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Bright spots in dreary episodes

There were an abundance of them in the second season it's true, but this one and Omega I always liked even if Omega is the one that stretches our thinking some what!
JB
 
I'm one of those TOS fans who doesn't care much for "City on the Edge of Forever" - but every scene that has Kirk or Spock speaking to the GoF is a bright spot.

I LOVE the line (Bolded):
KIRK: Then what is it?

GUARDIAN: (The doughnut pulses bright in time with the words) A question. Since before your sun burned hot in space and before your race was born, I have awaited a question.
 
Friday's Child bright spot: "Look, I'm a doctor, not an escalator! Spock, give me a hand!" :lol: I also pondered at that moment that there are still escalators in the 23rd Century even though we never see one, or Jetson-style moving sidewalks, or flying cars.

I'm always waiting for the next McCoy-ism, "I'm a doctor, not a ..."
Well we did finally see an escalator in TMP at SFHQ
 
I must admit to liking Bread And Circuses a lot my Lord!
But was Kirk actually living on Tarsus IV? It sounds like he was but why was he there? A colonist? Visiting a family member or members? Just part of the rescue team that liberated the colonists and it went on for quite some time?
Seems odd that he would be living there for some reason!:shrug:
JB
Good questions. Do we know anything about Kirk's folks from TOS? Was his mom and/or dad in Starfleet (as in JJ-Trek)? If so, maybe his mom, brother (possibly) and he were on the colony/base to be near their dad's posting - as with current military families (my wife was a military brat and moved all over the country living on Air Bases following her dad's Air Force postings - except when he did two tours in Vietnam, then they moved back to her mom's home area.) Was Tarsus IV a Starfleet Base? Maybe more would have been revealed in later episodes if the series continued.
 
I would doubt that Tarsus IV was a Starfleet Base to be honest! More like a colony planet of farmers and the like, Henoch for Kodos to declare martial law and execute those he didn't believe were worth saving in the crisis!
JB
 
Yeah, I always wondered how JTK wound up on Tarsus IV. Pity that we never really received an explanation. The whole backstory was fascinating.
 
Whoops, I meant to add a question: does the James Blish adaptation say anything about this matter?
 
I must admit to liking Bread And Circuses a lot my Lord!
But was Kirk actually living on Tarsus IV? It sounds like he was but why was he there? A colonist? Visiting a family member or members? Just part of the rescue team that liberated the colonists and it went on for quite some time?
Seems odd that he would be living there for some reason!:shrug:
JB

Why indeed?

Good questions. Do we know anything about Kirk's folks from TOS? Was his mom and/or dad in Starfleet (as in JJ-Trek)? If so, maybe his mom, brother (possibly) and he were on the colony/base to be near their dad's posting - as with current military families (my wife was a military brat and moved all over the country living on Air Bases following her dad's Air Force postings - except when he did two tours in Vietnam, then they moved back to her mom's home area.) Was Tarsus IV a Starfleet Base? Maybe more would have been revealed in later episodes if the series continued.

Yeah, I always wondered how JTK wound up on Tarsus IV. Pity that we never really received an explanation. The whole backstory was fascinating.

Whoops, I meant to add a question: does the James Blish adaptation say anything about this matter?

If memory serves Blish did say that Kirk was a starfleet member, or an academy midshipman at least, during the massacres on Tarsus IV. Of course as far as we know the minimum age to enter Starfleet or the Academy was seventeen (though there are a few hints it might have been younger), and my post number thirteen on this thread says that Kirk was probably thirteen at Tarsus IV.

Blish often used early drafts scripts for his adaptations instead of final drafts, and there is a site that discusses the differences between early drafts and final drafts. The Unseen Elements of the Original series Episodes. http://www.orionpressfanzines.com/articles/unseen.htm

The "Conscience of the King" script had this dialog which is not in the episode as broadcast, and seems to be from the Final revised Draft, September 8, 1966, and with revised pages dated September 12,13,14,15,19,20,22, 1966:

KIRK
I'm deeply sorry, Martha.

MARTHA
It was different for you, Jim.
A young midshipman, no family there...

KIRK
I know. Tom's parents were
there, two brothers...

http://www.orionpressfanzines.com/articles/conscience_of_the_king.htm
And this speech by Kirk:

KIRK
Now yes... but what about before?
Fresh out of the Academy. Young,
inexperienced, a midshipman...
stationed on a colony which was
disintegrating before my eyes!
Starvation! Rioting! Disaster!
I saw men, women and children
forced into an anti-matter chamber
... and a self-appointed messiah
named Kodos threw a switch, and
there wasn't anyone inside anymore!
Four thousand people! Dead!
(distraught)
And you know something funny? I was one
of those Kodos spared! He ordered me left alive!
I was one of the fittest!
(incredulous)
And you want me to forget that?
I'm sorry, doctor. I'm a human
being... and there are some things
human beings simply do not forget.

This implies that Kirk was at least twenty and a member of Starfleet when at Tarsus IV, but he was stationed there before the relief force arrived and thus was not one of the relief force. So Kirk would have been part of some large or small Starfleet group assigned to Tarsus IV for some purpose.

But of course that dialog and the data in them was left out of the episode and so is not canon, and need not be true in the fictional universe of Star Trek.

I'm sorry that Kirk's Tarsus II speech was dropped. It is prime Shatner scenery-chewing material, and he would have attacked it intensely, and it would have been a marvel to behold. Though it would make him about 42 years old, (20 years after graduating the academy at 22 or so), which was much older than Shatner's 35 years when this was filmed. And how young must Riley have been when he was on Tarsus?

http://www.orionpressfanzines.com/articles/conscience_of_the_king.htm

As I said in post number 13 above, Kirk was probably thirteen at Tarsus IV, and thus probably not yet a member of Starfleet or a cadet at the Academy. In fact, in "Shore Leave" which probably happens soon before or after "Conscience of the King", Kirk was a plebe (first year cadet) at the Academy only 15 years earlier, which seems to rule out any previous membership in Starfleet.

Memory Alpha also says that Kirk was thirteen at Tarsus IV. https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/James_T._Kirk

And for whatever it might be worth, the official but non canon and possibly incorrect Star Trek Chronology: The History of the Future, 1996, says Kirk was born in 2233 and the Tarsus IV Massacre happened in 2246, the year that Kirk turned thirteen.

Kevin Riley would have been under ten at Tarsus IV, which would also seem to rule out starfleet membership, so it is a good thing that the episode has mention of his parents being killed there.

In the episode as broadcast:

(Kevin is pacing up and down in the background, overhearing what is being dictated)
MCCOY: Medical log. Lieutenant Riley's sufficiently recovered to be discharged, but the Captain's ordered him restricted to Sickbay to prevent contact with the passenger who calls himself Karidian and who's suspected of being Kodos the Executioner and of murdering the Lieutenant's family.

And:

(Kirk spots Kevin with the phaser)
KIRK: Riley, get back to the Sickbay.
RILEY: He murdered my father, and my mother.
KIRK: You could be wrong. Don't throw away your life on a mistake.
RILEY: I'm not wrong.
KARIDIAN: But that I am forbid to tell the secrets of my prison house,
RILEY: I know that voice, that face, I know it. I saw it. He murdered them.

http://www.chakoteya.net/StarTrek/13.htm

I have memory of a statement that Kirk and Riley both lost family on Tarsus IV. But that shouldn't be in the final draft script which contains a statement that Kirk didn't have any family on Tarsus IV. So it might have been in Blish's adaptation which might be based on an even earlier script, or in the episode.

It is not in the episode transcript according to the search I just made.
http://www.chakoteya.net/StarTrek/13.htm

So maybe it is in the Blish adaptation, or maybe I just imagined it.

Memory Alpha says:

In the first draft story outline of "The Conscience of the King", Kirk was instead to have witnessed his father being murdered by Kodos and an army of marauders led by him. Even in the episode's final revised draft script, Kirk was established as having had more of a connection to those he saw being killed than in the final version of the episode, as they were said to have included friends of his, though no family. Also in ultimately omitted dialogue from the final revised draft script, the incident was said to have taken place when Kirk was a young, inexperienced midshipman, fresh out of the Academy. The notion of Kirk being a midshipman with no family on Tarsus IV at the time of the massacre was also included in a deleted scene from "The Conscience of the King". ("Swept Up: Snippets from the Cutting Room Floor", Star Trek: The Original Series - The Roddenberry Vault special features) As for Kirk having survived the incident, the aforementioned script had him say, "I was one of those Kodos spared! He ordered me left alive! I was one of the fittest!"

https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/James_T._Kirk

And unless there are canon statements that Kirk was on Tarsus IV as a member of Starfleet, or with family members, or something, fans may just have to come up with their own explanations.
 
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Fantastic answer. Thank you! That is indeed a shame that we were all denied seeing Shatner deliver that speech. Is that what is on the Vault? (I still have not seen it and it's that time of year where I remind myself to figure out where to get a copy.)
 
Yeah, I always wondered how JTK wound up on Tarsus IV. Pity that we never really received an explanation. The whole backstory was fascinating.

FYI: The second DISCOVERY novel, DRASTIC MEASURES by Dayton Ward, is set during the Tarsus IV and features a young Jim Kirk.
 
There is no such thing as a dreary episode of TOS.:) But there are some episodes that are merely great as opposed to being brilliant beyond words and one of them would be "The Way to Eden." I don't care what anyone says. Spock jamming with hippies is pure fun gold. Also Adam's songs aren't all that bad for hippie songs.

Jason

The Way to Eden is one of my guilty pleasure favorites. Kirk's reaction to Herbert is also pure fun gold.
 
FYI: The second DISCOVERY novel, DRASTIC MEASURES by Dayton Ward, is set during the Tarsus IV and features a young Jim Kirk.

I remember reading a Star Trek novel a long time ago which had a flashback or something to Kirk on Tarsus IV.

And it might have been one of the Lost Years series:

Kevin Riley was also featured in the Star Trek: The Lost Years series, set between the end of TOS and Star Trek: The Motion Picture. Promoted to Lieutenant Commander, Riley became chief of staff to Admiral Kirk at Starfleet Command. Flashbacks in The Lost Years also revealed Kodos' reign of terror from Riley's perspective, including a memory in which a teenage Kirk hid the then four-year-old Riley from execution.

https://memory-alpha.fandom.com/wiki/Kevin_Riley

I must admit to liking Bread And Circuses a lot my Lord!
But was Kirk actually living on Tarsus IV? It sounds like he was but why was he there? A colonist? Visiting a family member or members? Just part of the rescue team that liberated the colonists and it went on for quite some time?
Seems odd that he would be living there for some reason!:shrug:
JB


Good questions. Do we know anything about Kirk's folks from TOS? Was his mom and/or dad in Starfleet (as in JJ-Trek)? If so, maybe his mom, brother (possibly) and he were on the colony/base to be near their dad's posting - as with current military families (my wife was a military brat and moved all over the country living on Air Bases following her dad's Air Force postings - except when he did two tours in Vietnam, then they moved back to her mom's home area.) Was Tarsus IV a Starfleet Base? Maybe more would have been revealed in later episodes if the series continued.

All we know about Kirk's father George comes from the alternate universe films, but since George Kirk dies right after reality is changed it is likely that he had the same previous life as the father of Prime Kirk. In the alternate universe George Kirk was a Starfleet officer when James T. Kirk was born, but the prime universe George Kirk could have left Starfleet any time after that or remained in Starfleet for the rest of his life.

In Star Trek (2009) Spock Prime tells Alternate Kirk:

"You often spoke of him as being your inspiration for joining Starfleet. He proudly lived to see you become captain of the Enterprise."

So in the prime universe George Kirk should have lived for almost two decades, or more, after the Tarsus IV massacre.

As for Kirk's mother Winona, there is one semi canon reference to her in filmed but deleted scene from "Operation Annihilate!" where Captain Kirk asks his nephew Peter:

You’re sure you don’t want to go back
to Earth to live with your grandmother?

http://www.orionpressfanzines.com/articles/operationannihilate.htm

Which may mean that James Kirk's mother is still alive. Though I just realized that since everyone has two grandmother's this could have been the mother of Peter's mother Aurelan Kirk.

Every other canon reference to Kirk's mother is in Star Trek (2009), where Winona Kirk is a Starfleet officer at the time James T. Kirk is born.

Of course there are many non canon references to Kirk's parents in various novels.

In post # 32 above I wrote:

And unless there are canon statements that Kirk was on Tarsus IV as a member of Starfleet, or with family members, or something, fans may just have to come up with their own explanations.

There are non canon accounts of Kirk's experiences on Tarsus IV, but there doesn't seem to be any canon accounts to make it certain whether Kirk was connected with Starfleet at a very young age somehow, or with his parents, or at Tarsus IV for some other reason, like a trip with the space scouts or winning a vacation on beautiful Tarsus IV as a prize, etc., etc.
 
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Friday's Child bright spot: "Look, I'm a doctor, not an escalator! Spock, give me a hand!" :lol: I also pondered at that moment that there are still escalators in the 23rd Century even though we never see one, or Jetson-style moving sidewalks, or flying cars.
Kirk and Commander Sonak take an escalator at the beginning of TMP. IIRC, they faked the effect with a crane or a forklift for filming, but it was obviously supposed to be an escalator.
 
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