Fan Fiction for an Alternate Universe Enterprise

[Garrowolf]

I'm not sure if this is the correct forum section for this but I wrote a Star Trek Enterprise fan fiction based on an alternate universe idea that I had. Basically I wanted to have a different tech level progression with hyperdrive at a lower tech then warp drive. Archer's Enterprise would be more advanced in some ways and less advanced in others. It includes some changes to the crew positions that make more sense to me. I set it up as a rewrite of the pilot episode.
Tell me what you think.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8759362/1/Alternate-Universe-Star-Trek-Enterprise-Broken-Bow

 

[jespah]

There's a fan fic forum.

 

[Garrowolf]

Ah My appoligies!

 

[Hopeful Romantic]

No problem, Garrowolf. I hope you get some cool feedback on your work over in the Fanfiction forum.