Final Flight of the Exosia

[TheLoneRedshirt]

Leave one alive to tell the tale . . . Generally, an effective deterrent!

One line really caught my eye:
She didn’t intend to destroy all the Cha’lav ships, but she got carried away.

A subtle but effective reminder that Linnis is a child wielding tremendous destructive power.

 

[DavidFalkayn]

Very nice. And yes, Linnis is one incredibly dangerous child--better hope she doesn't get carried away at the wrong time...

 

[Mistral]

What the heck just happened? Wow, yeah, you're right-a little rushed. What/where are you going/doing? I am bewildered. (Actually, I am Mistral but that's a tale for another day.)

 

[BrotherBenny]

What the heck just happened? Wow, yeah, you're right-a little rushed. What/where are you going/doing? I am bewildered. (Actually, I am Mistral but that's a tale for another day.)

Leaving aside your multiple personality disorder, I realised that I didn't actually need to do the story and tied it up as fast as I could without leaving too many loose threads, only questions - such as how powerful Linnis really is and what the hell does she have to do with anything else. Good questions, and the answer? Keep reading the Dauntless series.

 

[Mistral]

Okay.