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From the POv of a brainwashd Worf we see him contact Ds9 and talk to Captain Sisko where he asks him if to look up where the Enterprise is. He lies about wanting to send is congratuations to Riker and Picard about there promotions. Sisko infroms him that it wouldn't be a good idea right now. There in the middle of a mission and informs Worf about the stuff with the Genesis Device.
We see Khan is intruged by what the device can do. As far as Khan is concerned he finds himself in a perfect situation. Not only can he get get his revenge on Picard but he can then use the device on earth, and program it to create engineered humans that are superior to normal humans but who will also look at him as a God. He orders Worf and his people to take the Defiant to earth.
Back on the Enterprise the ship has already arrived. Picard and David Marcus have already beamed down to starfleet command. Riker talks to Data about his excitment at command. Data is still worried about his emotion chip. He recalled the burden of command he felt. Riker tells him that he wants Data to feel that burden. That his emotions combined with his ethics will end up making him a excellent first officer.
We see Khan is intruged by what the device can do. As far as Khan is concerned he finds himself in a perfect situation. Not only can he get get his revenge on Picard but he can then use the device on earth, and program it to create engineered humans that are superior to normal humans but who will also look at him as a God. He orders Worf and his people to take the Defiant to earth.
Back on the Enterprise the ship has already arrived. Picard and David Marcus have already beamed down to starfleet command. Riker talks to Data about his excitment at command. Data is still worried about his emotion chip. He recalled the burden of command he felt. Riker tells him that he wants Data to feel that burden. That his emotions combined with his ethics will end up making him a excellent first officer.
We see Picard and David Marcus address a special council set up to debate the Genesis Device, Marcus is loosing his argument until he informs him that he think he can create robotic life. Starfleet see's robotic life as a intriguing possibility provided the robots are not seintent. They think this could help turn the tide in their conflict with the Borg.
The Enterprise detects the Defiant on long range sensors. Riker tries to hail them but gets no response. He contacts Ds9 and finds out the Defiant is late in returning to the station. Sisco tells Riker about the last time he talked to Worf. Riker suspects something is up and orders the Enterprise to meet up with the ship.
Meanwhile back in the meeting at starfleet command we see David Marcus and Picard wait outside a conference room while the council debates the issue of the new genesis device inside. Picard tells Marcus why he really hopes they don't aprove of letting the device to exsit. There about to get into a philsophical debate when a young ensign comes to inform Picard the Enterprise is leaving orbit to investiage. Picard wants to go but knows his place isn't on the ship anymore. It's here on earth dealing with issue's like this one. He calls Riker to wish him luck.
The council members come out when there done debating. They have decided to allow the device to stay intact. They want Marcus to program it create robotic life on nearby asteroid as a experiment.
I should have noted that the Genesis device is on earth as well. It was beamed down when Picard and MArcus beamed to earth.
Meanwhile back in the meeting at starfleet command we see David Marcus and Picard wait outside a conference room while the council debates the issue of the new genesis device inside. Picard tells Marcus why he really hopes they don't aprove of letting the device to exsit. There about to get into a philsophical debate when a young ensign comes to inform Picard the Enterprise is leaving orbit to investiage. Picard wants to go but knows his place isn't on the ship anymore. It's here on earth dealing with issue's like this one. He calls Riker to wish him luck.
The council members come out when there done debating. They have decided to allow the device to stay intact. They want Marcus to program it create robotic life on nearby asteroid as a experiment.
I should have noted that the Genesis device is on earth as well. It was beamed down when Picard and MArcus beamed to earth.
We cut to Khan's POV. We see the Enterprise intercept the Defiant. He orders Worf to pretend everything is okay but is angered when he finds out Picard and the Genesis Device isn't on so he orders his people/Worf to destroy the Enteprise.
We see a huge fight between both ships. We cut back and forth from Khan's POV and Riker's POV. Both ships beat the crap out of each other but the Defiant gets the upperhand and destroy's the Enterprise. Not before everyone escapes in escape pods.
Data we see is able to use his techincally skills to manuever his escape pod close to the Defiant were he uses the transporter to beam aboard the Defiant. Data is angry for the first time in his life(not counting the time he was tricked into being angered by Lore) He wants to stop the Defiant from doing whatever it is that the crew of the ship wants to do. He is shocked to see Khan who he is familiar with from his knowledge of history. Even more shocked to see Worf working with him.
We see a huge fight between both ships. We cut back and forth from Khan's POV and Riker's POV. Both ships beat the crap out of each other but the Defiant gets the upperhand and destroy's the Enterprise. Not before everyone escapes in escape pods.
Data we see is able to use his techincally skills to manuever his escape pod close to the Defiant were he uses the transporter to beam aboard the Defiant. Data is angry for the first time in his life(not counting the time he was tricked into being angered by Lore) He wants to stop the Defiant from doing whatever it is that the crew of the ship wants to do. He is shocked to see Khan who he is familiar with from his knowledge of history. Even more shocked to see Worf working with him.
Meanwhile we see Picard go and check up on Marcus. Marcus has programed the device to create robotis life. It was alot simplier than he thought which makes MArcus pause about his new Genesis device. For the first time he actually feels how dangerous the device is, now that he actually has a working protype to use. It was one thing when it was just a idea but another to actually have a device that is capable of doing what it is programed to do.
We see starfleet command receive a distress call from the Enterprise escape pods. They warn earth that the Defiant is heading towards earth and it is a hositile ship. Picard is informed and wants to be aboard one of the ships that will be sent to engage the defiant.
We see starfleet command receive a distress call from the Enterprise escape pods. They warn earth that the Defiant is heading towards earth and it is a hositile ship. Picard is informed and wants to be aboard one of the ships that will be sent to engage the defiant.
We now see Data sneaking around the Defiant. He is trying to make it to main engineering to sabotoge the ship. He is cpatured though by Khan who threatens to kill Worf if he doesn't surrender. Data complies.
Meanwhile we see Picard take charge of a Defiant-class ship. He plans to put up a sensor net that can detect cloacked ships. Something similiar to what they used in "Redmemption" Picard feels good to be in control of a ship again and is starting to regret his promotion.
Back on the Defiant we watch Khan activate a EEH(Emegency Engineer Hologram) that looks alot like a young scotty. He turns off it's ethical subroutines and has the hologram reprogram Data to follow his commands.
We see Worf is starting to snap out of his mind-control slowly and deceides he will have to fight back and save Data.
Meanwhile we see Picard take charge of a Defiant-class ship. He plans to put up a sensor net that can detect cloacked ships. Something similiar to what they used in "Redmemption" Picard feels good to be in control of a ship again and is starting to regret his promotion.
Back on the Defiant we watch Khan activate a EEH(Emegency Engineer Hologram) that looks alot like a young scotty. He turns off it's ethical subroutines and has the hologram reprogram Data to follow his commands.
We see Worf is starting to snap out of his mind-control slowly and deceides he will have to fight back and save Data.
We see Khan and the Defiant maneuver around the blockade by using the cloak. The programing of Worf is starting to wear off. Worf is completely aware of everything that has happened and he sends a secret message to Picard as to Khan's plan.
Back on earth we see David Marcus and the Genesis Device being moved to a secure location as earth is preparing for a possible attack from the Defiant. David Marcus feels helpless in the entire ordeal.
Meanwhile Picard gets Worf's message and sets course after the Defiant. Picard knows about Khan's desire for revenge and plans to use it. He catches up to the Defiant and sends a message to Khan letting him know he is going to stop him.
We see Khan's POV and we see his ego gets the best of him but not completely. He orders Data to take a shuttlecraft and head staight to earth so he can capture the Genesis device while Khan stays back to kill Picard.
Meanwhile we see David Marcus and the Genesis Device has been moved to a secret starfleet base located were Alzatrez prision is located.
Data arrives around earth and scans the planet for David Marcus's lifesign. Data is able to enhance the sensors using his unique android gifts and discovers were David Marcus is located.
Meanwhile we see the Defiant ship get in fight with Picard who is on a Defitant-class vessel himself. Picard this time wins and we see Khan and the Defitant being blowned up.
We see the same battle from Khan's POV but Khan still feels satisfied that Data will activate the Genesis Device.
We see Data move through the starfleet base almost like he is the Terminator. Data finds David Marcus and the device. He ignores Marcus like he isn't much of a threat and moves towards the Genesis device and activates it. The device will go off in 15 minutes. Data stands guard over the device to make sure it goes off.
Picard rescue's Riker and the rest of the TNG crew on the way back to earth. He gets a message from starfleet command about how their base has been compromised. Data asks La Forge if there is anything that can be used to stop it. Like a god engineer LaForge has a tech procedure that might work.
Meanwhile we see David Marcus try and talk sense to Data. Even though it shouldn't work it does because Data is more than just a machine. Problem is Data comes to his ethics much to late and the Genesis Device activates. We see Data and David Marcus get killed by the intitial blast.
We cut back to the Defiant and watch her enter earth's atmposphere and put a shield around Alzatrez island. It prevents the Genesis device from consuming all of earth but we see the island itself is transformed into a wierd liquid metal surface. Still earth is saved but everyone is sad because they know Data and David Marcus are dead.
We cut to a funeral for Data, His friends have all gathered to say something. When the funeral ends we see that Worf(who escapes from the Defiant before it explodes in the battle) has been promoted to first officer and Riker is being put in command of the Enterprise-F which will be ready to go in a few month's. The new Enterprise is going to be a return to the Galaxy-class which the ENterprise-D use to be.
We see Picard adjusting to his role as admrial at starfleet command. He orders a search team to go and explore the new Alzatrz island.
The final scene shows liguid metal coming up from the surface and taking the form of Data. Data's eyes open and the story ends.
Back on earth we see David Marcus and the Genesis Device being moved to a secure location as earth is preparing for a possible attack from the Defiant. David Marcus feels helpless in the entire ordeal.
Meanwhile Picard gets Worf's message and sets course after the Defiant. Picard knows about Khan's desire for revenge and plans to use it. He catches up to the Defiant and sends a message to Khan letting him know he is going to stop him.
We see Khan's POV and we see his ego gets the best of him but not completely. He orders Data to take a shuttlecraft and head staight to earth so he can capture the Genesis device while Khan stays back to kill Picard.
Meanwhile we see David Marcus and the Genesis Device has been moved to a secret starfleet base located were Alzatrez prision is located.
Data arrives around earth and scans the planet for David Marcus's lifesign. Data is able to enhance the sensors using his unique android gifts and discovers were David Marcus is located.
Meanwhile we see the Defiant ship get in fight with Picard who is on a Defitant-class vessel himself. Picard this time wins and we see Khan and the Defitant being blowned up.
We see the same battle from Khan's POV but Khan still feels satisfied that Data will activate the Genesis Device.
We see Data move through the starfleet base almost like he is the Terminator. Data finds David Marcus and the device. He ignores Marcus like he isn't much of a threat and moves towards the Genesis device and activates it. The device will go off in 15 minutes. Data stands guard over the device to make sure it goes off.
Picard rescue's Riker and the rest of the TNG crew on the way back to earth. He gets a message from starfleet command about how their base has been compromised. Data asks La Forge if there is anything that can be used to stop it. Like a god engineer LaForge has a tech procedure that might work.
Meanwhile we see David Marcus try and talk sense to Data. Even though it shouldn't work it does because Data is more than just a machine. Problem is Data comes to his ethics much to late and the Genesis Device activates. We see Data and David Marcus get killed by the intitial blast.
We cut back to the Defiant and watch her enter earth's atmposphere and put a shield around Alzatrez island. It prevents the Genesis device from consuming all of earth but we see the island itself is transformed into a wierd liquid metal surface. Still earth is saved but everyone is sad because they know Data and David Marcus are dead.
We cut to a funeral for Data, His friends have all gathered to say something. When the funeral ends we see that Worf(who escapes from the Defiant before it explodes in the battle) has been promoted to first officer and Riker is being put in command of the Enterprise-F which will be ready to go in a few month's. The new Enterprise is going to be a return to the Galaxy-class which the ENterprise-D use to be.
We see Picard adjusting to his role as admrial at starfleet command. He orders a search team to go and explore the new Alzatrz island.
The final scene shows liguid metal coming up from the surface and taking the form of Data. Data's eyes open and the story ends.
i like this....the only thing is there wouldn't really be much drama in a Federation prison like there was on ST6 at Rura Penthe....
the type of people the Federation would imprison wouldn't be as hardcore and i doubt would be as hardcore....
i doubt there's much if any violent crime or political crimes, etc like in the Klingon Empire....
i like the TWOK rewrites but i think TUC would have been a great story to do as well
I need some help too.
Trying to do a story involving the Imperial Romulan State and the Romulan Star Empire conflict from the perspective of a Federation journalist.
If you could help, please PM me.
Trying to do a story involving the Imperial Romulan State and the Romulan Star Empire conflict from the perspective of a Federation journalist.
If you could help, please PM me.
