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Deep Space Nine Season 13 "Typhon Pact"

13x20 – "Disinformation"

Bajor’s history with Cardassia complicates the Federation’s attempt to ally with them...

http://tiny.cc/13x20-Disinformation-pdf
http://tiny.cc/13x20-Disinformation-ebook


BACCO
Sounds like a solid basis for an
alliance to me.

GARAK
(sly smile)
It’s well known that human hearing
is more acute than a Cardassian’s.


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Thank you to any who read and especially to Tosk for all the likes. Would welcome any comments or reviews or discussion.

Also, I'm already part way through writing Season 14, which I'm pretty sure is going to be my last, having done this for as many seasons as the show itself lasted.

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You're doing great work. I hope that when you end your DS9 seasons, you might consider writing your own original Trek series or tackling another one of the shows. Maybe Enterprise?
 
Would welcome any comments or reviews or discussion.
Would love to, but I have to admit that I am way behind. I read the first few you did way back in season 8 and enjoyed them, so I have grabbed all the subsequent ones for later reading.

Kudos for sticking with it all this time, and for giving us a new way to enjoy more DS9. :)
 
You're doing great work. I hope that when you end your DS9 seasons, you might consider writing your own original Trek series or tackling another one of the shows. Maybe Enterprise?
Would love to, but I have to admit that I am way behind. I read the first few you did way back in season 8 and enjoyed them, so I have grabbed all the subsequent ones for later reading.
Kudos for sticking with it all this time, and for giving us a new way to enjoy more DS9. :)

Thanks! The DS9 novels (starting with "season 8") are definitely where this all came from, but even after filling in the gaps with my own ideas, the novels were always at least my starting point and I went from there. To be honest I haven't read the Enterprise post-finale novels, although I hear good things, so I'm not sure what the story even is.

What has appealed to me about this, and kept me continuing it, was less about coming up with my own new ideas and more about following the existing ideas to see where they went, if that makes sense. I never really wanted to shoehorn my own wacky fan-fic into the Star Trek universe. The "boobs and guns and shipping" side of fan-fic doesn't do it for me at all, no insult intended to those who do enjoy that. I just wanted to get to know the people, and kept asking "what happens next?"

So for me it's always been about looking at the already-existing stories and filling in the holes, fleshing out the bits that weren't as deeply explored as we might have liked, maybe tweaking and rewriting some stuff if I thought it could be better or more to my taste. Like with Season 13 right here, as I said way back in the first post, I started with "Okay so we have Dax on the Aventine and Sisko on the Robinson, and the Enterprise-E doing Andorian things for some reason. But what else happened?"

Once I finish with season 14 though, I think I'll probably try to concentrate on my own non-Star Trek stories. I've been doing these for like 15 years or something ridiculous like that, and with the existing TrekLit universe coming to an end, it seems like a sensible place to stop and move onto something else. But I certainly hope people have enjoyed them, and that they'll pick up more readers as time goes on. My very first story has over 10,000 views on AdAstra, which is quite flattering.

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I’ve been following your work (silently) since season 8. I will be sad when season 14 is complete and you move on to other projects, although I completely understand your reasoning. Kudos for delivering such a great work! Those of us hungry for DS9 stories appreciate you!
 
I recently discovered your series, and I can't tell you how happy it made me to read your take of what happened with the characters from DS9 beyond the TV series and the Relaunch books. Can't wait for season 14.
 
I’ve been following your work (silently) since season 8. I will be sad when season 14 is complete and you move on to other projects, although I completely understand your reasoning. Kudos for delivering such a great work! Those of us hungry for DS9 stories appreciate you!

I recently discovered your series, and I can't tell you how happy it made me to read your take of what happened with the characters from DS9 beyond the TV series and the Relaunch books. Can't wait for season 14.


Thank you both very much! Going great guns on Season 14 at the moment, hope to have it finished in time to launch with the New Year.

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One thing that made me curious was your having the last 2 known Ascendants Raig and Vexh have a baby. Amidst all that was going on on Andor, that story arc seemed rather random. Not that I'm complaining, I like the idea, just wondering if that story is going somewhere? Seems rather alot needs to be resolved by the end of Season 14 if you're still basing your writing on the books that have been published and intend to end the series with Season 14. Or maybe not, maybe it just seemed like there was alot going on because of the way the books were written...
 
When I first plotted out the season, that wasn't in there. Ep 11, "New Life", involved Raiq's dilemma about whether to have a baby or not (same for Jake and Shar), and originally it was just that - talking about it. It was only when I was writing the episode that it occurred to me to have her be pregnant anyway, then the dilemma changes - whether to keep it once you've got it.

With the birth at the end of the season, it reflects on the Andorian storyline simply on the theme of birth, of children. The Andorians are tearing themselves apart, on the verge of extinction because they can't have enough babies. And here Raiq and Vexh are, a species even more on the edge of extinction than the Andorians, and they have a baby almost by accident, and do they even want it? (The theme is there in the Cardassian storyline as well, if more loosely, with the children who just need a home, somewhere to grow up safely, and in the Sisko storyline because he's abandoning his wife and children.)

Then I also realised I could use it in a different way as well. Vaughn has been on the edge of death all season, and Prynn even says out loud that the cliche is always that an old person dies and a new baby is born, circle-of-life style. So we're expecting Vaughn to die at the end of the season. But then that gets twisted when Opaka tells Prynn her father has more life in him yet, and boom it's Evik who dies instead.

The various children do have a role to play in Season 14 as well, although there's so much going on as you say that it's gonna be tight fitting it all in :-)
 
Then I also realised I could use it in a different way as well. Vaughn has been on the edge of death all season, and Prynn even says out loud that the cliche is always that an old person dies and a new baby is born, circle-of-life style. So we're expecting Vaughn to die at the end of the season. But then that gets twisted when Opaka tells Prynn her father has more life in him yet, and boom it's Evik who dies instead.
It was certainly a surprise when Evik died. It never even occured to me that you could have had Vaughn die at the end of this season, because in the books he didn't die until later when he saves Kira inside the wormhole before she goes on her "quests" for want of a better word. Personally, I thought her part of the story in the books were not really necessary, the Prophets could easily have just returned her to the Defiant as happened in the Soul Key. And ok if they really needed to stretch out her storyline a little, yes, go back in time to help Taranátar on the Even Odds during Accendance, and then return and be reunited with Odo. But the other storyline with her being Keen Anora and meeting Altek Dans, and then later returning to her own time and meeting Dans in her universe...I didn't really see the point to that story.
 
The various children do have a role to play in Season 14 as well, although there's so much going on as you say that it's gonna be tight fitting it all in :-)

Excited about this! Can't wait. Luckily there are new Star Trek shows to keep me occupied in the meantime.
 
It just occured to me, what happened to Illiana after Ascension when she was stuck in that white space with Elias, but then Elias got rescued by Rebecca Sisko.

And also, there's that Dr Lense, who had that weird encounter with some alien planet with Dr Bashir, and was later found to be pregnant by one of the aliens of said planet. What happened to her?
 
I imagine Iliana is still there, in the white space. She was taking the role that Sisko did in "The Visitor", who would have stayed there forever if Jake hadn't rescued him. That was the final solution she knew was coming all along ever since "Ha'mara" so she accepted it as just part of the deal, and very likely a relief to have some peace after the hell her life had been.

The thing with Dr Lense is all covered in the SCE series, which that ep was a crossover with. IIRC, she went back to Earth to have the baby, and Sarjenka (from TNG "Pen Pals") took over as the Da Vinci's CMO. She comes back in one of the later DS9 books that I probably won't end up adapting, but I might mention her...

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The thing with Dr Lense is all covered in the SCE series, which that ep was a crossover with. IIRC, she went back to Earth to have the baby, and Sarjenka (from TNG "Pen Pals") took over as the Da Vinci's CMO. She comes back in one of the later DS9 books that I probably won't end up adapting, but I might mention her...

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I didn't realise that there were so many SCE books. I guess I was only interested in the ones that involved DS9.
 
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