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Burning Ring of Fire

I probably said this before, I say it again. Wright is one of the strangest characters I've come across. And by strange I mean to say that I really don't get him. Which in turn is very fascinating. Their's obviously some brooding darkness here and I'm very curious to get to the bottom of this.

Oh yeah, and then there is that imminent Cha’lav incursion threat.

Lot's going down here.
 
My internet was down yesterday so I couldn't upload the next segment. I shall be doing so this evening (GMT) if my net is back up. I may even be able to get the last segment written and uploaded too...

...And then...

...Final Flight of the Exosia...
 
INTERLUDE

Cha’lav Homeworld
Chalavratan galaxy (NGC-4321)
52.5 million light-years away
Stardate 57377.6

The full tri-level council was in full session for the first time in more than a millennium. The Lower Council, comprising the aquatic and semi-aquatic species, took up the immense man-made lake in groups of three separated by species. The Central Council, comprised of the land-walker species, sat around the central column of the council chamber, intent on their own discussions while the High Council, comprising the two remaining avian species, sat atop the column itself looking down on the others like prey. This council had never been content but the strict hierarchy had served them well for eons, and as such they were the oldest species in the galaxy. A klaxon rang out that silenced everyone present.

‘I have called this emergency session to discuss the Milcha-Wae situation,’ High Council leader Lord Fetar said gravely, flapping his wings in emphasis. ‘The advanced fleet has been severely crippled and the Gateway technology stolen from that galaxy several millennia ago has proven ineffective against the populace of the staging ground. Just in the last cycle, the largest political entity, the Federation, has destroyed a region of space that we specifically created for our purpose. Lord Linta has asked that we send more ships to aid in his fight against them.’

‘I vote against this,’ Lower Council leader Aqati slapped her fins to the water in anger. ‘Lord Linta was warned about attacking so soon. We should have concentrated on the bioweapons first to weaken them.’

‘The bioweapons were rendered useless a third of a solar cycle ago when the Federation discovered what we were up to and put a stop to it,’ Fetar responded coolly. ‘Do you not read all of the reports?’

‘I have been trying to quell a dozen uprisings in my galaxy,’ the Cha’lav-Aquatic gurgled angrily. ‘News of the Federation fighting back has already reached our outlying galaxies.’

‘We need a decisive victory against the Federation and we need it soon,’ Central Council leader Cala said, slamming her fist against the column. ‘You have been so quick to belittle Lord Linta for his failures in this instance, but how many successful campaigns has he won for you? The H’lranthians in the Dromdae galaxy were no match for his fighting force. You tied his flippers with this engagement by making him use local technology against them.’

‘Yes, but the H’lranthians fought back, with Federation help. That’s when you decided to attack at their heart, but instead you have chosen a region of space that they would not have been so interested in if you had not begun kidnapping people.’

‘Enough!’ Lord Fetar squawked. The column reverberated with his anger. ‘We need to determine a new course of action, now.’

‘We should let Lord Linta continue his advance with the ships he still has at his disposal. Thirty-six vessels is more than enough to destroy a world and the base orbiting it,’ Aqati said, her strong voice carrying through the water.

‘And what if the Federation amass more vessels?’

‘They will not be able to match our might. They have recently emerged from a war that exacted a terrible toll on much of the galaxy. They should be easy pickings.’

‘I have learned not to underestimate our prey. I recommend that we use our feared foot soldiers on their homeworld.’

‘We would never get close. Their core worlds are too well protected since the end of the war. To do significant damage would mean pulling ships from other fronts and this galaxy is not that much of a threat yet.’

‘Lord Linta is our most revered strategist. If he loses his life, it will be a blow to us all.’

‘What is the situation in the Pechazhizh galaxy?’

‘It is nominally under our aegis, we control the majority of worlds represented in the Galactic Council. It is only a matter of time before they vote on one of our puppets as leader.’

Lord Fetar nodded. ‘So, do I tell Lord Linta to use another approach in dealing with the Federation?’

‘Yes!’ echoed across the council chamber from the senior leaders.

‘Very well then, the motion has carried. You may return to your vessels and galaxies. I hope not to see you for at least another century or two, perhaps longer.’

Multiple fissures, rifts and gateways opened allowing the councillors to return to their respective ships and lands, but Lord Fetar remained with his second in command.

‘You think I was wrong to call the full council?’ he asked.

‘Yes, Lord,’ his second replied. ‘One or more may be the rebel leader. Someone from the council has been feeding information to the rebel cells across much of our territory. The tides are shifting against us, that much we know.’

‘But the Council does not, and they will not while they each control their own galaxy. For now, they are too busy to talk to each other about allying against us.’

‘Our position is tenuous, Lord, but we remain in control because we do not show our wing. I believe that calling the full council showed too much of our wing at the wrong time.’

‘Perhaps, but we shall see. Right now, I must inform Lord Linta of our decision.’
 
the remaining 2 avian species? remaining? there were more? what happened to them?

Interesting dissension in the ranks, there-maybe a full rebellion will disrupt their plans for the Federation?
 
the remaining 2 avian species? remaining? there were more? what happened to them?

Interesting dissension in the ranks, there-maybe a full rebellion will disrupt their plans for the Federation?
Mwa ha ha ha :evil:

Oh there were more alright, you'll get a better glimpse of them in later stories :devil:

As for dissension, you have no idea.

Last part up tomorrow I hope.
 
Ah! Some grumbling among the ranks of the Cha'lav! I agree with David - when you're trying to conquer a universe, stuff happens. Thanks for this scene and greater insight for the Cha'lav.
 
Final part, people...

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EPILOGUE

Conference room 323
Starbase 535
Stardate 57378.1

Commander Logan sat at the head of the table with his executive officer seated to his left. Also around the table were Captains Dhrex, Aurelia and Vikagh and Admiral Owens. Logan knew that Owens would be taking command of the starbase shortly but his fate was as yet unknown. This conference was designed solely to disseminate information, and not to make plans for anything else. Vikagh was finishing his exaggerated tale of hunting a lone Cha’lav vessel which he subsequently destroyed before it could destroy a Resoto merchant vessel or call for assistance.

‘I would enjoy picking off every last one of the filthy PetaQ,’ he concluded.

‘That may be so, but we have just received word from the Dauntless. They have crossed the Badlands, and destroyed it in the process. Their speculation is that it was created by the Cha’lav to facilitate their invasion of this galaxy. The Cha’lav also seem to be massing an invasion force but the destruction of the Badlands’ subspace gateways have set their timetable back, we just don’t know how long for,’ Logan replied, hoping to keep the conference on track.

‘The Ynelavii have ended their civil war but the Romulans have moved in and according to my last report from Regent Dolan, Subcommander Sokal is refusing to leave that world until something from her family’s past is presented to her,’ Dhrex said and saw Logan wince ever so slightly.

‘That is a minor matter,’ Owens interrupted. ‘Captain Aurelia, what of the Resoto?’

‘The remaining Resoto have banded together on a number of worlds which remain hidden from us just in case the Cha’lav intend to finish the job.’

‘So all we have to do is prepare for an invasion. That we have experience in,’ Logan said mournfully.

‘Before you all disappear, I would like to extend my thanks to Commander Logan for his hard work here. As you know, I’m taking command of Starbase 535 and Commander Logan is being reassigned. Command is pleased with your work here, especially in your dealings with the Kursicans, who have withdrawn their petition for Federation membership, but asked that we keep them as a protectorate—allowing us to keep the starbase.

‘Commander, let me be the first to congratulate you on your promotion to Captain,’ Owens added with a grin and slid a polished wooden box across the table. ‘The Everest awaits you.’

The USS Everest was a contradiction in terms. It was one of the last Oberth-class ships still in service and yet named after one of the largest features on Earth. ‘I don’t know what to say.’

‘Thank you would be good,’ his exec muttered.

Logan shot him a look as he affixed the fourth pip to his collar. ‘Do I have an assignment?’

‘You do,’ Owens replied. ‘Starfleet has been invited to the Ansharan homeworld to witness the eruption of Thesauria, their largest volcano.’

‘The last time we visited their world they killed the away team and nearly destroyed the ship.’

‘Governments change,’ was all Owens said. ‘As for the rest of you, please return to your previous assignments. New ones will be forthcoming shortly, dismissed.’



USS Dauntless
En route to Eeroth
Stardate 57378.3

Captain Astar sat in her chair and watched the viewscreen as the last vestiges of the diabolical Badlands faded, leaving behind the stars and nebulae that made space so beautiful to look at. Around her, the rest of the bridge crew were as rapt as she was, except one. Wright left her some unfortunate business to attend to, but if she could, she would leave it until her return from Eeroth. Deciding that time was now of the essence, she pulled her gaze from the screen and turned toward Rashal, who had spent much of the journey in his quarters.

‘How far are we from your homeworld?’

‘Three days at warp six,’ the Eerothian replied sourly. ‘But much time has passed already, I am not sure there will be anything to go back to.’

‘Perhaps your people will have united against a common enemy,’ Larson suggested.

‘That is unlikely.’

‘All things are possible,’ ch’Maras added quietly.

Rashal turned to him. ‘My people have been fighting since the dawn of time, Lieutenant. I doubt very much that a single force could unseat their hatred of one another.’

‘My people thought that way once as well, Rashal. Now we have been close friends and allies with the Vulcans for over two centuries.’

‘There is still animosity among both your kinds.’

‘It will always be there, tempered by reason and my mutual cooperation. It is the only way we can survive.’

‘Then one day you will all perish. Such a weak bond cannot hold you together forever.’

‘It doesn’t need to,’ Astar interjected, noticing that Wright was wholeheartedly agreeing with the alien. ‘They both have us, and others who stand by them all. Together we are stronger than we are individually. Before the Federation was formed, we fought a terrible war at a terrible price, but it brought us together. Our homeworlds and colonies fought against a common enemy and a union was formed. Now, two centuries later, our enemy has been torn asunder from forces within and we stand by them, willing and able to help. Not because we want to force them to our ways, but because we can and because it is the right thing to do. Our highest ideals focus on helping others, regardless of the cost to ourselves. We are returning you to your homeworld because we can, we will stand beside you and fight a common enemy because together we are stronger.’

‘Your ideals are noble, Captain,’ Rashal responded wanly. ‘But in your territories, it is paradise. In ours, it is a constant fight for survival.’

‘As it once was in ours,’ Wright said, standing up. ‘But as the Captain has said, we stood together on the threshold of war, and walked through the doorway of peace, where we still stand today.’

Astar held her tongue, for she could see in Wright’s eyes that he did not truly believe that. ‘Enough, it is time we actually found out what is going on. Ensign Larson, set a course for Eeroth, warp six.’

‘Aye sir,’ Larson replied as the Dauntless’ nacelles rose up into formation.

As the starship jumped to warp, Astar wondered whether she would find a ruined world or a paradise being fought for.


END



The crew of the Dauntless will return in...To Serve the Unwise
 
Ah! Some grumbling among the ranks of the Cha'lav! I agree with David - when you're trying to conquer a universe, stuff happens. Thanks for this scene and greater insight for the Cha'lav.
How was my mention of the H'lranthians?

Works for me! While the H'lranthians ultimately drove off the Cha'lav, it's very likely the Cha'lav would have won some engagements, so your mention rings true.

Thanks for the shout out!:)
 
Scary-sounds like things didn't go so well for Yeager-you know something we don't?
Not a thing, just thought it was logical :vulcan:

And that happened a looong time before Yeager and Co. arrived. :)

Xeris, I liked the ending. You wrapped things up neatly, but not too tightly. I still wonder about Wright and look forward to learning more about him in future stories. The guy gives me the creeps, but he's interesting, nonetheless.

Very well done!
 
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Really liked the interlude and giving us a small glimpse into the Cha’lav society. Clearly they are too large and too disconnected from each other for their own good.

I'm not sure why Owens is getting rid of Logan but an assignment to an outdated ship and a mission that ended in catastrophic failure previously doesn't sound like such a good deal to me. Poor guy.

Again you leave us with plenty of loose ends here but that's to be excpected from this epic story. You continue to paint a huge canvas here and I'm looking forward to one day see the whole picture.

Great work on this one.
 
A good ending--tied up and answered some questions while at the same time leaving enough threads hanging to make us want more.

Very well done, indeed!
 
I'm not sure why Owens is getting rid of Logan but an assignment to an outdated ship and a mission that ended in catastrophic failure previously doesn't sound like such a good deal to me. Poor guy.
Glad you're enjoying the story.

I wanted to streamline the secondary characters I had and having sent Sito back to the Sutherland, I was wondering who would go next. You may remember that I have had several Admirals controlling the ships in the Kursican sector and I wanted to clear up the nonsense.

Since the Kursicans have withdrawn their petition, he's no longer needed there and Owens can take command of the starbase for the reason Starfleet is there in the first place, the Cha'lav. Logan is actually getting a promotion to Captain, being given a small ship and sent to a planet where Starfleet screwed up last time. He gets to be the one to fix the screw-up which will go a long way to getting his career back on track. I kind of decided to make him a troubleshooter. And you don't need a big ship for that, just a good crew.

Who knows, maybe I'll write that story another time.
 
I do like the idea of a large, long-running story arc. It makes for an interesting series. Thanks for giving a nod to Aurelia & co, by the way! Looking forward to the next installment.
 
I do like the idea of a large, long-running story arc. It makes for an interesting series. Thanks for giving a nod to Aurelia & co, by the way! Looking forward to the next installment.
No problem, Dnoth. I shall be using Aurelia & co a little (I think) in 1x04 and for the season finale in 1x06. After that, she's all yours. I warn you though, the Indy will probably get a beating in 1x06.
 
Heck of a grand story-very complicated but you don't seem to lose track of any little detail. Well done!
 
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