I was excited to watch this episode after hearing the hype. I also had to wash out the bad taste of "Assignment: Earth".
As a teen, I thought this time capsule into 1968 motif was oh-so-cool. But that's the late-1980s for ya. A few years later, it's all glossy fluff filled with amazing coincidences, just the right timings, and straining the all-important suspense of disbelief factor way too much.
Gary's really a bit of weak character, complete with magic wand that does
anything on cue - proving once and for all that cheap scripting didn't start in the 21st century, but as a pilot to show what COULD happen... except it's all humdrum at best. Spock saying how everything that's happened at the end of the story is what was expected to and how Gary and co will have great adventures puts a massive cold shower on everything up to that point, which honestly wasn't much.
But back to "City", and not the good Blake's 7 one:
Okay, McCoy starts acting crazy. "Killers, you're all killers!" I thought it was going to be something like a triggered memory, he believed he was someone else. Nope. This drug just makes him paranoid.
Which was okay, but not great. DeForrest acts his socks off, though.
They beam down to the planet to get him and encounter Roman columns sticking out of the ground. I just rolled with it. This is supposed to give the sense of something weird and otherworldly. I guess. But it turns out that the set director confused "runes" with "ruins" and I'm guessing he went with ancient Earth city ruins.
Probably to save on budget (despite it still being fairly formidable). The whole episode has that feel of "backlot cost-saver" to it.
The "Guardian of Forever" is introduced in such a casual way and shows a TV of Earth's past, which is really a portal. Interesting. I liked that. But I wondered, why show only human past? Why not the past of this particular location, or of Vulcan past?
That's been a bug for me for decades as well, a lot of sci-fi panders for ratings yet sci-fi is supposed to be seeing different things. Maybe the Guardian senses the beings gawking it and shows them what they want to see?
1930s Earth looked very much like a TV set.
"My friend is obviously...Chinese. And his ears...they got caught in a rice picker." I can imagine a person from the the 60s trying to convince someone else that Spock's alien look is really just his Chinese features, but I found it hard to believe a human from the 23rd century would come up with a like like that. Not just the Chinese thing, but also the rice picker explanation.
That line was always horrid and on so many levels. The 23rd century also had Asian diversity, so Kirk trying to play "fish out of water" (See STIV TVH for more on that, where it actually worked for a while!) to explain Spock really flounders. Conflating eyes with ears was just... stupid. American stereotypes circa 1930 might accord the rice picking line, but not all in the audience will pick up on the temporal deviation to that extent. (It's not too unlike listening to a song sung as third person and perceiving it as first person...) The fact it's brought about due to the ear conflation just creates a double-whammy.
Even trying to view this by 60s standards I found it hard to believe in the coincidence that Kirk and Spock would encounter a random woman who just so happens makes a speech that predicts the future of Starfleet and the Federation. It's like, c'mon.
It's hokum. Like Cochrtane in STFC saying how they're all on some star trek only not quite as bad.
Worse, the pacifist who has to die so peace could be achieved - the episode is trying to sell a heck of an irony but it doesn't really work.
I didn't believe in Kirk's love or feelings for Edit AT ALL. I myself didn't like her. The way she spoke, she was like a caricature.
Bones little moments with Edith had more feeling that between her and Kirk.
After the whole thing was done I felt like, "that was it?"
For the 1960s, time travel and ironic parodoxies as plots were flocked to, even if the character drama was subpar. They were more novel, hence this story gaining cult-favored status.
So far I'm starting to greatly dislike the episodes where they go back to Earth's past just so the producers don't have to come up with any alien worlds or peoples.
It was a cost-saving measure, overused in season 2... It's not a bad idea but this sort of thing wouldn't really be properly exploited until a certain 1990s "Sliders" came about. Biological patterning is not going to be similar between species; even if there is for sentience, the development of it can still take massive turns and not be a parallel to Earth. Certainly not in readily-recognizable forms. At least they had starship captains forgetting communicators and books or offering ideas, which then led to a parallel-Earth scenario... but even then...
The original story by Harlan Ellison and the space drugs and firing squad is definitely interesting, and the giant beings being the actual Guardians would have made the episode so much better. The latter, not the space drug dealing and firing squad.
If they had made the character of Edith Keeler more subtle with her optimism, cast a different actress, developed the romance between her and Kirk better, this could have been a much better episode. I've seen very little of Kirk's romances, but so far the only shipping that seems plausible is between him and Saavik.
Joan Collins was passable, but she hit her mark in a certain soap opera a decade or so later... really worked well alongside Kate O'Mara... I suspect Joan relished and preferred more edgy roles than optimist types.
Like this one:
Now I understand why "Dynasty" was so popular. Two actors who really sell these roles with aplomb... good grief, they made actual soap opera
entertaining.
