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To clarify what it is you're talking about, here is the bulk of the dialog concerning these particular aspects, AFAIK [http://www.chakoteya.net/StarTrek/1.htm]:

ONE: Captain! Captain.
VINA: No! Let me finish!
ONE: But we were a party of six.
COLT: We were the only ones transported.
VINA: It's not fair. You don't need them.
PIKE: (grabbing Colt's laser pistol) They don't work.
ONE: They were fully charged when we left. It's dead. (communicator) I can't make a signal. What is it?
PIKE: Don't say anything. I'm filling my mind with a picture of beating their huge, misshapen heads to pulp, thoughts so primitive they black out everything else. I'm filling my mind with hate.
VINA: How long can you block your thoughts? A few minutes, an hour? How can that help?
COLT: Leave him alone.
VINA: He doesn't need you. He's already picked me.
COLT: Picked her? For what? I don't understand.
VINA: Now, there's a fine choice for intelligent offspring.
COLT: Offspring, as in children?
ONE: Offspring as in he's Adam. Is that it?
VINA: You're no better choice. They'd have more luck crossing him with a computer.
ONE: Well, shall we do a little time computation? There was a Vina listed on that expedition as an adult crewman. Now, adding eighteen years to your age then.
(The Magistrate approaches the cell)
VINA: It's not fair. I did what you asked.
MAGISTRATE: Since you resist the present specimen, you now have a selection.
PIKE: I'll break out of this zoo somehow and get to you. Is your blood red like ours? I'm going to find out.
MAGISTRATE: Each of the two new specimens has qualities in her favour. The female you call Number One has the superior mind and would produce highly intelligent children. Although she seems to lack emotion, this is largely a pretence. She has often has fantasies involving you.
PIKE: All I want to do is get my hands on you. Can you read these thoughts? Images of hate, killing?
MAGISTRATE: The other new arrival has considered you unreachable but now is realising this has changed. The factors in her favour are youth and strength, plus unusually strong female drives.​

It's Colt who is described by The Keeper (the name given to the character in "The Menagerie") as realizing that the potential now exists for Pike no longer to be unreachable for her, not Number One, who is only described as having (sexual) fantasies involving Pike.

I would agree that Number One jousting with Vina about her age has the distasteful subtext of sexual competition. But I don't believe that Number One had any motive except defeating the Talosians. With escape impossible, she was prepared to destroy them all.

Touche -- thank you for catching my error. But I can't discount Una jousting with Vina about her age. The subtext is clear: "You're old and thus I'm a better option." Still reads to me as Una being in competition for Pike when she ought to be focusing on escape.
 
Sci is going to ignore what is inconvenient and twist whatever else to emphasize his perspective: the creators of TOS were misogynist pieces of shit and we’re degenerates for not calling it out at every opportunity.
 
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Touche -- thank you for catching my error. But I can't discount Una jousting with Vina about her age. The subtext is clear: "You're old and thus I'm a better option." Still reads to me as Una being in competition for Pike when she ought to be focusing on escape.
That's part of it but I also viewed as Una being analytical, pointing out that Vina is not a reliable source of information. The comment related to the context of the current topic of conversation, calculated to shut down Vina's criticisms so she could better assess the situation. It was Una lowering herself to Vina's level of trash talking but it wasn't just about that.

I would agree though TOS and TNG had a habit of bigging up female character qualifications and then failing utterly to demonstrate them in the story as they fulfil (usually) the victim or love interest role. Like Kate McRae in the Black Hole, whose actual role was to be the daughter and the telepath. Her qualifications were just window dressing.

The enduring quality of the yeoman character (at least until after Mears) was that she wanted to bang the captain (although they swapped Mears onto McCoy when Rand was replaced). That this character trait has to be universally preserved does say a lot about Roddenberry's mentality.

I still think the Cage was the high point for female involvement. Very few other women in the show take action without being told what to do by a man.
 
The main issue I had with whether it was indicated that Colt was not submissive is that that concept was posited in conjunction with, as I read it, essentially the premise that Rand and the other post-Colt yeomen were written as more submissive than Colt.

I had treated it as separate conditions. The first sentence a statement and the second sentence an opinion dependent on the first sentence. The first sentence can be true (Colt is not submissive) while the second false (your example of Rand pushing back against Charlie). They both need not to be true.

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Colt is not submissive either, she's plucky but green. I think the yeomen devolved a bit after Colt and became more submissive, with occasional glimpses of competence.

How is that the case? Rand pushed back and did not allow herself to be sexually harassed or assaulted by either Charlie Evans or Evil Kirk, and she confessed to Kirk that she'd tried to get him to notice her legs. Barrows was forward in her pursuit of McCoy. I have a hard time seeing Rand and the others as necessarily more submissive than Colt, who by comparison is a tabula rasa.

I wasn't debating the second sentence. Only pointing out that the first statement that "Colt is not submissive" is evident in the "The Cage".

Furthermore, all of the yeomen were subordinate to the main characters, so any indication of "submissiveness" has to be filtered through that. The example you've shown is really necessarily indicative only of Colt obeying orders and being diligent to carry out her duties. There's a vast distinction between being a spineless wet noodle and "submissive." This example shows she's not the former. Additionally, carrying out orders is necessarily conforming to the will of others and, in that narrow sense, submissive.

Yes, as a subordinate her job would be submissive to Pike's authority but Colt is not submissive as per the definition of being humbly or unresistingly. If she was "submissive" would she cut off her superior officer in the middle of loudly berating her?

I'm more advocating for "insufficient data" here regarding character issues than anything.

There is insufficient data for many aspects of Colt but the bridge interaction showed that she was not submissive, IMHO.
 
And their desires are all presented as being Christopher Pike

If the Talosians are trying to get a human to breed more humans, that's all they're concerned with - who wants/desires/dreamt of once/briefly considered having a relationship with the aliens' supposed prize stud, Pike. They don't focus on "she'd like to become a captain/write the great Federation novel/learn to play the guitar/teach at Starfleet Academy/enter the diplomatic corps" because that isn't pursuant to their goal - make more Humans.
 
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Which is an act of advancing a gender role -- the gender role of male leadership of male narrative centrality.

So are you suggesting that every piece of fiction should be viewed as an act of advancing or opposing a given societal viewpoint, whether the creator meant to, or not? So the decision in 1964 of having a male captain and expecting audiences of all backgrounds to see through his eyes is some kind of "reinforcing gender stereotypes," or the like? Would you have expected any forward-thinking series creator in 1964 to have insisted on a female captain, just so that that creator could claim to be a part of a move towards better representation?

I think the answer to these questions is likely "no."

So then, what I get from your point is that the makers of "The Cage," and therefore also TOS, is that they followed the storytelling conventions of their time to tell there tale, and therefore, in your view, reinforced stereotypes of their time. By that logic, you might as well argue that there are issues with "The Odyssey." One could, by your logic, argue against the use of larger-than-life creatures in it shaping events instead of modern science, because that was a storytelling convention of Homer's time.

If the Talosians are trying to get a human to breed more humans, that's all they're concerned with - who wants/desires/dreamt of once/briefly considered having a relationship with the aliens' supposed prize stud, Pike. They don't focus on "she'd like to become a captain/write the great Federation novel/learn to play the guitar/teach at Starfleet Academy/enter the diplomatic corps" because that isn't pursuant to their goal - make more Humans.

The tragedy of Vina's life is that she could imagine all those things but none of it could be real. That is a state that both men and women could imagine. I don't feel there was a problem Pike a man and Vina a woman, which some (not you) seem to be suggesting.
 
Sci is going to ignore what is inconvenient and twist whatever else to emphasize his perspective: the creators of TOS were misogynist pieces of shit and we’re degenerates for not calling it out at every opportunity.

I haven't called anyone names in this thread; I haven't denigrated anyone's character here. You, on the other hand, have denigrated mine on several occasions.

I have gone so far as to say that I still enjoy "The Cage" and that it is okay to enjoy a work of art that contains problematic elements. I merely insist that we not pretend those elements are not present.

That's part of it but I also viewed as Una being analytical, pointing out that Vina is not a reliable source of information. The comment related to the context of the current topic of conversation, calculated to shut down Vina's criticisms so she could better assess the situation. It was Una lowering herself to Vina's level of trash talking but it wasn't just about that.

Maybe, but just having that subtext present -- "You're old, I'm hotter" -- automatically disqualifies the character of Una from escaping the "dominant male/submissive female" power fantasy dynamic that "The Cage" sets up in its depiction of how Pike and the female characters relate to one-another.

I would agree though TOS and TNG had a habit of bigging up female character qualifications and then failing utterly to demonstrate them in the story as they fulfil (usually) the victim or love interest role. Like Kate McRae in the Black Hole, whose actual role was to be the daughter and the telepath. Her qualifications were just window dressing.

The enduring quality of the yeoman character (at least until after Mears) was that she wanted to bang the captain (although they swapped Mears onto McCoy when Rand was replaced). That this character trait has to be universally preserved does say a lot about Roddenberry's mentality.

Agreed 100%.

Yes, as a subordinate her job would be submissive to Pike's authority

Yes, their relative positions in the military hierarchy is used to help rationalize the writer's preferred ideas about power dynamics in intergender relationships. But, again, that speaks to part of the misogyny at play -- Roddenberry seems to have taken it for granted that of course a man would be in charge. And in fact, Pike's dialogue makes it clear that the presence of women within the military hierarchy at all is a relatively new phenomenon to which he is not yet accustomed.

but Colt is not submissive as per the definition of being humbly or unresistingly. If she was "submissive" would she cut off her superior officer in the middle of loudly berating her?

Sure she would -- if her goal is to get him to realize that she's done a good job and should have his approval for it.

There is insufficient data for many aspects of Colt but the bridge interaction showed that she was not submissive, IMHO.

It literally ends with her wanting to know if she would have been his favored paramour.

So are you suggesting that every piece of fiction should be viewed as an act of advancing or opposing a given societal viewpoint, whether the creator meant to, or not?

I mean, broadly-speaking, that's just what happens. That's how storytelling works. Storytelling functions by generating alternating feelings of tension and catharsis within its audience, and to do this it must provoke in the audience feelings of tension by contrasting its plot developments against the audience's expectations of what "ought" to happen. It cannot do this except by either affirming or conflicting with the audience's value system.

Thus all stories fundamentally either confirm a status quo as preferable and depict dynamic agents who disrupt that status quo in a negative light, or they condemn a status quo as undesireable and depict dynamic agents who disrupt that status quo in a positive light. Elemental examples: Superman is good because the society of Metropolis is good and characters who disrupt that society are bad; Batman is good because the society of Gotham is bad and he disrupts that unjust society.

This one reason is why children often have a hard time engaging with adult dramas -- they are not yet invested in the cultural value system which the story is reacting to because they have not yet developed a cultural identity. Similarly, this is why it can be difficult to become invested in dramas about conflicts occurring within cultures that are foreign to one's self -- if one has not developed the necessary cultural values to either accept or reject the ideas the story is depicting, then the conflicts the story presents can seem arcane or irrelevant.

So the decision in 1964 of having a male captain and expecting audiences of all backgrounds to see through his eyes is some kind of "reinforcing gender stereotypes," or the like?

Of course it is. There have always been women with natural leadership abilities, who have tried to become leaders; it is only because the cultural values of 1960s America precluded depicting female leadership as natural and good that Roddenberry (and the vast majority of Hollywood writers) did not feature female leaders in equal proportion to male leaders.

Would you have expected any forward-thinking series creator in 1964 to have insisted on a female captain, just so that that creator could claim to be a part of a move towards better representation?

That's not the question. The question is not, "What should Roddenberry have done?" The question is, "What elements are present in the text?" The text's elements are patriarchal. That's all there is to it.

So then, what I get from your point is that the makers of "The Cage," and therefore also TOS, is that they followed the storytelling conventions of their time to tell there tale, and therefore, in your view, reinforced stereotypes of their time. By that logic, you might as well argue that there are issues with "The Odyssey."

Yes. The Odyssey reflects and reinforces the normative cultural values of ancient Greek society. So, too, do ancient Greek plays like the Oresteia (in which Aeschylus is essentially advocating for the moral superiority of achieving justice through due process of law rather than through personal vendettas and revenge -- the superiority of the Greek city-state is affirmed over other political forms).

One could, by your logic, argue against the use of larger-than-life creatures in it shaping events instead of modern science, because that was a storytelling convention of Homer's time.

Indeed, there is an entire school of thought which holds that what you might call the equivalent of the "Great Man Theory of History" in fiction ought to be abandoned in favor of a more sociologically-oriented view. This article argues that the reason Game of Thrones got worse over time was that its style of storytelling switched from sociological to reliant on these sorts of larger-than-life characters as the drivers of the story.

Kirk drift…. This is more like thread drift.

As is often the case, people discover they cannot communicate until they identify and define the a priori assumptions they hold which are in conflict with one-another. That leads to thread drift, since suddenly your thoughts about X turn out to be deeper concerns about Y.
 
^^ Whatever, dude. Every time you speak you reaffirm what I’m getting from you.

Don’t give us you like TOS and in the next breath crap all over it. Your viewpoint and agenda is clear. Better stick with DSC/PIC/SNW and the “enlightened” brain trusts steering that ship. You’ll be happier.
 
I have gone so far as to say that I still enjoy "The Cage" and that it is okay to enjoy a work of art that contains problematic elements. I merely insist that we not pretend those elements are not present.
Indeed, yes. I believe that was taught to me in my art class. An appreciation of the art in the context of the times. Not every single art piece will be without problems.
 
Yes, their relative positions in the military hierarchy is used to help rationalize the writer's preferred ideas about power dynamics in intergender relationships. But, again, that speaks to part of the misogyny at play -- Roddenberry seems to have taken it for granted that of course a man would be in charge. And in fact, Pike's dialogue makes it clear that the presence of women within the military hierarchy at all is a relatively new phenomenon to which he is not yet accustomed.

I was only commenting on whether Colt was submissive, not whether the presence of women in Starfleet was relatively new which is a discussion I was not participating in.

Sure she would -- if her goal is to get him to realize that she's done a good job and should have his approval for it.

Then you're arguing that she is not submissive. As per the definition, "ready to conform to the authority or will of others; meekly obedient or passive." If she was truly submissive then she would have let Pike finish berating her and quietly ask if he still wanted the reports or acknowledged his anger of not following directions and quickly left the bridge. Colt also did not previously ask Pike on whether it was okay to deliver the reports to him on the bridge when he had apparently had instructions regarding accessing him on the bridge. She just came up to the bridge and delivered to Pike and defended her action. Which again is not very submissive.

It literally ends with her wanting to know if she would have been his favored paramour.

Would a meekly and passive person be so forward to ask that in front of the bridge crew?
 
Guys, enough. QUIT GETTING PERSONAL.

Also, you're going around in circles. It was a show written in the 1960s by men with typical 1960s attitudes regarding men and women. Those of us watching today are not men and women (for the most part) with those attitudes.
 
I was only commenting on whether Colt was submissive, not whether the presence of women in Starfleet was relatively new which is a discussion I was not participating in.



Then you're arguing that she is not submissive. As per the definition, "ready to conform to the authority or will of others; meekly obedient or passive." If she was truly submissive then she would have let Pike finish berating her and quietly ask if he still wanted the reports or acknowledged his anger of not following directions and quickly left the bridge. Colt also did not previously ask Pike on whether it was okay to deliver the reports to him on the bridge when he had apparently had instructions regarding accessing him on the bridge. She just came up to the bridge and delivered to Pike and defended her action. Which again is not very submissive.



Would a meekly and passive person be so forward to ask that in front of the bridge crew?

You're confusing submission with meekness. In the context of analyzing the power dynamics of male/female relationships in "The Cage," all that is meant by characterizing Vina, Una, and Colt as "submissive" is that the characters assume a subordinate role to Pike and internalize the desire to please him. Interrupting him to make him realize she deserves his approval is indeed entirely consistent with holding a submissive role in the story.
 
^^ Whatever, dude. Every time you speak you reaffirm what I’m getting from you.

Don’t give us you like TOS and in the next breath crap all over it.

Loving something means fully understanding it for what it is, warts and all. This conversation has been about the warts, but that doesn't mean there isn't still plenty about TOS I love. There are two models of the TOS Enterprise adorning my living room as we speak, and frankly nobody will ever match Nimoy and Shatner as Spock and Kirk.

Your viewpoint and agenda is clear.

"Agenda," huh? What agenda is that?

Better stick with DSC/PIC/SNW and the “enlightened” brain trusts steering that ship. You’ll be happier.

I love all of ST. Even VOY and ENT. But DS9 is the greatest, of course.

Also, you're going around in circles. It was a show written in the 1960s by men with typical 1960s attitudes regarding men and women. Those of us watching today are not men and women (for the most part) with those attitudes.

A much shorter version of what I've been saying -- I've just been elucidating exactly what those attitudes were.
 
You're confusing submission with meekness.

Your statement doesn't make sense since meekness is part of the definition of submissive.

Just a reminder in case you skipped the definition for submissive...
ready to conform to the authority or will of others; meekly obedient or passive.

In the context of analyzing the power dynamics of male/female relationships in "The Cage," all that is meant by characterizing Vina, Una, and Colt as "submissive" is that the characters assume a subordinate role to Pike and internalize the desire to please him.

Describing specifically Colt, I've acknowledged her job is to be subordinate to Pike. We know from Pike's berating that there were instructions about what to do when Pike is on the bridge and she wasn't following them because she was delivering reports at a specified time. If Colt was "submissive" as you describe then what actions should she have taken? (IMHO, a submissive would have asked for instructions beforehand to avoid displeasing Pike instead of surprising him.)

Interrupting him to make him realize she deserves his approval is indeed entirely consistent with holding a submissive role in the story.

Let's look again at the definition of being submissive...
Ready to conform to the authority or will of others - Colt does not wait for her superior officer to stop yelling. She doesn't even ask for permission to speak which would be expected if she was conforming to authority.
Meekly - Speaking up is not being quiet in the face of the berating
Passive - She is not letting Pike finish berating her.

We'll have to agree to disagree that interrupting Pike yelling at her is the action of a submissive person as it is not meekly or passive and not conforming to the will or authority of others.
 
Your statement doesn't make sense since meekness is part of the definition of submissive.

Not to get too risque, but I refer you to the concept of the brat in sexual role-play: the submissive who enjoys misbehaving in order to provoke the dominant partner into asserting their authority. That's just one example of a submissive who is not meek; obviously submissive roles in both sexualized and non-sexualized contexts can be much more complex than mere meekness.
 
There is something quite disturbing in being told repeatedly that characters you long accepted as admirable and heroic are supposedly nothing but despicable and shallow frauds who dominated and exploited everyone around them.

Fuck that shit.
 
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