli would only have found minor surface remains of the colony, and then Data on his altar. No telling what type of habitation had been there previously. Kirk would never have stopped to seriously investigate something like that.

It was my understanding the the Entity basically sucked up every organic thing in it's path, meaning the vegetation, etc. would have vanished the same time as the colonists, but I may be misremembering the episodes with the Entity.

In any case, my problem with this isn't that they didn't investigate, but that they didn't rule out that the problem wasn't just a local, planetary issue that just means the place isn't suitable to inhabit and not some Negative Space Wedgie that might be prowling the area and COULD pose a threat to Federation space. They don't have to solve the mystery, but they could have at least determined if the cause was local or external in nature, in case it's something they should be on the look out for on other planets that might actually matter. That's the only part I consider negligent on the Tripoli's part.


Notice that they weren't specifically sent to investigate. They were paying a visit because their schedule allowed for this. Probably Omicron Theta lay far off the beaten path (by choice of the isolationist inhabitants), another reason for the Tripoli not to loiter. Starfleet can't be hunting down all of the galaxy's bad guys or nasty diseases or space storms - it should concentrate on those that actually threaten the UFP, rather than distant alien or dissident worlds.

Again, they don't necessarily have to track down or exact retribution or anything, but it would behoove them to at least figure out if it's something that could happen closer to home or just an isolated accident or planetary quirk. If it's bad guys, it'd be good for Starfleet to be aware of them for the future, to avoid things like the Ferengi sneaking around under their noses for centuries before revealing themselves to the Federation openly. If it's a space storm, anomaly, phenomena, etc. it would be nice to track it in case it came close to UFP territory. These things aren't necessarily the colonists' problem. They could be everyones problem if not properly monitored... Besides, isn't that the sort of thing frontier ships are supposed to be keeping tabs on, to know what's coming and what's out there, even if it doesn't immediately effect them?

It seems that too many anomolies and problems of the week the Enterprise gets itself into could really have been avoided with a better tracking system and investigatory branch of Starfleet devoted to collating this kind of information instead of having starships stumble into them all the time.

When did Kirk investigate things like this? Only when the spoor was fresh, or the UFP was under immediate threat. Or, in the rare case of "Obsession", when he had a personal fish to fry.

Ok, I can grant that one. Of course, was there any indication of how long after the Entity's attack the Tripoli showed up? What drew it there, anyway? A distress call? Funky sensor glitch, just because?


This rather goes against the idea of holotainment. Surely holonovels must be easily mass-produceable, and at least the ones Janeway played with were clever and interactive, featuring independently thinking characters like DaVinci.

Sure, Riker was surprised that Minuet had a personality - so this could be an aspect only introduced in the 2360s. But there's never really been a hint that holocharacters would be scanned from real people, except in a couple of cases where such scanning was considered extremely bad form ("Hollow Pursuits", "Meridian")
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Trek is somewhat inconsistent on this, I think, at times making holodeck characters seem very dull, literal stock characters, or occasionally imbuing them with near-human insight and intellect... this seems to be a mere function of plot or comedy, depending on what's required. It is interesting to note, however, that 'Felix' the guy Bashir got the Fontaine program from, seems on one hand a genius (making the Fontaine program fully self-aware and capable of external interfacing with station systems) and a sadist (putting jack-in-the-box subroutines to screw with a holoprogram you designed to be sentient).

Agreed that Soong probably borrowed a lot from Graves, and that Data in turn borrowed from them. But Data only understood a fraction of it - he was no Soong, and hence whatever he was unable to do should not be used as proof that Soong would have been equally powerless.

Keep in mind, too that Data adapted Graves technique (or what he understood of it) to do something it wasn't designed for anyway, copying FROM a positronic matrix to another matrix instead of from a human one... not sure what difference it would have made, but I'm sure it fudged a few parameters.

There's really no way of telling how skilled a cyberneticist Data is/could have been, since he seemed to give up so easily after Lal (who was far better and more sophisticated in her few days of life than any of Soong's early creations, and even his later ones). If she'd not cacade failed, it would have been no contest to say he'd exceeded his father admirably, and in some ways, to do this on his first try, I'd say he did. So I think it's a bit of a mistake to say Data wasn't as skilled as Soong, just not as experienced or practiced...

You know, I wonder if that might have been Soong's ultimate purpose with Data, to follow in his footsteps and succeed him in the android making business. Had he kept at it, I don't see much that would have stopped him... but I imagine, after Lal, his ethical subroutines wouldn't allow him to play God like that again, so more's the pity.


And the ENT arch on Arik Soong confirms the appearance issue. So the question does remain, why wasn't Data's appearance considered proof for his origin or ancestry? And the possibility still exists that the connection was seen and dismissed as too obvious - a mere prank by one of Soong's professional enemies, perhaps.

An enemy that doesn't bother to show himself? Not much of a prank if no one takes credit for it...

It is possible that certain people knew Data was Soong's brainchild and had a positronic brain - but that these very same people had no interest in shouting this fact from rooftops. The less proof that Often Wrong Soong got it right this once, the better... Data himself might have been too childish to understand what was being talked around him during his early years, and by the time he enrolled in the Academy he had adopted an identity that did not include memories of Soong, nor of memories of speculation on his ancestry.

This is much more believable, I think... perhaps these are the 'soulless minions of orthodoxy' I keep hearing so much about...

It is a bit odd, though, that Data never seemed interested in his own personal history (until it showed up wearing his exact same face... but evil), as a matter of academic interest, if nothing else, given his voracious curiosity on other matters human, you'd think speculating on his own origins would be one of the first things he'd attempt.
 
Imagine a current independent scientist builds an android of the same caliber as Data and that Android makes a decision to enter NASA or some military service or any job. He is accepted and does what is expected of him like everyone else. He lives a normal life outside of work. Then he decides to leave wherever he is working. They couldn't just make a claim that he is property. There would not be any basis for it because he never was their property.

If Data was built by starfleet and treated like property from the start it would make more sense.
Like I say, I like the episode and the ideas but this always bothered me.

The ridiculousness of the right to own another sentient being is exactly what the writers were getting at--they
were making the parallel to slavery. In fact, it was crucial to the story that Starfleet had absolutely no right
to Data. Starfleet was being arrogant to think they could own Data, the writers were saying, and we nineteenth
century humans were arrogant to think we could own other people. Very Star Trek.
 
Lots of agreement with this, and with the latest mega-post. And a few comments:

I don't have access to 'The Schizoid Man' at the moment, but did we actually see the system Graves was looking to transfer to?

We only saw an interface with a curious four-field graphic pattern on it - the pattern that later appears on the E-D display. The interface was on a rather bulky, fridge-sized device behind Graves' desk (and not on the other large devices in his office, nor on his desktop flatscreen), but it could well have tied into a planet-sized mainframe, or to an isolinear chip in Graves' breast pocket. No way of really telling.

I don't see any reason to believe his brain uses anything other than standard interfaces to connect to other computers

I'd think he'd have some sort of UFP standard wi-fi for basic tasks such as power recharging - but all data transfer functions seem to involve very special cables plugged into his cranium. Which probably isn't a problem as such, because starship systems (especially computing and communications ones) seem to be universally compatible with everything. Which might simply mean that all 24th century tech is universally compatible, at least after you let the built-in compatibility subroutine do a bit of fitting...

Regarding advanced intrusive brain surgery, it's not uncommon in TNG, but it's not perfected yet, either. Bashir did positronic prosthetics all right, but he was unable to extract a macroscopic implant from Garak's midbrain in "The Wire". Perhaps he wasn't so much worried about the quality of his prosthetics, but of the increasing amounts of damage he was doing when installing the prosthetics?

Anyway, I did some checking. Bareil's original problem was explicitly with his cortex, which went to some sort of fake death and was brought back by chemical treatments and a "neurogenic stimulator" doodad. But a further set of stimulants Bareil himself insisted on damaged his internal organs, which had to be surgically replaced/repaired. Then the same stimulant damaged Bareil's left temporal lobe, and Bashir had to replace that with positronics. So the replacement of "half a brain" indeed seems to refer to replacement of the left half... Or then the left temporal lobe and proximal inner parts of the brain.

Regarding Soong's motivations, I'm inclined to believe in variations of "just the sheer, unadulterated hell of it"...

It was my understanding the the Entity basically sucked up every organic thing in it's path, meaning the vegetation, etc. would have vanished the same time as the colonists, but I may be misremembering the episodes with the Entity.

The dead trees were news to LaForge in any case. Yet the sequel "Silicon Avatar" shows the Entity using a narrow digestive beam, and after only a few hours this beam has reduced a lush planetary landscape to barren rock and a few charred stumps and twigs. So the Entity can create immediate effects if it so wants. Perhaps what LaForge really saw was the slow re-emergence of life a decade later?

That is, the Tripoli crew might have encountered a completely barren planet and decided that it had always been barren - hence no mad rush to find out what evil force sucked life out of habitable planets. They'd simply note the curious altar and the curious android on it, and would be unable to find the extremely carefully concealed underground colony and indeed would never realize the planet had been inhabited once.

No, the episode doesn't tell us when the Tripoli came, or why she came. So we're free to invent as plausible a story there as we possibly can...

An enemy that doesn't bother to show himself? Not much of a prank if no one takes credit for it...

Well, that exact thing happened with the Piltdown Man. And it was understood to be a prank from the beginning, too - except by those few who fell for it, and who probably were the intended victims.

It is a bit odd, though, that Data never seemed interested in his own personal history

We know his memories of the colony existed but were deliberately suppressed, apparently by Soong. Perhaps Soong also placed a ban on self-interest? Data's obsession with formality and formal speech patterns might also be Soong's doing, possibly by accident (as part of some more meaningful limiting effort that was supposed to protect Data from something, or something from Data).

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We only saw an interface with a curious four-field graphic pattern on it - the pattern that later appears on the E-D display. The interface was on a rather bulky, fridge-sized device behind Graves' desk (and not on the other large devices in his office, nor on his desktop flatscreen), but it could well have tied into a planet-sized mainframe, or to an isolinear chip in Graves' breast pocket. No way of really telling.

Yeah, sounds like the machine was probably just for the actual transfer... the ultimate destination unknown... now that's going to bug me...

I'd think he'd have some sort of UFP standard wi-fi for basic tasks such as power recharging - but all data transfer functions seem to involve very special cables plugged into his cranium. Which probably isn't a problem as such, because starship systems (especially computing and communications ones) seem to be universally compatible with everything. Which might simply mean that all 24th century tech is universally compatible, at least after you let the built-in compatibility subroutine do a bit of fitting...

My own personal theory about that is that the 24th century is a Linux fanboys wet dream, with open standards and protocols everywhere. Given the pseudo-collectivist nature of most things in the UFP, I imagine they probably have the GPL codified in law somewhere in the charter. As such, I figure there's no reason for anyone to use specialized software/cables unless such doesn't already exist or current soft/hardware isn't up to the task. I just always figured Data's dataports in his brain were probably just standard interfaces used in most 24th century computers. But that's just speculation.

Regarding advanced intrusive brain surgery, it's not uncommon in TNG, but it's not perfected yet, either. Bashir did positronic prosthetics all right, but he was unable to extract a macroscopic implant from Garak's midbrain in "The Wire". Perhaps he wasn't so much worried about the quality of his prosthetics, but of the increasing amounts of damage he was doing when installing the prosthetics?

Possible... too bad that the whole Bashir-as-Augment arc was a couple of seasons in the future at that point, or I'd just call BS on that since he should have been dextrous enough to not damage Bariel and get Garak's implant out... but I'll go easy on that, since it's based on information the writers didn't have at the time.

Anyway, I did some checking. Bareil's original problem was explicitly with his cortex, which went to some sort of fake death and was brought back by chemical treatments and a "neurogenic stimulator" doodad. But a further set of stimulants Bareil himself insisted on damaged his internal organs, which had to be surgically replaced/repaired. Then the same stimulant damaged Bareil's left temporal lobe, and Bashir had to replace that with positronics. So the replacement of "half a brain" indeed seems to refer to replacement of the left half... Or then the left temporal lobe and proximal inner parts of the brain.

I do have to wonder what the result would have been had Bashir ended up replacing ALL of Bariel's brain.

Regarding Soong's motivations, I'm inclined to believe in variations of "just the sheer, unadulterated hell of it"...

He was a classical mad scientist archetype, after all.

FOR SCIENCE!1!1!

That is, the Tripoli crew might have encountered a completely barren planet and decided that it had always been barren - hence no mad rush to find out what evil force sucked life out of habitable planets. They'd simply note the curious altar and the curious android on it, and would be unable to find the extremely carefully concealed underground colony and indeed would never realize the planet had been inhabited once.

You think they might have come here, and poked around, seeing one of those old, abandoned planets like we saw all the time in TOS, and just happened to find an android? Never assuming there was a recent colony (due to the Entity eating all the evidence) on the planet, and thus, no catastrophe to investigate?

Well, that exact thing happened with the Piltdown Man. And it was understood to be a prank from the beginning, too - except by those few who fell for it, and who probably were the intended victims.

Touche...

We know his memories of the colony existed but were deliberately suppressed, apparently by Soong. Perhaps Soong also placed a ban on self-interest? Data's obsession with formality and formal speech patterns might also be Soong's doing, possibly by accident (as part of some more meaningful limiting effort that was supposed to protect Data from something, or something from Data).

Well, the formality, I've always assumed to be intentional... Soong was creating an andoid that was going to mingle with common society... He was also trying to make up for Lore's rampage (whatever that consisted of)... so it makes sense that his next android would have been programmed to be a bit of a stuffed shirt. I kind of wonder why he would have suppressed Data's curiosity over his origins, though... and when, since he and Juliana left in a big damn hurry, so it's not like he had time to suppress it before he left...
 
Yeah, sounds like the machine was probably just for the actual transfer... the ultimate destination unknown... now that's going to bug me...

Something just occurred to me - about the size, shape, orientation and placement of the machine with the interface.

http://tng.trekcore.com/gallery/albums/s2/2x05/theschizoidman064.jpg

If that strangely tilted contraption's front face opened up, Graves could sit down inside it...

(No, the prop ain't built for that - it's cobbled together from random cubes and tables, obviously. But in-universe...)

You think they might have come here, and poked around, seeing one of those old, abandoned planets like we saw all the time in TOS, and just happened to find an android? Never assuming there was a recent colony (due to the Entity eating all the evidence) on the planet, and thus, no catastrophe to investigate?

The story elements would allow for that. The dialogue in the opening scenes of "Datalore" makes things curiouser and curiouser, though.

For one thing, our heroes come in expecting a Class M world. The Tripoli had apparently reported farmlands there. And Data readily remembers there was a colony there, with those farms but with an emphasis on science. He also has told his friends that he holds the memories of 400 colonists. And Picard comments that his task is to find out what the hell happened to the colony.

How does that fit with the idea from "Silicon Avatar" that the CE eats through a planet's vegetation from horizon to horizon in less than a day? Data says he was found 26 years prior, and LaForge says the farmlands observed back then must have been slowly dying already back then and the Tripoli folks just didn't realize it. This would be possible if the Tripoli arrived during a very narrow time window, of just one day - which as such is logical if she responded to a last-minute distress call from the colony.

Another possibility is that the CE acted differently in those two different attacks. Perhaps it only struck the underground colony first with a precision attack, was driven away by the arrival of the Tripoli, and then returned to gobble up the rest of the planet's biomass.

So, why was there no investigation in the intervening 26 years? I find your scenario more and more appealing: one could argue that the Tripoli crew heard Soong's call (which we learn was wordless, a mere beacon to lure them to Data), saw pristine farms but no surface components of the farming colony, decided this colony of paranoid master scientists (dime in a dozen, by canon precedent) had peacefully uprooted itself, and went away with their booty. There was no urgent reason to investigate, moreso when the builders were clearly a secretive bunch who'd be difficult to track down.

and when, since he and Juliana left in a big damn hurry, so it's not like he had time to suppress it before he left...

The great hurry might have led to clumsy work, I guess. Soong would have been thinking "How do I stop pursuit?", and would have installed a series of blocks on Data's memory, dismantled and hidden Lore, and otherwise cleaned his desk, all with more or less dissatisfactory final results.

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If that strangely tilted contraption's front face opened up, Graves could sit down inside it...

(No, the prop ain't built for that - it's cobbled together from random cubes and tables, obviously. But in-universe...)

Hmm... that's an interesting wrinkle... though I guess that makes sense... unless he wanted to put on a funny hat with wires in it... but I guess his sense of vanity wouldn't allow his body to expire with that sort of indignity... Better to just be sitting regally in a seat slumped over.

The story elements would allow for that. The dialogue in the opening scenes of "Datalore" makes things curiouser and curiouser, though.

For one thing, our heroes come in expecting a Class M world. The Tripoli had apparently reported farmlands there. And Data readily remembers there was a colony there, with those farms but with an emphasis on science. He also has told his friends that he holds the memories of 400 colonists. And Picard comments that his task is to find out what the hell happened to the colony.

There really does seem to be more going on here than meets the eye. I mean, think about the Entity itself... I think the colonists had to have been aware of it's existence already, else there's no way Lore could have found out about it to communicate with it. The nature of the Entity would seem to have made the choice of OT as a colony an extremely bad idea... unless one of the primary functions of the colony was to study the Entity itself and other cosmozoans like it (which could also provide cover for another plot-hole... maybe the scientists studying the Entity figured out how to communicate with it already, explaining why Lore could seem to do it so easily... but the Federation never learned of this, which is why they had to figure it out all over again in 'Silicon Avatar'. In fact, I wouldn't be suprised at all to find that Soong might have put Lore to work with that project initially (to show off his usefulness, maybe, as a research aide), also explaining Lore's seemingly intimate knowledge of the beast. But that's a guess.

How does that fit with the idea from "Silicon Avatar" that the CE eats through a planet's vegetation from horizon to horizon in less than a day? Data says he was found 26 years prior, and LaForge says the farmlands observed back then must have been slowly dying already back then and the Tripoli folks just didn't realize it. This would be possible if the Tripoli arrived during a very narrow time window, of just one day - which as such is logical if she responded to a last-minute distress call from the colony.

Another possibility is that the CE acted differently in those two different attacks. Perhaps it only struck the underground colony first with a precision attack, was driven away by the arrival of the Tripoli, and then returned to gobble up the rest of the planet's biomass.

The only problem I have with this is the distress call... If the colony sent one, that only re-emphasizes my points earlier regarding why the Tripoli didn't investigate further than they did. The ship showing up and not doing much only works if they didn't think anything untoward happened to the colony... If something alerted them, it had to have been something else... maybe residual radiation from the Entity's attack or something made the Tripoli think there was something interesting to look at, but not anything dangerous, deadly, or threatening that would have warranted further investigation.

The Entity being chased off, however, by the Tripoli could explain some descrepancies, though, if it came back later and finished the job. The Tripoli might have thought something was wrong if they had gone there and found nothing but bare rock where there were once farms and colonists... If only parts were gone, they could have just assumed, as you said, that they picked up sticks and went somewhere else (to a neighborhood that didn't have space critters waiting to snack on them, maybe).

So, why was there no investigation in the intervening 26 years? I find your scenario more and more appealing: one could argue that the Tripoli crew heard Soong's call (which we learn was wordless, a mere beacon to lure them to Data), saw pristine farms but no surface components of the farming colony, decided this colony of paranoid master scientists (dime in a dozen, by canon precedent) had peacefully uprooted itself, and went away with their booty. There was no urgent reason to investigate, moreso when the builders were clearly a secretive bunch who'd be difficult to track down.

Now THAT might hit the nail in the head... not a distress call, but a summons... obviously, Soong was uncomfortable with the idea of leaving Data behind, but Juliana insisted. That's canon. Soong may have set up the summons so that Data wouldn't be mothballed for the rest of his existence, in a fit of fatherly concern for his 'son'.

The great hurry might have led to clumsy work, I guess. Soong would have been thinking "How do I stop pursuit?", and would have installed a series of blocks on Data's memory, dismantled and hidden Lore, and otherwise cleaned his desk, all with more or less dissatisfactory final results.

Did Data and Lore exist simulaneously? Or was Lore disassembled before Data was built? i'm not sure the story ever makes that clear.
 
...explaining why Lore could seem to do it so easily / explaining Lore's seemingly intimate knowledge of the beast...

To be sure, we only have Lore's own word that he could communicate with the CE.

Nothing in the behaviour of the Entity in "Datalore" really suggests it's taking hints from Lore's communications. So it approaches the ship? Could be purely instinctual. It stops its attack when Lore hails it? Well, it was bound to stop at some point, as the ship proved CE-proof. It waits around for Lore to beam out a tree, at which points the shields will drop and the CE will attack? But waiting is what this dumb beast would already do naturally - and when the beam-out does happen (Lore is beamed instead of a tree, but who cares?) and the shields drop as planned, the CE does not attack. Instead, it retreats, as if it had never understood the plan.

In "Silicon Avatar", we see how the CE really operates: it can attack random starships at warp, or strike at colonies that did no special hailing. Probably it just homes in on subspace transmissions, without understanding the content or even the nature of those transmissions. It is intelligent enough to be communicated with, perhaps - but never displays enough intelligence to understand Lore's plans or similar intricate stuff. It's probably as smart as a dog.

Now from that viewpoint, the backstory of "Datalore" could have played out rather simply. The CE stumbles upon the colony because it heard subspace noise from there. However, the colonists are relatively secretive and seldom send out messages even in normal times - and they quickly figure out they should be wewy wewy quiet when the CE is in orbit, or roaming the system. Perhaps after taking initial casualties, they huddle underground, careful not to make subspace noises. But the malevolent Lore decides to make some noise, with lunatic-megalomaniac content which the CE completely ignores. The CE merely homes in on the noise, hits the underground colony like it in the later episode hit the caves where Riker took shelter, and manages to consume all the humanoids from the colony (its main dish), with the residual effect of making the vegetation slowly die out in the following years (a side order it wasn't enthusiastic about).

However, while other colonists relied on stealth, Soong was being more active. He prepared an escape vessel, and started covering his tracks. Then he found out Lore had betrayed them; with some hours to spare (and probably without informing his fellow colonists), he dismantled Lore, then dumped Data for lack of better plans, and hurriedly took off before the CE began its attack.

No distress signals, then, because the colonists knew a distress signal would seal their fate. Only Soong's automated beacon triggered after the carnage, when it no longer mattered. Or, if we want to be pragmatic about it, perhaps Soong triggered the beacon simultaneously with his escape, so that the CE would attack the colony and not the escape craft...

No distress signal; a carefully camouflaged colony/grave; no overt signs of destruction; no CE loitering at the crime scene. The Tripoli had little reason to stay. It would only be much later that Data's memories would be examined, and the existence of the colony revealed - and there still wouldn't be much evidence that something untoward had taken place.

Did Data and Lore exist simulaneously? Or was Lore disassembled before Data was built? i'm not sure the story ever makes that clear.

It's left wide open. But the above scenario would call for them to co-exist, so that Data could be programmed with the memories of the colonists while Lore was off sending the fatal messages to the CE.

Perhaps they coexisted for a relatively long time, and Data was given the memories as an interesting, non-time-critical experiment before the CE incident. Or perhaps Data was given the memory dump at the last desperate hour when the colony knew everybody would die, after Lore had sent his message. Data's memories did contain bits and pieces about the CE, after all, such as a vague feeling of dread on the children's drawings.

I could thus go for a scenario where Data was only half-finished when Soong decided to use him as a memory dump. Or perhaps the colonists came to him, asking for Data to serve in this role. Or there could be finesses to the scenario - the colonists finding out about Lore's role, perhaps, and Soong sacrificing Data as a decoy?

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Nothing in the behaviour of the Entity in "Datalore" really suggests it's taking hints from Lore's communications. So it approaches the ship? Could be purely instinctual. It stops its attack when Lore hails it? Well, it was bound to stop at some point, as the ship proved CE-proof. It waits around for Lore to beam out a tree, at which points the shields will drop and the CE will attack? But waiting is what this dumb beast would already do naturally - and when the beam-out does happen (Lore is beamed instead of a tree, but who cares?) and the shields drop as planned, the CE does not attack. Instead, it retreats, as if it had never understood the plan.

I have to admit, as I was writing my last post, I realized the fatal flaw in my argument was the 'big dumb beast' behavior of the Entity. Even so, while Lore was crazy, he wasn't stupid. Surely he wouldn't think he'd be able to get away with a bluff of that magnitude... and he certainly seemed confident that the Entity would attack the instant the Enterprise beamed the tree outside (though, as I noticed in another, unrelated thread, is it made clear that the Enterprise needs to drop shields to beam something out, or is that only necessary to beam in? In any case, his early appearances (granted there were really only two) seemed to show him as a reasonable being, just a mean sociopathic streak... It wasn't until he put in Data's emotion chip that he went coo coo crazytown with the megalomania. If anything, I'd say Data's behavior under Lore's influence better represented 'classic' Lore than Lore himself did in 'Descent'.. If it had been 'Descent' Lore that the Enterprise had discovered in 'Datalore', I'm pretty sure he would have been pegged immediately as dangerous and probably immediately shut down.

In any case, my point is, that your scenario seems to imply that Lore is even crazier and more insane than I think he really was at that point in the series. I'm not sure I could agree with that... especially as your scenario seems to also imply a lot of extrapolated behavior of the Entity on the basis that it really doesn't possess any intelligence, something I'm not sure is necessarily true.

In "Silicon Avatar", we see how the CE really operates: it can attack random starships at warp, or strike at colonies that did no special hailing. Probably it just homes in on subspace transmissions, without understanding the content or even the nature of those transmissions. It is intelligent enough to be communicated with, perhaps - but never displays enough intelligence to understand Lore's plans or similar intricate stuff. It's probably as smart as a dog.

I'll grant that it's probably attracted to subspace signals... it's as good a lure as any for a space-borne predator. That doesn't mean it can't understand them, though, as I imagine subspace is also the means by which these creatures would communicate... Think of it this way, by way of the dog analogy... Dogs can track by hearing (primarily by smell, but their hearing is rather acute as well). But they can also recognize specific content of sound, like a trained dog will to human commands. Of course, dogs can't reply back in the same manner that we communicate to them, but then, maybe the Entity can't either, but can understand messages sent to it well enough... In any case, in 'Silicon Avatar', what reason would it have had to communicate with the Enterprise anyway? As far as it's concerned, it's just mewling prey, with nothing it cares to hear or respond to, anyhow. To say nothing of how one matches communication protocols between the Enterprise computer/universal Translator and an organism that communicates via subspace...

We might want to get Christopher Bennett's opinion on this... he did a lot of research on the Entity (among other space critters) for Orion's Hounds. He could probably clear a lot of the confusion surrounding it for us.

Now from that viewpoint, the backstory of "Datalore" could have played out rather simply. The CE stumbles upon the colony because it heard subspace noise from there. However, the colonists are relatively secretive and seldom send out messages even in normal times - and they quickly figure out they should be wewy wewy quiet when the CE is in orbit, or roaming the system. Perhaps after taking initial casualties, they huddle underground, careful not to make subspace noises. But the malevolent Lore decides to make some noise, with lunatic-megalomaniac content which the CE completely ignores. The CE merely homes in on the noise, hits the underground colony like it in the later episode hit the caves where Riker took shelter, and manages to consume all the humanoids from the colony (its main dish), with the residual effect of making the vegetation slowly die out in the following years (a side order it wasn't enthusiastic about).

This is plausible... the only thing I have issue with is the vegetation... having seen it strip another planet bare onscreen, I don't think there's any evidence that it wouldn't have done the same to OT without something stopping it... In any case, for an organism like the CE, what's the difference between intelligent hominids and dumb plant life... It's all carbon based to it.

However, while other colonists relied on stealth, Soong was being more active. He prepared an escape vessel, and started covering his tracks. Then he found out Lore had betrayed them; with some hours to spare (and probably without informing his fellow colonists), he dismantled Lore, then dumped Data for lack of better plans, and hurriedly took off before the CE began its attack.

Again, plausible... I could see Soong making plans instead of hiding in a cave waiting to die... though I wonder if he ever, in the end, learned of Lore's betrayal... if he had, I can't imagine he would have been as hospitable to him in 'Brothers' when he showed up, given that Lore had indirectly tried to murder him.

I also have problems with the idea of Data and Lore coexisting together... Lore was a very jealous being when it came to Data. I don't think 'Datalore' makes it clear, either, whether Lore was aware of Data's existence before meeting him or not. It's possible that, upon learning of Data's amnesia regarding his time on OT, he just took advantage of it to construct his bluff that Lore was, in fact, the later (and superior) model.

In any case, I don't see Lore accepting Data's existence on OT quietly, especially since it makes it more than clear that Soong considered Lore a failure if he was creating 'superior' models. Lore would not have taken that lightly... or, perhaps his rage at learning of Data's existence was a justification for 'killing them all' in a fit of pique by luring the Entity there.

Actually, I like that idea... It give Lore a justification for murdering the colony than just EVIIILLL. Jealousy given over to rage would do it nicely.

No distress signals, then, because the colonists knew a distress signal would seal their fate. Only Soong's automated beacon triggered after the carnage, when it no longer mattered. Or, if we want to be pragmatic about it, perhaps Soong triggered the beacon simultaneously with his escape, so that the CE would attack the colony and not the escape craft...

I hate to say it, but that sort of cold-hearted pragmatism sounds just like Soong... at least, if his personality is anything like his ancestor Arik... Of course, maybe by that point, the colony was more or less wiped out, so Soong may not have just sacrificed it to save his own hide... just making the best decision under the circumstances...

No distress signal; a carefully camouflaged colony/grave; no overt signs of destruction; no CE loitering at the crime scene. The Tripoli had little reason to stay. It would only be much later that Data's memories would be examined, and the existence of the colony revealed - and there still wouldn't be much evidence that something untoward had taken place.

Indeed.... No problems here...

It's left wide open. But the above scenario would call for them to co-exist, so that Data could be programmed with the memories of the colonists while Lore was off sending the fatal messages to the CE.

I think in 'Silicon Avatar' Data elaborates on the whole 'colonists memories' business... Soong actually synaptically scanned several of them to help form Data's positronic matrix... No one person formed the basis for Data's mind, but several... I'm just conjecturing here, but I wonder if one of the problems with Lore might have been that Soong only used his own mind as a template for Lore, thus amplifying Soong's endemic psychological flaws into a sociopathic megalomaniac. Using several colonists to moderate things might have been something Soong used to make sure Data didn't turn out the same way.

In any case, this doesn't sound like a quick and easy process. It also ignores the existence of Data's 'childhood' that Juliana referred to in 'Inheritance'. Come to think of it, didn't she give a vague timeline for the whole Data/Lore business (I really need to get around to obtaining the TNG series for myself so I can be sure of these things), mentioning that she objected strongly to Soong building Data after deactivating Lore?



Perhaps they coexisted for a relatively long time, and Data was given the memories as an interesting, non-time-critical experiment before the CE incident. Or perhaps Data was given the memory dump at the last desperate hour when the colony knew everybody would die, after Lore had sent his message. Data's memories did contain bits and pieces about the CE, after all, such as a vague feeling of dread on the children's drawings.

I'd always taken the existence of CE memories as a sign that OT was well aware of the CE's existence for some time... enough that the kid Data was 'channeling' at the time had a definite impression of it as a monster... It's the only explanation that makes sense, given that I dont' see any way Soong could have managed to scan his mind if the kid was that close to the Entity... he would have been Crystal chow.

I could thus go for a scenario where Data was only half-finished when Soong decided to use him as a memory dump. Or perhaps the colonists came to him, asking for Data to serve in this role. Or there could be finesses to the scenario - the colonists finding out about Lore's role, perhaps, and Soong sacrificing Data as a decoy?

I'll go with the idea of Data being half-done... obviously Soong meant to place emotions in Data at a later date... possibly once he was sure Data's mind had matured to the point that he had developed an independent conscience that wouldn't go drunk with the power of being an artificial being, and had ongoing experiments tailored to his neural development (the dream program, for example).

i just can't get behind the idea of there being enough time for Soong to have scanned memories on-site as the Entity was attacking... For one, I don't see how he'd have gotten the equipment wherever everyone was hiding, secondly, if the colonists had somewhere to hide from the entity for that length of time, how did they end up dying in the end? Thirdly, if Lore's betrayal DID get out to the colonists, I don't think they'd be feeling at all kindly to Soong at the moment, given that it was indirectly his doing that led them to that point.
 
Why was this episode included on the "Best of TNG" DVD over "The Inner Light"? Can anyone understand the logic in that?
 
Why was this episode included on the "Best of TNG" DVD over "The Inner Light"? Can anyone understand the logic in that?
I think they're both great episodes, but you're right, Inner Light is extremely popular.

In fact, Paramount had fans vote for the most popular episodes of the series, which they showed as a marathon before the final TNG episode in 1994. The episodes were as follows:

#5 Relics
#4 Inner Light
#3 Yesterday's Enterprise
#1 & #2 Best of Both Worlds, Parts 1 and 2

Which episodes were on the Best of TNG DVD?
 
Even so, while Lore was crazy, he wasn't stupid. Surely he wouldn't think he'd be able to get away with a bluff of that magnitude...

What bluff? I'm sure Lore believed he was in communication with the CE. He just interpreted the signs the way a self-centered individual would: everything must have happened for a purpose, and the purpose was Lore.

In any case, in 'Silicon Avatar', what reason would it have had to communicate with the Enterprise anyway?

Sheer curiosity? What happens there is that our heroes send out a "lure" signal, which the CE comes to investigate. The CE doesn't attack the ship, apparently because it knows starships like this are too tough a nut to crack. It responds to the modulated graviton pulse, in a manner our heroes cannot readily decipher - perhaps it barks when barked at? There's no actual "communication" yet before Dr Marr ramps up the pulse and kills the CE.

This is plausible... the only thing I have issue with is the vegetation... having seen it strip another planet bare onscreen, I don't think there's any evidence that it wouldn't have done the same to OT without something stopping it... In any case, for an organism like the CE, what's the difference between intelligent hominids and dumb plant life... It's all carbon based to it.

But what metabolical use would a space crystal really have for carbon based life? Perhaps it's only after sentients, and the vegetation is collateral damage (the extent of which depends on how angry the CE is). Otherwise, there'd be evidence of planets that have been stripped of their vegetation even when there isn't a colonial presence on them - and AFAWK, such evidence doesn't exist. The CE doesn't eat plants or even biosystems as such, but only biosystems where there are humanoids present.

That is, once again the motivation for the evil space entity could be the sucking of souls. That's valid nourishment for several other Trek entities, after all, and explains the antics of the CE better than the theory that it eats biomass.

In any case, this doesn't sound like a quick and easy process. It also ignores the existence of Data's 'childhood' that Juliana referred to in 'Inheritance'. Come to think of it, didn't she give a vague timeline for the whole Data/Lore business (I really need to get around to obtaining the TNG series for myself so I can be sure of these things), mentioning that she objected strongly to Soong building Data after deactivating Lore?

Yeah.

Tainer: "But your father was sure that he'd figured out what went wrong, insisted he could make a stable matrix, and he did. But Lore was cruel. Evil. Eventually we had no choice, we had to dismantle him. Your father decided to build yet another android, one who didn't have emotions. I couldn't believe he would want to try again."

So the relative timeline is established there. OTOH, Tainer doesn't seem to know about B-4, unless it was one of the three prototypes that Soong "lost" before building Lore. Perhaps B-4 was indeed lost literally - not dying an android death, but being misplaced. Or then B-4 was a Romulan attempt at a copy, which would better explain how Shinzon came to possess it.

If Tainer is factually correct above, and Lore was disassembled before Data was built, then we should assume that a) it took a long time for the CE to arrive after Lore summoned it, or b) it took a short time to build Data, possibly while the CE was already hovering above the colony.

But Tainer could be less than literal: Lore was disassembled, yes, but not necessarily before Data was built.

I'd always taken the existence of CE memories as a sign that OT was well aware of the CE's existence for some time... enough that the kid Data was 'channeling' at the time had a definite impression of it as a monster... It's the only explanation that makes sense, given that I dont' see any way Soong could have managed to scan his mind if the kid was that close to the Entity... he would have been Crystal chow.

There is an alternate explanation: the memories were uploaded from the colonists well before the CE came, and the memory of the CE as a monster is Data's own, not an imprint at all.

Timo Saloniemi
 
What bluff? I'm sure Lore believed he was in communication with the CE. He just interpreted the signs the way a self-centered individual would: everything must have happened for a purpose, and the purpose was Lore.

I suppose it's possible... Lore really doesn't have enough characterization to know if he really was THAT megalomaniacal... Personally, I don't think so, but then, I'd like to believe that Lore was more than just a two-dimensional crazypants. But that's just me.

Sheer curiosity? What happens there is that our heroes send out a "lure" signal, which the CE comes to investigate. The CE doesn't attack the ship, apparently because it knows starships like this are too tough a nut to crack. It responds to the modulated graviton pulse, in a manner our heroes cannot readily decipher - perhaps it barks when barked at? There's no actual "communication" yet before Dr Marr ramps up the pulse and kills the CE.

As well as no follow-up to know if the graviton pulse would have borne fruit in the form of an intelligent Entity that could be reasoned with... or at least, better understood, psychologically.



But what metabolical use would a space crystal really have for carbon based life? Perhaps it's only after sentients, and the vegetation is collateral damage (the extent of which depends on how angry the CE is). Otherwise, there'd be evidence of planets that have been stripped of their vegetation even when there isn't a colonial presence on them - and AFAWK, such evidence doesn't exist. The CE doesn't eat plants or even biosystems as such, but only biosystems where there are humanoids present.

Of course, an uninhabited planet that gets 'stripped' is hardly going to raise blips on ANYONE's radar... I mean, if it was habitable, and people knew about it, chances are it wouldn't be habitable for long...

My problem with that is the idea that there would be enough habitable planets available to sustain the metabolism of a creature such as this... Why would a space-borne entity need to feed on planets, anyway? Unless, perhaps the biomass serves another purpose than mere metabolism (it would make far more sense for any space critter to feed upon the interstellar medium than isolated, diffuse planets and such, especially as I'm sure the gravity wells pose a significant risk to it). I wonder if perhaps it 'eats' biomass (or sentience) as a sort of 'booster' for it's own intelligence (like the chrystheria plants in Farscape did for the Scarrans), without which it becomes a dumb beast or something... or maybe biomass/sentience is like a delicacy for Entities like it... I'm not really sure.

That is, once again the motivation for the evil space entity could be the sucking of souls. That's valid nourishment for several other Trek entities, after all, and explains the antics of the CE better than the theory that it eats biomass.

Indeed... the dialogue of the episodes, however, seem to indicate it's more of an energy converter/reconfigurer... though that wouldn't be the first time on-screen dialogue didn't track with actual behavior (or common sense), and I'm willing to ignore that in favor of your explanation, as it makes much more sense.



Tainer: "But your father was sure that he'd figured out what went wrong, insisted he could make a stable matrix, and he did. But Lore was cruel. Evil. Eventually we had no choice, we had to dismantle him. Your father decided to build yet another android, one who didn't have emotions. I couldn't believe he would want to try again."
So the relative timeline is established there. OTOH, Tainer doesn't seem to know about B-4, unless it was one of the three prototypes that Soong "lost" before building Lore. Perhaps B-4 was indeed lost literally - not dying an android death, but being misplaced. Or then B-4 was a Romulan attempt at a copy, which would better explain how Shinzon came to possess it.

I've just always assumed that B-4 was one of the prototypes... As we've already observed, Starfleet has never been too interested in the fate of OT, so I'm sure it was no problem for some enterprising Romulan agents to scour the labs for data regarding Soong's research after Tal Shiar agents uncovered Starfleet's files on Data. And that they came upon Soong's prototypes... who may have not been functional at the time, but with some work, perhaps they made one semi-functional enough to be conscious and move about. Obviously, they had some significant time with B-4, since they managed to retrofit his brain to service their own ends... likely the same program that Shinzon himself was created for... to infiltrate and replace key personell in Starfleet (I'm sure the Romulans would have LOVED to get their hands on Data to pull apart... not having any of the ethical restraints that kept Starfleet from taking full advantage of it).

If Tainer is factually correct above, and Lore was disassembled before Data was built, then we should assume that a) it took a long time for the CE to arrive after Lore summoned it, or b) it took a short time to build Data, possibly while the CE was already hovering above the colony.

Well, it may have taken a while... Of course, if one assumes that Lore could in fact communicate with the Entity, it could have been a dead-man's switch... Knowing he could be in danger of deactivation or destruction, he struck a deal with the Entity that, in the event he didn't communicate with it at a certain time, the Entity would come in and chow down on the colony...

Maybe... but that implies a level of reasoning the Entity probably didn't have... How about this...

Lore could communicate with the Entity, but kept his location and identity under wraps for the time being... with a program that would broadcast everything the Entity needed to know to devour the colony if Lore didn't do something to cancel it... as a means of revenge if the colonists or Soong did manage to take him out. That makes more sense, as it doesn't require the Entity to be that intelligent or reasonable. Lore just understood enough about the Entity to manipulate it to his own, twisted ends.

But Tainer could be less than literal: Lore was disassembled, yes, but not necessarily before Data was built.

Well, I'm sure Soong had enough parts on hand to quickly whip up a body when necessary... How long was Data holed up in his lab constructing Lal? Just a few days, wasn't it? Taking into account Data's lack of sleep, food and rest requirements, along with Soong's superior experience and talent at the work, I imagine it probably didn't take Soong more than a couple of weeks (maybe a month) to assemble a positronic matrix... especially as I'm sure he had all the necessary parts on hand at the time.

There is an alternate explanation: the memories were uploaded from the colonists well before the CE came, and the memory of the CE as a monster is Data's own, not an imprint at all.

That doesn't track too well with Data's personal history with imagination and emotional understanding... While the colonists memories and such formed a matrix for his mind to develop with, I'm not terribly sure just how much he himself is aware of those imprints, as one would think having access to those sort of memories and experiences would have solved many of his problems in understanding human behavior... Of course, his experience in 'Masks' doesn't seem to have registered with him in that regard, either, so maybe you're right...
 
Lore really doesn't have enough characterization to know if he really was THAT megalomaniacal...

I get more an impression of a person shunned and despised by everybody - a person who decides that at least this stray dog he found respects and understands him, when it in fact does not...

As for B-4 being part of the same program that created Shinzon, this makes perfect sense. When studying his own history, Shinzon would run into information about this project as well, and would make use of it - whether B-4 was a genuine Soong creation or a Tal'Shiar fake.

Lore could communicate with the Entity, but kept his location and identity under wraps for the time being... with a program that would broadcast everything the Entity needed to know to devour the colony if Lore didn't do something to cancel it... as a means of revenge if the colonists or Soong did manage to take him out. That makes more sense, as it doesn't require the Entity to be that intelligent or reasonable. Lore just understood enough about the Entity to manipulate it to his own, twisted ends.

That works for me, in most scenarios, not just the ones with the tight timetable.

Well, I'm sure Soong had enough parts on hand to quickly whip up a body when necessary...

Agreed. But if Lore was disassembled as the result of him betraying the colony, then it doesn't sound too likely that Soong would devote time, even very little time, to building another android. Unless Data was some sort of a rapid respose to the CE attack, that is. And Tainer didn't make the connection between Data's construction and the CE crisis, which she probably should have if one existed.

So I'd prefer relatively loose timelines where Lore invited in the CE long before it actually arrived; Soong dismantled Lore because he was a general bad apple, not because Soong realized Lore had betrayed the colony; Soong built another android and used the colonist memories for making him "better-rounded"; the CE arrived, and quickly made short work of the colony; Soong escaped, perhaps using Data as a decoy; and the CE departed, just in time to miss the Tripoli which came to investigate and only found Soong's beacon and android.

That doesn't track too well with Data's personal history with imagination and emotional understanding...

I'm not sure I understand your concern here. I speculated that Data got the colonist memory dump first, and made very little use of it in his personal evolution (perhaps because Soong didn't have time to trigger the proper responses in him). He then lived through the CE crisis, and obtained personal memories of the CE, so that when he saw the drawing of the entity, he would describe it as "depict[ing] something that feels familiar, Sir. And dangerous."

And "familiar" and "dangerous" are sensations even an infantile and emotionally void Data could have gathered, quite unrelated to his memory dumps or his personal evolution.

"Silicon Avatar" doesn't give us definite evidence on how far forward in time the colonists' memories extended. Dr. Marr's son's entries in Data's noggin do not describe the CE attack or mention knowledge of the CE, and one'd certainly think Data would quote those in the final scene where there's speculation on the son's reaction to the mother's offing of the CE.

(...A CE, to be sure. I rather doubt this lifeform was one of its kind. If it was a member of a species, then Dr. Marr just made it all the more difficult for people to protect themselves against the CE threat, by denying them valuable intelligence on the beast.)

Timo Saloniemi
 
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