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December Challenge--Star Trek: DS9--"One Night On Terok Nor..."

Rush Limborg

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Here, dear readers...I turn my attention to a character I haven't tackled until now: everyone's favorite tailor, Plain, Simple, Garak.

The framing story is set shortly after "Afterimage"--when, you may remember, Ezri helped him with a serious claustrophobic attack--which had been motivated by guilt over his having, in his mind, betrayed Cardassia.

There's also an interesting oddity I wanted to tackle: remember the cranial implant Garak had been using, up to "The Wire"? What was it that had driven him to that--especially considering how, in his "biography", A Stitch In Time, it is claimed that he relished his work as a tailor...in order to not let Dukat break him?

(There's also references to Garak's uncle--also information from A Stitch In Time)

Note: the climax has a nod to a classic scene from Tony Scott's film True Romance (written by Quentin Tarantino)...with some Casino Royale thrown in.



Hope you all like it!

Word Count: approx. 10,000.
Special thanks to Cobalt Frost, for this opportunity!

Enjoy!



Star Trek
Deep Space Nine

"One Night On Terok Nor..."



2375

* * *

Elim Garak was vulnerable—open to whatever attack may come. And he was to be so, voluntarily…for however long it took.

He lay on the couch, wondering how in the name of Cardassia he had agreed to this. Lying down is decidedly not the best position to engage in, when one is not in private. He was not in the Infirmary—there were no restraints, and he was not ill. Still…it was requested of him to be vulnerable. And regardless of the circumstances…that was not something easily acceptable, for him.

And so, he asked, “Counselor, if I may—is there a particular need for me to lie down like this?”

He could hear the slight hint of amusement in the voice of Counselor Ezri Dax. “Aren’t you comfortable, Garak?”

She is enjoying this, isn’t she? This is her concept of revenge…for my unfortunate treatment of her a week ago, isn’t it?

If so, then it was doubtless deserved. However…this girl never struck the former agent as particularly sadistic. Not intentionally, anyhow.

“Forgive me, Counselor,” Garak replied, “But you must understand…this suit is designed for comfort when one is upright.”

“Uh-huh. Garak, didn’t you design that suit yourself?”

“Of course.”

“In that case, I’d say it’s your own fault.”

Garak frowned, turning his head to her in curiosity. “My fault?”

Ezri shrugged, a look of complete innocence on her face. “For not designing your own suit to work for you, whatever you were doing.”

Garak smiled. “Perhaps, Counselor, I didn’t see the need to design my public attire as though it could be used for nightwear.”

Ezri returned the smile. “I can lie down in my uniform just fine—that doesn’t mean I’ll sleep in it.”

“Perhaps. However—my work rarely requires, or even allows me to position myself this way.”

“Right. Okay, Garak—what’s the real reason?”

“Counselor?”

The girl’s smile grew. “You didn’t have a reason not to make it comfortable for lying down. And I know for a fact that that’s it’s not the suit.”

“Do you?” Garak felt his own smile grow. “Perhaps you could explain.”

“You haven’t been fidgeting—you haven’t adjusted your posture that much, since you lay down. You’re tense—but it’s not your back.”

“Indeed? Then, perhaps you were to tell me what my true intentions are…?”

“That’s what you’re supposed to do.”

“Counselor…why would I have reason to lie?”

Ezri shrugged again. “Practice, maybe? If you can fool a trained psychologist, you can fool anyone.”

Garak tilted his head, still smiling. “Forgive me,

Counselor…you hardly strike me as a woman of that sort of ego.”

“Oh, it’s not ego, Garak. It’s just part of my job to not let my patients off the hook.”

“The hook…?”

Ezri sighed, in what looked like amusement. “Okay: you’re not sitting up until you tell me why you need to sit up.”

“With all respect, Miss Dax—what was the purpose of my lying down in the first place?”

“What’s wrong with it, Garak?”

Garak paused for a moment. Finally…he replied, “If I may say, Counselor…you would make a wonderful interrogator.”

Ezri blinked, as if the thought momentarily unnerved her. “Come on, Garak—what’s wrong?”

Garak moved his hand, resting it on his stomach. “If you insist…I surrender to your force of will, then.”

Ezri nodded slowly. “I insist.”

Garak shook his head. “It is…difficult…for a former member of the Obsidian Order—to leave himself…”

“Vulnerable?”

“I am lying down, without a means of defending myself—and I am forced to be in this position when I am not alone.”

“You’ve been in the Infirmary like this.”

“But this is not the Infirmary. There, it is the lesser evil. Here…” Garak frowned, “Counselor—do you always demand this of your patients?”

Ezri shrugged. “It depends. It’s supposed to relax them…help them ease up their mental barriers—that sort of thing.”

“I see. But I just informed you, that it has the opposite effect for me—”

Usually, relaxation helps the patent trust me more…and be more honest with themselves. You, on the other hand…”

“Ah,” Garak nodded. “So, then, you are intentionally causing discomfort—”

“Well, that wasn’t my plan. But you admitted it, and I saw an opportunity.”

“Indeed. May I sit up, now?”

Ezri chuckled. “Sure, Garak.”

He did—and felt his tension ease…a smile coming with it.
“Thank you, Counselor,” he said. “Now…perhaps we can continue?”

“Well, let’s see…” Ezri looked down at her padd, apparently reminding herself of the agenda for the day. At last, she looked at him, and said, “How’s your claustrophobia?”

“Oh—I barely notice it, thank you.”

Ezri held his gaze, tilting her head.

Garak looked around, his smile vanishing. “Is—is there something wrong with the walls of your office? They seem a bit closer than they were a minute or so before now.”

His smile returned, as he looked back to the girl. “No. I can assure you, Counselor—it has been under control…thanks to you.”

Ezri smiled, as she lowered her gaze. “Flattery won’t get you anywhere, Garak.”

“Flattery? Not at all!”

Ezri looked back up, growing serious. “Any more flashes of guilt?”

“Guilt, Counselor? Why—I am but a plain, simple tailor! What could I possibly feel guilty over?”

Ezri laughed, again. “You know, you’re very charming, Garak—I’ll give you that.”

Garak beamed, and inclined his head. “A trait of mine, since my youth.”

“I’m sure. But, look—you’re my patient. There’s a rule of confidentiality. If you want to keep something secret—I won’t tell a soul.”

“Ah…” Garak said, “But you see—that is something no one can truly say with assurance.”

“What do you mean?”

“Oh, simply that there are many ways to glean information from another—not necessarily involving interrogation.”

“Maybe. Now—you knew what I was talking about. You’re claustrophobia increased as a subconscious reaction to guilt over having betrayed Cardassia. You’ve been separated from your people—you’re an exile. You told me you were afraid that…well, if the Dominion were to be defeated, it’ll only mean the annihilation of your people.”

“Yes, I recall all of that, Counselor—I lived through it, as you recall.”

Ezri smiled. “So you felt alone in the universe—and that loneliness, mixed with helplessness, was personified by intense claustrophobia.”

Garak stared at her, unsure of her point.

She leaned back in her seat. “You know…I’ve got a lot of notes, about that. I think I’ll publish something—it’s not every day you discover a new syndrome.”

Garak tilted his head. “Discover?”

“I’m thinking of calling it ‘Garakosis’.”

Garak beamed again. “I’m honored, Counselor!”

“Glad to hear it.”

“Well, in answer to your question—no, I have no sudden bouts of a heavy conscience. I have accepted the possible consequences of my actions…and I will continue, regardless.”

Ezri nodded slowly…and she seemed more solemn, now.

“Counselor—if I may?”

“Hmm?”

Garak felt his voice turn solemn, as he spoke, “I must admit, I have been nostalgic for the thought of returning to my beloved Cardassia, from the moment my exile began. However…I’ve long accepted the unfortunate fact that I may never return to the world I once knew. As it stands…if such pain is of no consequence, neither should any guilt be. Matters of conscience were never allowed to enter the equation for me, in the Order. I cannot simply lapse into them, in civilian life.”

Ezri looked a little sad for him. “Why not?”

“Should my abilities be required again…I’d best not allow them to weaken. As it were, Counselor—they are needed now, by Starfleet Intelligence. Hence…my conscience must be numbed for them, as it was for the Order.”

“Mm-hmm…” Ezri muttered, as she consulted her padd again.

After a moment, she looked back to him. “It says here that for two years, you had a cranial implant activated, which you used as a narcotic, to cope with the pain of your exile.”

“Yes?”

“When it malfunctioned, you went through a severe period of withdrawal.”

“Of course.”

Ezri shook her head. “Garak…I’d call the addiction—any addiction—a weakening of your abilities.”

“Counselor…I admit, I found my exile to be initially…quite painful. However, as Dr. Bashir will attest, I recovered quite gracefully.”

Ezri snorted. “Right….”

“I assure you, Counselor…once the implant was removed, I came to discover I possessed no need for it. It was a minor inconvenience, nothing more.”

“Really? So…why did you turn it on, in the first place?”

“As I said, my initial years in exile were most unpleasant—particularly under Gul Dukat.”

“Unpleasant?”

“He could be quite…demanding.”

Ezri pursed her lip for a moment. “From what I’ve heard, the implant was supposed to help an agent withstand…torture. I don’t think—”

“As I said, Counselor…Gul Dukat could be quite…demanding.”

Ezri leaned forward. “Did…did he torture you?”

“Not in the direct sense, no.”

“Direct sense…?”

Garak smiled. “Counselor…I hardly think you’re unaware of the fact that the gul and I were…never on the most ideal of terms.”

“So he went out of his way to make life hard for you.”

“Naturally.”

“And that caused you to turn to a narcotic?”

“Counselor…agents of the Order were subjected to immense training, in regards to discipline. I would hardly think myself so pathetic as to find solace in a mere drug, simply because my employer was difficult.”

“But you did.”

“I did…but Counselor, don’t assume it was merely due to Dukat’s treatment of me.”

Ezri pulled up her seat, so that she sat right near the couch.

As a rule, Cardassians have a greater sensitivity than most races to the presence of other beings…particularly when they are quite close. Garak had often wondered whether that had been a contributing factor to his claustrophobia. As it stood…the counselor’s proximity to him was not particularly unnerving. However…it was clear she was trying to provoke some sort of reaction.

“Garak,” she said, in a soft voice, “What was it?”

Garak thought for a moment. Finally, he smiled, and shrugged. “A great deal of things, Counselor. I would hardly ascribe one particular cause to my…torment.”

Ezri reached over, and took his arm, in a gentle grasp. “Garak…you can tell me. Tell me everything….”

Garak felt his smile grow. For a non-Cardassian, this girl was quite cunning…using an “innocent” personality to her advantage—conveying an image of trustworthiness.

“As I said, Counselor,” he said, “You are quite an interrogator. I could easily picture a session where you smile gently at the suspect, hold his hand…speak softly to him—and in little time, he will submit to your every whim.”

“Garak,” Ezri’s gaze hardened with her tone, “I’m not joking.”

“Neither am I.”

“This is important, Mister. We need to make sure you won’t do something like that, again. We need to know the limits of what you can handle. Obviously, something caused you to break. Whether it was the pressure of a lot of different things, or one specific event that made you just…give up on yourself—we have to find out.”

Garak chuckled silently…and lay his free hand on hers, where she held his arm. “And I feel confident we will, Counselor,” he said. “In time. As of this moment, however—I doubt I could help you on that…or you, me.”

Ezri sighed…and let him go. “Fine…fair enough.”

Garak frowned. “We’re done, Counselor?”

“For today. See you tomorrow.”

Garak rose to his feet, and nodded, his smile returning. “I look forward to it, Miss Dax.”

Ezri looked up at him, and returned the smile…but to Garak, she clearly looked quite deep in thought.

Interesting…how she is still trying to understand me. When I told her once that it was impossible…she responded with, “I’d like to try.” Either she didn’t believe me—or she simple enjoys the challenge of a complicated soul like mine.


It was probably the latter. Such was something Garak respected…although her efforts probably would leave her with nothing.

“Good day, Miss Dax,” Garak said. And he turned, and left the counselor’s office.

* * *​

Tailoring had long since been a means of relaxation for Elim Garak. As he had told the good counselor Dax, before his…most unfortunate outburst…throwing himself into this work—trivial though it was, in the grand scheme of events—tended to be sufficient to distract him from whatever pressures affected him.

Of course…he had no particular need for distraction, as of now. He was not so sensitive that a session with Counselor Dax would, as humans would say, “send him over the edge”. Not any longer, as it were.

As of now, he was at last attending to those costumes Dr. Bashir and Chief O’Brien insisted on wearing to the holosuite—what was it, again? The “Alamo”?

At any rate, Garak did not understand in the slightest their fascination with the so-called “honorable defeat” the program was said to entail. Honorable or not, a defeat was a defeat. Surely better to bide one’s time—live to fight another day—then to pay for one’s stubbornness with one’s life…dying for no purpose whatsoever. Defense? Gather your forces until you can strike in a strategic manner! Honor? What good will that do, when you are dead? Renown by your people? Surely your senseless death merely costs them of what they truly require of you—your service!

Humans can be most bewildering
….

“Mr. Garak?”

Garak looked up with his “customer service” smile. “Ah—Plain, Simple, Garak will do. How can I be of service?”

The young man—a Bajoran, of apparently modest means, if his clothing was any indication—returned the smile. He was carrying a set of trousers. “Well—I’ve been told you could fix…?”

“Ah, yes—say no more!” Garak’s smile grew. “I am always delighted to be given an assignment requiring my…considerable abilities.”

And so it stands. Amid an all-to-necessary betrayal of my own people…I remain so low, as to mend the region of clothing with which my clients sit. All in all, quite tolerable, considering my alternatives.


He took the trousers, and looked over the split seam. And it was quite a split!

Garak looked at the client in amusement. “If I may ask…what in Oralius’s name possessed you to impose damage like this?”

Indeed. Now I’m invoking that forbidden religion. Am I reveling in my rebellion, now?


The man chuckled nervously…as if embarrassed by a memory. “A…long story.”

“I see!” Garak nodded. “Well—this shouldn’t take too long. I have an order or two to finish, first—but by the end of today, I should have this mended. Perhaps if I were to have your name…?”

“Oh—my name’s Taren Mal.”

Garak felt himself internally freeze. Fortunately, he was not so careless as to allow it to show externally.

“Taren”…I know that name…


He kept his smile. “Well, Mr. Taren…when I finish your order—I’ll contact you. Expect a message…tomorrow morning, at the latest.”

“Oh—of course! How much?”

“Oh, a seam mend—not too expensive; standard rate should suffice.”

The man nodded. “Thank you, Mr. Garak—”

Garak raised a finger, “Ah-ah-ah! Plain, Simple, Garak….”

The man nodded, “Yes—Garak. Thank you….”

Garak nodded, beaming. “I am glad to be of service.”

As the youth left…Garak returned to his work, his mind filled with a single train of thought: Where had he heard that name, before…?

“Taren”…doubtless someone who made an impression on me. Not
him, per se—a parent, perhaps…?

“Taren”…“Taren”…


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2368

* * *​

Garak stood in the Prefect’s Office on Terok Nor, staring into the face of Gul Skrain Dukat.

“You sent for me, Gul?” he asked…sure to provide a tone of amusement, not the fear or even the bitterness his enemy—and, due to locale, superior—would prefer.

Dukat smiled, steepling his fingers. “Garak…it’s been too long.”

“Too long?” Garak asked, frowning. “Forgive me, Gul…but if you truly missed my company, I’ve only been a com line away. Understand, I would have enjoyed the opportunity to converse with…such a noted representative of our people—”

“Garak, Garak, Garak…” Dukat shook his head, “One could swear—your lies are becoming increasingly pathetic. As it were, it’s amusing how well your…little business is faring, considering its owner.”

“Well—we may trade insults at another time. In the meantime—”

Dukat’s tone hardened. “Know your place, tailor. You are on my station…and I will determine ‘when’ it is time for ‘what’.”

Garak nodded, with a faint smile. So…still peeved at your inability to kill me, Skrain?

“Of course,” he said. “Forgive me, Gul. However…I am still bewildered at your motives for summoning me.”

Dukat chuckled. “Well, now…isn’t this rewarding? I’ve succeeded in bewildering a member of the Obsidian Order? Oh,” he added with a dismissive gesture, “Forgive me, Garak. Former member….”

Garak nodded, keeping the smile. He knew all too well…Dukat’s agenda, from the moment Garak had arrived, had been to gain a simple pleasure through socially tormenting him. (Personal vengeance—a petty motive that Garak, for one, considered himself far too…mature…to fall prey to—for the all-too-timely demise of one former Chief Justice, Procal Dukat….)

Garak, naturally, had seen through this childish intent immediately…and therefore had made it a point to throw himself into his new career (station tailor—how quaint), and to actually enjoy it. Such, he knew, would infuriate Dukat…although Garak also knew that he would probably never see such expressed externally.

But now Dukat grew serious, and said, “The reason I’ve called you here, Garak…is quite simple: I want you to do something for me.”

Indeed? I suppose humiliate myself as your jester, for your officers. If such is the case, Dukat…you had best prepare yourself for a considerable helping…of
satire….

Garak threw his head back a bit, letting his amusement show. “You need my help, Dukat?”

Dukat kept his composure, “Much as it pains me…yes.”

Garak thought for a moment, and replied, “I would imagine, this is in a…somewhat more significant role than as a simple tailor. Am I correct?”

Dukat seemed to stiffen in his seat. But he nodded. “You are.”

Garak allowed his smile to grow. “In that case, Gul…what can I do for you?”

Dukat stared at him for a time, in silence. Finally…he rose to his feet, and a faint smile of his own appeared.

“An interrogation,” he said.

* * *

2375

* * *

“Garak?”

Garak looked up from mending the Bajoran’s trousers…to see a certain lovely young counselor standing in the doorway, hands casually clasped behind her back.

He smiled. “Counselor Dax! I don’t suppose you’d have something for me to mend…have you?”

Ezri smiled, and shook her head. “No…not today.”

Garak frowned. “Then…did you remember something we—neglected to discuss, earlier?”

Ezri shrugged, as she stepped forward. “Not really. I just got off duty, and…I guess I wanted to see how you’re doing.”

“Really?” Garak asked, forcing mild astonishment.

Ezri tilted her head, looking amused as she stopped a few steps away. “Is it that annoying, Garak?”

Garak threw his head back. “Annoying, Counselor? No, not at—”

Ezri laughed. “Don’t worry, Garak—I’m not offended. If I don’t annoy my patients that much, I’m not really doing my job.”

Garak smiled. “Counselor…I can assure you, you’ve been a great help to me. Oralius forbid I allow discomfort to prevent you from continuing to be.”

Ezri nodded thoughtfully, peering deep into his eyes. “Oralius?”

Garak blinked. Did I say it, again? By Cardassia’s sun—what is happening to me?

He found himself stiffening. “A…mistake, Counselor. Pay it no—”

“Now that’s very interesting,” Ezri said. “You know, Garak, my profession has a term for ‘mistakes’ like that.”

Garak frowned. “Oh?”

“A ‘Freudian slip’. Basically, it’s whenever you accidently come out and say what’s on your subconscious mind. It’s often something you weren’t even aware you were thinking about.”

Garak felt his smile return. “Well! Are you suggesting I’m…subconsciously a follower of the Oralian Way?”

Ezri narrowed her eyes, still smiling. “I don’t know. I didn’t say it—you did.”

Garak raised his hand. “So…by my suggesting it—it’s possible that I am—‘subconsciously’, is that the term?—”

Ezri nodded.

“—subconsciously admitting to such?”

Ezri shrugged. “You could be. It all depends on what we can dig up.”

“Dig up, you say? About…me?”

Ezri looked off for a moment. “Maybe…. Are you up for it?”

“Well, that depends. Unlike you, Counselor—I am not off duty.”

“Oh—don’t worry; we can do it right here, right now. In fact…” she gave a nervous chuckle, “I’m—pretty sure that’s what we’ve been doing.”

Garak smiled. “I suppose.”

“So!” Ezri said, “Do you, by any chance, have a history with the…Oralian Way?”

“One might say that…although, it would be quite a stretch of reasoning.”

“Go on….”

Garak looked off to think for a moment, and continued, “My…uncle was a follower of the Way.”

Ezri frowned. “Your uncle?”

“His name was Tolan Garak. In fact, Counselor,” Garak chuckled, “As a child, I’d been under the admittedly mistaken impression that he was my father.”

Ezri tilted her head. “When did you find out he wasn’t?”

“On his deathbed—but…” Garak tilted his own head, “That’s—a different story entirely. The point, I suppose, is that—though my true father was certainly a force in my upbringing—Tolan was…quite influential, as well.”

Ezri frowned. “Wasn’t the Oralian Way forbidden?”

“It is. Naturally, my uncle was sure to be secretive about such things. However…he had made it a point to encourage my…”

Ezri smiled—not in amusement, but in something more accepting, and sympathetic, “…your spiritual growth?”

Garak shrugged. “One might call it that.”

“But I take it, nothing came of that.”

“Not particularly. However…I admit, I’ve always been—quite amused at the reasoning behind the ban of the Way. As far as I’m concerned…it is hardly a threat to the Cardassian way of life….”

He looked off…and he felt his face harden. “Not as great a threat as the Dominion, in any case,” he said.

He felt Ezri place a hand on his arm again. Despite himself, he found he welcomed it.

Garak turned to the girl, and smiled. “I suppose the answer to our question is: the ‘slip’ is my inner child coming out, with my uncle’s teachings intact…wouldn’t you say?”

Ezri returned the smile. “Maybe. To be honest, Garak…I think a case could be made that, if that’s the case, it’s a good sign.”

“Oh? And what would it signify?”

Ezri shrugged. “Basically, that you’re trying to come to a new acceptance of yourself—who and what you really are, in your heart. Self-awareness, if you will.”

Garak nodded slowly, his smile fading as he pondered this. “Indeed. Perhaps this was initiated by my acceptance of the…pain over what might be considered…”

“…betrayal of your people,” Ezri nodded. “I think that’s a good argument. Once you admitted it to yourself—you opened a doorway into more self-reflection.” She shrugged. “All things considered…we’re making progress, after all!”

Garak felt his smile return. “Perhaps, Counselor.”

Ezri frowned. “But…I have to warn you, Garak.”

Garak blinked, looking at her in amusement. “Warn me? Is there a danger, Miss Dax?”

“Not…exactly—just be careful.” Ezri paused for a moment, and went on, “If you’re going to go down that road, Garak…it means you’re going to have to face a lot of memories—memories you’ve been able to handle before now…but only because you’ve been able to detach yourself from them, emotionally.”

“Due to…my lack of self-reflection.”

“Exactly. And, in some cases,” Ezri’s gaze fell, “Your…addictions.”

“Naturally. Of course, I won’t be able to seek that sort of refuge.”

Ezri met his gaze. “No, you won’t. Look—I’m not saying you won’t be able to cope with those memories now…but you’re going to face them with new eyes—emotions that you suppressed with your training. The trouble is…you training won’t be able to help you, this time.”

“And—what will, if I may ask?”

“Acceptance, Garak. And to be honest—I’m supposed to help you, with that.”

Garak nodded. “Thank you, Counselor. I will…heed your warnings.”

Ezri nodded, looking satisfied.

Garak resumed his mending of the trousers.

He heard—and felt—Ezri take another step to him. “Finishing an order?”

“Yes—I…was approached by a certain young man—a Bajoran, named Taren Mal. As you can see,” he showed her, “The…seams were quite…undone.”

Ezri’s eyes widened. “What was he doing with them?”

“He said it was, and I quote, ‘a long story’. He seemed quite embarrassed.” Garak smiled at her. “Perhaps a potential client for you, Miss Dax.”

Ezri chuckled. “I doubt it. Now…why is his name important?”

Garak frowned. “I beg your pardon, Counselor?”

Ezri titled her head, peering at him again. “You made it a point to say his name. Is it important to you, for some reason?”

Garak shrugged. “It—seemed familiar, somehow. His family name, anyway. I…suppose I’ve been reflecting on it, for the past hour or so….”

Ezri nodded. “Have you come up with anything?”

Garak smiled. “When I do…I will let you know.”

Ezri nodded again, in apparent acceptance…but her eyes held a firm look which seemed to say, Make sure you do.

She left…and Garak returned to his work.

* * *​

2368

* * *​

Garak was not one to burst out laughing. He was far too controlled for that. A smile…a silent chuckle—that was enough.

Such was his response to Dukat’s “assignment”.

Dukat stiffened again…and his smile looked a bit forced. “Do you find something amusing, Garak?”

“Oh, not at all. Simply…can’t your own subordinates interrogate for you? Why come to me—the one Cardassian on this station whom you know, with ever fiber in your being, that you can’t trust to serve your agenda?”

“My dear Garak,” Dukat replied…somehow managing to remain calm, “It has little to do with trust. If that were it…I would sooner turn to a comfort woman to do this for me.”

“Well, now, wouldn’t that prove interesting.”

“The point, Garak,” Dukat said—clearly reaching the limits of his patience, “Is that I cannot at this time access the resources of the Obsidian Order.”

“But—as you so graciously pointed out—I am no longer with the Order.”

“That is precisely my point.” Dukat leaned forward, pressing hands down on the table, as he peered into Garak’s eyes. “Garak…perhaps you don’t understand the situation. I do not want the Order interfering in my affairs, at this particular time.”

“Ah!” Garak nodded. “Having a bout of wounded pride, are we? Does this…suspect I am to interrogate—does the revelation of its existence run the risk of insulting you, in some way?”

“I suggest you remember your place, Garak!”

“I suggest you remember yours, Dukat,” Garak replied, his elation at this verbal battle increasing by the moment. “You forget, sir, that matters of intelligence within the Empire are the jurisdiction of the Order. Regardless of any embarrassment you might face upon…admitting a defeat—”

“Garak—let me explain it to you in this way: due to the increased frequency of attacks conducted by that infernal Resistance—” the last word he spat out like a curse—“The Central Command is beginning to give very serious thought to abandoning Bajor—completely.”

Well, now…this was most interesting. Garak tilted his head. “Abandon it?”

Yes.”

“At the order of the Detapa Council, I take it?”

“Command feels it is only a matter of time. We must find a way to crush the Resistance—strike a killing blow to one cell after another. Only then can we prove that we can afford to remain.”

Garak nodded slowly. So…here it was. “And you believe this…suspect—may hold the key to such?”

“He may. He is a high-ranking member of one of the more prominent cells. Were we to break him—on our own, without crawling on our knees to the Order—and crush the cell, it would send a message to Command, and the infernal Council, that we can remain—and that we must gain more support, to crush this rebellion once and for all.”

Dukat tilted his head, his eyes blazing. “Does that satisfy you…Garak?”

Garak stared at him, saying nothing. At last…he brought up both his hands—and applauded, slowly and pointedly.

“Well said, Gul Dukat!” he said. “You may well become a credit to your rank, sooner or later. So, as far as you are concerned, you want me to give you your salvation: you have the efficiency of the Order, in me…without asking for the Order, itself. Inspired, and brilliant—assuming, of course…that I would have an incentive to accept your offer.”

Dukat’s teeth clenched. “Garak—”

“Oh, come now, Dukat—we’ve established you can’t kill me; Tain himself saw to that. It seems to me that you need my services, far more than I need your assignment. What reason do I have to accept?”

At this…Dukat actually relaxed. He sat back down in his seat, and said, “I was hoping you would ask.”

Garak nodded. “Well?”

“Garak…as you’ve said, I am going to you because you are efficient. You are the closest to a guarantee that this man will be broken. You will be able to do…what the methods at my disposal proved unable to do.”

“Is there a point to this flattery, Dukat?”

“Only this, Garak,” Dukat said, leaning forward. “If you do this for me—if you break this man, and bring me the information necessary to destroy his cell…I will promote you from your position of tailor—and appoint you as my chief of intelligence on Terok Nor.”

Garak chuckled. “You—appoint me—as your chief of intelligence?”

“Yes…ironic, isn’t it? Amazing, what necessity can force one to do. In this case…I see myself forced to abandon our past…animosity. Unfortunate—but should this succeed, we certainly will need your services again—and again, until we find and crush every last cell in the Resistance.”

“Forgive me, Dukat,” Garak replied, “But I would imagine a great many individuals who would not take kindly to my being appointed to such a high position.”

“You won’t be…officially. Officially, you will remain as ‘station tailor’. However—” Dukat’s lip tightened, “You may take solace in the fact that, from this point forward, it would only be a cover…for your true position under me.”

Dukat leaned back in his seat, folding his hands across his chest. “Do we have a deal, Garak?”

Garak stared at him for a time. This was no trick—it smacked too much of desperation and revulsion on Dukat’s part. And as it stood…Garak had nothing to lose.

His smile grew. “Where is this terrorist, now?”

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2375

* * *

Garak chuckled in triumph, as the last thread was put into place. The seam was sealed. Taren’s trousers were intact.

Now, to send him the fortunate news.

He went to his console, and opened a link to the man’s quarters. “Taren Mal, this is Garak—your tailor.”

The young man’s face appeared on the screen. “This is Taren. Are the pants ready?”

Garak nodded, beaming. “As I said…it wouldn’t take a day!”

“Thank you. I…won’t be able to pick it up, tonight. Could—you hold it for me, and I’ll pick it up in the morning?”


“Why—of course! I will see you then.”

“Thank you.”


The line closed.

Garak carried the trousers to the back…as the nagging feeling occurred to him, again.

Taren…who
are you? I pride myself on my memory—it’s frustrating not to remember: where have I heard your name…?

When the day was over, Garak returned to his quarters, the question still unanswered.

What was it she said: “If you’re going to go down that road, Garak…it means you’re going to have to face a lot of memories—memories you’ve been able to handle before now…but only because you’ve been able to detach yourself from them, emotionally
….

“I’m not saying you won’t be able to cope with those memories
now…but you’re going to face them with new eyes—emotions that you suppressed with your training. The trouble is…you training won’t be able to help you, this time.”

As he entered his rooms, he wondered.

Could it be the
name that is traumatic? A Bajoran name…a Bajoran who had such an effect on me. Someone I assassinated, perhaps…? But why would I wish to suppress that? The name—perhaps someone I developed a bond with, of some sort?

No…a bond with a Bajoran? Of course not—not during my days in the Order.


But perhaps…perhaps I assassinated an innocent man, with that name? Taren…Taren…


No—I don’t recall that name—at least not from my years as an operative.


A Bajoran…perhaps in my years on Terok Nor? Under Dukat—

Yes…yes, that must be it! But a Bajoran…did they ever make use of my shop?

A collaborator, then?


Taren…a collaborator named Taren? No—as the humans would say, it fails to ring a bell.


Perhaps…


Hmm. Garak sat down at the console in his quarters. Some of his time in exile was a blur—probably due to the narcotic effect of that cranial implant.

The implant…the good counselor had wondered about what had caused him to break, and to use it. To be frank…Garak had often wondered, too. He had, after all, taken a kind of pleasure in failing to provide Dukat with the satisfaction of a broken soul. Garak had made it a point to enjoy his work as a tailor—a challenge!

But what had happened?

Oh, come now: I know full well. I came to realize that the “challenge” would be eternal—that my exile would
not end, if Dukat would have anything to say about it. And the thought of never being able to return to my home…it became too much for me.

But…but what had brought about that realization? His memories, his recollections of what had brought him to that point…a blur.

No—perhaps I could simply look this man up. Who is Taren Mal? Who were the members of his family? Perhaps I could remember more, were I to see a face…


He spoke up, “Computer…could you access the record behind a name, for me?”

“Please state name of subject.”


“Taren Mal…a Bajoran.”

“Stand by.”


After a moment, the computer responded, “Records found: Taren Mal. Bajoran national, born in Federation Standard Year 2352, on stardate—”

“Oh, don’t bother me with stardates—just state the names of his…his immediate family.”

“Mother: Taren Lisem. Father: Taren Korel. Sister—”


“Hold.” Garak leaned forward, staring at the name on the screen. “The father—access his records.”

“Stand by
…. The computer paused for a moment—and a new face appeared on the screen…a face Garak knew.

“Taren Korel: Bajoran national, born in Federation Standard year 2325. Joined the Bajoran Resistance in the year 2341, enlisting in the Eldon Resistance Cell. Highly regarded by leader Eldon Ralin, and became successor to leadership of the cell upon the death of Eldon in battle against a Cardassian force, in the year 2359. Led many successful campaigns against the Cardassians, including the liberation of the labor camp at—”


“Yes, well and good—what was his fate?”

“Reported to have been killed while attempting to evade capture by Cardassians in the year 2368.”


Garak nodded. “Thank you, Computer. That is all.”

As the screen turned black, Garak sat still…feeling nothing.

So…I
did recognize a face, after all….

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2368

* * *

“His name is Taren Korel. He led one of the older—and more effective—cells in the Resistance…until his alleged ‘death’ at our hands.”

Garak nodded at the glinn. “I see. I take it he’s proven most…resistant to your normal forms of interrogation.”

“That is correct.”

As they walked down the dark hall, to a room isolated from the rest of the station’s activities, the glinn continued, “He seems to have developed a most…notable level of internal strength. Many of my colleagues have suggested he cannot be broken.”

Garak stopped, turning to the glinn with a smile. “Indeed?”

The glinn hesitated, as if remembering who he was talking to. “Of course…”

“Yes…of course, your colleagues have never witnessed the Obsidian Order, when they glean information,” Garak said dryly. “Naturally…they’d be ignorant.”

“Yes, sir.”

Garak resolved not to allow the newfound respect being shown to him to go to his head. “However, they may be somewhat justified in thinking so—to an extent. How old is the man?”

“At least sixty years, sir.”

“I see…. Then, as he has doubtless fought Cardassians all his life…he certainly must have developed the sort of bitterness which would not allow him to break easily—regardless of…” Garak chuckled inside, “…the amount of brute force imposed upon him by military methods.”

“Yes, sir. Shall we go inside?”

“Is all the equipment ready?”

“Yes, sir—as you requested.”

“Very good. Now…” Garak raised a finger, “One more thing: This terrorist—does he have any family?”

“He has one son and one daughter.”

“I see. They’re both accounted for, I imagine?”

“Of course.”

“And the wife?”

“She died in a retaliatory strike by our forces.”

“Oh, that is excellent,” Garak said, as he resumed his walk. “Hardly left him much to lose, did we?”

“He still has the children, sir.”

“Yes, indeed he does,” Garak sighed. “Well, we’ll have to make do….”

They arrived at the entrance of the room. The glinn pressed the controls on the wall’s panel…and the door opened.

The Bajoran was sitting on a chair…his legs and torso strapped to it. His hands were free—as Garak had requested.
He was an older man—his hair greying, his face filled with lines. Still, there was a certain strength to his features…and contemptuous determination in the set of his jaw.

Quite a respectable fellow. I can see why he would be a leader of his own cell.


Garak turned to the glinn. “You and the guards must wait outside. Understand…our methods are not for the observation—or the mimicry—of the military.”

The glinn nodded, and gestured to the two guards standing on either side of the Bajoran. All left—the door rolled shut…and Garak and his new assignment were alone.

Garak sat down in a chair of his own, a small table between him and the Bajoran. He observed the other man…and consulted his tricorder. Yes…all was ready.

He reached down to the floor…and pulled up a bottle of kanar, and two glasses.

“Would you care for a drink, sir?” he said.

The terrorist didn’t respond.

“As you wish,” Garak said, as he poured himself a cup. He took a sip…and smiled. “Quite an excellent vintage,” he said, “Should you change your mind…I highly recommend it.”

He returned his gaze to the Bajoran…and leaned forward, a smile on his face, as he set the drink down. “Do you know who I am, Taren Korel?”

The terrorist stared at him for a long time, and shook his head. “No….”

“I am your Khost Amojan—the Dark Lord of the fire caves,” Garak replied, internally chuckling at his own cleverness.

The man stared blankly, saying nothing.

Garak shrugged. “They say that you never see evil personified so much, as when you look into the eyes of the man who holds the rest of your life within his grasp…. Wouldn’t you agree?”

Still nothing.

“Well—if you wish to remain silent, that is your choice. I sincerely hope you will not regret it. My name is Elim Garak, of the Obsidian Order. I am sure, as you are old enough to have fought in the Resistance for some time…you have at least heard of us?”

The man nodded. “I’ve heard of the Order, yes.”

“Good. Then you know that we are relentless and without mercy, in our quests for what we want. Thus—at the risk of sounding redundant…kindly answer my questions with nothing less than complete accuracy—if you please…?”

The man chortled.

Garak tilted his head, smiling. “You find my words amusing?”

The man shook his head, saying nothing.

“Well…” Garak said, as he pressed a control on his tricorder.

The man let out a gasp—and pressed his lips together, as if desperate not to allow any noise to escape.

Garak pressed the control again…and the man let out another gasp, panting for breath…but he finally relaxed, as the burst of pain had been shut off.

“Perhaps you would find that amusing,” Garak said. “Frankly, I have never understood methods involving beatings, or…elaborate combinations. Neither has the Order—we prefer simplicity. You see…with simplicity, comes efficiency. What you’ve just encountered was an electromagnetic pulse sent directly to one of the more sensitive pain receptors in your body. I have a control here for each such receptor—and in case you’re wondering…yes, I do know them all.”

The man clenched his teeth, his eyes blazing.

“Oh, that’s good…from what I’ve been told, you have made it a point to say nothing to your previous interrogators—give no expression, no reaction whatsoever. You’re quite strong, Taren—your will, as well as your body. Nonetheless…there are things that even the strongest will cannot possibly endure. And I can assure you, Taren: what you have just experienced…is the least painful setting.”

Garak pressed the control. The terrorist clenched his teeth, and a grunt escaped.

Garak turned off the pulse. “As you could feel, that was in a different place. This will be in random sequence, so you will have no defense against it. And of course…that was more painful than the first.”

The Bajoran said nothing.

“Frankly…we’ve heard of the self-righteousness of so many intellectuals—in the Federation, mostly, but there are those on Cardassia who say it, too. Their mantra is that interrogations centering on causing pain—‘torture’, if you will—has…has never been an effective means of gaining information.”

Garak chuckled. “Naturally…my experience tells me otherwise. You see, the key is not the amount of torment…so much as its proper application. You apply it, so that the barriers of the mind—including creativity…or ‘lying’, if you will—all break down…until the information the subject possesses is all he has left. Understand—creativity requires mental energy, either to lie, or to merely resist. Once a will is drained, so is one’s creativity.”

The Bajoran bit his lip.

“Now,” Garak said, “You will kindly tell me…the identities of all the members of your cell. You will tell me your cell’s hideaway locations, their attack strategies…”

The man spat. It missed.

Garak didn’t bat an eye. “Charming…and noble. I admire your resolve, Taren. However, it is also pointless. Furthermore…you are not the only one whose well-being you should be concerned about.”

No reply.

“You see…I don’t think a brilliant tactical mind such as yourself would be unaware of the weakness you possess. Yes, your wife has been killed—by Cardassians, which would naturally fuel your rage toward your…Occupiers, as you’d call us. However, you committed a great tactical error, good sir—an error which you committed while fighting in the Resistance. Namely…you gave your wife sufficient nights of passion, to culminate in her bearing for you a son and a daughter.”

The Bajoran’s face gave no reaction…but Garak could see the rage in his eyes, as the man understood all too well.

Garak shrugged. “Regardless of your feelings for her—something I can imagine, family being absolutely central to Cardassian culture—still, that was a great mistake. Otherwise, with your wife’s passing, you would have had nothing to lose in your resisting to the bitter end. As it stands…we know who and where your offspring are. So, perhaps your heroic silence becomes less noble, now…wouldn’t you say?”

“You’re lying!” the man shot back.

Garak smiled. “Am I?”

He pressed the control—and the man grunted again, but it was clearly becoming more difficult to suppress the scream.

Garak let it run for a moment longer…and pressed another control. A second pulse shot out…and thus, the pain was doubled. The man tightened the clench of his teeth…and his grunts became louder.

I must give him credit…most of my victims would have been weeping for mercy, by now.


At last…Garak turned it off.

“Whether you believe me or not, is of minor importance,” he said. “What is important is whether I believe you…and what you tell me.”

The Bajoran shook his head, breathing heavily. “I…I knew the risks, all right? My children are old enough—they know the risks. They don’t want you here—I don’t want you here. They’re…they want to fight, too. They want to fight every one of you, like I do. So, if you send your spoonheads to kill them, they’ll take it. They…they understand. They’d rather fight than live under spoonheads, all right?”

Garak chuckled silently, nodding. “A noble sentiment, Bajoran. However…saying you can live with your children’s death is one thing. It is quite another…to actually undergo such a tragedy.”

The man smiled, with no small amount of effort. “You think I can’t take it?”

Garak sighed in amusement, with a smile. “If I may,” he said, “It’s quite ironic you should accuse me of lying. Cardassians are absolutely superb in the skill of deception—the best in the galaxy, if I say so myself. In fact…my mentor, the great Tain, is renowned among the Order as the galactic champion of Cardassian liars—and so, of course, he is now our leader. From studying under him…I learned the art of the pantomime. Do you know what that is?”

The Bajoran frowned, and shook his head.

“Well…allow me to explain: regardless of race, there are seventeen different things a man can do when he lies, to give himself away. A man has seventeen…‘pantomimes’, if you will. A woman has twenty, in fact—you should consider yourself fortunate that it is you we have, and not your wife. Anyhow…if you know these ‘tells’, like you know your own face—they become lie detectors of the highest degree. Thus, what we have is what humans refer to as a little game of ‘show and tell’. You don’t intend to show me anything, but…you tell me everything. As is stands, the more pain you experience, the more pantomimes your face will give away. Now…kindly tell me what you know, before we cause damage which…physically or socially, you will not recover from.”

“I told you…Spoonhead…you can do what you want—”

“Strong words, Taren…” Garak said—as he pressed the control.

He set it for three bursts…adding to one another, in sequence. The man struggled to maintain control, with everything he was…but at last, it clearly became too much for him. The scream escaped his mouth—more one of frustration than despair.

Garak shut it off—and the man slumped, weakened.

“…but to be frank,” he continued, “You’re protesting too much. You were far more impressive before…when you remained silent. The fact that you’re so expressive now, by its very nature, indicates that your mental barriers have been weakened. I’m getting close,” Garak leaned forward, “Quite close, Taren.”

The terrorist’s hand rose a bit. “A…a moment…please….”

Garak spread out his hands. “We’re in no particular hurry.”

The man gathered himself…and at last, he straightened up. He asked, “Could…could I have some of that kanar?”

Garak smiled. Things were proceeding as planned. Yes…it would dull the pain the man already felt…however, it would also loosen his lips, a good deal. Garak had taken a counteracting agent, so it would not loosen his own…but this Bajoran had no such luxury.

“Of course,” he said, as he poured some into the other glass. He pushed it to the Bajoran’s side of the table. The man took it…and drank, without a break.

When he finished, the man set the glass down. He looked at Garak…and gave a light smile.

“So…you’re different from most spoonheads I’ve met.”

Garak chuckled. “Indeed…I am not under the Central Command. The Order prides itself on being more…clean than the military. We’re somewhat more civil, and less brutal.”

“Yeah, I gathered that. You know…Spoonhead…how much do you know about history?”

Garak shrugged. “Cardassian, or Bajoran?”

“Cardassian.”

“Oh, I know my share of history. The Hebitians…the rise of the Union…the formation of the Empire…” Garak grinned. “You know…I find it most fascinating: the ancient Bajorans had a rich culture. The Hebitians did, as well. Now…Cardassians rule an empire. And the Bajorans? They are one of our many subjects.”

“Yeah, well…maybe spoonheads are just more aggressive.”

Garak snorted. “It would seem so.”

“Yeah—that’s actually what I’m getting at. See…I read a lot of stuff about ancient cultures—pretty fascinating.”

“Oh? Do you have time to research, between killings of…‘spoonheads’?”

“No, not really…I got less time to do all that, since I joined the Resistance. But anyway…something you probably don’t know about Cardassian history.”

Garak leaned back in his seat. Trying to establish trust, is he? Or else simply trying to distract himself from the pain he still feels…and the guilt he will feel, from betraying his comrades.

At any rate, it would probably be most interesting.

The Bajoran smirked, and said, “Well…you look up the most ancient ruins…of Hebitian culture, and um…well, they look a lot…like Bajorans.”

Garak chuckled. “Indeed?”

“Yeah. Probably something none of you spoonheads want to talk about. But if you want to, you can go home and look, for yourself…if they’ll let you. So, back then, the Hebitians—well, maybe they had the rough skin, or whatever, but…none of those bumps on the forehead, huh? They had it on the nose, like we do…and who knows, maybe on the neck, but…” Taren shook his head. “No spoonheads.”

Garak shook his head in amusement. “Really?”

“Yep. And…you want to know what changed all that?”

“Enlighten me, sir.”

“Well…” the man leaned forward, and said, “Cardassians…were spawned by Klingons.”

Garak blinked. “Klingons?”

“Yeah. See…many centuries ago, the Klingons came in, and conquered the Hebitians. And…well, you know how…how aggressive the Klingons are, right? So…the Hebitian women? They got so smitten…with Klingon men…that nature took its course. Long story short, they’re all having children. And they did it so much…that they changed the bloodline.”

Garak snorted, grinning.

“No, no—this is real history. So…you’ve got it on the head, because your ancestors are Klingons!”

Garak burst out laughing. He was suddenly feeling quite giddy, somehow.

He shook his head. “My dear Taren…I doubt you have a firm grasp on Cardassian anatomy.”

“No, no—really. I mean, your girls probably got the blue thing on their own, or something, but…the ridge is the ridge. It’s not as thick as a Klingon’s, because only half your blood’s theirs. Still—hundreds of years later, you’ve still got that gene. Hence…you’re a spoonhead.”

Garak chortled. “Well!”

“That’s not all—” the man grinned, “Where did you all get that rich black hair? I’ll bet if you all let it, it’d get long and airy…like those Klingons, huh?”

Garak nodded, laughing.

The man joined in …and when it died down, he said, “So, your great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great-great grandmother…she fell for a Klingon…and they had a half-Klingon kid! And it stuck—so, the Hebitians…well, they became the spoonheads.”

Garak raised his hands, and applauded. “Inspired, Taren!”

“Well, I thought so. But…” the grin on the Bajoran’s face became less innocent, “In a way, it explains a lot. You were wondering what made you spoonheads more aggressive than we are, right?”

Garak nodded. “Of course….”

“Well, that explains it all.”

“I suppose so.”

But…do you know what it also explains?”

Garak leaned forward. “Enlighten me.”

The terrorist’s smile lessened…and he said, “You said the Hebitians had a rich culture, so…so what happened to it?”

Garak felt his smile fade.

“I’ll tell you what happened, Spoonhead: you’ve lost it all—you lost your Hebitian side, for your Klingon side. Now that’s ironic, isn’t it? You all hate the Klingons, right? You think they’re a bunch of savage killers whose code of honor is a fake. But…who are you more like: Hebitians…or Klingons? Klingons are militaristic…they’re bent on conquest…they treat the races they control as second-class citizens…. And the Hebitians—what were they like?” Taren shrugged. “They were a lot like us…weren’t they?”

Suddenly, Garak was enjoying this conversation less and less.

The grin on Taren’s face returned. “So, Spoonhead…I told you what made you people…what you are. Now, I’ve been telling you that it’s all true, right?”

Garak nodded. “You have.”

“And you told me you can spot lies…right?”

“Of course.”

“So, tell me…am I lying?”

Garak said nothing, keeping what remained of his smile.

The Bajoran pointed at him, and said, “Because I say, Spoonhead…that you’re part—turtlehead.”

Garak burst out laughing once again. And then he rose to his feet, and shook his head. “You’re not going to tell me anything…are you, Bajoran?”

The Bajoran spread out his hands…and returned the laugh.

Garak shrugged, amid the man’s guffaws. “Well, perhaps I will give you the benefit of the doubt…and assume your antics are due to drink. So—”

Garak adjusted the settings on his tricorder…and pressed the control.
 
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The laughter of the imbecile turned to screams, as one pulse connected—then another—and another again. The sequence would continue, for as long as Garak would wish.

And he felt like “wishing” a great deal. Whatever was necessary, to exorcise that nonsense from this comedian.

“I know you can hear me, Bajoran,” Garak shouted above the screams, “So I advise you to tell me what I need to know…before we finish with you.”

At last, he pressed the control. The man gasped and wheezed…and let out a cough.

“Now,” Garak said, “I suppose I must advise you again of the danger you’re imposing, not merely to you…but to your children. Tell me everything I want to know…and I assure you, they will be treated with the best care the Empire can provide. Refuse…and I am not the one to be concerned with a possible Klingon heritage. Or perhaps you can take solace in the fact that they will…oh, ‘die with honor’, as they say?”

The man raised his head, meeting Garak’s gaze…and smiled.

“See you in Gre’thor…Spoonhead!” he whispered.

Garak smiled…and pressed the control.

The man writhed—

And suddenly…nothing.

Garak froze…and his blood ran cold.

He checked the tricorder. No…everything was as it should be. The pulses were working, just…no response.

No…


He turned it off, walked over to the Bajoran…and checked his pulse.

Nothing.

No!


But it was true. The man was dead, due to strain on his heart.

And it was Garak’s own fault—he had no one to blame, but himself. He had allowed the terrorist to enrage him…
But why? What was it he had said—amid all the absurd, asinine nonsense about Klingon ancestry—what was it that had distracted Garak from his duty?

Was it the words about the culture Cardassia had lost? The richness of the Hebitian era…lost…allegedly due to the militarism of the rising Empire—

Did Garak, in some sense…find himself agreeing with that?
Well—it was of no consequence. He had failed. He had failed in his assignment…in his chance for restoration, such as it was.

More importantly…in a momentary rage, he had failed Cardassia—a home which he was now certain was closed to him, forever….

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2375

* * *

In her quarters in Deep Space Nine, Counselor Ezri Dax stirred at the chime of the com link—and the desperate voice on the other end.

“Garak to…Garak to Counselor Dax.”

Ezri sat up in her bed. “Garak? Garak, I’m here—are…are you—?”

“Counselor…I can’t…I—help—


Ezri shot to her feet, grabbing a robe, putting it on, tying it securely around her waist. “Don’t worry, Garak, I’ll call Julian—”

“No…don’t bring…anyone else into this.”
His voice still sounded weak…but she could hear the resolve in his voice.

Ezri nodded, and gently said, “Don’t worry, Garak—I’m coming. I’ll be right there, okay?”

“Thank…thank you. I’ll
I'll be here. Garak…out!”

Ezri nodded, grabbing her combadge—and rushed out into the hall, praying that he was right…that he needed no one else.

* * *​

She found him on the floor, staring up at the ceiling. He wasn’t writhing…his head wasn’t jerking—he didn’t show the desperation of a claustrophobic attack. But…

Ezri knelt beside him. “Garak…?”

The Cardassian swallowed, his eyes still fixed upward. But he said, in a calm, low tone, “Counselor…thank you for coming.”

Ezri nodded. “What happened?”

He smiled ironically. “A memory.”

Ezri shook her head. “How bad?”

“Enough that…that a name drove me to…” his smile grew, “to this.”

“A name?”

“Taren Korel.”

Ezri froze…and nodded slowly. “I take it, the man with the order—”

“—was Korel’s son…the son of a man—man that I…interrogated. For Gul Dukat.”

“Dukat? I thought—”

“Counselor—you remember when you asked me…what had caused me to…to drug myself?”

Ezri nodded.

“I…Dukat had—he had assigned a Resistance leader to me. To interrogate. Didn’t want…to humiliate the Occupation further. Needed—a victory.”

Garak turned to her…the pain in his eyes showing. “I…failed to give it to him.”

Ezri frowned. “You, working for—”

“A…a long story, Counselor.”

Ezri put a hand on his shoulder, smiling warmly down at him.

“Don’t worry, Garak,” she said. “I’m here. Tell me everything.”

Garak smiled…and did.

* * *​

2368

* * *​

Dukat shot to his feet, anger burning in his eyes. “Dead?”

Garak nodded. “Apparently…his heart wasn’t in it.”

“You were supposed to question him, not kill him!”

“Frankly, Dukat…you failed to provide me with his medical records. Had I known of the strength of his heart—or lack thereof—he would still be alive. Of course…you would have still slandered me, for not pressing him hard enough.”

What?”

“Isn’t it obvious? He was a man with nothing else to lose. Now, if your brainless minions had done the intelligent thing—capturing his wife, instead of killing her—”

“You think you can excuse your incompetence with that?”

“Of course, Dukat! The man behaved as if he didn’t have much regard for the well-being of his children. Or, more likely…he felt we wouldn’t keep our word not to kill them anyway. And to be blunt, Dukat…I hardly blame him for thinking so.”

Dukat bit his lip, staring into Garak’s eyes. Garak held firm, meeting his gaze.

At last…Dukat said, “Due to…the Obsidian Order’s demands, I cannot punish you as I would anyone under my command. Remember that.”

“Of course.”

However…I won’t forget this. You will remain a tailor—and only a tailor. And I promise you, Garak: I will do everything in my power…to ensure you will never exceed that. Is that clear?”

Garak gave a smile he wished he could feel. “Perfectly.”

And he turned, and left the Prefect’s office…all too certain about the future ahead.

* * *​

2375

* * *​

Garak closed his eyes, his story complete. When he opened them, he looked up into the soft, kind face of Ezri Dax.

She sighed, and shook her head. “I…I’m sorry, Garak.”
Garak felt a smile. “Counselor…as far as Dukat was concerned, it was on my account that he left Bajor in disgrace.”

“And…you think he was right?”

“In a sense. I couldn’t…I allowed my rage to overcome my better judgment.”

Ezri looked off for a moment.

Disgusted, aren’t you, Counselor? I tormented a man…and it’s not for
that that I feel remorse.

When she looked back to him, she said, “Well…you didn’t have them killed.”

“Who…Taren’s children?”

“They’re still alive, aren’t they?”

“Counselor, what need would be served by killing them? He was already dead.”

Ezri smiled…and Garak felt her hand tighten on his shoulder.

“Garak,” she said, “You’re going to be all right.”

“Am I?”

Ezri nodded.

“Yes,” she said. “You are.”

She…she
does understand, doesn’t she? For all the repulsive things I’ve done…she’s still able to…to bring comfort to me….

Garak nodded his thanks…as the calm of sleep reassured his tortured soul.

* * *​

Garak’s journey is only beginning
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Very nice! Garak has always been one of my favorite characters, and I could definitely hear his voice in this.
 
I think your Garak is spot on! Very well done; he's in character and I could almost watch the scenes with him, both in the "present" and in the "past."

It seems like he started evaluating some things from his past, just like Ezri told him, but he doesn't do it the "ordinary" way--which is a very good thing, because the last thing I'd expect from Garak would be re-living his past and his newly discovered conscience the same way we, hew-mons, do. He's a Cardassian...more than that! He's Garak and he has to go through all that in his own, Garakish way. It might not offer us the conclusions we'd hope to see, it might not give us "true" regret and remorse as we understand them, but it gives us something that fits the character--his past, his present and his personality.

And Ezri allows him todo it in his own way. She doesn't judge him, she doesn't produce a patronising speech, but lets him go through this on his terms. She offers her support--only support and as much as support.

I definitely enjoyed reading this story!
 
Thanks, Gul Re'jal--very much!

Garak was a lot of fun to write for...especially when I had him verbally "own" Dukat--over and over. The mischief of his character opens so many doors for me. (I also got a kick out of putting in the "split pants" gag--encouraging reactions from both Garak and Ezri.... :D)

Also, he's very much an "antihero". I have him do a pretty brutal thing--the torture--but he's still charming, even when he does it. Meanwhile, the Bajoran is arguably the "good" guy in the sequence...but he's got some issues, clearly. As Garak pointed out...he doesn't seem to worry too much about his children.

Ezri, of course, is one of my favorite characters to write for. As you noted, she doesn't patronize--probably due to her own sense of humility. (Probably one of the reasons I like her more than, say, Jadzia....) She's not like Deanna Troi--who, bless her heart, probably would give a speech to "reassure" Garak.

Glad you loved it! :)
 
I have a hard time knowing what to feel about Garak. It really depends on who the author is, whether this is a character capable of redemption or not. Given that you seem to be basing yours on the Treklit version, where he found religion, it at least seems like it's possible for him to find redemption--though I don't know if he ever truly will without a "road to Damascus" moment. It at least seems like his "Oralius forbid..." moment could be a Freudian slip that suggests Oralius is indeed trying to apply a "defibrillator" to his dead conscience.

At least personally, though...I don't think Garak will ever become whole unless he renounces his greatest sin completely: lying. He needs to get out of the lying profession completely.

There are other universes, though, where I think Garak is through-and-through evil...completely unredeemable.

I think you have great skill for writing dialogue--especially the kind of quick, intelligent repartee that we see between Ezri and Garak. And again with Garak and Dukat.

Oh...and I'm not entirely sure that the Bajoran didn't care about his kids. I think that he may have acted that cavalier to protect them. It seems that as skilled as Garak was, he realized Garak was lying about either a) having the kids or b) being able to make himself kill them, so Taren knew that if he pushed Garak enough, he'd lose control and kill him before he could give up any useful information or anything that would harm his kids. I think Garak just got outmaneuvered.
 
I have a hard time knowing what to feel about Garak. It really depends on who the author is, whether this is a character capable of redemption or not. Given that you seem to be basing yours on the Treklit version, where he found religion, it at least seems like it's possible for him to find redemption--though I don't know if he ever truly will without a "road to Damascus" moment.

Well, it's mostly the "vibe" I got from the series. There, at worst he's a former bad guy who's somehow likable as heck. At best, he's an antihero--a good man in some ways, who's been under the impression that many dark things are often all too necessary to do.

As I saw him, he's a man who made it a point to numb his conscience--as part of his training for the Order. Such is the lesson he tries to tell Julian Bashir in "Our Man Bashir"--that his line of work requires one abandon matters of conscience, in favor of "a sense of professionalism".

In a way, he's very much like Simon Templar--particularly in the film version of "The Saint", starring Val Kilmer. Like Templar, Garak is a charming and likable man--but his line of work is fraught with amorality. Thus, he is arguably a villain...but due to the person he is--due to his personality--one can't help but like him.

...There are other universes, though, where I think Garak is through-and-through evil...completely unredeemable.
Well...I'd say those interpretations are...unfair, at best.

It at least seems like his "Oralius forbid..." moment could be a Freudian slip that suggests Oralius is indeed trying to apply a "defibrillator" to his dead conscience.
Well...I'd say that's a good interpretation. Who knows? Perhaps that's what Ezri was getting at....

At least personally, though...I don't think Garak will ever become whole unless he renounces his greatest sin completely: lying. He needs to get out of the lying profession completely.
Well...I think we've seen over the course of the series that, at the very least, he lies less and less--at least once the War breaks out.

After that, it seems he barely does--except when he's joking with Julian--which doesn't really count....

Oh...and I'm not entirely sure that the Bajoran didn't care about his kids. I think that he may have acted that cavalier to protect them. It seems that as skilled as Garak was, he realized Garak was lying about either a) having the kids or b) being able to make himself kill them, so Taren knew that if he pushed Garak enough, he'd lose control and kill him before he could give up any useful information or anything that would harm his kids. I think Garak just got outmaneuvered.
Well, Garak did propose that theory to Dukat. Who knows? Since the clash was told from Garak's POV--and since the man is dead, and I don't really have any plans for him...we may never know.

I think you have great skill for writing dialogue--especially the kind of quick, intelligent repartee that we see between Ezri and Garak. And again with Garak and Dukat.
Thanks, Nerys! :)

So...you liked it, then?
 
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Interesting piece, Rush. A nice departure from the usual fare, and a well-portrayed Garak. As Nerys says, he's a character who gets interpreted in many ways when it comes to his potential for change, self-awareness, remorse or redemption. Seeing a competent new spin on the issue is always rewarding, given how much I enjoy the character - particularly post-series. :)

The opening gets us into Garak’s “voice” right off the bat, and I appreciate how it demonstrates his maddening capacity for avoiding a straightforward approach to anything. Just as a conversation with Garak can’t tie the exchange down to any one form of truth (if any), so his thoughts here flit around never landing on the mark. Partly, I imagine, to hide the vulnerability he simultaneously admits to feeling. He's quite self-acknowledging about the fact that he feels vulnerable - and why - yet he still goes through the motions of obfuscation. So he is indeed lying to himself out of habit – not because he’s truly trying to deceive himself but because lying is what he does. Misdirection is what he does (while also leading people on in multiple ways). He can craft a lie without believing it, but he still loses himself in the game of the word pattern or the thought pattern or the possibilities, and he can spin a pointless meandering self-story that may not go anywhere at all...all to avoid landing on the simple truth even as he acknowledges that truth plainly. Very nice work.

Oh, and his attempt to drag the conversation into talk of clothing as a pre-emptive means of avoiding/controlling Dax's probes was well played. Dax sees through that, though ;).

Actually, this whole conversation is interesting because Garak’s voice is so dominant. It’s almost strange, given that your Dax is usually so clear and strong, but here it’s less a two-way exchange and more of Garak-featuring-Ezri. I think this is deliberate, yes? What I mean is: Garak’s Garakness makes it harder to cut through to the actual communication taking place. I like the effect; it’s like a representation of the point of the whole piece; trying to find our way through the obfuscation of Garak to get to the heart of the matter, the exchange. Because that’s what the heart of any of your stories is, Rush – the exchange of ideas and intent through direct conversation. You always do that well. And here it’s fascinating because that sharp conversation is being blurred somewhat by Garak’s voice (and thoughts) being so powerful and warping how we as readers view the exchange scenes. That’s not a bad thing; as I said, that’s remarkably effective at reinforcing the themes particular to the character. So I’m impressed, particularly if you deliberately aimed to craft that exact effect :techman:. It shows a strong awareness of your own style and how it can be manipulated to tell different stories. Bravo! :)

There's a nicely effective underplayed moment, where Ezri looks sad that Garak dismisses the idea of accepting the pangs of conscience. It is indeed sad that Garak just doesn't see.

I loved this bit, which I've quoted, all the more so for being less than essential to the main plot:

"...dying for no purpose whatsoever. Defense? Gather your forces until you can strike in a strategic manner! Honor? What good will that do, when you are dead? Renown by your people? Surely your senseless death merely costs them of what they truly require of you—your service!"

It has the perfect tone of frustrated anger and direct, almost exaggerated point-making that Garak uses when he’s snappy and throwing his anti-social mood in someone’s face.

As expected, in the second Dax-Garak conversation, Dax comes through stronger, and she and Garak are now on equal grounds to me, voice-wise. Because we’re starting to get into real exchange here, working underneath Garak's swirling clouds of pointless obfuscation, which have weakened for a while. Truth starts coming through, albeit on a simple, basic level. It’s more the psychological equivalent of honest chit-chat than anything, but with Garak, even that's a breakthrough sometimes.

The flashback portions demonstrate an interesting and rather unfortunate truth about Garak: He’s a shallow person, for all the depth to his speech and the complex games he plays. He wraps himself in complex shrouds of conversation and wit and games-for-the-sake-of-games because he travels through life so disassociated from anything truly meaningful. And he shouldn't be shallow - it's what he's had to become, what he's warped into. For someone like Garak, simple unimaginative obedience isn't going to cut it - he's not like your "average" Central Command soldier who can find meaning in the Cardassian ideals of stoic performance of duty, obedience and service, etc. There’s something missing for him...and that's both tragic and disturbing. Because here he comes across, in the flashback sections on Terok Nor, as a man making swirls and waves and currents galore in his kitchen sink, not wanting to admit that this isn't the ocean he likes it to be, it's a sink. With not much water left in it at all.

So...was Taren’s Klingon ancestry idea something he actually believes in his stubborn Bajoran way or was it all to set up the punch he tried to give at the end? How clever is this guy, or is he indeed just your "simple" tough-as-nails grudge-bearing Bajoran man of the soil? The thing is, while that’s a good weapon he brought to bear on Garak there (particularly it was all to set up that conclusion) it takes time to prepare and pull off something like that. Good weapon, but slow to charge and with terrible rate of refire. Effective, but it can’t stand up to the constant dance of Garak, whose psychological weapons are firing constantly, albeit with less of a "punch".

In all, I don't know if I interpreted your Garak as you were intending...but either way it was very interesting and a good showcase for the character. :)
 
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As I saw him, he's a man who made it a point to numb his conscience--as part of his training for the Order. Such is the lesson he tries to tell Julian Bashir in "Our Man Bashir"--that his line of work requires one abandon matters of conscience, in favor of "a sense of professionalism".

That right there points towards evil, in my opinion.

Thus, he is arguable a villain...but due to the person he is--due to his personality--one can't help but like him.

Meh...I don't like "fake."

...There are other universes, though, where I think Garak is through-and-through evil...completely unredeemable.
Well...I'd say those interpretations are...unfair, at best.

Are they? If you're including Treklit, perhaps. But if you're going strictly by canon, I think they're just as valid as any other.

Well...I think we've seen over the course of the series that, at the very least, he lies less and less--at least once the War breaks out.

How do you know he lies less? Or has he just learned his audience and what lies they like best?

Thanks, Nerys! :)

So...you liked it, then?

I thought it was good. :)
 
Interesting piece, Rush. A nice departure from the usual fare, and a well-portrayed Garak. As Nerys says, he's a character who gets interpreted in many ways when it comes to his potential for change, self-awareness, remorse or redemption. Seeing a competent new spin on the issue is always rewarding, given how much I enjoy the character - particularly post-series. :)

Wow--thanks, Nasat! Glad you loved it! :techman:

The opening gets us into Garak’s “voice” right off the bat, and I appreciate how it demonstrates his maddening capacity for avoiding a straightforward approach to anything. Just as a conversation with Garak can’t tie the exchange down to any one form of truth (if any), so his thoughts here flit around never landing on the mark. Partly, I imagine, to hide the vulnerability he simultaneously admits to feeling. He's quite self-acknowledging about the fact that he feels vulnerable - and why - yet he still goes through the motions of obfuscation. So he is indeed lying to himself out of habit – not because he’s truly trying to deceive himself but because lying is what he does. Misdirection is what he does (while also leading people on in multiple ways). He can craft a lie without believing it, but he still loses himself in the game of the word pattern or the thought pattern or the possibilities, and he can spin a pointless meandering self-story that may not go anywhere at all...all to avoid landing on the simple truth even as he acknowledges that truth plainly. Very nice work.
Thanks! :)

It's funny...if you look carefully, he actually contradicts himself when he's discussing his exile to Ezri. At first, he claims that his addiction to the implant was due to Dukat's social torment which amounted to torture...but when Ezri presses him, he defends his pride as a former member of the Order--and denies that that was it.

Oh, and his attempt to drag the conversation into talk of clothing as a pre-emptive means of avoiding/controlling Dax's probes was well played. Dax sees through that, though ;).
Yep. I think Ezri learned a lot in "Afterimage"--her first session with him, when Garak mentioned Tain's methods of punishment, and she asks, "Why didn't you mention that before?" And he weasels out of it.

She's certainly learned to take nothing for granted, with Garak.

Actually, this whole conversation is interesting because Garak’s voice is so dominant. It’s almost strange, given that your Dax is usually so clear and strong, but here it’s less a two-way exchange and more of Garak-featuring-Ezri. I think this is deliberate, yes? What I mean is: Garak’s Garakness makes it harder to cut through to the actual communication taking place. I like the effect; it’s like a representation of the point of the whole piece; trying to find our way through the obfuscation of Garak to get to the heart of the matter, the exchange.
Basically it. The contest required me to center my story on the skeletons a character has in his/her closer. Basically, I knew that, if I was going to have Ezri in the tale, she was therefore going to have to be limited to a catalyst position.

And while I love writing for Ezri, I've been experimenting in some of my "in the works" tales with having her being seen through someone else's eyes.

Because that’s what the heart of any of your stories is, Rush – the exchange of ideas and intent through direct conversation. You always do that well. And here it’s fascinating because that sharp conversation is being blurred somewhat by Garak’s voice (and thoughts) being so powerful and warping how we as readers view the exchange scenes. That’s not a bad thing; as I said, that’s remarkably effective at reinforcing the themes particular to the character. So I’m impressed, particularly if you deliberately aimed to craft that exact effect :techman:. It shows a strong awareness of your own style and how it can be manipulated to tell different stories. Bravo! :)
Thank you, sir! :cool:

There's a nicely effective underplayed moment, where Ezri looks sad that Garak dismisses the idea of accepting the pangs of conscience. It is indeed sad that Garak just doesn't see.
Yep. And I think Ezri, despite her differences with Garak in matters like morality and conscience, sees him in a very sympathetic way.

In "Afterimage", she didn't hold his explosion at her against him. And when he breaks down and confesses his guilt at "betraying" his people--when he grasps her shoulders--the camera cuts to Ezri's reaction...and rather than tense at his actions, or disturbed at his violating her personal space...she looks very sad for him.

(It may have been Nicole de Boer's personal touch for the character--and if so, I think it speaks volumes as to the complexity she adds to her roles.)

Anyhow--I think moments like that in the episode showed how much, despite everything, she cared for him. Perhaps she knows all too well what conflicts swell inside him....

I loved this bit, which I've quoted, all the more so for being less than essential to the main plot:

"...dying for no purpose whatsoever. Defense? Gather your forces until you can strike in a strategic manner! Honor? What good will that do, when you are dead? Renown by your people? Surely your senseless death merely costs them of what they truly require of you—your service!"

It has the perfect tone of frustrated anger and direct, almost exaggerated point-making that Garak uses when he’s snappy and throwing his anti-social mood in someone’s face.
Mm-hmm! Considering how critical he was of Bashir's spy program for (among other things) what he saw as over-exaggerated heroism...I'd wager he'd see a "hopeless battle" scenario with a similar disdain, for similar reasons.

As expected, in the second Dax-Garak conversation, Dax comes through stronger, and she and Garak are now on equal grounds to me, voice-wise. Because we’re starting to get into real exchange here, working underneath Garak's swirling clouds of pointless obfuscation, which have weakened for a while. Truth starts coming through, albeit on a simple, basic level. It’s more the psychological equivalent of honest chit-chat than anything, but with Garak, even that's a breakthrough sometimes.
Interesting point. And I think, in a way, it has to do with Garak being on his home turf--his tailor shop. In the first scene, he was in Ezri's personal kingdom: her counselor's office. He had to lie down--in what he saw as a vulnerable position. He wasn't in control--Ezri was--and his thoughts were more paranoid.

Here, he's comfortably at work...and feels more in control. Thus, ironically, he's somewhat less defensive and tight-lipped.

I think Ezri knew that--hence, her innocent arrival under the pretense of "just wanting to see how you're doing".

The flashback portions demonstrate an interesting and rather unfortunate truth about Garak: He’s a shallow person, for all the depth to his speech and the complex games he plays. He wraps himself in complex shrouds of conversation and wit and games-for-the-sake-of-games because he travels through life so disassociated from anything truly meaningful. And he shouldn't be shallow - it's what he's had to become, what he's warped into. For someone like Garak, simple unimaginative obedience isn't going to cut it - he's not like your "average" Central Command soldier who can find meaning in the Cardassian ideals of stoic performance of duty, obedience and service, etc. There’s something missing for him...and that's both tragic and disturbing. Because here he comes across, in the flashback sections on Terok Nor, as a man making swirls and waves and currents galore in his kitchen sink, not wanting to admit that this isn't the ocean he likes it to be, it's a sink. With not much water left in it at all.
Yep--and he revels in what control he can exert over Dukat--through verbal smackdowns and so on. He seems to live for such things...almost as if it's his own way of staying sane in an intolerable situation.

In his exile, he's no longer in control over his fate. So...he tries to cope by reveling in what moments of control he can obtain. He's aware of Dukat's decided lack of emotional maturity...and exploits it sadistically. But it has rather pathetic motives--find freedom for himself where it doesn't really exist.

So...was Taren’s Klingon ancestry idea something he actually believes in his stubborn Bajoran way or was it all to set up the punch he tried to give at the end? How clever is this guy, or is he indeed just your "simple" tough-as-nails grudge-bearing Bajoran man of the soil? The thing is, while that’s a good weapon he brought to bear on Garak there (particularly it was all to set up that conclusion) it takes time to prepare and pull off something like that. Good weapon, but slow to charge and with terrible rate of refire. Effective, but it can’t stand up to the constant dance of Garak, whose psychological weapons are firing constantly, albeit with less of a "punch".

Well...I think the answer is pretty complicated. He apparently does know a lot about Cardassian history--the Memory Beta article on Hebitians (here) establishes that he's at least right on the "ancient Hebitians looked like Bajorans" thing. Perhaps we can infer that he's an educated man, from that.

As for the "spawned by Klingons" thing...well, it depends on how one looks at it. Somehow Cardassians changed in regards to their facial features. Perhaps he put his own spin on an explanation? Perhaps...it's a narrative he formed in the Resistance, to use should he ever bee captured and left with no more options....

In all, I don't know if I interpreted your Garak as you were intending...but either way it was very interesting and a good showcase for the character. :)
Thanks for reading, my friend! :)
 
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As I saw him, he's a man who made it a point to numb his conscience--as part of his training for the Order. Such is the lesson he tries to tell Julian Bashir in "Our Man Bashir"--that his line of work requires one abandon matters of conscience, in favor of "a sense of professionalism".

That right there points towards evil, in my opinion.

Not particularly--merely doing what is deemed necessary, for the sake of the mission.

Thus, he is arguably a villain...but due to the person he is--due to his personality--one can't help but like him.
Meh...I don't like "fake."

Not "fake". On the contrary--I think, again, many elements of his personality is his own. The best lies are those that are, in some sense, true.

Are they? If you're including Treklit, perhaps. But if you're going strictly by canon, I think they're just as valid as any other.

Oh, I hardly think so. Many a time have we seen him in moments of quiet reflection--sometimes due to Ziyal, who apparently saw more in him than someone nonredeemable (it's possible that Ziyal set him on the path to redemption).

Well...I think we've seen over the course of the series that, at the very least, he lies less and less--at least once the War breaks out.
How do you know he lies less? Or has he just learned his audience and what lies they like best?

Well, "Afterimage" in particular sees him break down and, for once, become honest with himself--in a way he failed to become in "The Wire".

In a sense...Ezri may have inadvertently become his conscience, as Ziyal had been.

But even beyond that--I think we see him, in his personal moments, become less flippant over the years...and more solemn with himself.

But the last season in particular is where we see him at his most reflective--in "Afterimage" on. I suppose this tale of my own is my catalyst for his road to redemption in TrekLit--tying together what we saw in the show, to what we read, later.

Thanks, Nerys! :)

So...you liked it, then?
I thought it was good. :)

Thanks.
 
Suffice it to say I think that Treklit is influenced by AJR's overly romantic view of his own character; he bought his own propaganda. ;)
 
^Whereas...I think, regardless, what we see in TrekLit has roots in what we saw onscreen. And to be honest...I think the actor's interpretations of his/her character as a rule has an effect on how that character comes across on screen....
 
^Well, to be honest...I think Garak, in the series, tried to tell himself--and others--that he wasn't a "good guy", at heart. Note how he responds to Ziyal's death--when Kira notes, "She loved you," Garak sadly replies, "I never understood why."

And there's also his lashing out to Ezri that "You couldn't begin to understand me!"

Garak the character saw conscience and "goodness" as a weakness to his abilities--as he told Bashir in "Our Man Bashir". However...his moments of personal reflection (such as, over Ziyal's death) tell a different story that even he wouldn't dare admit.
 
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