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Re: This Side Of Paradise

I always thought the plot of the episode didn't quite show the danger of the spores. (You're articifially happy and hopelessly dependant on them, while simulatenously letting everything ELSE go to rot).

I would have added a lingering question from Spock which would have driven the point home. "I believed I was happy, but I'll never know if it was real, or just what the spores wanted."

Make it a bit more haunting (such as the forced 'paradise' of Landru), and the episode would have been much more effective.
 
The Devil In The Dark

The mining installation on Janus VI is under attack from within. 50 people have been killed by a strange creature that leaves nothing but charred fragments in its wake, and for the colonists, the Enterprise can’t get there soon enough. It’s imperative that Kirk restore the colony to working order, its supply of pergium ore is essential to many colony worlds in the area, and when it comes to rare elements, Janus VI is a veritable treasure trove. Starfleet’s arrival isn’t appreciated by all, fancy redshirts with their Phaser IIs succeeding where the colonists with their Phaser Is have failed is bound to rub some the wrong way. However administrator Vandenberg is a realistic man, and understands that the superior abilities and technology of a starship are necessary. He explains to the landing party that the attacks began when the miners started working a new deeper level. He also shows off some silicon nodules discovered there that Spock finds tantalising. Vandenberg urges Kirk to find and kill the beast so the installation can start producing again. The nature of the beast is perplexing though, it kills with a powerful acid, tunnels through solid rock the way humans walk through air, and can’t be detected with standard scans. Spock posits the existence of a silicon-based lifeform, one that would elude scans. It’s an idea that McCoy finds entertaining, but ultimately Spock is proved right when confronted by something that looks like living rock. This beast is intelligent as well, when it steals a vital component from the installation’s power reactor. Spock becomes convinced that the creature is worthy of preservation and study, and urges Kirk to try and spare it. Kirk is determined to eliminate the creature as quickly as possible however. Their two philosophies are harshly tested, when the beast traps Kirk in a tunnel, with the Captain armed with only a phaser.

The Devil In The Dark is a firm fan favourite, lauded in forums the world over, and one of the resonant images in Trek is that of an anxious Kirk, with Spock behind him, facing the threat of the Horta. The Devil In The Dark is also one episode that I regard less highly than most, although it’s predominantly because of my own aversion to horror movies. This episode is an effective horror, the mysterious monster preying on hapless miners, the claustrophobic and dark settings, the build up in tension, and the monster realised more through implication, as well as the incidental music, which all work together to make this very reminiscent of an early black and white horror flick. In that respect, this is very much influenced by Frankenstein, with the Horta persecuted and hunted by ignorant miners. But I can’t stand horror films; I’m bored to tears by them, and haven’t been scared by the hackneyed formula since I was a child. The build up in this episode is wasted on me, and I can really only appreciate it on an intellectual level, likening it to those classic films of the forties. My interest only perks up later on in the show, when we get to see Kirk and Spock’s clash of philosophies and the big reveal of what the Horta really is.

The most interesting aspect of this episode is the dynamic between Kirk and Spock, one that shows the two truly come to loggerheads regarding the disposition of the Horta, yet maintain a strong sense of loyalty and friendship regardless. Spock quickly surmises that the Horta is the last of its kind, and worthy of protection. Kirk’s orders are explicit, hunt it down and shoot to kill, so Spock’s generous re-interpretation of those orders skirts dangerously close to insubordination. Kirk realises that in this case, Spock’s scientific curiosity may be a liability, but rather than say it out loud, he offers to reassign Spock. The way that Spock uses logic to justify his position on the search team is charming. It’s also a toss up whether he does so to protect the Horta or safeguard Kirk. Kirk for his part realises that by keeping Spock by his side, his orders won’t be countermanded. Both men end up getting what they want, and their friendship remains unharmed. It is most definitely friendship at the heart of this dynamic as the story unfolds, as it is Kirk who ends up confronting the Horta. When he realises that the wounded creature is unwilling to attack, he hesitates, begins to consider options other than killing it. Spock, believing his friend to be in danger urges Kirk to defend himself. The survival of Horta pales against the well being of his friend. It’s evidence of how thin that Vulcan veneer can get at times.

The rest almost seems a formality, Spock’s mindmeld with the Horta that determines its nature, and confirms the significance of the silicon nodules, McCoy finding out that he is indeed a bricklayer as well as a doctor, as he finds a way to treat the injured Horta, and the establishment of friendly relations between the miners and the beast that had previously preyed on them. Once Kirk dangles the profit motive in front of them, it’s an easy decision for them to take despite the death of fifty of their compatriots. A point that I actually missed until very recently is that it is the humans who are the devils of the title, as the Horta communicates through the mindmeld. It’s a subtle message that exhorts us to co-exist with our environment rather than exploit it out of hand, at least that’s the way it seems with 40 years of environmental degradation and pollution to add perspective.

Star Trek’s first season was pleasingly light on monster of the week episodes, and The Devil In The Dark is the antithesis of The Man Trap. Both beings thought to be last of their kind, both preying on humans, both coming up against the Enterprise crew, yet it is the salt vampire that is consigned to history, while the Horta lives to tunnel another day. Yet it is in The Man Trap that the extinction message is strongest, with Spock speaking of the passenger pigeon and the buffalo. For all its intelligence, the Salt Vampire operated by instinct, and it killed to feed. Unless it reproduced by asexual means, it was truly the last of its kind, and a being that had eliminated its only food source from its environment must have been an evolutionary dead end. The Horta on the other hand killed to protect its young, it acted out of intelligence and not instinct, stealing the reactor component in an effort to drive its enemies away, and a brief contact with Spock was enough to teach it how to acid-etch in English. But given Kirk’s propensity to react to threats with society altering explosions as evidenced throughout the series, one wonders how the Horta survived. Surely it can’t be just the fact that the Horta was a mother? Regardless, this episode turns out to be one of Trek’s finer moments, an ode to diversity and acceptance without bigotry and prejudice, a belief that communication can solve all problems, that cooperation builds bridges and forges friendships. Despite the initial trappings of the horror genre all too evident in the story style, it’s a positive message that more people could stand to hear.
 
Re: This Side Of Paradise

I loved the miners. Thes guys were stereotypical New Jersey Union guys. Schmitter: "sher is dahk donn heah". It's the Horta. Badda-bing! Just something about them makes me chuckle.
 
Re: Space Seed

Posted by The Laughing Vulcan:
This is a woman who was far too irresponsible to be in Starfleet, and would have been better off as a high school teacher or something else innocuous.

As a high school teacher myself, all I can say is: :guffaw:.
 
Re: Space Seed

. The Horta on the other hand killed to protect its young, it acted out of intelligence and not instinct, stealing the reactor component in an effort to drive its enemies away, and a brief contact with Spock was enough to teach it how to acid-etch in English. But given Kirk’s propensity to react to threats with society altering explosions as evidenced throughout the series, one wonders how the Horta survived

because, the horta is intelligent but also can be reasoned with.
in the apple and return of the archons not only did you have stagant socities you had an immediate threat to kirk's ship.
what if either the landru computer or the vaal computer had stopped trying to destroy them for five seconds and tried to commuicate why the respective socities came into being the way they did and was willing to consider other options things might have gone differently in both cases.
 
Errand Of Mercy

Negotiations between the Federation and Klingons are about to break down and Starfleet anticipates an attack. The Enterprise is ordered to Organia to prevent its use by the Klingons as a staging post. Spock states that the Organians are a primitive but friendly culture, rated D- on the Richter scale of development, woefully ripe pickings for the Klingons. On their way to Organia, the Enterprise is attacked and forced to destroy a ship. The signal comes in from Starfleet. It’s war! Arriving at Organia, Spock and Kirk beam down leaving Sulu in command of the ship, with express orders to keep the Enterprise out of danger, should it become outnumbered in a confrontation. The landing party is met by what amounts to the head of the Organian council, Aylebourne. But the peaceful Organians continually rebuff Kirk’s offers of protection, and don’t seem to take his warnings of Klingon barbarities seriously. When Spock learns that the Organian society is a stagnant one, one that hasn’t progressed in tens of thousands of years, Kirk even offers the benefits of Federation technology and education. Then the inevitable happens, the Klingons arrive en masse, with the Organians curiously aware of their fleet despite their primitive nature. They disguise the two Starfleet officers in an effort to protect them, but that is as far as their resistance goes. The Enterprise has left the area as per orders. The Klingon commander Kor doesn’t hesitate in beaming down a garrison and establishing Klingon rule over the compliant and placid Organians. A consummate warrior, he’s ill at ease dealing with the Organians, and finds the one man among them to show a little backbone the ideal choice to represent the sheep. That turns out to be the disguised Kirk of course. Meanwhile the Vulcan trader in kevas and trillium gets introduced to the Klingon mind sifter. It’s an infuriating occupation for the Klingons, as Kor doesn’t appreciate being the wolf in command of a herd of sheep that don’t seem to understand threats. Meanwhile Kirk and Spock try to mount a resistance against the invaders, but the Organians keep grinning inanely and refuse to fight.

Errand Of Mercy is another classic episode that is hard to fault. Kirk once again comes up against beings of godlike powers, the twist being that they masquerade as primitives, and prefer not to involve themselves in the affairs of lesser species. They have no choice to get involved though, when two belligerent races land on their doorstep. This episode stands out prominently because it introduces the Klingons as a galactic foe worthy of the Federation, with perhaps the most memorable of them all, Kor coming face to face with Kirk.

There are always two aspects of this episode that stand out for me. One is the Prime Directive, or lack thereof. Pretty early on in Star Trek, this idea of non-interference in primitive cultures is mooted as a way for advanced societies to act. Yet of all the societies encountered in Trek, the Organians appear to be the most primitive, and Spock adds that theirs is a stagnant culture. Yet for the duration of this episode, it is as if the Prime Directive never existed. Kirk happily beams down to meet with the Organians, offers them the protection of the Federation, and when it becomes apparent that the society isn’t progressing, he offers them the benefits of a hi-tech Federation society, education, medicine and more. I wonder just why the Prime Directive was waived in this instance, or what the criteria for its application is, if it truly didn’t apply to the Organians. Is the Federation of TOS guided by events rather than ideals? To quote a later Starfleet commander, “It’s easy to be a saint in paradise.” The advent of a war between two superpowers would mean the rules of interstellar diplomacy would have changed. I can easily see Starfleet sacrificing its ideals for the sake of tactical and strategic necessities. It points to a more realistic and genuine organisation. After all in the real world, governments are always prepared to adapt to changing circumstances. The problem in the real world is that once sacrifices are made for expediency, civil rights sacrificed, legislation altered, it becomes difficult to reverse those changes. Yet in later episodes, The Prime Directive will crop up again. The mechanism that exists to restore Federation government to an idealised norm swiftly after a state of emergency would be the one major difference between a contemporary and this future government.

The second aspect of this episode that sparks my interest is the advent of the unreconstructed Klingon. These Klingons are utterly different from their post TOS counterparts, and consequently more interesting. Visually they aren’t too different from humans, duskier in colour, prone to goatees and shaggy eyebrows, but little more. Psychologically there is little else to separate them, and that is all down to the dictates of the story. The fundamental message of Errand Of Mercy is an anti-war one. For this reason, it goes to pains to highlight the similarities between the Klingons and Federation as opposed to the differences. Negotiations have broken down between the two governments, and despite the Klingons’ obvious martial tendencies, it’s down to simple things such as borders and trade that divide the two, rather than fundamental differences in philosophy. It’s very much played from the Organians’ perspective, which can barely distinguish between the two. Kirk readily admits he’s a soldier, and both he and Kor try to deal with the Organians from a position of assumed strength. Kirk threatens them with the horrors of Klingon occupation, as do the Klingons themselves. While Kirk’s actions are altruistic, the similarities between the two commanders are visited again and again, both regard the Organians with disgust when they refuse to defend themselves, both are united in indignation when they aren’t permitted to fight their war.

Kor is a fantastic character, soft-spoken, steely of resolve and without an ounce of bluster or bellicosity. He is as far removed from recent interpretations of Klingons as you can get, and it is an all the more rounded and layered character for all that. You can see that he doesn’t appreciate being governor of a world of sheep, he instantly gravitates to the other wolf in the fold, Kirk in his Baroner disguise. His martial upbringing leads him to relish combat, but it is combat among equals, and you can see that he takes no pleasure in the slaughter of the weak. Far from being a villain, Kor is as loyal to his empire as Kirk is to the Federation. It’s a difference of ideologies that separates them, the martial Klingons’ Soviet Union to the democratic Federation’s USA, the two men have more in common than not. Although Kor refers to Klingons and humans as two different species, and later on in the series, we learn that Klingons can be unmasked by judicious use of tribbles, watching this episode, I often like to think that the Klingons are just as human as Kirk and McCoy. I can well imagine an early diaspora from Earth, where those groups who find the new united Earth democracy untenable to their own beliefs, leave to set up a totalitarian regime elsewhere in the stars. Two hundred years later, their descendants run into the Federation.

Elsewhere, this episode is another chance to see the Kirk Spock dynamic in full flow. Their loyalty and friendship is at the heart of this episode as they attempt to thwart the Klingons, and we get some choice dialogue as well. Sulu gets to command the Enterprise, and Uhura screams when her seat gets too hot, but the rest of the cast doesn’t get too much of a look in. Still, this is an excellent story that makes its point well.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

I might not be posting in this thread to say it often enough, but I'm really enjoying your thought-provoking analyses of TOS episodes, Laughing Vulcan. Keep 'em coming.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

There are always two aspects of this episode that stand out for me. One is the Prime Directive, or lack thereof. Pretty early on in Star Trek, this idea of non-interference in primitive cultures is mooted as a way for advanced societies to act. Yet of all the societies encountered in Trek, the Organians appear to be the most primitive, and Spock adds that theirs is a stagnant culture. Yet for the duration of this episode, it is as if the Prime Directive never existed.

it could be the organians were "discovered " by someone else.

since it is along a war route it could also be along a common trade route among more advanced planets .

we do know that the federation itself had prior contact with the planet since spock refers to the earlier planetary surveys that had been done.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

I'll have to watch again, but it looked like the Klingons were going to take Organia regardless of the culture - at that point, the war would mean the Feddies got there first, right? Not like the Klingons wouldn't invade and conquer the pl.. oh, wait, they DID. :P
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

Yeah, the Empire had territorial designs on Organia dating back quite a few years. The TOS episode was their actual military move on the planet to seize it and incorporate it within the borders of their empire. It was inevitable, as was the Organians' cleverly set-up confrontation between the two powers.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

My big question about this episode is: Why did the creators never bring back the Klingon Mind Sifter? It seems like a formidable device to have.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

Posted by JonnyQuest037:
My big question about this episode is: Why did the creators never bring back the Klingon Mind Sifter? It seems like a formidable device to have.

Didn't sound like much of a portable device.. could have been something like that 'psycho-chairs' from other TOS episodes. In fact, if we had SEEN the sifter, I would lay money that that's the prop we would see.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

Posted by Vance:
Posted by JonnyQuest037:
My big question about this episode is: Why did the creators never bring back the Klingon Mind Sifter? It seems like a formidable device to have.

Didn't sound like much of a portable device.. could have been something like that 'psycho-chairs' from other TOS episodes. In fact, if we had SEEN the sifter, I would lay money that that's the prop we would see.

I think it was actually more menacing go unseen. I wouldn't be surprised if there was one in the original script, but budget constraints killed it.

Funny how some cost cutting efforts actually improved things.

I'm Enterprise had plenty of budget limitations, but there were a lot of special effects opportunities with CGI and other state of the art advances in sfx that allowed them to do pretty much whatever they wanted.

Sometimes when you have to work around a shortage of money for sfx, you end up telling a better story...funny how that works.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

Posted by JonnyQuest037:
My big question about this episode is: Why did the creators never bring back the Klingon Mind Sifter? It seems like a formidable device to have.
Well, we never had the characters captured by Klingons again, did we? Bob the Discount Klingon in ``Friday's Child'' didn't seem to have the ship right by him, and ``The Trouble with Tribbles'' was explicitly not about a direct conflict. Kirk of course blew up the Klingon ship in ``Day of the Dove'' and the few survivors lacked most of their gear. And otherwise it was pretty much Feds on their ship, Klingons on theirs, and no risk of captivity.

Now, later on, The Search for Spock et seq, that's a separate universe.
 
Re: Errand Of Mercy

Loving these reviews, Laughing Vulcan. I have a thought on the Prime Directive issue, however. It seems to me that the one situation in which non-interference can be waived would be in the threat of much greater interference from another star-faring culture. Since the Klingons were set to interfere in a murderous and brutal way, Kirk probably felt justified in pre-empting them with offers of a more benign form of contamination, one which presumably would not include mass executions.
 
The City On The Edge Of Forever

The ship is at Red Alert, orbiting an uncharted world as it maps the temporal turbulence that drew it here. The shaking takes its toll on the ship and the crew, and a power surge injures Sulu when his console short circuits. McCoy is called to the bridge, and he is able to revive the helmsman with a shot of cordrazine. Unfortunately, as McCoy is putting the hypospray away, another burst of turbulence hits the ship, and the doctor is injected with the full vial of the drug, many times higher than the safe dose. Gripped by a feverish paranoia, the Doctor races from the bridge, and eludes security long enough to beam down to the heart of the disturbances. Kirk outfits a landing party and goes down to the surface of the ruined planet to look for the Doctor. But while the other four search, Kirk and Spock are fascinated by a prominent torus that seems to glow with contained energies, and as Spock surmises, is responsible for the disturbances that reach millions of miles into space. A random question from Kirk wakens the Guardian of Forever, whose enigmatic responses to their questions hint at its immense age and knowledge. When it demonstrates the ability to show images from the past, Spock realises that it is a time portal. Which is when McCoy reappears, still crazed and leaps through the portal. At that same instant, the Enterprise vanishes as if it had never existed. The landing party learn to their horror that McCoy has altered history, and they are now refugees, outcasts of history. The only option is to follow McCoy back through time and repair the damage he caused. Fortunately, there is enough information on Spock’s tricorder to estimate the correct time period, and soon Kirk and Spock appear on the streets of New York in 1930. It’s an inauspicious entrance, and the two are soon hiding from the authorities in a basement. It is the basement of the 21st Street Mission, and the person running the welfare institution isn’t too pleased to see two vagrants sheltering in her premises. Edith Keeler makes an instant impression on Kirk, and with an oddly placed honesty, he manages to convince her of their good intentions. In return for a days work, they earn a few dollars wages and manage to get a place to live, where Spock can work on building apparatus to access the tricorder. They need the information to discover exactly how history changed and when it is that McCoy will arrive. As Spock works, Kirk spends more and more time with the exceptional Edith Keeler, and they begin to get close. Unbeknownst to them, McCoy arrives, and in his feverish state, ends up in the very same 21st Street Mission where Edith nurses him back to health. Then the worst happens. Spock learns that it is Edith Keeler’s life that will determine the future, and that Kirk may be forced to make a most painful sacrifice.

Of all the episodes I have written about thus far, that has to be the longest summary yet. When I watch these episodes, I keep a pad of A4 nearby, to take the occasional note. Most episodes run to about half a page of notes, some exceptional ones may stretch as far as a full page. The City On The Edge Of Forever took up 2 pages of notes in my smallest writing. That’s just an indication of how exceptional this episode is, and just how much happens in it. Looking at it almost 40 years after it was made, it truly stands heads and shoulders above the rest of Trek, with a cinematic feel to it. I would even go as far as classing it as the first Trek movie, despite the running time, as everything, simply everything comes together to elevate it in my eyes. I don’t think there is one aspect I can fault, the editing, the lighting, the set design, the music, the actor performances or the direction; this is an episode where everyone is working at the top of their game. I think if I wrote ten thousand words about this episode, I would still only be scratching the surface.

Just look at the pre-credits sequence, there is so much packed into those few seconds of screen time. We get the exposition that establishes the ship’s jeopardy, the mission that it is following, and the nature of the disturbances that it is investigating. Add to that the development when Sulu gets injured necessitating McCoy coming to the bridge. In a clever character moment, where Kirk has to check himself from questioning his CMO’s judgement, we get an idea what a potent drug cordrazine is, and then there is the accident that sees McCoy injected with the drug. All of this before the credits have even rolled. This level of detail remains constant through the episode, the richness of this story never ceases to amaze. There is also something for everyone here, all the bases covered in terms of genre. Naturally the overarching theme is sci-fi but we begin with drama as McCoy evades security and escapes to the planet’s surface. The explorer in Kirk and the scientist in Spock really do prove to be their downfall, as they are distracted by the enigma that is the Guardian, while the rest of the landing party search for McCoy. For someone conditioned to embrace the unknown, it is an understandable diversion. I love the lighting on the planet’s surface, when you see the principals’ faces, they are half in shadow, the mood is oppressive, and with the ambient sound it makes for an effective world. They do manage to apprehend McCoy, but once again the Guardian takes their attention at a crucial moment, when they should have been beaming the Doctor back to the ship. The cordrazine in his system means he can shake off a nerve pinch and launch himself through the portal. It’s a chilling realisation when the Enterprise vanishes, and the landing party understand their predicament. When Uhura tells Kirk that she is frightened, you can see by their faces that she speaks for them all. In one of the most memorable scenes from the series, Kirk, bereft of his ship is left looking skywards, as the camera pans up to the empty stars. After 40 years, you can see the joins, but this viewer just doesn’t care, it is a perfectly measured, perfectly captured moment that accomplishes all it sets out to.

Then there is the comedy. Time Travel means culture clash and misunderstandings. As soon as Kirk and Spock make their entrance into New York of 1930, and Kirk has to explain his friend’s appearance, the mood lightens and the fun begins. In a moment that is echoed by Star Trek IV, Kirk and Spock have a problem crossing the road safely, but here that serves a purpose, setting up the end of the story. The two officers quickly find their feet in the society of the Depression, successfully recreated on screen with judicious use of sets and extras. Again in terms of production design, the quality here is not far off an expensive movie budget of the period. The comedy continues as Spock endeavours to construct a mnemonic computer tie in using stone knives and bearskins. As time passes Kirk begins to fall for Edith Keeler, and it is the best such portrayal of a romance in Star Trek. This is because it is actually two characters falling in love, the way that Edith is written you can see that she is attracted to Kirk and not just his charms. It is a meeting of equals that doesn’t occur as successfully again in the original series. Perhaps it is because Edith is portrayed as an intelligent, independent woman, one who perhaps ironically doesn’t need rescuing by Kirk. She is remarkably perceptive, her speech about space exploration seems out of place at the Mission, but when she comments on Spock’s place by Kirk’s side, she reveals a preternatural insight. This is truly an exceptional woman, and her effect on Kirk is telling. In a situation where falsehood would be advisable, Kirk finds himself telling her the truth.

Also a sign of the editing skill, there is no problem accepting that days or even weeks pass while our heroes wait for McCoy to arrive. He does do so eventually, still paranoid and fevered. He’s lucid enough to note his surroundings, and a good sign of the science is his noting of the constellations and realising that he must be on Earth. Of course his state of mind doesn’t allow him to accept his reality easy, and he frightens the first vagrant he sees out of his wits. It’s a great performance from Kelley, despite the fact that most of the episode focuses on Kirk and Spock.

Around this time, the comedy fades completely, especially as Spock gets the circuits working and realises the truth. Edith Keeler must die. I think in terms of Spock’s development as a character, the most important two words he says are spoke here, “I’m sorry” They are half mumbled, he’s reluctant to say them, indeed his Vulcan heritage would look down on any expression of remorse, any admission of empathy. Yet he understands that his words cause Kirk pain, he’s compelled to speak regardless of his upbringing. While we have seen that he holds some ideals above the discipline of the service, loyalty for instance. This is perhaps the strongest indication that we get that Kirk’s friendship means even more to him.

Spock’s pronouncement of the death sentence looms over the rest of the episode, and the elation of the officers’ reunion quickly turns into tragedy as their future is made to happen. I can’t even imagine how Kirk must have felt, knowing that he actively had to let someone die, someone he loved to allow the future to pass. Is someone who fails to act as culpable as someone who chooses to kill? Kirk must have felt that he had killed Edith Keeler, that grief and anguish is evident in Shatner’s performance, with McCoy’s accusations ringing in his ears. It’s no wonder that the last words that you hear in this story are “Let’s get the hell out of here!” Mild profanity by modern standards certainly, but the power behind those words certainly hasn’t diminished today. I’m not ashamed to say that I have a tear in my eye when this story ends.

This is probably not an original, or even rare observation, but since it occurred to me for the first time watching this last night, I feel no hesitation in sharing it. They had to be there! In the original history, Keeler dies in a traffic accident, McCoy changes it when he travels back in time, and Kirk and Spock have to go back and correct it. But the indications are there as soon as McCoy arrives. The vagrant steals McCoy’s phaser and vanishes in a blue flash of light. Maybe the vagrant would have had no effect on the future anyway, but the loss of a life is still a change to the timeline. But the evidence is conclusive as we see how Edith Keeler dies. When Kirk learns that McCoy is in the Mission, he crosses the street to meet him. Edith deliberately crosses after to join the men. If McCoy, Kirk or Spock hadn’t travelled back in time, there would have been no reason for her to walk in front of that truck. We can only assume that Fate or God or the Guardian of Forever had arranged events so that Kirk would end up back in 1930 New York, to avoid the creation of paradox. Or you could say that the disturbances around the Guardian’s world were caused by the incipient paradox, and the Enterprise investigating the disturbances, and the subsequent events was merely the universe restoring the balance. Whatever way you look at it, Kirk had to go through hell.

I’ve probably overlooked a significant fraction of this episode, but these are the points that resonated with me. The next time I watch it, I’ll most likely have something else to say. Either way, this is as good as Star Trek gets.
 
Re: The City On The Edge Of Forever

Laughing Vulcan,

Absolutely brilliant review! I agree: Trek at the summit!

Saxman
 
Re: The City On The Edge Of Forever

Trek's finest moment. No matter how many times I see this episode, I have tears in my eyes during Edith's death scene. Powerful stuff.
 
Re: The City On The Edge Of Forever

"City on the Edge..." is one of THE greatest/best TREKs in any of the five live-action series...and better than most of the movies as well. Classic, moving stuff. :cool:
 
Operation Annihilate!

We join the Enterprise as it races towards the colony world of Deneva, on a mission to investigate the wave of insanity that is spreading through the galaxy. Contact has been lost with the world of a million souls, nothing has been heard in a year, and as the Enterprise tries to restore contact, all they hear is static. It’s when Kirk tries a private code that they finally get through, albeit to a harried woman who pleads for help before her voice is cut off. At Deneva, they find a ship on a suicide course into the sun. Although they attempt a rescue, they are too late, and the last they hear from the ship is the pilot, proclaiming that he is free at last, before he is immolated. When quizzed about the private code, Kirk confirms that his brother’s family lives on Deneva, and the woman’s voice most likely belonged to his sister in law Aurelan. Beaming down, Kirk has to face the fact that his brother is dead, and his sister in law and nephew are gravely ill, with no apparent cause. Back on the ship, Aurelan does her best to explain what has happened on Deneva, but the effort costs her life. A contagion is spreading through the galaxy, creatures spreading and taking over host bodies, controlling them through pain. It’s made startlingly clear when Spock is attacked by one of the photophobic creatures on the planet. But this is a Vulcan we are talking about, and he isn’t about to be controlled by something as petty as pain inflicted by an alien creature, and he’s soon up and around and looking for a solution. A solution that is all the more necessary as Kirk realises that if he can’t stop the infestation here and now, he will have to destroy Deneva, his first officer and his nephew to safeguard the Federation. Their one chance lies in that suicidal pilot that greeted them, and his headlong dive into the sun.

Production Order is a bitch. Kirk has barely had the chance to get over the loss of his one true love, when he loses his brother, sister in law, and damn well near loses his nephew too. It’s moments like this that make you realise that TV writers are all sadists at heart. Operation Annihilate! is also one of those shows that saw light again in the Next Generation, its premise used to better effect in Conspiracy. I say better because Operation Annihilate! is not very good at all.

Should I begin with the flying jellyfish? They really aren’t up to par, scraping the bottom of the budget barrel. In the twenty years that I have been avidly watching Star Trek, they have never been less than laughable, and I wouldn’t be surprised if they didn’t have the same effect during the first broadcast. Cheap effects can usually be sold by good performances, good direction, but the direction in this episode is accomplished on autopilot. There is no suspense, no malice, and no build up of dread. The jellyfish don’t shock or surprise, but are presented matter of fact. As for performances, I have to believe that most of the principles were having an off day. At no time do I feel that Kirk is in shock, or grieving or even significantly affected by the loss of his older brother. This isn’t helped at all by the writing, which has him teasing Spock at the end of the episode. I suppose the rationale would have been that two downer episodes in a row would have been too much to bear, but surely the story should have dictated the writing.

This episode also gives me doubts about McCoy’s status as MD, as he calmly watches while Aurelan expires, and doesn’t raise a finger to attempt resuscitation. The body has barely stopped twitching, and he just shrugs an apology at Kirk, and doesn’t even give her a chance. Then there is Blind Spock, who only realises that he is blind after walking into a desk. I guess the utter darkness wasn’t enough of a hint for you eh Spock? And obviously his mental faculties weren’t working throughout this episode, as he also manages to forget that he has an inner eyelid. I can understand if it is an internal organ like a spleen or pancreas, but an eyelid? You’d notice something like that.

The technobabble goes well and truly off the rails here too, with the jello infestation spreading from planet to planet… all the way from another galaxy (except the big black bit in between, which doesn’t have planets)… where our physical laws do not apply. What the…? Another galaxy where our physical laws do not apply? There’s no such animal. The same laws of physics apply no matter where you are in the universe. That’s why they call it a universe. Then there is the science behind the demise of the jellyfish. The secret lies in the sun, they say. They try everything, heat and radiation, but they forget about light. Well, big fat duh! How obvious is that? Put aside that the fundamental property of a star is the light that it outputs, the science is just plain wacky considering that light is radiation. You get two kinds of radiation, the bitty kind and the other kind. The bitty stuff is alpha and beta and neutron and all the little chunks of matter that get sprayed around when nuclear stuff starts happening, the other stuff is the Electromagnetic radiation that goes all the way from radio up to gamma, and has a teensy weensy bit in the middle called visible light. It’s still radiation. We learn that it’s Ultraviolet light that kills the critters, UV light that apparently glows red when it is sprayed on the planet, and it also whines to boot.

Now this is something that is pretty fundamental, (it also tells us that phaser radiation of any level has no Ultraviolet component to it) it isn’t the equivalent of Salk working for years to develop a polio vaccine, rather someone finding out that carbon monoxide can kill humans in enclosed spaces. It isn’t quantum mechanics is what I’m saying, and the idea that a planet full of a million souls, some of them who would most likely be educated to college levels in science, wouldn’t be able to figure this out is rather pathetic. It seems that Deneva is a planet of Homer Simpsons, all desperately searching their keyboards for the ‘any key’.

But ultimately, even bad science can be overcome if an episode is gripping enough, Operation Annihilate! is just tiresome. After setting the story up, it boils down to 20 minutes of McCoy and Spock saying it can’t be done, and Kirk saying he won’t take no for an answer. It’s repetitive to the point of comedy, but as a Star Trek episode, this is the sort of thing that bad Voyager episodes aspire to.

And here endeth my reviews of Season 1.
 
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