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Lost And Found

XFozzboute

Captain
In Memoriam
Since finishing the Cabbage I didn’t do an image with it. I tried a few ideas but nonw worked as I would have liked. I finally got around to it. I’m not happy with the Warbird it’s not really good this close up. I’ve had a horrible idea and some time in the future I may end up building my own version. I’m so screwed. One of the main things I wanted to do was show the difference in size and I think it works well doing that. I also think the damage to the Cabbage works better than in some of my other pictures.
I think I got all the images I wanted to do out of my system so I can now return to the relay station I’m building.
yesterdayscabbagefinal.jpg
 
A few suggestion, if I may.

I think you should put the background Warbird mostly in shadow: doing so will hide the under-detailed model. That star and the warbird is drawing the attention away from the Cabbage. Maybe hide the star directly behind the Warbird and have a searchlight from the Warbird shining some hotter lights onto the Cabbage?
 
I had trouble working with the warbird. The textures on it are pretty bright and I had to play with the levels alot to tone it down as much as I able. I didn't even think about drawing attention away from the Cabbage because I was focused on the damage so you could be right about that.
 
Great rendering bro! :techman:
By otherside, Masao pointed good suggestions to improve it.
About S. May´s warbird, this is still, the better one available for free. With a few chamfers here and there and new textures, she still can do the job. ;)
 
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