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Captain Kirk and the HMS Truculent - An Alternative Reality Story

Once again, a fantastic alternate take on the Trek universe. :techman: I can't wait to meet this universe's Dr. McCoy, and see what kind of saw-bones the Royal Star Navy has produced.

Touching bits there with the old surgeon bemoaning the loss of his beloved captain, as well as his own dwindling skills. Kirk certainly has inherited a ship with lots of baggage.
 
Continually interesting stuff! One correction:
This was at his behest, not mine – but I understand his reasons. If you would like to plan a going away event . . . after Captain Pike’s memorial service, of course, that would be very appropriate.

Captain April, right?
 
Continually interesting stuff! One correction:
This was at his behest, not mine – but I understand his reasons. If you would like to plan a going away event . . . after Captain Pike’s memorial service, of course, that would be very appropriate.
Captain April, right?

Yes - good catch, thanks! I've done that several times in the draft - obviously I missed that one.
 
E.B. 15 July 2265
Vega III

St. James Medical Center
Churchill By The Sea
1005 local time

"Mrs. Albritton, I need you to take a deep breath and hold it, okay? You might feel a slight pinch."

The fiftyish woman with mousy brown hair that was tending toward gray, squeezed her eyes tightly shut and took in a deep breath.

"All set?" asked the physician.

The woman nodded, her face contorted in a comical expression.

"Relax, my dear. All finished."

Mrs. Albritton blew out her pent-up breath and blinked her eyes open tentatively as if expecting a trick.

Leonard H. McCoy, M.D., R.C.S. grinned and held up a small silver cylinder. "Good news! You have a very ordinary cyst - no tumor, no cancer." He produced a pressure syringe and inserted a vial. Pressing it against her forearm, he continued. "This will take care of the cyst for you. By the time you get home and can put a kettle on for tea, you'll be as fit as a fiddle."

The rotund woman's face broke into a grateful smile. "Oh, thank you, Dr. McCoy! I have worried so about this - I was afraid . . ."

"Now, now," said McCoy, soothingly, "you let me do the worryin', y'hear?" McCoy's communicator began to vibrate in the pocket of his labcoat. "You can get dressed. The nurse will be along to put a dressing on the biopsy site. If you'll excuse me, I need to take this call."

McCoy stepped out of the treatment room into the corridor. The communicator continued to buzz insistently.

"Hold your damn horses," he muttered as he finally withdrew the communicator and flipped it open.

"Chloe - what in blazes is so all-fired important? I'm in the middle of my rounds!"

McCoy heard a chuckle on the other end. Chloe Davis, R.N., P.A. was used to the physician's gruff demeanor.

"It's not every day you get a call over sub-space, Doctor. Of course, if you want me to take a message . . ."

"Sub-space?" asked McCoy, surprised. "Who the hell? . . ."

"They didn't say, except that it was of a private nature and urgent. My bet is on a jealous husband."

McCoy snorted. "If I could only be so lucky. Where can I take it?"

"There's a comm booth down the hall from you, outside ICU. I'll route it there."

* * *

McCoy stared at the blank view-screen of the comm booth with a mix of suspicion and dread. There were really only two possibilities for someone calling from off-planet - either something had happened to his estranged daughter, Joanna, or . . .

He keyed in his personal code and waited as his reflection stared back from the still blank screen. Leonard McCoy wasn't exactly handsome - but his face conveyed character. It was a face that could shift fluidly from compassion, to contempt, even to warmth with remarkable speed. Right now, the face looked vaguely worried.

The words, "Stand-By - Subspace Channel Connection Confirmed - Access Code Accepted," appeared on the screen. A moment later, a familiar face appeared. A surprised eyebrow shot up on McCoy's forehead.

Captain James T. Kirk grinned. "Hello Bones. Long time, no see."

McCoy nodded, his expression guarded. "Jim - it's been what? A year?"

"More like fourteen months."

"Something must be wrong with the transmission - those look like Captain's tabs on your shoulder."

"At least there's nothing wrong with your eyes," said Kirk with a chuckle, "I just received the promotion a couple of days ago. I'm the new C.O. of the Truculent."

"Congratulations," said McCoy his tone belying his words. "What do you want, Jim?" he asked, knowing the answer.

Kirk's face became more serious. "I need a CMO, Bones. Dr. Piper is retiring . . . I know it's a lot to ask, but . . ."

"Damn right, it's a lot to ask!" interrupted McCoy with heat. "I'm out of the RSF, Jim. I resigned my commission after the Enterprize got blown all to hell. Here, at least, most of my patients are in one piece when I see them."

Kirk's gaze didn't falter. "You didn't resign - you were placed on reserve status. As of now, that status is revoked. Someone will contact you about . . ."

"You can't do that!" roared McCoy.

"I can and I have, Doctor," replied Kirk, coldly. "As I was saying, someone will contact you about transport to the Arcturus system. You've got one week to get here - we ship out in ten days. Sorry for the short notice."

"Sorry? You bastard . . ."

"Good to see you too, Bones. Oh, and don't try to go AWOL. I'd hate for you to be clamped in irons when you arrive. See you in seven days - Kirk, out."

McCoy stared at the blank view screen, incredulous. Finally, he blinked like a man waking from a bad dream. He stood and exited the comm booth and stood in the corridor for a moment.

"God-damn! God-damn Son-of-a-bitch!" he thundered. A young nurses aide sidled past him, staring with wide eyes.

"What the hell are you staring at? Get to work!" he groused as he stormed down the corridor.

* * *

E.B. 16 July 2265
HMS Truculent
500 Thousand kilometers from Arcturus

Forward Torpedo Bay
1139 hours


Captain Kirk closed the Ship Master's Manual and turned to gaze at the assembled officers and crew that crowded into the torpedo room. Most of the crew had listened to the memorial service for Captain April over the ship's P.A. system.

"We now commend the body of Captain Sir Robert April to the stars. May God rest his soul."

A chief and a petty officer removed the Union Jack from the metal casket while a torpedoman loaded the casket into tube one.

"Attention!" called the Captain. The gathered officers and crew stood ramrod straight as Lt. Scott began to play "Amazing Grace" on the bagpipes. Once the ancient hymn ended, Kirk ordered, "Fire one."

Propelled by an electro-magnetic charge, the casket streaked toward the raging inferno of Arcturus.

"Detail, dismissed," ordered Lt. Commander Spock. He and the Captain lingered as the throng departed the torpedo bay.

Kirk turned to Spock. "Thank you for giving the eulogy, Mr. Spock. I think Captain April would have liked what you said."

A ghost of a smile formed on Spock's face. "My paternal grandmother always hoped I would become a Rabbi." The smile faded. "Perhaps that's a path I can still follow."

"Don't forget, Mr. Spock - you agreed to give me thirty days."

Spock nodded. "True, though I have to say - you play a most unorthodox game of chess." The two made their way out of the torpedo room.

"I won, didn't I?" pointed out Kirk.

"Only after I agreed to a third game," rebutted Spock. He stopped and gave Kirk an appraising look. "I must confess, Captain - you're something of a puzzle to me. Why did you press so hard for me to stay on?"

Kirk also stopped and paused in thought. "To be honest, I'm not entirely sure. Part of it is that you have managed to hold the ship and the crew together. That impresses and intrigues me. You have qualities that shouldn't go to waste, Commander."

Spock shook his head. "My 'qualities,' as you put it, don't seem to be enough to rate further promotion."

A smirk crossed Kirk's face and he began walking. "Things can change, Commander. Don't give up just yet."

"Captain - is it your habit to 'tilt at windmills?'"

"Not exactly, Mr. Spock. I simply do not believe in lost causes and I don't like to lose."

* * *
E.B. 22 July 2265
HMS Truculent

Hangar Bay
1346 hours


Captain Kirk and Lt. Commander Spock watched Lt. Leonard McCoy, M.D. make his way off the Linx on somewhat unsteady legs. McCoy turned to Warrant Officer Franklin, the Linx Pilot.

"Sorry about that, Mr. Franklin - I'll get it cleaned up."

Franklin shook his head. "It happens, sir. The hangar crew will take care of it."

McCoy turned back and began to move across the metal grating to the hatchway. Kirk noticed that the doctor looked rather pale.

"Damn hot-shot pilots," muttered McCoy before spying Kirk. His eyes blazed as he caught sight of the Captain.

"Oh, there you are! I hope you're happy with yourself, Captain! Next time, why not save the call and just have someone throw a bag over my head in an alley!"

Kirk ignored the jibe. "Lt. Commander Jacob Spock, I'd like you to meet Dr. Leonard McCoy - our new Chief Medical Officer."

McCoy was still fuming but he stuck out his hand towards Spock. "Interesting name - is it short for something else?"

Spock returned the handshake. "No, 'Jacob' is as long as it gets," he replied with a straight face.

McCoy blinked, "Huh? That's not what I . . ."

"Welcome aboard, Doctor," said Kirk, stifling a grin. "You can badger our First Officer later - why don't I take you to your quarters?"

"Later," said McCoy, "First, show me Sickbay. Hopefully, they've upgraded the medical equipment on these buckets."

"I'm sure you will find the leeches very fresh," remarked Spock, dryly.

"Great - a comedian!" groused McCoy. "Maybe if you ever have third degree plasma burns or a piece of tritanium stuck in your head, you'll have more appreciation for a properly equipped medical facility!"

"Gentlemen . . ." Kirk was smiling but their was a hint of warning in his voice. "Let's not start off on the wrong foot."

"He started it," mumbled McCoy as he trailed Kirk and Spock into the corridor.

* * *
 
Oh, that was awesome! Especially McCoy's initial reaction to being 'reactivated' and Spock's crack about the leaches. :lol: Very well done.

There's an enormous potential in this universe of yours. One wonders, though, if the Royal Star Navy has stumbled across the Klingons or the Romulans yet? It's an interesting angle to think about. Rather than the Federation, they'd be dealing with an expansionist human empire.

Heck, I don't know if those races even exist in this universe.
 
Ah, the contentious Spock/Bones relationship appears to cross universes. This was fun to read and I'm sure it's never going to be smooth sailing for these two guys.
 
At first I just skimmed through this, now I'm hooked on the friggin' thing.
I hadn't expected this alternate take to interest me very much when I started out...but it's so well written and cleanly executed I couldn't help myself. Keep pumping out those chapters!
 
Been sick with a cold so I'm only just now getting caught up on my reading. I enjoy how you're portraying Bones here--he's as irascible as he was in the original series! I also like how you've kept the Spock/Bones rivalry going--it works and works well!
 
By George man, I do think you have.

Seriously, that was ... beautiful ... the dialogue fit, but even the narrative held a distinctly British tone throughout. I loved the steampunk influence, and adding a needed grittiness to the Trek universe, something I have felt is distinctly lacking from not only most fan-fics, but the real presentation as well.

In all honesty, I'm at a loss for words to describe this except taut and refreshing, and a delightful change of course from the traditional concept of Trek.

Now, get back to your keyboard and give me some more, mister.
 
Time to revisit this strange little tale . . .


E.B. 22 July 2265
HMS Truculent
Captain's quarters - 2230 hours

En route to the Vega System

“Captain’s log – 23 July 2265, James T. Kirk recording. Truculent is finally underway and en route to rendezvous with the relief convoy destined for the Vega system. Lt. Scott and his engineers are to be commended for their diligent work in getting the ship underway, though I suspect the Chief Engineer is not thinking kind thoughts toward me. Be that as it may, all major systems are functioning – most important being the space warp drive. At our current warp factor, we should catch up with the convoy in another 36 hours.”

Kirk paused and glanced at the noteboard on his desk, which contained Lt. Uhura’s thorough analysis of Fleet intel.

“If Lt. Uhura’s assessment is correct, and I suspect it is, there’s a very good chance we will run into trouble before we get the convoy to Vega III. Those fat, slow freighters loaded with fuel, medical supplies and food make a very tempting target. It’s our job to ensure the raiders are dissuaded.”

He closed and saved his log entry and picked up the noteboard. On the screen was the image of an ex-Royal Star Fleet captain – Ronald Tracey. Tracey was the former commanding officer of HMS Exeter, a highly decorated officer and cunning tactician. He likely would have achieved flag rank, but his sympathies with the separatist movement and criticism of the crown ultimately cost him his command. Rather than languish in a desk-job on a backwater planet, he had resigned his commission and simply disappeared. Tracey came out of self-imposed exile shortly after Black Day, commanding a squadron of raiders that preyed on merchant vessels.

He thought back to the one time he met Captain Tracey. Kirk had been a wet-behind-the-ears midshipman when he attended a lecture by Tracey on battle-group tactics. The veteran Captain had been eloquent and his thesis brilliant. Kirk had been greatly impressed by the thin-faced Captain with the commanding baritone voice. What had caused the highly decorated officer to turn his back on Queen and empire? Kirk had no idea.

Kirk did not relish having to fight a former RSF officer, particularly one as crafty as Tracey, but he would do what was necessary to safeguard the convoy. His respect for Tracey’s tactical acumen was tempered by his disgust with the man’s decision to turn rogue. He tossed the noteboard on his desk, the brooding image of Ronald Tracey gazing up with eyes full of intense malevolence.

* * *

E.B. 23 July 2265
HMS Truculent - En route to the Vega System
Captain’s quarters - 0622 hours

Captain Kirk jutted his jaw and turned his head slightly as he applied his shaving razor to the last bit of shaving soap along his neck-line. He winced as he accidentally nicked himself and frowned as he regarded the speck of blood in the mirror. Annoyed, he wiped the remaining soap from his face and blotted at his self-inflicted wound with a towel.

He considered slipping on his tropical white tunic, but decided to wait, lest he drip blood on the front of his uniform. Throwing the towel around his neck, he stepped into the outer room of his quarters, only to find Dr. McCoy seated at the small table, eating breakfast - Kirk’s breakfast.

“Enjoying yourself, Doctor?” Kirk asked, dryly.

“Hope you don’t mind, I let myself in. I saw this sitting here and figured it was just getting cold. No point in it going to waste. Here, I saved you some toast.” McCoy gestured to a half-slice of wheat toast left on the tray.

“Very generous of you, Bones,” he said, sarcastically.

McCoy pointed a fork at Kirk. “I’m doing you a favor, Jim. Have you seen your cholesterol numbers?”

“Not lately,” he answered while pouring coffee into a china cup.

“Well I have! And your blood pressure numbers are through the roof.”

Kirk took a sip of coffee. “So give me a pill. Isn’t that your job?”

McCoy snorted. “Pills, Hell! If you people would just eat right, exercise a little and lay off the booze and tobacco, I could downsize the pharmacy by two-thirds and have room for some up-to-date surgical equipment, not the relics from the Inquisition we have now!”

“I’ll keep that in mind, Doctor.”

McCoy sighed and sat back in his chair. A frustrated expression came over his face.

“Jim, just what in blazes are we doing out here?”

“I’m drinking coffee; you’re eating my breakfast while lecturing me on my poor eating habits.”

“Dammit, Jim – be serious for a minute! I’m talking about the Royal Fleet, this ship – what’s the point of all this galavanting around the galaxy like tin toys in a bathtub? Our home planet is dead and gone. For God’s sake, Jim, most of the colony worlds are barely hanging on. All the money spent on ‘showing the flag’ could be better spent elsewhere.”

“I’m sure the Sino-Japanese Alliance would be happy to beat their swords into ploughshares, Bones. Why don’t you contact Emperor Chang and you can clear up the whole matter with him. And while you’re at it, maybe you could do something about the mysterious aliens that wiped out the Alberta IV colony last year . . . or the raiders that are stealing the very supplies needed by the colonies you mentioned.” Kirk regarded his old friend and shook his head. “You’re a fine surgeon, Bones, but sometimes you’re dangerously naive.”

“Am I? What about you, Captain Kirk? Have you taken a single moment to grieve your losses? What would Carol Marcus say about how you’re driving yourself?”

Kirk glared at McCoy silently for several moments. When he spoke again, his voice was tight with barely restrained anger.

“You’re very close to crossing a line, Doctor. I suggest you back away.”

McCoy glared back. “Don’t forget I lost Joanne on Black Day! Even though we hadn’t spoken a civil word to each other in three years, I still loved her. I know what you’re feeling . . .”

Kirk shook his head. “No, Bones - you don’t know. Everyone is different. Every loss – personal.”

“Bull!” McCoy snapped. “I may not know everyone else on this god-forsaken bucket of rust, but I know Jim Kirk – you’re going to drive yourself to death so you don’t have to feel the pain any more.” He shook his head in resignation. “But until you come to grips with her death . . . well . . .”

MCcoy’s voice trailed off. “Ah, Hell. I’m a Doctor, not a Priest – you don’t want to open up? Fine – just remember that if you drive yourself over the brink, you’ll be taking a crew of 400 with you. Thanks for breakfast.”

The curmudgeonly surgeon stood, tossed his linen napkin on the table and turned to leave.

“She was pregnant, Bones,” Kirk spoke, his voice barely audible.

McCoy stopped abruptly and turned. “What?”

“Carol. She found out just a few days before . . . it happened . . .”

McCoy looked down at the carpeted deck and sighed. “Aw, damn. I’m sorry Jim. Sorry as Hell.”

A ghost of a smile twitched across Kirk’s face. “Yeah - Thanks. And . . . thanks for being a friend . . . Father Leonard.”

McCoy snorted. “That’ll be the day.” Feeling suddenly awkward, the Doctor abruptly changed the subject. “I’m headed back to Sickbay. Oh, and ease up on the caffeine – I hate to think what all that coffee is doing to your insides.”

“Dismissed, Doctor,” said Kirk, now grinning.

* * *

E.B. 23 July 2265
HMS Truculent - En route to the Vega System
Bridge - 0748 hours

The bridge was a quiet hive of activity as various officers and ratings manned myriad control stations – keeping a sharp eye on the complex systems that allowed Truculent to travel many times the speed of light.

Just aft of the main bridge, separated by transparent acoustic panels, was the Combat and Control Center. In the subdued lighting Captain Kirk stood over the tactical plotter, accompanied by Lt. Commander Spock, Lt. Uhura and the tactical officer, Lt. Sean Finnegan. The Irish tactical officer appeared somewhat nervous in the presence of the new commanding officer, most likely due to the fact that, as an upper classman at the academy, Finnegan had hazed young Kirk without mercy.

For his part, Kirk was enjoying the irony of the role reversal. He had no intention of holding the events of 15 years past against Finnegan, but it wouldn’t hurt to let his former nemesis sweat – just a little.

“Leftenant Uhura, you did an excellent job with your intelligence analysis,” complemented Kirk, prompting a pleased smile from the lovely officer. “Now I would like to probe Tracey’s head – figure out his weaknesses and how we might gain tactical superiority if we should encounter him. I also want your input, Commander Spock, Lieutenant Finnegan – as you both have key roles in our defense strategy. Both of you have read Uhura’s report?” Spock and Finnegan both nodded.

Uhura tapped in a command on the plotter’s keyboard. A rather stodgy-looking ship appeared on the screen, evidently a bulk freighter or transport of some kind.

“This is Tracey’s ‘weapon’ of choice,” began Uhura. “As you can see, it appears to be a pedestrian Appalachia-class freighter. Thousands of them were built between 2210 and 2247. Originally designed as a bulk freighter, many were converted into transports, tankers, research vessels, even low-budget cruise ships. As-built, they are sturdy and reliable ships, though neither fast nor maneuverable. However, it is apparent that Tracey has made significant upgrades in his ships.” She tapped in another command and a series of figures appeared by the image. Finnegan let out a whistle of surprise.

“Warp factor 7? I wouldn’t have thought it possible,” the Irishman said in disbelief.

“These performance figures have been verified,” replied Uhura. “Royal Intelligence managed to place an operative in Tracey’s gang of cutthroats who provided very helpful data on their ships. Unfortunately, R.I. has lost contact with their agent. Either he has gone to ground or he has been compromised.”

Kirk winced at the thought. “Let’s hope not. Please continue, Leftenant.”

“As you can see, Tracey’s ships can match us in speed, though not in maneuverability. They are very well armed,” with a stylus, she pointed to several spots on the display, “with torpedo launchers here, here and here. Also, this extended super-structure hides a kinetic rail gun, capable of shredding the hull of any merchant vessel.”

“Not to mention what it could do to us, if we let them in range,” murmured Kirk. “What about their defenses?”

“Intel is less specific in that regard. We know it varies from ship to ship. Apparently, Tracey’s personal ship is up-armored and equipped with point-defense missiles and laser batteries.”

“Making his ship very nearly equal to our own,” observed Spock.

“True,” agreed Kirk “But we have an edge in maneuvering speed and three times the number of rail guns.” He did not mention Tracey’s obvious edge in experience. It was painfully obvious to all that Kirk was the wild card in the scenario – a young C.O. with far less experience than the rogue Captain.

“Mr. Finnegan – what can you tell me about the raiders’ tactics?” Kirk asked.

“They favor the element of surprise. In all the previous attacks, they’ve approached from multiple vectors, taking out the maneuvering engines of the merchant vessels. The escorts were typically outnumbered and outflanked with predictable results. Usually, the raiders send in a few ships in a feinting maneuver to draw off our capital ships. They know our standard defensive tactics all too well.”

“Then we will have to throw out standard tactics, Mr. Finnegan.”

“Captain,” began Spock, “you do realize that we will be under the command of Captain Garrovick of HMS Cornwallis. He’s the senior commander of the escort group and tends to be rather ‘by the book.’”

Kirk nodded, frowning. “Yes, I’m aware of that, Mr. Spock. But once the balloon goes up, signals can sometimes get confused, isn’t that right, Lt. Uhura?”

Uhura gave a conspiratorial wink. “Oh, yes sir. Very confused.”

Spock lifted an eyebrow and a tiny smile formed on his thin face. “Indeed,” he murmured.

“On to Ronald Tracey,” continued Kirk. “We’ve all read your analysis, Uhura. We know his strengths – he’s brilliant, unorthodox and ruthless. What about his weak points? What can we use against him?”

Uhura’s brow knitted in thought. “Well, he’s arrogant, for one thing. That’s apparent from reading his old personnel jacket. He’s smart and he knows it. When he was First Officer of the Hood, his C.O. once called him a ‘cocky S.O.B.’ As he got older, he learned to temper that arrogance, but I believe it’s still there.”

“Overconfidence,” nodded Kirk. “Anything else?”

“He’s well versed in standard fleet tactics,” continued Uhura. “He’s unlikely to expect any response that isn’t ‘by the book.’” She smiled at Spock who nodded.

Finnegan frowned. “Well, he’s got a right to be cocky. He’s never lost an engagement, not when he was in the fleet or now as a stinkin’ pirate.” He glanced up at Kirk. “He’s got surprise and ruthlessness on his side. How do we counter that?”

Kirk smiled at the Tactical Officer. “I recall a certain senior midshipman who had a knack for setting up some very cruel, creative and unexpected pitfalls for a particular hapless plebe. I want you to apply that same, sadistic genius to this situation, Mr. Finnegan.”

The Irishman’s face reddened as a rueful smile appeared on his face. “Begging your pardon, Captain, but Ronald Tracey is hardly a plebe.”

“No, but he is a cocky, tight-assed, arrogant S.O.B. I should think that would make him a tempting challenge for you.”

A mischievous gleam formed in Finnegan’s eye and his grin widened. “Yes sir. It does at that.”

“Then I will leave you to your evil schemes, Mr. Finnegan. Thank you for the excellent brief, Lt. Uhura. Mr. Spock, you’re with me.”

* * *
 
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Ronald Tracey, eh? Well, Kirk never did anything halfway, in this universe or any other. ;) I liked his having Finnegan use his 'sadistic genius' as a tool against the formidable pirate captain.

Glad this terrific story is back on the grid, it's been far too long. :techman:
 
Ronald Tracey, eh? Well, Kirk never did anything halfway, in this universe or any other. ;) I liked his having Finnegan use his 'sadistic genius' as a tool against the formidable pirate captain.

Glad this terrific story is back on the grid, it's been far too long. :techman:

Indeed-this was one of the more interesting strokes of brilliance in your stable. I had almost forgotten it-glad you came back.
 
I'm gonna go ahead and honestly admit that Truculent is not my favorite Lone Redshirt production at the moment. That honor belongs to Slayd anda the Dragonfire.

But this is not to say I don't like it. On the contrary. I particuarly enjoyed the Kirk/Bones scene were we learn that McCoy in this universe is every bit as curmudgeonly as we've come to expect.

Well done!
 
This is bloody brilliant!

Love it, love it, love it. Love the setting, love the mysterious past disaster of Black Day, love the way you're portaying all of these familiar characters in this strange new world. More, more and more!!!!

PS: I'm also hugely jealous as I have a relatively similar universe planned for my nanowrimo novel - it isn't a Star Trek novel, but the steampunk influence, British Empire in the Stars background is quite similar. We'll have to swap notes!
 
Just read through it all. Hope you'll be posting more soon. An exciting and enjoyable read. Can't wait for more. Well done!
 
E.B. 23 July 2265
HMS Truculent - En route to the Vega System
Bridge 0810 hours

Kirk and Spock stepped out of the CnC alcove and onto the main bridge. Here the lighting was slightly brighter and the noise level, though subdued, gave a sense of energy and purpose to the nerve center of the ship. The sights and sounds of this place never failed to give Kirk a sense of pride and pleasure.

Truculent’s bridge was typical for a Defender-class light cruiser. Laid out in a semi-circle, a large computerized viewscreen dominated the forward bulkhead while numerous control and monitoring stations were arrayed along the periphery. Currently, a dozen ratings manned various stations while a petty officer manned the helm situated approximately in the center of the room. Two high-back chairs – one for the Watch Officer, the other reserved solely for the Captain, were mounted on a raised dais near the back of the bridge, allowing a panoramic view of all the duty stations. Currently, Lt. Vincent DeSalle had the watch. He stood just behind the helmsman with his hands clasped behind his back.

Kirk paused to savor the moment. “Mr. DeSalle, the bridge is yours. I’ll be in forward observation if you need me.”

DeSalle turned slightly and nodded in acknowledgement. “Yes sir.”

The Captain stepped through the oval hatchway into the outer corridor, followed by Spock. It occurred to Kirk that the First Officer kept his appearance just within acceptable standards. His hair was almost but not quite too long and his face showed discernable beard stubble. Spock’s uniform, though clean, was hardly crisp, with the sleeves carelessly rolled up on his forearms. An ever-present pack of cigarettes formed a prominent bulge in his left breast pocket and his shoes were badly in need of a shine.

Here’s an officer that has just about given up, thought Kirk. I suppose there’s no point making an issue of it now, though. Better to give our First Officer some breathing room until he makes up his mind about remaining in the service. Kirk decided to save the “setting a good example” pep-talk for a more appropriate time.

As if reading Kirk’s mind, Spock pulled the pack of smokes from his pocket and tapped out a filter-less Monarch. “I suppose I won’t ever be featured on a recruiting poster, will I?” he quipped as he flicked a match with his thumb and applied the flame to the cigarette.

Kirk glanced at Spock and smiled wanly. “Are you telepathic, Mr. Spock?”

The First Officer shook out the match and exhaled smoke through his nose. “Hardly. Merely observant – I noticed that you glanced at my uniform several times. The pained look on your face spoke volumes.”

“No offense, Commander, but you do have to admit there’s room for improvement,” pointed out Kirk.

Spock nodded and paused, allowing Kirk to proceed through a narrow hatchway. “No offense taken, Captain. You’re right of course – no excuse on my part.” He paused again and Kirk stopped and turned.

“Captain, I appreciate your attempt at the ‘kid glove’ treatment while I make a decision about my future with the RSF. Damned decent of you, but I don’t expect you to treat me differently from any other officer on the ship. If you need to address a short-coming on my part, I promise I won’t slit my wrists or turn in my walking papers over that. Agreed?”

Kirk chuckled. “In that case, Mr. Spock – why don’t you stop by the ship’s barber for a shave and a haircut. I’ll meet you in the wardroom in an hour and we can continue our strategy session.”

* * *

Kirk entered the wardroom 55 minutes later to find Lt. Commander Jacob Spock already present and seated at the table. He was clean shaven and his hair had a proper trim. Kirk noticed that he was wearing a pressed uniform shirt, though he still wore the sleeves rolled up. Kirk could live with that. Spock was sipping from a cup of tea as one of his ever-present cigarettes smoldered nearby in an ashtray.

Spock was not the only occupant of the wardroom. Dr. McCoy stood near the counter, glowering at a kettle of water. The surgeon noted Kirk’s entrance and redirected his ire toward the Captain.

“You would think a ship this size would have a decent tea-pot,” groused McCoy. “I’ve done brain surgery in less time than this thing boils water.”

Kirk tapped a control on top of the kettle. “It helps if you turn it on, Bones.”

“Smart-ass,” grumbled McCoy.

Kirk drew a cup of coffee from the nearby urn. “Since you’re here you might as well sit in on our strategy session. Commander Spock and I were about to discuss our tactics when we join up with the convoy. You might learn something.”

“I’m a doctor, not a goddam tactical officer,” McCoy argued. Nevertheless, he took a seat at the table. He looked with obvious disapproval at Spock’s cigarette and shook his head.

“Why the self-destructive tendencies, Mr. Spock – isn’t living inside a steel tube barely separated from the cold vacuum of space risk enough?”

Spock took a draw on his cigarette and regarded the surgeon through a veil of smoke. “We all have our vices, doctor. At least being rude is not one of mine.”

McCoy snorted. “Rude? Hell, you haven’t seen rude. Do you have any idea what those coffin nails are doing to your lungs? It’s not like I can give you a pill to grow a new set.”

“Periodic nano-scrubbing of my bronchial tubes has proven effective thus far, Doctor, though I do thank you for your concern.”

“A waste of good medical resources, that’s what it is,” countered McCoy. “We have a limited number of surgical nanites on board, Mr. Spock, and we need those to treat real casualties, not to help you indulge a bad habit!”

“Then perhaps, doctor, you might wish to calm yourself. Losing your temper over such a trivial matter can’t be good for your blood pressure.”

“My blood pressure is fine, no thanks to you. A little show of temper is good for the body – helps reduce stress.”

Kirk cleared his throat. “I’m glad you two gentlemen are bonding so quickly. However, we only have four hours until we rendezvous with the convoy, so may I butt in?”

“Fine. Change the subject. I’m going to get my goddam tea!” McCoy stormed over to the counter and sloshed hot water over a tea bag in his cup. Spock lifted a bemused eyebrow and lit another cigarette as Kirk simply shook his head and sighed.

* * *

E.B. 23 July 2265
System NGC-80811 – Mid system asteroid belt
0930 hours

The freighter drifted silently along with several of her sister ships in the darkness of the asteroid belt, its electronic emissions cut down to a bare minimum, her engines powered down and her warp core, cold.

Ronald Tracey sat in his quarters, brooding over a star chart of the Vega system. The tall man absently took a ship of whiskey from a sweating glass as his gray eyes poured over possible ambush points and routes of egress. Though his raids had thus far gone without a hitch, Tracey was not one to tempt fate. With deliberation approaching obsession, he went over every move his squadron of privateers would make, anticipating the possible counter moves of the Royal Starfleet escorts.

He opened a leather-bound notebook and reviewed his detailed notes written in a precise Copperplate. His finger traced down the list of ships until it came to HMS Truculent. There, he pressed down with enough pressure for his fingernail to leave an impression.

Truculent was the wild-card.

Tracey leaned back in his throne-like chair and steepled his fingers. He gazed out the viewport at the inky darkness of the belt. The asteroids which provided camouflage for his ships could easily destroy them, should one impact their relatively thin hull plates.

James Kirk – he was the unknown figure in the encounter to come. Tracey knew little of Truculent’s new commanding officer, though it came as no surprise that the Admiralty had finally replaced Sir Robert. Part of him regretted the untimely death of his old classmate and colleague, but he had no time to embrace such emotions. Regret was for weaker men, not Ronald Tracy.

What he could ascertain about Kirk through normal means was precious little. He had been an excellent student at the Academy and served with distinction on HMS Ardent and Wellington before landing the billet of First Officer on HMS Enterprize. That, of course, had been back when the British Empire still ruled the spaceways throughout the quadrant.

Back before Black Day.

Tracey had never discovered what transpired to cause the destruction of Enterprize and the death of Captain Christopher Pike, (whose death he most certainly did not regret). For whatever reason, the RSF was keeping the details under very tight wraps. Whatever happened, young Kirk had come through the tragedy hailed as a hero and he now served as the youngest captain in the RSF.

Tracey pushed the starmaps aside on his desk and opened a file folder. A picture of a young James Kirk grinned impishly up at him. A stray lock of hair fell over the forehead of the handsome RSF officer.

You’re a cocky one, aren’t you, Captain Kirk? He mused solemnly. Still, like the rest of the data on Kirk, the photograph was taken before Black Day changed everything. Was Kirk still cocky? Or had tragedy and loss tempered him? He needed to know these things.

He was far less concerned with Captain Garrovick. The senior captain had the tactical acumen of a tossed brick and the imagination of a slug. It galled Tracey that his former subordinate was now commander of Arcturus Fleet, though Garrovick’s predictable tactics made Tracey’s own endeavors much easier. The C.O.s of the other ships were competent enough but hamstrung by Garrovick’s singular incompetence.

I would be doing the RSF a service if I destroyed your ship and took your miserable life, you bloated, self-important jackass! He mused, darkly.

A loud rap on the hatch-jamb broke his train of thought. Frowning at the interruption, he called, “Enter!”

The hinges of the heavy metal hatch groaned in protest as it opened into Tracey’s quarters. A man in his mid thirties with unruly brown hair and keen eyes stepped in.

“You wanted to see me, Captain?”

Tracey relaxed slightly and a tight smile formed on his lips. “Yes, come in Lieutenant. This won’t take long.”

Though they referred to one another with military ranks, neither wore a uniform. In fact, they both appeared to be ordinary merchantmen, and not very prosperous ones from the cut of their utilitarian clothing.

“Would you care for a drink, Lieutenant?”

“Yes sir, that sounds good.”

“The bottle is on the sideboard – help yourself.”

The young officer did so gladly, pouring an ample amount of Tracey’s whiskey into a glass tumbler before taking a seat opposite the Captain’s desk. He took a sip and raised an eyebrow in appreciation. He lifted the glass toward Tracey in a gesture of appreciation.

“That’s some fine stuff there, Captain,” remarked the square jawed man. He leaned back in the chair and crossed his legs, the epitome of casual confidence.

“Glad you like it,” responded Tracey in a dry tone. “Now, on to the business at hand. Tell me about your old friend, James Kirk.”

Lt. Gary Mitchell smiled broadly. “What would you like to know?”

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