1) That is just as unrealistic as having them speak in modern English vernacular.
2) Using prescriptivist English in a context in which real people would not plausibly speak that way risks alienating a large portion of your audience.
n fact, the most beloved characters who do speak in this manner are ones who are coded as neuroatypical -- Data, Spock, Seven of Nine, etc.
Please. For one, the point is to nod at the future speak, not to engage in classism. I also love the fraks of nuBSG and the Belter language of The Expanse. What that got to do with putting on a Transatlantic accent a la Katherine Hepburn.3) The idea that speaking in formal, prescriptivist English is "heightened" or "elevated" is a classist idea, and Star Trek should not support the idea that some varieties of English are "better" or "superior" to others if Star Trek wants to support the ideals of equality and diversity.
Sci said:1) That is just as unrealistic as having them speak in modern English vernacular.
No it isn’t.
Because again, you’re nodding to the future. You’re making an attempt.
2) Using prescriptivist English in a context in which real people would not plausibly speak that way risks alienating a large portion of your audience.
Those people are not watching sci-fi.
This is the same argument made before nerds conquered the world.
And are those that are most beloved. But you’re going too far with it. People love the way Picard or Kirk too speak.
3) The idea that speaking in formal, prescriptivist English is "heightened" or "elevated" is a classist idea, and Star Trek should not support the idea that some varieties of English are "better" or "superior" to others if Star Trek wants to support the ideals of equality and diversity.
Please. For one, the point is to nod at the future speak, not to engage in classism. I also love the fraks of nuBSG and the Belter language of The Expanse. What that got to do with putting on a Transatlantic accent a la Katherine Hepburn.
For another, classist is thinking that poor people wouldn’t like to use fancier words if they’d had access to a better education.
I think that TOS did a good job with men's formal wear - and with various levels of futuristic suits, from the simple outfit of Arne Darvin to a slightly more elaborate suit for Nils Baris to the outfits worn by Sarek's aides in "Journey to Babel" up to Sarek's own suits to the suit worn by Commissioner Ferris (and Garth of Izar). A nice group of variations on a theme that compares pretty well to the variation in men's formal suits today.There's ultimately no right answer on this question of how stylized you want to be, because what looks "futuristic" one decade might look like a ridiculous throwback the next.
I will say that in general, I think Babylon 5's depiction of future fashion worked better than Star Trek's -- but not always! Their depiction of formal wear (particularly 23rd Century men's formal wear -- combining the collars of Zhongshan suits with the Western dress shirts, adding a mildly stylized collar to the business jacket, with an occasional necktie) usually works a lot better than Berman-era Star Trek's depiction of the same, combining a plausible evolution of fashion (combining Western and Asian influences) without coming across as so stylized as to register as camp. But their depiction of future men's casual wear often comes across as cringe today! So even a show that manages to find a good balance in depicting one type of future fashion can come across as very gouche just a few decades later.
Yes, it is. For the point you conceded to in your next paragraph. I’m thinking you just like to argue?No, using prescriptivist English is just as unrealistic as using contemporary vernacular. 24th Century English will absolutely not be like contemporary prescriptivist English or modern varieties of vernacular English; using either one is no more realistic than the other.
Okay, make your case for it. I’m open. Are you?Okay, but why not have everyone speak in African-American Vernacular English, then? That would be just as much an act of "nodding to the future."
?? You don’t think fans can emotionally connect to people who are not like them? You think they’d register different people as fake when they’re choosing to watch a science fiction television program set hundreds of years in the future with latex forehead aliens? You’re not giving viewers enough credit. TOS was a step ahead from the sci-fi of its time because Trek gave viewers more credit.Says who? People want to emotionally connect with characters. They don't want characters that register to them as fake.
1) Picard has a character-based reason for using prescriptivist English -- he's a stuffy, formal, emotionally-distant guy! And his entire character arc is based around him gradually learning to let that go and let people in. And as he does, his language becomes more informal over the course of TNG and now PIC.
Yes, and some are more nuanced and complex than others. Wouldn’t the world be a better place if we all knew every last one and could code-switch to our hearts delight instead of that being the privilege of the few?No, classism is thinking that there is a such thing as "fancier" words. There isn't. There are just words.
I'm the opposite. Put someone in something outlandish and I'm rolling my eyes if it doesn't fit the narrative.But to put sometime in a suit…I’m immediately taken out of the narrative and rolling my eyes.
Sci said:24th Century English will absolutely not be like contemporary prescriptivist English or modern varieties of vernacular English; using either one is no more realistic than the other.
Yes, it is.
For the point you conceded to in your next paragraph. I’m thinking you just like to argue?
Okay, but why not have everyone speak in African-American Vernacular English, then? That would be just as much an act of "nodding to the future."
Okay, make your case for it. I’m open. Are you?
?? You don’t think fans can emotionally connect to people who are not like them?
You think they’d register different people as fake when they’re choosing to watch a science fiction television program set hundreds of years in the future with latex forehead aliens?
You’re not giving viewers enough credit. TOS was a step ahead from the sci-fi of its time because Trek gave viewers more credit.
No, classism is thinking that there is a such thing as "fancier" words. There isn't. There are just words.
Yes, and some are more nuanced and complex than others.
Wouldn’t the world be a better place if we all knew every last one and could code-switch to our hearts delight instead of that being the privilege of the few?
Yes,No, it is not. There is no more and no less realism in using any form of contemporary English in a fictional 24th Century setting. The use of any form of contemporary English, even prescriptivist English, is unrealistic.
Your first word was “okay.”1) I did not "concede" any point.
You’re hung up on all the baggage that comes along with “prescriptivist” English. My point is in creating something that harmonizes with everything else going on to fit the concept the series. Future sets, future ships, future clothes, future characters, future date…not trying for future lingo is incongruous, and that’s on you, in my humble opinion.2) I am asking you to break out of the mindset that holds that prescriptivist English is somehow "better" than other forms of English and out of the mindset that using prescriptivist English in a fictional future setting is somehow more "realistic" than using other forms of English.
The only character on TOS who only used prescriptivist English was Spock. The rest used forms of non-prescriptivist English.
But they did switch time to time. You’re arguing that they compound their shortcomings in doing so more often by prescribing, by institutionalizing, contemporary vernacular. Or, you know, they could get more creative and be more dazzling with every form of language. They do so with ships and costumes, why not play with language?That's the point though -- so few characters on Berman-era Star Trek even code switch! So many just speak as though the idea of vernacular and slang and alternate dialects have just disappeared.
I won't shame you for it, but I think the classic Tie look is bad design.
Modern Clip-On Ties should've replaced all sales of traditional wrap around your neck ties, but sadly they haven't.
Too many people cling onto traditional ties.
Yeah, I thought the clothes looked a little silly in Alien, but they’re supposed to look that way. Alien is horror; they weren’t going for realistic. They were going for atmospheric. Just a bunch of blue collar truckers hauling ore here to there. Christ, look at the technology they’re using. The phone I’m writing this on is more sophisticated. But the baseball caps and the sad white tees hurts said these were sad people…about to be murdered by a highly sophisticated genetically engineered psychosexual nightmare of a super weapon. Serenity is another of these. The idea is space western more than sci-fi.Has anyone ever watched the movie Alien only to have their suspension of disbelief shattered because the crew of the Nostromo wear t-shirts and baseball caps?
On the other hand, has anyone ever watched the 1980s Flash Gordon movie and had their suspension of belief shattered because everybody looks so fucking stupid?
For me, it’s no to the former. The performances of the cast and the story itself mean it took me a few watches to even look at what they are wearing. In the latter however… it’s difficult to believe that Flash Gordon was released in the same year as The Empire Strikes Back.
Bad space clothes date sci-fi terribly. Alien… never gonna date. 42 year old movie and still looks great. Flash Gordon looked stupid in the year it came out and it still looks stupid now.
Star Wars looks great in a lot of ways, but it is space fantasy, per its own creator and the guy who approved every costume. I’d love for Trek look more Wars costume wise in some ways (I mean, the JJ movies already do, probably DSC too) but you want to weave that stuff in where appropriate, not flat copy and paste, because it’s not really fully appropriate.Did not realise that was the same year as Empire. That is surprising. On the other hand as I mentioned a while back, I think Star Wars get the balance about right with clothes
It's ugly and uncomfortable.Meh. Fashions change. I have no idea what people will wear in the 24th century. Why not what we see in TNG?
Yes,it is. Not giving a thought to the future setting is more unrealistic than doing so.
Your first word was “okay.”
You’re hung up on all the baggage that comes along with “prescriptivist” English. My point is in creating something that harmonizes with everything else going on to fit the concept the series.
Future sets, future ships, future clothes, future characters, future date…not trying for future lingo is incongruous,
Nah. There’s some colloquialisms in the dialogue as with any show, but they’re not speaking like people on the street or on a naval vessel. Ask any sailor.
They do so with ships and costumes, why not play with language?
i think you’re assumptions are patronizing and wrong. Sci-fi audiences go to watch sci-fi. They’re not going to be immediately alienated. It’s about execution.Making a conscious decision to use dialogue that won't alienate most of the audience is not "not giving a thought to the future setting."
“Whatever.”"Okay" can just mean, "I hear you." It is not a concession.
No more unrealistic than the sets and ships and costumes and aliens…yet they’re all there working in concert to create the illusion. But you’re drawing the line here at the language. In my humble opinion, that’s on you. But to each their own.Using prescriptivist English exclusively for all your characters does not "harmonize" with anything. It's an unrealistic depiction of human speech that ignores how language actually functions between real people.
And that’s okay with you, ceding that territory to other series? It’s not with me. No reason Trek can’t make more of an effort, and do it better and to more popular success than others.Contemporary prescriptivist English is not "future lingo." If you want your space opera to make a greater effort at depicting how language evolves in the future, then a show like The Expanse or even Firefly 20 years ago does a better job of it than Star Trek.
Because JJ was a Star Wars fan. And 2 of the 3 sucked, and the one that didn’t only worked when you didn’t think to hard about the billions of people dying left and right and the murder that called it off.As I have said several times before, when you use prescriptivist language exclusively or almost exclusively, without a character-based motivation for doing so, you signal to your audience that these are not emotionally realistic characters and you alienate your audience base. There is a reason that one of the first things to go in the version of Star Trek that brought the franchise back from the dead, the 2009 film, was prescriptivist formal English.
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