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DS9 series bible

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Great link, thanks for posting it! :techman:

The show abandoning Jake's planned bitterness about his mom's death is a shame. That would have made him a lot more interesting.

I'm glad they abandoned making a major part of the show be showing Bajor as a place of intergalactic commerce and exploration. That would have been boring.

Abandoning having Odo resent taking humanoid form is a huge shame. The one shortcoming of the Odo character is that instead of having them do that, they made him-for no good reason-into a cheerleader of pro-human propaganda. IMO that trait of Odo contradicts his other traits, like putting justice ahead of everything else. Having Odo be way more like Laas, like the outline says he should be, would have been super. Having said that, when putting aside his unwarranted pro-human cheerleading, Odo is still an excellent character as they made him.

I have a bit more respect for Berman now that I realized he co-wrote that outline. IMO Berman-made Trek generally puts virtually no thought whatsoever into character depth or conflict. At least he made an effort regarding those things with DS9.
 
I disagree with you. I don't think that Odo staying in Human form was "cheerleading". It was merely that he would not fit in with solids if he did look like them. He would have been embarrassed, and Odo does not take embarrassment well.
 
Grinning at the whole "Kira has to bring Dax out of her shell and show her how to have fun!"
 
Interesting that there's no mention of Odo and Quark's love\hate relationship in there...
 
Wasnt the paraplegic character who floated around her quarters supposed to be an original character but was scrapped because it would have been a pain in the ass to shoot her all the time with special fx?
 
The bible provides an interesting take on the O'Brien/Bashir friendship -- I never would have thought that Julian saw O'Brien as the man he wants to be, the veteran who's seen everything, the ideal officer. Now I'm going to be watching those O'Brien/Bashir adventures through a new lens.
 
This does not appear to be the first version of the DS9 bible. In the Reeves-Stevens Making of Star Trek Deep Space Nine book there is a quote from the character section describing Ro Laren as first officer; Kira is already listed in this version.
 
Interesting non-canon explanation of the reason for Trill symbiosis!

So glad we got Julian BASHIR, though, instead of Julian Amoros. I mean, the jokes we would've had from that name...
 
This does not appear to be the first version of the DS9 bible. In the Reeves-Stevens Making of Star Trek Deep Space Nine book there is a quote from the character section describing Ro Laren as first officer; Kira is already listed in this version.

Well, the Bible is more or less the last phase before you go find the cast and start writing. I'm sure the whole Ro Laren thing was dealt with before the Bible even started being written.
 
Well the Ro Laren thing was written down in some form, since her character description was quoted in the book. I'll check on exactly what it says when I get a chance to pull the book off the shelf.
 
Pulled out the book finally. The full bible is not transcribed, but there are some excerpts. Here's some of the information about Ro mentioned in the book:

Making of Star Trek Deep Space Nine / Chapter 7 said:
The pages that follow are excerpts from the original bible and pilot treatment written by Rick Berman and Michael Piller, dated April 8, 1992.
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Ro Laren
Established on ST:TNG. She is properly addressed as Lieutenant Ro since Bajorans put their family names first. (Note: She will receive a promotion from Ensign to Lieutenant on an episode of ST:TNG before this series begins.) As a Bajoran, Ro cares passionately about her people's independence. That's why she volunteered for duty on the space station. Sisko originally refused to accept her transfer...he didn't want anything to do with someone with her undistinguished service record and reputation. But during the first episode, she proves her values to him and becomes his first officer.
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Miles O'Brien...introduced as "one of the primrary officers frequently in conflict with Ro"
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Ro, who forms a very close relationship with Dax, often tells her to loosen up. Dax admires Ro for her youthful energy, her purpose and her drive and becomes something of a mentor to her.
 
Pulled out the book finally. The full bible is not transcribed, but there are some excerpts. Here's some of the information about Ro mentioned in the book:

Making of Star Trek Deep Space Nine / Chapter 7 said:
The pages that follow are excerpts from the original bible and pilot treatment written by Rick Berman and Michael Piller, dated April 8, 1992.
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Ro Laren
Established on ST:TNG. She is properly addressed as Lieutenant Ro since Bajorans put their family names first. (Note: She will receive a promotion from Ensign to Lieutenant on an episode of ST:TNG before this series begins.) As a Bajoran, Ro cares passionately about her people's independence. That's why she volunteered for duty on the space station. Sisko originally refused to accept her transfer...he didn't want anything to do with someone with her undistinguished service record and reputation. But during the first episode, she proves her values to him and becomes his first officer.
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Miles O'Brien...introduced as "one of the primrary officers frequently in conflict with Ro"
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Ro, who forms a very close relationship with Dax, often tells her to loosen up. Dax admires Ro for her youthful energy, her purpose and her drive and becomes something of a mentor to her.

My copy of that book is in storage. Could you also please quote the bit where the original idea was that the show would take place on Bajor and focus on Dr. Amoros with Lt. Ro in charge of the Starfleet base?
 
My copy of that book is in storage. Could you also please quote the bit where the original idea was that the show would take place on Bajor and focus on Dr. Amoros with Lt. Ro in charge of the Starfleet base?
Here's what I can find in the book on that:
Making of Deep Space Nine / Chapter Four said:
It was to have been an exterior set, built about an hour away from Los Angeles, somewhere up north, It would be a frontier outpost - a twenty-fourth-century version of Fort Laramie on the edge of the frontier. Its alien structures had been looted and burned by Cardassians - a twenty-fourth-century version of Los Angeles itself, after the Rodney King trial riots.
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In this outpost, somewhere in a trackless desert on the planet Bajor, each week we would follow the adventures of such regular characters as Lieutenant Ro Laren and Dr. Julian Amoros as Starfleet attempted to help the Barorans bring order back to their world.
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Often conflicting with Starfleet's goals would be Kai Opaka - the man who was spiritual leader of the Bajorans. Visitors who met with the Kai would have to disrobe while the Kai probed their pagh through deep-tissue massage of their feet...
Making of Deep Space Nine / Chapter Six said:
As Michael Piller says, "if you're going to have a show set in space, you basically have three options - on a ship, on an alien planet, or on a space station."
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With the ship option ruled out for the moment, Berman and Piller decided to set the series in another common Star Trek setting - a starbase, and they briefly thought about selecting a starbase on an alien planet. The alien planet that came to mind was Bajor - a world that they had created in their Next Generation script "Ensign Ro."
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That episode had briefly featured a makeshift Bajoran refugee encampment on the planet's surface, and Berman and Piller thought equally briefly of expanding on that idea as the new series' setting - envisioning it as an alien version of a Hong Kong colony, built as a live set north of Los Angeles.
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But with the cost of a full, first-unit production crew running at about five to six thousand dollars per hour, and thinking about those charges totaling up each week for the two half-days it would take to move production of the series from the interior sets on the Paramount lot to the hypothetical live sets in some undetermined location and back again, both Berman and Piller gave up the idea of that kind of setting very quickly. And since outdoor settings are difficult to realistically achieve on an indoor set, that propelled them toward the third option: a space station.
 
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