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Kirk's jump in rank makes sense

Rank becomes meaningless if you just give it away left and right, starship troopers style.

It's not as if this never happens in reality. It's not uncommon for combat units operating deep in the field to be lead by young but talented noncoms only because the assigned CO is dead and the next in line is having a mental breakdown of some kind. Come crunch time, most people tend to follow orders from the dominant personality that seems to know what he's doing. Kirk's talent for problem solving and personal charisma are good leadership qualities, and anyway, his lack of experience is barely an obstacle as long as he has Spock perched on his shoulder (after all, even the experienced Kirk in TOS often depended on dumb luck/charisma/Spock to save his ass when he walked into a situation he couldn't get out of again).
Actualy it is uncommon...most Non-coms are actually older than the officers that command them anyways. Im the XO for my unit and most of my NCOs have 10 years (or more) on me. And besides, your argument rests on the fact that there are no competent officers whatsoever. Its the only way to justify Kirk being made Captain after being a cadet. Something to keep in mind is that this position is one step from being an Admiral. It would never happen

That's the thing... it sort of assumes that everyone who was in the Laurentian system is inferior to Kirk.
I mean, perhaps you can explain Kirk being promoted to XO because of Pike's favouritism/nepotism/recognizing Kirk's use of the Force and maybe Pike influenced Starfleet enough to push Kirk through... but then it just becomes even more shallow.
I can't imagine that there wouldn't be any hurt feelings amonst the other officers in the fleet either way.
 
but even then, he's been through one battle and even then, he was only able to execute his plan because of Spock1's help.

Not to mention the younger Spock, who actually did the hard work of destroying the Narada, and Sulu, who saved Spock from being blasted out of space. The only thing Kirk did was put the Enterprise in the right place at the right time; after that, everyone else did the job of saving everything.

Hell, isn't that all the Captain is SUPPOSED to do? As Bones put it once "Your people know their jobs." Kirk has clearly demonstrated command ability and it's a credit to him that he has such a competent crew to fall back on; if Starfleet is going with the more grounded "astronaut/soldier" motif instead of the space navy thing, then Kirk is just an upstart mission commander with a knack for solving problems and doesn't need to have that much experience in the first place.

But if the captain is good for essentially nothing beyond the odd good decision, what has Kirk done that's demonstrated that he's any better than any of the other lieutenant-commanders or commanders in Starfleet? The only reason the Enterprise survived the initial attack around Vulcan was because it had information nobody else had (the plot hole-tastic 'lightning storm in space' comments) and because Sulu took an extra minute to jump them to warp. After that, it only survived because Nero didn't want to kill Spock. Kirk was then thrown off the ship for blatant insubordination, and when he returned he provoked a superior officer (remember, whether we're going by initial or field ranks, Spock outranked him), to the point of throwing around personal insults, then made the only two actual decisions of his in the film; to go to Earth, and to beam aboard the Narada and rescue Pike. Now, he does to his credit rescue Pike, and he helps Spock get to the jellyfish, but after that it's Spock and Sulu who actually do all the hard work of defeating Nero, with Kirk then ordering the Enterprise to stick around just long enough to get his ship nearly ripped apart and have to blow up his engine core to escape.

Kirk made one good call, and even that is counterbalanced by the fact that he then nearly got his ship destroyed. As a 'coming of age' story it might've worked, tempering his brashness with the realisation that hasty decisions could get people killed and ships destroyed, and Kirk deciding that maybe he does have a thing or two he could stand to learn, after all. But in terms of justifying his immediate promotion to captain of the Federation flagship, going so far as to displace a pre-existing superior officer, it's a premise that fails from first principles. Kirk has great instincts, but they need to be tempered by some better life experience, with someone over him who can ride herd on him. He should've either been left as first officer under Spock, or had Pike and his wheelchair parked alongside the captain's chair for the next few missions, just to slap him whenever he does something potentially deadly.
 
Not to mention the younger Spock, who actually did the hard work of destroying the Narada, and Sulu, who saved Spock from being blasted out of space. The only thing Kirk did was put the Enterprise in the right place at the right time; after that, everyone else did the job of saving everything.

Hell, isn't that all the Captain is SUPPOSED to do? As Bones put it once "Your people know their jobs." Kirk has clearly demonstrated command ability and it's a credit to him that he has such a competent crew to fall back on; if Starfleet is going with the more grounded "astronaut/soldier" motif instead of the space navy thing, then Kirk is just an upstart mission commander with a knack for solving problems and doesn't need to have that much experience in the first place.

But if the captain is good for essentially nothing beyond the odd good decision, what has Kirk done that's demonstrated that he's any better than any of the other lieutenant-commanders or commanders in Starfleet? The only reason the Enterprise survived the initial attack around Vulcan was because it had information nobody else had (the plot hole-tastic 'lightning storm in space' comments) and because Sulu took an extra minute to jump them to warp. After that, it only survived because Nero didn't want to kill Spock. Kirk was then thrown off the ship for blatant insubordination, and when he returned he provoked a superior officer (remember, whether we're going by initial or field ranks, Spock outranked him), to the point of throwing around personal insults, then made the only two actual decisions of his in the film; to go to Earth, and to beam aboard the Narada and rescue Pike. Now, he does to his credit rescue Pike, and he helps Spock get to the jellyfish, but after that it's Spock and Sulu who actually do all the hard work of defeating Nero, with Kirk then ordering the Enterprise to stick around just long enough to get his ship nearly ripped apart and have to blow up his engine core to escape.

Kirk made one good call, and even that is counterbalanced by the fact that he then nearly got his ship destroyed. As a 'coming of age' story it might've worked, tempering his brashness with the realisation that hasty decisions could get people killed and ships destroyed, and Kirk deciding that maybe he does have a thing or two he could stand to learn, after all. But in terms of justifying his immediate promotion to captain of the Federation flagship, going so far as to displace a pre-existing superior officer, it's a premise that fails from first principles. Kirk has great instincts, but they need to be tempered by some better life experience, with someone over him who can ride herd on him. He should've either been left as first officer under Spock, or had Pike and his wheelchair parked alongside the captain's chair for the next few missions, just to slap him whenever he does something potentially deadly.

What he said.

Been following this thread for a while now, only now had time to reply.

No, it makes no sense. None what so ever.

Going from cadet to captain is just, well, a cop out.

So, hes the son an infamous starfleet Exec Officer, he a rebel, hes a Harry Potter-esque celebrity due to his father and he happens to live in Iowa of all places. He then enters the academy and rescues his captain, barely saves a starship, kills the villain and gets a great friendship out of it.

And that warrants instant captaincy of a brand new state of the art starship? :shifty:


Ok, now heres my problem with this, and we all seem to be saying the same thing. Cadet to captain with no field experience to speak of apart from teh above. Hmmm, imagine that happening in the Navy or Army etc. It wont, exactly.

There was no experience apart from maybe the occaisonal field exercise at the academy and the above situation he was given to act in.

So to give him the reins of a starship as barely a graduate is absurd. That last scene seemed to be shoehorned just to say, heres captain Kirk. Why, surely he wasnt the only cmmand orrientated officer in the entire fleet. So, all the command pursuing commanders, lieutenants and cadets are all killed, leaving just one person to take over the ship from a well respected captain?

Sure he was a good officer given the situation, but that doesnt warrant instant promotion. What would you feel like if your mate at the Army made major right out of training just because he stopped a bomb blowing up the camp while at a war game? Or you avert the sinking of an aircraft carrier when your in the Navy and instead of a medal of valour for fast thinking and bravery, you get the ship its self.

I get the fact that Abrams and co were trying to tell a story of a quick rise in the ranks, but hey, not that quick. Instant promotion:wtf:?

I was expecting at least a mention of a few years going by when we see the promotion scene. Which would be fair, it makes more logical sense to me at least.

It just ended too suddenly. ''Heres the five year mission" WTF. Are you crazy, a 20 something in command of a ship for five years with no experience to speak of. Riiiight.


I wouldve prefered a three part movie series, and at the end of part 3 we finally see Captain Kirk of the Starship Enterprise. Of all people, JJ couldve pulled this off, especially with writers such as Orci and Kurtzman.

First part we basically see what we saw in this movie. Second part, we see kirk become a Lt and briefly posted on another ship for a limited time, then back to the Enterprise as Exec Officer under Pike before taking over command in part 3 when Pike is either exposed to radiation or gets promoted.
 
What this movie needed was a 20 minutes scene of people sitting around a table debating the interstellar political ramifications of promoting Kirk to Captain.
 
Anyone who's ever been in the military can tell you it makes no sense whatsoever. There's no way in hell that someone who's just graduated training is going to take command of anything at all unless you're given a battlefield promotion because EVERYONE above you in rank, time in grade, and time in service has been killed. No way in hell. Rank, time in grade and time in service happen for a reason. There were hundred, if not thousands of Starfleet officers on that ship all higher ranking and more experienced that Kirk. The chain of command would not bypass them and put kirk at the top. Kirk going from academy graduate to captain in the course of the movie's events is fanboy fanfiction at it's worst. You can make your stupid argument that Pike made him first officer all you want but that is just a stupid plot device. No rank of officer has the ability to promote someone more than two steps in grade. To move four steps in grade would take an act of congress. Pike would never have been inclined to promote kirk to first officer anyway, no matter who his father was. There were so many other more experienced and higher ranking officers more deserving the promotion. Pike would have been logically and legally obligated to promote via the chain of command. The promotion in this movie is total crap.
 
What this movie needed was a 20 minutes scene of people sitting around a table debating the interstellar political ramifications of promoting Kirk to Captain.
:guffaw:

I watched that again the other day. Its the best piece of marketing this movie has had, via of all places, The Onion.:lol:
 
It's not just the military for which this would make no sense, either. No matter how good you are at any job, nobody is going to promote you to a position of extreme responsibility and authority without having a chance to assess you in some interim capacities. You don't go from intern to partner, or substitute teacher to principal, or cashier to regional manager, and these are all much less difficult and demanding jobs. Kirk's heroism in the movie is all well and good, and certainly worth a medal or three, but what does that tell us about his ability to actually captain a starship? What does he know about diplomacy? About disciplining his crew? About when it's appropriate to push forwards and when to draw back? All these things you learn through doing, and I don't care how thorough his shipboard assignments were during the Academy, they're the exact same as all those people who come out as ensigns or lieutenants and have to work up the ranks normally. If Starfleet Academy really prepared students so that they could assume command straight out of graduation, then why hasn't anyone ever done so before? Kirk set the record, which held until TNG at least, and even he took years before he could become captain.
 
Even with the Hornblower situation he did not get a major ship of the line command permentantly right out of being a raw midshipmen.

He commanded a captured french cargo ship (which sunk under his watch because he forgot to check the hull after she was hit beneath the waterline by the Indefatigable's cannon fire) and then really didn't get to command until he commanded the Hotspur....and that was no "74"

More like a schooner or a frigate...

I'm jsut saying although I loved the film and it was fun to watch this was just down right silly. Field promotion during a crisis ..well that is Hornblower like....but once the crisis is over back to class sonny.

I mean if Kirk could do this with only three years training...well WOW think of what Starfleet will get once he gets so field experience and EARNS his command of a ship of the line.

TOS Kirk was a rising star as a young 30 something in command of a Connie. Shatner was able to convey a sense of the Salted Veteran as well as Kirk...you got the feeling he belonged in that chair after years of service.

This was just Starship Trooperesque (the film mind you) and lazy contrived writing.

All I could think of was the disasterous Red Quad from DS9's Valiant...they did the job for a while...but eventualy paid a price..a big one for lack of EXPERIENCE.

So good film...but no the promotion did not make sense at all as written. A simple blip forward a few years...oooor begin the next film with a change of command ceremony set a few years after XI...

It really wouldn't have been that difficult to do.

This was a very easily avoided nitpick.

Vons
 
My girlfriend's sister went to see the film on the weekend, and she made an interesting suggestion; since the Enterprise literally started coming apart during the climax, it would've made perfect sense to have it in for repairs, and Kirk assigned to another ship, while making a comment about getting back aboard her as soon as he can.
 
People need to remember that Kirk jumped from Lieutenant to Captain after commanding a starship as it's Captain (creating the plan and then delegating and trusting his officers to carry it out to their best abilities is command) and then as a result he saved the entire Federation. Kirk was only referred to as cadet because he hadn't technically graduated from the Academy. This makes the leap in rank, still a very big jump, but not as crazy.

Also since some of the people that don't like the jump in rank at all have conceded that perhaps the cadets get at least one training assignment or more on board a starship prior to graduation... isn't it then plausible for FANON (fan canon) to suggest that Kirk could have been stationed with Captain Garrovick on the Farragut during his training assignment? And if so, while it would not be the position a cadet would be placed in by default, isn't it plausible that the Kirk we all know and love worked his way into Garrovick's attention and was placed on an assignment where by Kirk could be KIRK... the intellectual space cowboy hero we all know and love? If so isn't it then plausible to assume that our beloved and cocky Kirk returned to the Academy after his training mission with EVEN more confidence and even a commendation for a higher rank... Lieutenant... when he was set to graduate?

Also for those upset with the "bagged chicks and cheated on tests" thing... I have and have others here... already detailed the possibilities that could have occurred off screen during Kirk's 3 years at the academy, but it should also be pointed out that McCoy told Kirk that no one has attempted the Maru TWO TIMES let alone THREE TIMES. This means that it is then plausible to assume that the lockjaw space cowboy that Kirk is failed the Maru the first time legitimately but then his ego was so bruised he demanded another attempt. Kirk then fails again legitimately but now his ego is in full on rant mode and so he demands he be given yet another attempt to beat the Maru... this time Kirk has fully realized he can't beat it, that no one can and so he cheats to prove his point. This FANON would suggest that Kirk was hard working, committed and tenacious in his studies and that his extracurricular activities with the ladies were just that.
 
I think you're missing the fundamenal point here, Zambigno. Yes, we could simply invent all manner of explanations as to how Kirk amassed heaps of experience, did brave and wonderful things, and was just generally the very model of a perfect officer. But none of that is anywhere in the film, and as a result the promotion that we see, at the end of the film, is unbelievable with regards to what has actually been presented to us.

And as for 'Kirk saved earth', we've seen people save planets before. Nobody got a promotion after TMP. Nobody got a promotion after ENT S3. Nobody got a promotion after FC. There's nothing to indicate that acts of heroism, even extreme acts of heroism, are good for anything other than medals, which is as it should be.
 
Rank becomes meaningless if you just give it away left and right, starship troopers style.

So by "meaningless" you don't literally mean that rank has no meaning, just that it doesn't have the meaning you wish it had.

Yes, he needs more experience. Why? Because he is a Cadet who has been given command of a starship and several hundred people with it as well.

That's not a reason, or a kind of experience. You've probably got a very plausible argument to make, but you haven't bothered to make it yet.

What, specifically, does Captain Kirk need to know that he can't plausibly know by the end of the film. How would serving as a (fill in the blank) teach him those things?
 
Rank, time in grade and time in service happen for a reason.

(snip)

No rank of officer has the ability to promote someone more than two steps in grade. To move four steps in grade would take an act of congress.

In our service, in our era. Other services have worked differently.

Pike would never have been inclined to promote kirk to first officer anyway, no matter who his father was. There were so many other more experienced and higher ranking officers more deserving the promotion.

Were there? In what scene?
 
People need to remember that Kirk jumped from Lieutenant to Captain after commanding a starship as it's Captain (creating the plan and then delegating and trusting his officers to carry it out to their best abilities is command) and then as a result he saved the entire Federation. Kirk was only referred to as cadet because he hadn't technically graduated from the Academy. This makes the leap in rank, still a very big jump, but not as crazy.
He his referred to as cadet because he's still a cadet, not a Lieutenant. Even if he did graduate, he would have been an Ensign. From Ensign through LtJg, Lt, LtCmdr, Cmdr up to Captain his an impossible step.

Spock was already Commander, had shown great command skills, including realizing his own emotional affliction to release command to Kirk... you can kill 90% of the fleet all you want, he would have been promoted first.
 
What I posted in another thread:

The problem is that we don't know exactly what is left of Starfleet. The Enterprise was never able to re-establish contact with the main fleet in the Laurentian system. There may not be many starships left and even fewer command grade officers (we do not know the extent of Pike's injuries).

A stretch... but it works for me.
 
People need to remember that Kirk jumped from Lieutenant to Captain after commanding a starship as it's Captain (creating the plan and then delegating and trusting his officers to carry it out to their best abilities is command) and then as a result he saved the entire Federation. Kirk was only referred to as cadet because he hadn't technically graduated from the Academy. This makes the leap in rank, still a very big jump, but not as crazy.
He his referred to as cadet because he's still a cadet, not a Lieutenant. Even if he did graduate, he would have been an Ensign. From Ensign through LtJg, Lt, LtCmdr, Cmdr up to Captain his an impossible step.

Spock was already Commander, had shown great command skills, including realizing his own emotional affliction to release command to Kirk... you can kill 90% of the fleet all you want, he would have been promoted first.

McCoy is wearing Lieutenant Commanders' stripes right out of the Academy (after only three years as well!).
 
People need to remember that Kirk jumped from Lieutenant to Captain after commanding a starship as it's Captain (creating the plan and then delegating and trusting his officers to carry it out to their best abilities is command) and then as a result he saved the entire Federation. Kirk was only referred to as cadet because he hadn't technically graduated from the Academy. This makes the leap in rank, still a very big jump, but not as crazy.
He his referred to as cadet because he's still a cadet, not a Lieutenant. Even if he did graduate, he would have been an Ensign. From Ensign through LtJg, Lt, LtCmdr, Cmdr up to Captain his an impossible step.

Spock was already Commander, had shown great command skills, including realizing his own emotional affliction to release command to Kirk... you can kill 90% of the fleet all you want, he would have been promoted first.

Then why is Uhura who is also a cadet, referred to as Lt? It's pretty clear to me that just because someone is a cadet doesn't in SF mean you do not have a comissioned rank (and Uhura isn't alone, Saavik was also a LT and a cadet). Also what evidence do you have that support that all SFA graduates only recieve an Ensign rank?


KK
 
I think you're missing the fundamenal point here, Zambigno. Yes, we could simply invent all manner of explanations as to how Kirk amassed heaps of experience, did brave and wonderful things, and was just generally the very model of a perfect officer. But none of that is anywhere in the film, and as a result the promotion that we see, at the end of the film, is unbelievable with regards to what has actually been presented to us.

And as for 'Kirk saved earth', we've seen people save planets before. Nobody got a promotion after TMP. Nobody got a promotion after ENT S3. Nobody got a promotion after FC. There's nothing to indicate that acts of heroism, even extreme acts of heroism, are good for anything other than medals, which is as it should be.

I get what you and others are saying, I can even concede your point that previous acts of heroism have not awarded promotions (or at least promotions that have been accepted by the characters on screen). I just don't believe that your POV has to be the way it is in this fictional universe. This is an alternate universe and time line, but at the same time we can see somethings remain the same. People with your viewpoint have already conceded that it is likely cadets go on starship assignments prior to graduation.

The film jumps ahead THREE YEARS with no indication what occurs during those three years. Pike told Kirk he could graduate in FOUR YEARS, Kirk says he'll do it in THREE and sure enough three years later we are at that point. This strongly implies Kirk amasses experience and has extreme aptitude in his studies.

As Trekkies we also know that Kirk Prime was stationed on the Farragut, so it then IS NOT AT ALL implausible to suggest (though not insist) that this could have happened within these three unaccounted for years and could have even been the reason Kirk was able to "skip" an entire year of Starfleet Academy training. I believe it is unreasonable to continue to insist that because the film doesn't show anything that NOTHING happened.

People need to remember that Kirk jumped from Lieutenant to Captain after commanding a starship as it's Captain (creating the plan and then delegating and trusting his officers to carry it out to their best abilities is command) and then as a result he saved the entire Federation. Kirk was only referred to as cadet because he hadn't technically graduated from the Academy. This makes the leap in rank, still a very big jump, but not as crazy.
He his referred to as cadet because he's still a cadet, not a Lieutenant. Even if he did graduate, he would have been an Ensign. From Ensign through LtJg, Lt, LtCmdr, Cmdr up to Captain his an impossible step.

Spock was already Commander, had shown great command skills, including realizing his own emotional affliction to release command to Kirk... you can kill 90% of the fleet all you want, he would have been promoted first.

Uhura was a full rank Lieutenant after her graduation... IN CAMERA IN STORY. Others in this thread have shown that the novelization states that Kirk was a Lieutenant, but not yet commissioned due to his academic suspension.

Spock should have been promoted first... perhaps he was offered the position. We do not know. If he was though it is extremely plausible to suggest that Spock declined and instead suggested (perhaps along with Pike) that Kirk be granted a commission.
 
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