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Final Flight of the Exosia

Yeah, these Ocampans are a bit cavalier with the future of entire civilizations.

"Let me push the button, Daddy!" - What a cute little destroyer of worlds! :evil:
Chilling! :eek:

That makes sense though. I would imagine that their having life spans of only eight-nine years would not incline them to think in the long view. For their society, a century would be like a millennium to us.
 
David-the little girl is still around 500 years later-who says THESE Ocampans only live 8-9 yrs?
 
David-the little girl is still around 500 years later-who says THESE Ocampans only live 8-9 yrs?
To clear up all the confusion, I did mention in one of the last posts of the Burning Ring of Fire thread that THESE Ocampans live for approximately thirty years. Linnis is about four Earth years in this story and was about 11 Earth years in Burning Ring.... So what happened in the last five hundred years? You'll have to keep reading :devil:
 
I'll keep reading. It just so happens that I like homicidal four year-olds-as long as they are someone else's so I can give them back afte-nevermind.
 
Resoto system
98 days from New Ocampa
Earth date June 9th, 1879


Their arrival had clearly been foretold as seven Resoto battlecruisers opened fire on them as soon as they dropped out of hyperspace. Lina and Tannis had worked hard over the last day to prepare all aspects of the ship for this battle. Lina had given her objections and they had been overruled, as usual, so she was now making sure that the three of them would survive this encounter. The shields and weapons were back at full strength, though it was unlikely that they would last long under this onslaught, and the odd device in engineering was powered up and ready to use. Tannis had not explained what it was for, and apparently didn’t feel the need to, only stating that it would carry them beyond any battle that they were in if they were going to lose.

‘Our turrets are not having the same effect,’ Lina said as the Exosia rocked again.

‘Adjust to a higher frequency and continue firing. I’ll be ready shortly,’ Tannis replied over the comm.

She knew he was up to something, his “natural disaster” that he was planning to affect them with, but she was concentrating on keeping them in one piece. Linnis had been sedated, and would not even know anything about this fight, regardless of the outcome.

‘The higher frequency is having little effect, I’m lowering the frequency,’ she called out and heard a grunt in response.

This time, as the Exosia bucked like a wild animal, Lina fired at the engines of the closest Resoto vessel. The turret fire tore through the shields like paper, almost vaporising the ship. The others backed off and then came around for another pass, but she was ready and laid down a dizzying array of fire that sent the cruisers in all directions. The inertial dampers were screeching at the hard turns and she slowed to let them regain strength.

‘I’m ready, lay down covering fire,’ Tannis yelled as he appeared on the bridge.

‘Two ships down, two damaged, and the remaining three are still at full strength.’

‘The torpedoes are ready, dive toward the planet and I will release them. Continue to fire.’

She nodded and angled the scout ship toward the planet. The Resoto obviously had an inkling of what they were planning because they all converged on the ship and began firing everything they had.

‘Our shields are down to forty percent, we need to do this now!’

‘Not yet, we’re still too far away. I had to gut the torpedoes to put the explosives into them. The guidance system is too basic to think about evasive manoeuvres.’

Lina sighed and took out another battlecruiser. ‘Entering the upper atmosphere.’

‘Torpedoes away, take us up, and get us out of here.’

‘My pleasure.’

The torpedoes streaked away from the Exosia and two of the battlecruisers tried diving for it, continually firing. One of them spiralled out of control and burned up in the atmosphere while the other continued in and got caught in the blast as the torpedo detonated on the southern polar cap. In less than a second, ten billion cubic metres of ancient ice was melted and began pouring into the oceans, raising their level by several metres. The landmass under the ice exploded, sending tons of rock into the air and ash and dust flooded the lower atmosphere.

The Exosia burst through the upper atmosphere to be faced by the remaining two battlecruisers.

‘How do our shields look?’ Tannis asked.

‘Eighteen percent. We can’t face off against both of them.’

He sighed. ‘Charge the chroniton emitters.’

Lina nodded and activated a sequence of commands. ‘Temporal jump in three minutes.’

Tannis growled. ‘If we survive this, I’ll have to do something about shortening the charge time.’

‘The Resoto are hailing us.’

‘Open a channel.’

This is Admiral Tequr, you have violated Resoto territory and caused a planetary catastrophe. Surrender and we will be merciful.’

‘I am only here because I was fired upon in an unprovoked attack by one of your battlecruisers. The lessons you learn here today will teach you that hegemonic actions do not go unpunished. One day, an enemy greater than either of us will teach you that and you may not survive to heed it. Learn it now and you may be saved.’

You will not surrender.’

‘Not while I still have a single breath.’

Then you will die a swift death.’

‘One minute,’ Lina whispered as the screen blanked.

‘Shields and structural integrity to maximum, all bulkheads locked in place. Initialising temporal shielding.’

‘Thirty seconds...The Resoto have detected the energy build-up and are moving off. They do not know what to expect.’

‘Neither do I, prepare for temporal jump.’

‘Chroniton emitters have fully charged. Temporal jump in five...four...three...two...one.’

The Exosia was suddenly enveloped in a blue energy field which grew to encompass a region of space a hundred kilometres in every direction. Tannis and Lina felt a tingle as the scout vessel was hurled into the Great Temporal River. Securely sedated in a stasis pod, Linnis began to shudder until a full blown seizure gripped her, surrounding her with the same blue energy that surrounded the ship. The field around her grew as the ship began to spin out of control. Lina held onto her chair for as long as she could but she was suddenly thrown into the forward bulkhead as her husband clutched at his head and collapsed.



Linnis woke up suddenly and felt her parents’ ship being tossed about wildly in the temporal slipstream they had created. Seeing and feeling that both her body and mind had changed, she sat up, closed her eyes and with a deep breath, steadied the ship and brought it back into normal space. As the ship slowed to a halt, the three year old girl, now a ten year old, collapsed back into the stasis pod and slipped into a coma.
 
To quote a famous Vulcan Science Officer . . . "Fascinating." :vulcan:

A very interesting and intense segment! - A pitched battle, followed by the devastating attack on the Resoto homeworld, then the rather rough trip through time. Did Tannis and Lina survive? It doesn't seem likely . . .
 
These Ocampa don't miss a trick, do they? Now they've got time travel too? Well that certainly explains how they end up in the future. But that begs the question as to why not go in the past and stop their homeworld being destroyed.

You know, Superman style.
 
These Ocampa don't miss a trick, do they? Now they've got time travel too? Well that certainly explains how they end up in the future. But that begs the question as to why not go in the past and stop their homeworld being destroyed.

You know, Superman style.
What makes you think their chroniton emitter can allow them to go backwards in time?
 
These Ocampans don't mess around, do they? Mess with us--we trash your planet. And we see how Linnis ended up where she did. Very nicely done.
 
Scout vessel Exosia
Kursican Badlands
Earth date August 11th, 2097


Lina woke up and pressed her hand to her head. There was dried blood, a large bump but nothing more serious. Tannis was not in the same place he was when last she saw him, in fact he was not even on the bridge. She gingerly stood up and clutched the forward console as the nausea came and went, then moved over to the tactical station. Manipulating the controls, she tried to find out exactly where they were.

Lina, you’d better come down here,’ Tannis whispered hoarsely over the comm.

Lina noticed that half their systems were still offline and climbed down the main shaft. Emerging into a corridor she slowly walked toward the stasis room where her daughter was supposed to be sleeping and saw her husband with a girl who looked too old to be Linnis.

‘Mother,’ the girl smiled.

‘What happened?’ Lina asked.

Tannis shrugged. ‘As far as I can tell, the shielding in this compartment wasn’t strong enough and some of the temporal energy leaked through.’

‘How old is she?’

‘Physically, she’s about five Ocampan years old,’ he replied. ‘Mentally, I can’t count. Her abilities are far beyond anything I’ve ever seen.’

‘Do you know where we are?’ Lina asked.

‘The Kursican Badlands, where we wanted to be,’ he said. ‘Is there a problem?’

‘Yes, we’re more than two hundred years in the future.’

Tannis stared at her for a full moment before Linnis rested a hand on her father’s shoulder. ‘It’s ok, Father. I know how to calibrate the temporal core. We’ll be able to travel exactly when and where we want to.’

Her parents looked at each other. ‘How do you know?’

‘I’ve seen it done,’ she replied. ‘We should leave this area. The Ynelavii and Resoto fleets will arrive shortly.’

‘Let’s go then,’ Tannis said. ‘Are you feeling alright, Linnis?’

‘I’m fine, Father. I know what you’re planning.’

Tannis smiled. ‘We have to find them first, and I don’t even know where to look.’

‘Inside the Badlands. They hunt there.’

‘Tannis, we should go. Our systems are all online but we need to make repairs.’

‘Ok, we’re going. But I want to know what happened in here.’

‘We’ll figure that out later,’ Lina said as they emerged on the bridge.

‘You scavenged the temporal core from a device built millennia ago and you didn’t install it properly. It was meant to be used in something a lot bigger.’

Tannis sighed. ‘Yes, yes, I know, but I didn’t have time to construct my own. Can you make it work?’ he asked his daughter as he set about making repairs.

‘With the temporal core the ship can repair itself.’

‘How?’ Lina asked.

‘The core is intelligent, it has limited sentience,’ she replied.

‘You told me that you had no idea where the core originated from,’ Lina interjected as she brought the jump engines online.

‘The core is from a Type 40 temporal vessel. They were retired from service a long time ago. Long before life in this galaxy existed in its present form.’

‘I suppose Ressi let you have it.’

‘For a price.’

‘Jump engines are ready.’

‘Set a course the Badlands outer edge, and engage.’

The Exosia rippled in space and then shot forward, a wormhole forming around the ship. Linnis sighed and subconsciously shut down the temporal core, leaving only the jump engines engaged. She sat in the pilot’s seat next to her mother and watched the screen as the ship approached the Badlands. Tannis went down to the engine room to see what he did wrong and the Exosia continued, carefully piloted by Lina, into the Badlands.

‘Where is your father taking us?’ she asked.

‘To find the creatures that destroyed New Ocampa and our people.’

‘Who are they?’

‘I don’t know,’ she lied. ‘I couldn’t sense that from Father.’

‘Tannis, we’re approaching the Badlands, prepare to slow to sublight.’

No, keep us at hyperspace velocity, we’ll pass right through the barrier,’ Tannis replied from the engine room. ‘It’ll be a long trip otherwise.’

‘Don’t touch the green coil,’ Linnis said and heard her father mutter a curse.

Lina grinned and turned away, facing the forward screen. She knew that they were heading into trouble and was powerless to stop it. As if that wasn’t bad enough she now knew that her only daughter had been changed by the temporal energy and was too powerful for her own good, at least until she learned to control her abilities.

‘Linnis, I want you to show me what you can do.’

‘Anything.’

‘We all have limits, even you, but you must learn what they are.’

Linnis nodded and smiled. ‘Yes, Mother,’ she said, humouring her.

‘We’re passing through the barrier and into the Badlands.’

I’ll be right up, prepare for sublight,’ Tannis said. ‘Is it properly installed now, Linnis?’

‘Yes, Father.’

Lina heard her husband sigh and slowed the ship. As soon as the Exosia returned to normal space, it was hit with a jolt and the alarm klaxons went off. Linnis silenced them with a wave of her hand.

‘What have we got?’ Tannis asked as he emerged from the shaft.
 
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Whoa, this just got a lot deeper and heavier than I expected. Um, you dropped a couple of words here and there-might want to do a fast re-read. But I got it anyway and it is getting very twisted. Since its only 20 years it would be the late 1970's-you're not going to make this little girl the nutty Caretaker that had the Ocampan colony under her wing in VOY are you?
 
Whoa, this just got a lot deeper and heavier than I expected. Um, you dropped a couple of words here and there-might want to do a fast re-read. But I got it anyway and it is getting very twisted. Since its only 20 years it would be the late 1970's-you're not going to make this little girl the nutty Caretaker that had the Ocampan colony under her wing in VOY are you?
Two things, where did I drop words, I couldn't find it on the reread? And secondly, where do you get 20 years and the 1970s from? They went from 1879 to 2097???
 
"...course the Badlands" although "there was dried blood and a large bump" might read better [Only missing word I found during re-read.]

I meant 200 years and 2070s(I'm not good with numbers before I finish my coffee-sorry):)
 
Good segment with Linnis getting all omnipotent on her folks.
Loved this line: ‘Don’t touch the green coil,’ Linnis said and heard her father mutter a curse.

Oops! Too late. :lol:
 
No, Linnis is not Suspiria, though in some ways she's worse. Linnis is an Ocampa, not a Nacene, but her powers make Kes seem like a child trying to throw a toy across the room. This story sets up Linnis' story arc for the next few Dauntless episodes. Remember what Tannis is trying to do...
 
I was thinking about Kes in this segment but your analogy makes me worried. Very worried.

Interesting development with Linnis, she's also learned to lie and to humor people. Not a good combination for a being that powerful.

Overall I felt this a little bit too rushed. I know that they needed to move fast after their time jump but I would think finding your daughter massively altered would provide more of a shock to the parents. Having said that, not all cultures react in the same manner of course.
 
I was thinking about Kes in this segment but your analogy makes me worried. Very worried.

Interesting development with Linnis, she's also learned to lie and to humor people. Not a good combination for a being that powerful.

Overall I felt this a little bit too rushed. I know that they needed to move fast after their time jump but I would think finding your daughter massively altered would provide more of a shock to the parents. Having said that, not all cultures react in the same manner of course.
Remember, the Ocampa are used to having powerful abilities, maybe not that powerful, but powerful nonetheless.

Last segment up next. You may feel this is a little rushed too, but I assure you there is method to my madness.
 
Scout vessel Exosia
Kursican Badlands
Earth date August 12th, 2097


Lina was unable to answer as she stared at the scene in front of her. There were close to thirty alien vessels arranged in a battle formation. Even with the powerful weapons at their disposal there was no way they could destroy or disable this many vessels.

‘Open a channel to them.’

‘You’re on,’ she replied.

‘This is Captain Tannis of the Ocampan Ascendancy vessel Exosia. Please state your intentions.’

No face appeared on the screen, but a hissing voice emanated from the speakers. ‘I am in command of 285th Cha’lav Destroyer Fleet and your upstart power has been scheduled for annihilation.’

Tannis swallowed. This was the first time he had felt real fear in years, but it was his family he was worried about. He was about to plead for safety when his daughter moved in front of him, standing close to the pilot’s console.

‘You are in violation of Ocampan territory. Withdraw or you will be destroyed. This is your only warning.’

‘Pathetic creatures,’ the voice replied and the channel went dead.

‘Linnis, what are you doing?’

The young girl turned to her father, her pale blue eyes now sparkling with intensity. ‘We are the last of our people and we will survive.’

The Exosia shook with the impact of weapons fire and Linnis turned back to the screen.

‘Linnis, honey, don’t do anything silly.’

‘We will live,’ she shrieked and pressed her hand to the pilot’s console.

Instantly, the closest Cha’lav vessels began to disintegrate, their molecular bonds fragmenting, and the bodies inside them followed the same fate. Tannis and Lina watched in awe and fear as their daughter destroyed the entire fleet, leaving behind no trace that they ever existed. In moments, the space in front of them was empty.

‘What have you done?’ Lina asked of her daughter.

‘I have protected us. It is time, that we fulfil our destiny,’ she replied and headed for engineering.

‘What is she up to?’ Lina asked her husband.

‘The temporal core,’ he answered, ‘she’s reactivating it and programming it.’

‘Where is she taking us? What has happened to her?’

‘I have a feeling that she has tapped into the genetic memory that we all carry. She knows her destiny.’

‘And we’re along for the ride?’

He nodded. ‘I don’t think there’s anything we can do.’

‘Yes, there is,’ she said and moved to the environmental controls. ‘I’m going to flood engineering with gas and then we’re putting her in stasis. She’s too dangerous.’

‘You’d better do it quickly then. The temporal core is charging. I’ve fixed the stasis pods, there should be no more leaks.’

‘Good, flooding engineering now.’

‘Temporal core at forty percent...forty-nine...fifty-eight...sixty-seven...’

‘She’s unconscious, come on.’

Reluctantly, they placed their daughter in the stasis pod and then strap themselves into their own pods, knowing that it would be a bumpy ride. The computer would wake them later.




Scout vessel Exosia
Ramajuan salvage yards
Stardate 56801.5


Linnis was trapped in stasis, unable to use her mind to help her parents. Their latest trip through time had been programmed with precision, but she hadn’t counted on a surviving ship from the Cha’lav fleet remaining in this galaxy to take revenge on her. Although the Cha’lav on board had died, their technology fell into the hands of the Minister for Space Exploration on New Xyril and with it, the information on her parents’ ship and what had happened to the Cha’lav fleet nearly three hundred years ago.

The stasis pods had been damaged and her parents were as trapped as she was, until a Xyrillian mercenary crew boarded the ship and woke them up. She could sense and hear everything that happened but was unable to do anything. Her parents had adjusted the parameters for stasis to dull her mind as well, but they hadn’t done enough. Linnis knew that for a few weeks after she was woken, she wouldn’t have full control of her abilities, but she would be able to seek her revenge on the space minister.

He had nearly derailed her destiny, and...

Linnis flinched as she felt her mother’s life force fade. She was dying and her father could not help, for he was being held securely by the Xyrillians and did not have the mental abilities that Linnis did. She sensed her mother’s death and vowed revenge, even as her father was returned to his stasis pod by the aliens. She prayed that when her father was next woken, he would issue a voice command to wake her up so she could help, but in her heart she knew that he wouldn’t. He considered his daughter too dangerous, even to avenge his wife’s death, and that saddened her.

She didn’t intend to destroy all the Cha’lav ships, but she got carried away.

Time had no meaning for her in stasis, all she could do was sense the movement on the ship and knew when the Xyrillians had returned. This time, her father was woken and made to watch as his wife, her mother, was dissected by a doctor.


‘Alpha one zero,’ Tannis said loudly, his eyes narrowed in hatred.

He was hit across the face by a Xyrillian but nothing else happened and he wondered if the computer was still accepting his demands.

‘What were you hoping for, alien? Help to arrive? You’re alone,’ his captor said after a while.

‘No, he isn’t,’ Linnis said, dressed in a military uniform she had cut down to size. ‘This is an Ocampan Ascendancy vessel and you are trespassing,’ she added, not looking at her mother. ‘Leave, now!’

‘Pathetic little girl,’ the captor said and raised a weapon to her.

It evaporated.

The captor smiled thinly and before Linnis knew what had happened, the Xyrillian had pierced her father’s heart through his back with a blade. Tannis collapsed and Linnis howled, running to her father’s side.

‘Nooo, father, nooo!’

She turned to the aliens and all but one of them collapsed to the floor in agony. ‘Take your people and leave,’ she said to the one who killed her father. ‘I will kill the next one of you that steps aboard this ship.’

The Xyrillian nodded and helped his comrades to their feet. They left the ship as fast as they could. Linnis lay her father beside her mother, said a prayer for them and then disintegrated their bodies. She could not give them a proper burial but would they would assist her in getting revenge against the man responsible for their deaths.

Linnis knelt on the floor, and stayed there for some time, waiting for the day when the pale-haired man would grant her revenge.



END



The crew of the Dauntless will return in...To Serve the Unwise
 
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