trevanian
Rear Admiral
If Ellison has a contractual right to be paid when his intellectual property is used (particularly to enrich others), then more power to him. He shouldn't have to explain himself to anyone.
Are any of you critics working for free?
And don't forget, Ellison had to stand by and watch Roddenberry rewrite his script. If Roddenberry didn't want the script Ellison had written, he should have written one of his own -- fresh, and not derived from Ellison's work.
Ellison might have been able to rework the script into a short story for publication.
Jinx:
Rewrites are a fact of life. Even Ernest Hemingway had an editor! Ellison is arrogant enought to think his judgement should prevail in all things. Thing is, when he wrote the script and submitted it to Rodenberry, he should have known there would be changes. If he doesn't want his work "tampered" with, he shouldn't have written for television.
I recently read about how he pulled off one of the greatest scams in modern movie history -- getting James Cameron and others involved in the Terminator movie to paste an acknowledgement of how his short stories inspired the film, just because Cameron said something about how two of Ellison's stories helped him come up with the story.
I am a freelance writer and I have had to deal with bad rewrites of my work, as well. Again, facts of life. Ellison needs to grow up.
Red Ranger
The TERMINATOR thing is hardly a scam (though to be fair, I think the makers of DIMENSION 5 also could have sued Cameron.) In fact, Cameron & co had to pay Ellison TWICE, because they released the first videos WITHOUT the acknowledgement, triggering another payout. Cameron not only did something knowingly, he BRAGGED about it! Maybe that kind of 'tude is what guarantees success. I mean, I've got a screenplay that is totally dead because the one unoriginal element is practically the same as a Larry Niven story, which is always under option elsewhere. I would not submit the screenplay even if folks didn't know the Niven story, because I DO know it , having read it in the past, so I'm sure it influenced the writing of my piece, which wouldn't have happened at all without this key point. Yet young Cameron was secure enough to brag about his remerchandising of somebody else's ideas. Way to go, Jimbo.
Everybody who freelances has to deal with bad rewrites, but most folks who do nonfic stuff also have to deal with their stuff being rewritten and published elsewhere sans credit (ever read the James Van Hise trek books? you'll see some of my stuff in there, bastardized & uncredited.) Ellison has fought for the rights of writers and has managed to win big at least a couple times, so even if it doesn't stop the practice, maybe a few folks think twice before pulling this crap now.
I for one am very glad that Ellison has published some of his unshot scripts. I find FLINTLOCK to be one of the most amazing scripts I've ever read, equal parts Derek Flint and THE PRISONER. His adaptation of I ROBOT expanded on some matters in a brilliant way, even if some of the execution in dialog is a little 'on the nose.' While I think his take on CITY stressed fantasy elements that would have been more at home in a non-trek series, his trek teleplay is still really good stuff. If they'd left Trooper in the show, instead of subbing with the milkbottle-thievin' drunk, who knows how much better it might have played?