Hi everyone,
I'm taking a break from "Hero" for a moment, but I had this other idea in my head about revising the story "Blooded" which I was working on before "Hero". So I've started writing a revised version and I think it is ready for posting. It's a work in progress, but I hope you like the changes I made.
It's changed considerably since the first version. I decided to combine two story ideas I had since they occurred roughly around the same time.
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BLOODED:
A DARK TERRITORY TALE
USS Kitty Hawk
Private Quarters
2359
Lt. Terrence Shamshuni Glover sank onto his couch, his reserves finally giving way as the adrenaline dissipated. He held his head in his hands, his muscles quivering, as a wave of revulsion overtook him. He clutched his stomach, forcing back the acrid bile burning the back of his throat.
He forced it down and then waited a few moments before he got up and ordered a ginger ale from the replicator. His mother had always used the beverage to calm his upset stomach. He threw back the glass, pleased with the carbonated soda’s sting.
“This is what command is like,” he told the empty room. “This was easy compared to how it was going to be.”
He looked down at his soot covered uniform, with the fire blackened and frayed sleeves. “Piece of cake,” he muttered.
Terrence nearly jumped out of his skin when the door chime sounded. He hid his surprise and his ongoing shock behind a bouncy demeanor.
It evaporated as soon as the door opened. “Susan,” he said, both anxious and relieved. “I was just about to go down to Sickbay to see you.” The Bolian-human hybrid looked hollowed out, her eyes seemed to have receded into her sockets, making her thousand-yard stare more pronounced.
“Well, I’m glad to see that you’re okay,” Glover said, looking her over. The scratches were barely noticeable but the bruises marring her beautiful face would take longer to fade. Also some of her flaxen hair had been seared off. Terrence didn’t care about that. He was just glad she had made it back to him safe. Now he was concerned about how sound she was. “Please, come in.”
Susan didn’t move. She just looked at him. The silence between them lengthened. Terrence’s throat dried, the ginger ale a distant memory. His stomach started to twinge. He really didn’t want to say anything that might get picked up by a passerby, but the lieutenant felt Susan was presenting him with little option. “Listen, Susan, I…”
She turned around abruptly and walked away, leaving Terrence silently watching her wake.
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USS Kitty Hawk
Conference Room
Three weeks before…
“I can’t believe they pulled us off of the front for this,” Lt. Terrence Glover grumbled as the meeting dispersed.
“Yeah, we’re the ass kicking branch, not nursemaids. This is a job for Starfleet Medical.” Lt. Elgon concurred.
“Oh stop it you two,” Lt. Susan Bano chuckled as she stepped between them. She wrapped her arm around Terrence’s waist and gave him a quick tug, before removing her arm and gracefully avoiding Terrence’s lunge.
“You’re such a tease,” Glover said, glancing over his shoulder. The captain seemed to be in a heated, as usual, discussion with the first officer and chief science officer and hadn’t seen their horseplay.
“Now, you two stop it,” the Tiburonian moaned.
“I’m glad we’re getting off the front,” Susan said, as the trio hovered by the door of the conference room. “We are three months past due on our tour of duty anyway.”
“Don’t I know it,” Elgon added. “The engines need a serious overhaul.” Elgon had taken over as assistant chief engineer after Pedro Rojas, Terrence’s best friend, had departed for the Carolina. It was the latest, and most distressing, in a series of shakeups on the ship. First his mentor Banti Awokou had been promoted and taken command of the Fuji. Awokou had taken Terrence’s immediate supervisor, Lt. Weiss, with him, but had left Terrence behind. And then Pedro had dropped the news that he was leaving.
The most solid thing in his world right now was Susan. He didn’t know what he would do without her right now.
“As does most of the ship,” Terrence admitted. Glover had only recently allowed Elgon into his orbit. He had always felt that the man was a bit boorish, though he and Pedro had gotten along fairly well. In fact, both of them had quite a few stories to share about the boisterous engineer. Terrence knew deep down that the Tiburonian was just a substitute for Pedro, and a poor one at that.
“But instead of trucking Kitty Hawk to the nearest starbase their sending us to on this hush hush mission.”
“Well I think it’s fascinating,” Bano replied. “I mean, we know so little about this species.”
“The Alshain,” Glover said the name slowly, the name bringing back memories of his past dealings with the lupanoids. They hadn’t been exactly pleasant. He still marveled at how a simple family excursion turned into a near interstellar incident.
But despite his experiences he knew that Kitty Hawk hadn’t been selected to exploit his ‘reservoir’ of knowledge. Command was doubtlessly interested in enlisting the help of the ship’s senior operations officer, Lt. Kjosco.
He was the only Itrob in Starfleet and his people had been vassals of the Alshain for centuries. It was not a subject Kjosco liked to talk about, and Terrence couldn’t blame him. Even though he was born centuries after the fact, the history of slavery and colonialism that had affected his own people upset him. He could only imagine what it must be like to be living during a time when one’s kind was being exploited and there was little that you could do about it.
Terrence thought of his friend Pell Ojana, and the Bajoran refugee camp where they met, and his heart ached. There was still so much oppression in the galaxy, no matter how brightly the Federation shined its light.
“From the briefing sounds like their Crown Prince just has a bad case of the fleas,” Elgon zinged. Susan rapped her knuckles across his shoulder. “Ouch,” he jumped, rubbing his shoulder. “What was that for?”
“You should take this more seriously Elgon,” Bano admonished. The Tiburonian’s elephantine ears dropped in mock disappointment. Susan ignored him, “His condition is serious enough for their Exarch to make this request. The outcome of this mission could have quadrant-wide repercussions.”
“Every mission has quadrant-wide repercussions,” Glover mumbled, his mind back on that ill-fated family sojourn.
“Not you too Terrence,” Susan sighed. “Seriously, this is a great opportunity to reach out, to help someone in need, and that’s what I joined the Fleet to ultimately do. I didn’t join to fight wars.”
“None of us did,” Terrence said, sounding a bit too defensive even to him. Even though he had little desire to shed blood, he knew a sterling wartime record was a sure path to command. And that was his end goal, to be like his father who was eyeing an admiral’s posting and his mother who was making her way to command on the Adelphi. Terrence wanted to reach it the center chair as soon as possible. “But we didn’t start this war, the Cardassians did, and we have to hold the line. We can’t allow them to run untrammeled over the Alpha Quadrant.”
“Here, here,” Elgon said. “If we beat them badly enough they might become our quasi-allies like the Klingons or at least have the good sense to stay behind their own borders like the Romulans.”
“Wishful thinking,” Glover chuckled mirthlessly.
“Cynical thinking if you ask me,” Bano said, shaking her head reproachfully.
“What are you three still doing in here, dithering around?” Captain Gorik’s stern voice came down on them like a hammer. Terrence’s face heated up with embarrassment and he could see that both Elgon and Susan were blushing.
Glover stepped forward. “Well, sir…”
“Bah, save it,” Gorik waved them out the door. “Get back to your stations. We’ve got a lot of work ahead of us.”
“Aye sir,” they nearly said in unison, and Terrence knew that his compatriots were just as relieved as he was to have incurred little of the captain’s rancor this time.
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I'm taking a break from "Hero" for a moment, but I had this other idea in my head about revising the story "Blooded" which I was working on before "Hero". So I've started writing a revised version and I think it is ready for posting. It's a work in progress, but I hope you like the changes I made.
It's changed considerably since the first version. I decided to combine two story ideas I had since they occurred roughly around the same time.
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BLOODED:
A DARK TERRITORY TALE
USS Kitty Hawk
Private Quarters
2359
Lt. Terrence Shamshuni Glover sank onto his couch, his reserves finally giving way as the adrenaline dissipated. He held his head in his hands, his muscles quivering, as a wave of revulsion overtook him. He clutched his stomach, forcing back the acrid bile burning the back of his throat.
He forced it down and then waited a few moments before he got up and ordered a ginger ale from the replicator. His mother had always used the beverage to calm his upset stomach. He threw back the glass, pleased with the carbonated soda’s sting.
“This is what command is like,” he told the empty room. “This was easy compared to how it was going to be.”
He looked down at his soot covered uniform, with the fire blackened and frayed sleeves. “Piece of cake,” he muttered.
Terrence nearly jumped out of his skin when the door chime sounded. He hid his surprise and his ongoing shock behind a bouncy demeanor.
It evaporated as soon as the door opened. “Susan,” he said, both anxious and relieved. “I was just about to go down to Sickbay to see you.” The Bolian-human hybrid looked hollowed out, her eyes seemed to have receded into her sockets, making her thousand-yard stare more pronounced.
“Well, I’m glad to see that you’re okay,” Glover said, looking her over. The scratches were barely noticeable but the bruises marring her beautiful face would take longer to fade. Also some of her flaxen hair had been seared off. Terrence didn’t care about that. He was just glad she had made it back to him safe. Now he was concerned about how sound she was. “Please, come in.”
Susan didn’t move. She just looked at him. The silence between them lengthened. Terrence’s throat dried, the ginger ale a distant memory. His stomach started to twinge. He really didn’t want to say anything that might get picked up by a passerby, but the lieutenant felt Susan was presenting him with little option. “Listen, Susan, I…”
She turned around abruptly and walked away, leaving Terrence silently watching her wake.
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USS Kitty Hawk
Conference Room
Three weeks before…
“I can’t believe they pulled us off of the front for this,” Lt. Terrence Glover grumbled as the meeting dispersed.
“Yeah, we’re the ass kicking branch, not nursemaids. This is a job for Starfleet Medical.” Lt. Elgon concurred.
“Oh stop it you two,” Lt. Susan Bano chuckled as she stepped between them. She wrapped her arm around Terrence’s waist and gave him a quick tug, before removing her arm and gracefully avoiding Terrence’s lunge.
“You’re such a tease,” Glover said, glancing over his shoulder. The captain seemed to be in a heated, as usual, discussion with the first officer and chief science officer and hadn’t seen their horseplay.
“Now, you two stop it,” the Tiburonian moaned.
“I’m glad we’re getting off the front,” Susan said, as the trio hovered by the door of the conference room. “We are three months past due on our tour of duty anyway.”
“Don’t I know it,” Elgon added. “The engines need a serious overhaul.” Elgon had taken over as assistant chief engineer after Pedro Rojas, Terrence’s best friend, had departed for the Carolina. It was the latest, and most distressing, in a series of shakeups on the ship. First his mentor Banti Awokou had been promoted and taken command of the Fuji. Awokou had taken Terrence’s immediate supervisor, Lt. Weiss, with him, but had left Terrence behind. And then Pedro had dropped the news that he was leaving.
The most solid thing in his world right now was Susan. He didn’t know what he would do without her right now.
“As does most of the ship,” Terrence admitted. Glover had only recently allowed Elgon into his orbit. He had always felt that the man was a bit boorish, though he and Pedro had gotten along fairly well. In fact, both of them had quite a few stories to share about the boisterous engineer. Terrence knew deep down that the Tiburonian was just a substitute for Pedro, and a poor one at that.
“But instead of trucking Kitty Hawk to the nearest starbase their sending us to on this hush hush mission.”
“Well I think it’s fascinating,” Bano replied. “I mean, we know so little about this species.”
“The Alshain,” Glover said the name slowly, the name bringing back memories of his past dealings with the lupanoids. They hadn’t been exactly pleasant. He still marveled at how a simple family excursion turned into a near interstellar incident.
But despite his experiences he knew that Kitty Hawk hadn’t been selected to exploit his ‘reservoir’ of knowledge. Command was doubtlessly interested in enlisting the help of the ship’s senior operations officer, Lt. Kjosco.
He was the only Itrob in Starfleet and his people had been vassals of the Alshain for centuries. It was not a subject Kjosco liked to talk about, and Terrence couldn’t blame him. Even though he was born centuries after the fact, the history of slavery and colonialism that had affected his own people upset him. He could only imagine what it must be like to be living during a time when one’s kind was being exploited and there was little that you could do about it.
Terrence thought of his friend Pell Ojana, and the Bajoran refugee camp where they met, and his heart ached. There was still so much oppression in the galaxy, no matter how brightly the Federation shined its light.
“From the briefing sounds like their Crown Prince just has a bad case of the fleas,” Elgon zinged. Susan rapped her knuckles across his shoulder. “Ouch,” he jumped, rubbing his shoulder. “What was that for?”
“You should take this more seriously Elgon,” Bano admonished. The Tiburonian’s elephantine ears dropped in mock disappointment. Susan ignored him, “His condition is serious enough for their Exarch to make this request. The outcome of this mission could have quadrant-wide repercussions.”
“Every mission has quadrant-wide repercussions,” Glover mumbled, his mind back on that ill-fated family sojourn.
“Not you too Terrence,” Susan sighed. “Seriously, this is a great opportunity to reach out, to help someone in need, and that’s what I joined the Fleet to ultimately do. I didn’t join to fight wars.”
“None of us did,” Terrence said, sounding a bit too defensive even to him. Even though he had little desire to shed blood, he knew a sterling wartime record was a sure path to command. And that was his end goal, to be like his father who was eyeing an admiral’s posting and his mother who was making her way to command on the Adelphi. Terrence wanted to reach it the center chair as soon as possible. “But we didn’t start this war, the Cardassians did, and we have to hold the line. We can’t allow them to run untrammeled over the Alpha Quadrant.”
“Here, here,” Elgon said. “If we beat them badly enough they might become our quasi-allies like the Klingons or at least have the good sense to stay behind their own borders like the Romulans.”
“Wishful thinking,” Glover chuckled mirthlessly.
“Cynical thinking if you ask me,” Bano said, shaking her head reproachfully.
“What are you three still doing in here, dithering around?” Captain Gorik’s stern voice came down on them like a hammer. Terrence’s face heated up with embarrassment and he could see that both Elgon and Susan were blushing.
Glover stepped forward. “Well, sir…”
“Bah, save it,” Gorik waved them out the door. “Get back to your stations. We’ve got a lot of work ahead of us.”
“Aye sir,” they nearly said in unison, and Terrence knew that his compatriots were just as relieved as he was to have incurred little of the captain’s rancor this time.
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