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August/September Challenge: "Maybe, Again"

Cobalt Frost

Captain
Captain
Part I

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Orbital Office Annex Ajax Delta Niner, high geosynchronous orbit, Earth

Late 2293


* * * * * * * * * * * * *

The turbolift door opened slowly, revealing an attractive though somewhat mousey humanoid female, her maroon uniform so crisp the creases could cut solid neutronium. An ensign’s chevron graced the white bar at her right shoulder.

“Excuse, excuse me, Captain,” she said timidly. Sam snorted as he walked past her.

“I think you have me mistaken for someone else, Ensign. And I am very late for a meeting with Admiral Sterling.” Before the ensign could say anything else, Commander Sam Saberhagen disappeared into the admiral’s office.

“Damn.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“You’re late,” barked Admiral Jackson Sterling. Sam shrugged.

“Sorry about that, sir. There was a delay at the transporter station, some sort of bug in the pattern buffer.”

“Sit, Commander.”

Sam did as instructed. He noticed the admiral’s uniform was nearly as crisp as the ensign’s who’d just accosted him, while his own was rumpled and very obviously – and recently, and frequently – slept in. Great, he thought sourly. Just great.

Adm. Sterling consulted a nearby notepad. “So, Commander Sa…”

“I go by Sam, sir, if you don’t mind.”

Adm. Sterling glowered at Sam. “I go by admiral, Commander, and I prefer not to be interrupted, if you don’t mind.” Adm. Sterling hefted a timeworn manila envelope stuffed with paper, let it thump forcefully on the desk. “Do you know what’s in this?”

Sam sighed. “I’m painfully aware of what’s in my service jacket, Admiral.” Sam recalled that Adm. Sterling liked using actual paper when he could, especially to make dramatic points when grilling subordinates.

The admiral growled. “Graduated Starfleet Academy 2260, steady rise through the ranks, a little faster than your contemporaries but not meteoric. Above average ratings in all assignments. After promotion to commander, served with distinction as first officer on USS Citadel, USS Roosevelt, USS T’Challa. 2267, in line for promotion to captain and starship command.” He fixed a burning stare at Sam. “Instead, you’ve been commanding various desks at remote, dead-end Starfleet facilities for the last 26 years. Why is that?”

“The Otorem Incident.” The stare intensified. “I know what torpedoed my career, sir. All due respect, is there a point?”

Adm. Sterling’s voice grew void-cold. “Oh, there’s a point, Commander. Three, actually.” He picked up some paper from the corner of the desk. “This point,” he said, “was your promotion to captain.” An evil smile curled the corner of his lips as he ripped a sheet of paper cleanly in half, top to bottom, and tossed the pieces aside. “And this point was a starship command.” Rip, toss.

“This last point,” and the evil smile grew to show teeth, “is your discharge from Starfleet. Other Than Honorable discharge, in case you were wondering. Why you weren’t cashiered out after the Otorem Incident, I have no idea, but by God it’s a mistake I’m thoroughly pleased to be able to correct.” Adm. Sterling shoved the paper at Sam. “You are a civilian, effective immediately. With an OTH discharge in your pocket, you’ll need divine intervention to get any job other than slinging burgers at McDonald’s.

“This could have gone differently, Mr. Saberhagen, if you’d been less lippy.” He looked thoughtful for a moment, as if deciding to share how differently, then choosing not to. “I’m glad I’ll never see you again, and believe me when I wish sincerely that you rot in Hell.

“Get out.”
 
Part XIII

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Orbital Office Annex Ajax Delta Niner, high geosynchronous orbit, Earth

Late 2293


* * * * * * * * * * * * *

The turbolift door opened slowly, revealing an attractive though somewhat mousey humanoid female, her maroon uniform so crisp the creases could cut solid neutronium. An ensign’s chevron graced the white at her right shoulder.

“Excuse, excuse me, Captain,” she said timidly. Sam snorted as he walked past her.

“I think you have me mistaken for someone else, Ensign. And I am very late for a meeting with Admiral Sterling.” As Commander Sam Saberhagen disappeared into the admiral’s office, she called after him.

“He’s in a bad, mood, and…

“Damn, not again.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“You’re late,” barked Admiral Jackson Sterling. Sam shrugged.

“Sorry about that, sir. There was a delay at the transporter station, some sort of bug in the phase transition coils.”

“Sit, Commander.”

Sam did as instructed. He noticed the admiral’s uniform was nearly as crisp as the ensign’s who’d just accosted him, while his own was rumpled and very obviously – and recently, and frequently – slept in. Great, he thought sourly. Just great.

Adm. Sterling consulted a nearby notepad. “So, Commander Sa…”

“I go by Sam, sir, if you don’t mind.”

Adm. Sterling glowered at Sam. “I go by admiral, Commander, and I prefer not to be interrupted, if you don’t mind.” Adm. Sterling hefted a timeworn manila envelope stuffed with paper, let it thump forcefully on the desk. “Do you know what’s in this?”

Sam sighed. “I’m acutely aware of what’s in my service jacket, Admiral.” Sam recalled that Adm. Sterling liked using actual paper when he could, especially to make dramatic points when grilling subordinates.

The admiral growled. “Graduated Starfleet Academy 2260, steady rise through the ranks, a little faster than your contemporaries but not meteoric. Above average ratings in all assignments. After promotion to commander, served with distinction as first officer on USS Citadel, USS Roosevelt, USS T’Challa. 2267, in line for promotion to captain and starship command.” He fixed a burning stare at Sam. “Instead, you’ve been commanding various desks at remote, dead-end Starfleet facilities for the last 26 years. Why is that?”

“The Otorem Incident.” The stare intensified. “I know what torpedoed my career, sir. All due respect, is there a point?”

Adm. Sterling’s voice grew void-cold. “Oh, there’s a point, Commander. Three, actually.” He picked up some paper from the corner of the desk. “This point,” he said, “was your promotion to captain.” An evil smile curled the corner of his lips as he ripped a sheet of paper cleanly in half, top to bottom, and tossed the pieces aside. “And this point was a starship command.” Rip, toss.

“This last point,” and the evil smile grew to show teeth, “is your discharge from Starfleet. Other Than Honorable discharge, in case you were wondering. Why you weren’t cashiered out after the Otorem Incident, I have no idea, but by God it’s a mistake I’m thoroughly pleased to be able to correct.” Adm. Sterling shoved the paper at Sam. “You are a civilian, effective immediately. With an OTH discharge in your pocket, you’ll need divine intervention to get any job other than running a copy machine at Kinko’s.

“This could have gone differently, Mr. Saberhagen, if you’d been less lippy.” He looked thoughtful for a moment, as if deciding to share how differently, then choosing not to. “I’m glad I’ll never see you again, and believe me when I wish sincerely that you rot in Hell.

“Get out.”
 
Part XXI

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Orbital Office Annex Ajax Delta Niner, high geosynchronous orbit, Earth

Late 2293


* * * * * * * * * * * * *

The turbolift door opened slowly, revealing an attractive though somewhat mousey humanoid female, her maroon uniform so crisp the creases could cut solid neutronium. An ensign’s chevron graced the white bar at her right shoulder.

“Excuse, excuse me, Captain,” she said timidly. Sam snorted as he walked past her.

“I think you have me mistaken for someone else, Ensign. And I am very late for a meeting with Admiral Sterling.” As Commander Sam Saberhagen disappeared into the admiral’s office, she called after him.

“Sir, you really need, need to listen… Sir. Sir!

“Damn, not again.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“You’re late,” barked Admiral Jackson Sterling. Sam shrugged.

“Sorry about that, sir. There was a delay at the transporter station, some sort of bug in the biofilter.”

“Sit, Commander.”

Sam did as instructed. He noticed the admiral’s uniform was nearly as crisp as the ensign’s who’d just accosted him, while his own was rumpled and very obviously – and recently, and frequently – slept in. Great, he thought sourly. Just great.

Adm. Sterling consulted a nearby notepad. “So, Commander Sa…”

“I go by Sam, sir, if you don’t mind.”

Adm. Sterling glowered at Sam. “I go by admiral, Commander, and I prefer not to be interrupted, if you don’t mind.” Adm. Sterling hefted a timeworn manila envelope stuffed with paper, let it thump forcefully on the desk. “Do you know what’s in this?”

Sam sighed. “I’m keenly aware of what’s in my service jacket, admiral.” Sam recalled that Adm. Sterling liked using actual paper when he could, especially to make dramatic points when grilling subordinates.

The admiral growled. “Graduated Starfleet Academy 2260, steady rise through the ranks, a little faster than your contemporaries but not meteoric. Above average ratings in all assignments. After promotion to commander, served with distinction as first officer on USS Citadel, USS Roosevelt, USS T’Challa. 2267, in line for promotion to captain and starship command.” He fixed a burning stare at Sam. “Instead, you’ve been commanding various desks at remote, dead-end Starfleet facilities for the last 26 years. Why is that?”

“The Otorem Incident.” The stare intensified. “I know what torpedoed my career, sir. All due respect, is there a point?”

Adm. Sterling’s voice grew void-cold. “Oh, there’s a point, Commander. Three, actually.” He picked up some paper from the corner of the desk. “This point,” he said, “was your promotion to captain.” An evil smile curled the corner of his lips as he ripped a sheet of paper cleanly in half, top to bottom, and tossed the pieces aside. “And this point was a starship command.” Rip, toss.

“This last point,” and the evil smile grew to show teeth, “is your discharge from Starfleet. Other Than Honorable discharge, in case you were wondering. Why you weren’t cashiered out after the Otorem Incident, I have no idea, but by God it’s a mistake I’m thoroughly pleased to be able to correct.” Adm. Sterling shoved the paper at Sam. “You are a civilian, effective immediately. With an OTH discharge in your pocket, you’ll need divine intervention to get any job other than delivering to the Klingons for Kerblam.

“This could have gone differently, Mr. Saberhagen, if you’d been less lippy.” He looked thoughtful for a moment, as if deciding to share how differently, then choosing not to. “I’m glad I’ll never see you again, and believe me when I wish sincerely that you rot in Hell.

“Get out.”
 
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Part XLII

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Orbital Office Annex Ajax Delta Niner, high geosynchronous orbit, Earth

Late 2293


* * * * * * * * * * * * *

The turbolift door opened slowly, revealing an attractive though somewhat mousey humanoid female, her maroon uniform so crisp the creases could cut solid neutronium. An ensign’s chevron graced the white bar at her right shoulder.

“Excuse, excuse me, Captain,” she said timidly. Sam snorted as he walked past her.

“I think you have me mistaken for someone else, Ensign. And I am very late for a meeting with Admiral Sterling.” Sam moved towards the admiral’s office, but the ensign got in his way, a frustrated look on her face.

“The admiral is in a very bad mood, and will have no, no tolerance for your current attitude,” she said. Sam was surprised by the forcefulness of her voice. “You need to, need to shut up and listen to him. Act like the future depends, depends on it.” Her voice grew soft, pleading. “Please.”

Something in her face gave Commander Sam Saberhagen pause. “I’ll try,” he said.

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“You’re late,” barked Admiral Jackson Sterling. Sam snapped to attention.

“I’m very sorry, sir. There was a delay at the transporter station, some sort of bug in the molecular imaging scanner.”

“Sit, Commander.”

“Aye, sir.” Sam did as instructed. He noticed the admiral’s uniform was nearly as crisp as the ensign’s who’d just accosted him, while his own was rumpled and very obviously – and recently, and frequently – slept in. Great, he thought sourly. Just great.

Adm. Sterling consulted a nearby notepad. “So, Commander Sa…” The admiral paused, chuckled a bit cruelly. “That’s your given name? No wonder you go by Sam.”

Sam blushed slightly. “There are family stories as to why that name, sir. Personally, I’m convinced alcohol was involved. Lots of alcohol."

Adm. Sterling chuckled again. “No doubt, Commander.” He hefted a timeworn manila envelope stuffed with paper, let it thump forcefully on the desk. “Do you know what’s in this?”

Sam started to sigh, but recalled the ensign’s warning. “Yes sir. I’m very aware of what’s in my service jacket, Admiral.” Sam recalled that Adm. Sterling liked using actual paper when he could, especially to make dramatic points when grilling subordinates.

The admiral coughed. “Graduated Starfleet Academy 2260, steady rise through the ranks, a little faster than your contemporaries but not meteoric. Above average ratings in all assignments. After promotion to commander, served with distinction as first officer on USS Citadel, USS Roosevelt, USS T’Challa. 2267, in line for promotion to captain and starship command.” He fixed a tired stare at Sam. “Instead, you’ve been commanding various desks at remote, dead-end Starfleet facilities for the last 26 years. Why is that?”

“The Otorem Incident.” The stare went from tired to intense. “It killed my career faster than a Tamaranian cheetah.”

“Indeed,” said Admiral Sterling. “And why you weren’t cashiered out of Starfleet after that, I have no idea.” He coughed again. “If we didn’t have the need, by God, it’s a mistake I’d be thoroughly pleased to correct, and this meeting would see you Other Than Honorably discharged.” His eyes lost focus for a moment, apparently considering his options. “It might be a better choice, Commander.”

“Need, Admiral?”

Adm. Sterling’s voice was quiet, as if the words were distasteful. “For a starship captain.” For a moment, Sam thought the admiral might actually spit in an effort to clear his mouth. Instead, he continued.

“We lost the USS Resolute two weeks ago in the Palatine Sound. She’s the fifth ship lost in as many months.”

"Palatine Sound, sir?” Sam asked, incredulously. “The concentration of spatial and supposedly temporal anomalies in that chunk of space is unmatched anywhere else. Begging your pardon, sir, but why are we sending ships in there?”

Adm. Sterling sighed. “Forgive the cliché, commander, but what I’m about to tell you is highly classified. We’re well aware of the various anomalies, but there’s a source of dikronium in there, the purest we’ve ever come across. We have a small mining operation, and the ships were sent to guard it. But for some reason, they keep disappearing. Although, two of the ships, USS Lightning and USS Caladan, reappeared last month, ten sectors away with all hands.. well, let’s say dead and leave it at that.” Sam swallowed in a suddenly dry throat. “If the dikronium wasn’t so valuable we’d scuttle the mine and salt the earth so no one else could excavate there.

“We need a ship to guard that mining operation, Commander. The only reason you’re here is, quite frankly, no one else will take the assignment. Not to mention, the only ship we have available is a Block II Constitution uprated build, USS Bunker Hill, NCC-1775. She’s not a refit, but she is one of the older Connie builds, and well, she’s seen better days. They’re working on her now, but we have to get a ship to the Palatine Sound a week ago, so she won’t get the attention she needs.

“And yes, I know you’re not completely stupid – at least I hope you’re not – but to answer the question you likely have as to why we don’t send a task force in there, well, can you imagine the attention it would attract? So we send one ship, ostensibly to support the quote-unquote research facility and escort the quote-unquote supply ships that arrive periodically.

“If you take the assignment, your only objective is to protect that mine, and that at all costs. You are not to investigate the anomalies. You are not to try to find out why the other five ships disappeared. Make no mistake, Commander, that mine and its output are obscenely more valuable than you, the ship, and her crew. If you don’t, I punch your ticket now, and with an OTH discharge in your pocket, you’ll need divine intervention to get any job other than scrubbing sand out of ornithopter engines on Arrakis.”

A decidedly malicious grin crossed Adm. Sterling’s face. “By the by, Commander, if you do take the promotion and the command, you will be reporting directly to me, and if I think there’s a shadow of a shadow of a chance that you’ve screwed up, not only will I punch your ticket out of Starfleet, I’ll clean your chronometer while I’m at it.

“Those are your choices, Commander.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Sam Saberhagen walked out of Admiral Sterling’s office with a grimace on his lips and the beginnings of a jolly shiner over his left eye. He ignored the look of surprise on the face of the ensign who’d accosted him on his way in. Sam muttered to himself as the turbolift doors opened, and hawked blood on to the floor as they closed.

“Self-righteous son of a bitch…”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“I thought this time, this time we had him,” she said as she tossed her uniform jacket onto a nearby chair. “I understand why, why they called these ‘monster maroons’,” she commented. “The uniforms, uniforms of this era look quite, quite impressive, but after five minutes they get heavy. I don’t know how, know how they remained in use for so long.”

“Better these than those footie pajamas from a few years ago,” replied a male voice. “You’ll have to try again,” he said, in a soft-spoken tone that nevertheless carried a considerable weight of command.

She sighed. “Why can’t, why can’t you do it? And why can’t we just, just tell him?”

“You know I can’t be seen in this era,” he said with a smile in his voice, “not again. And especially not by Adm. Sterling.

“And you know the choice has to be his. Sam has to decide to take the command.”

She laughed tiredly. “I sincerely hope he decides soon. I want, want to go home.”

“I know. I do too.”

“We almost had him this time…”
 
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Part LVIII

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Orbital Office Annex Ajax Delta Niner, high geosynchronous orbit, Earth

Late 2293


* * * * * * * * * * * * *

The turbolift door opened slowly, revealing an attractive though somewhat mousey humanoid female, her maroon uniform so crisp the creases could cut solid neutronium. An ensign’s chevron graced the white bar at her right shoulder.

“Excuse, excuse me, Captain,” she said timidly. Sam snorted as he walked past her.

“I think you have me mistaken for someone else, Ensign. And I am very late for a meeting with Admiral Sterling.” Sam moved towards the admiral’s office, but the ensign got in his way, a tired and very frustrated look on her face.

“The admiral is in a very bad mood, and will have no, no tolerance for your current attitude,” she said. Sam was surprised by the forcefulness of her voice. “You need to, need to shut up and listen to him this time. Act like the future depends, depends on it.” Her voice grew soft, pleading. “Please.”

Sam furrowed his brow. “This time?” The ensign ignored his comment but held her ground for just a moment longer before moving out of his way. Something in her face gave Commander Sam Saberhagen pause.

“I’ll try,” he said.

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

“You’re late,” barked Admiral Jackson Sterling. Sam snapped to attention.

“I’m very sorry, sir. There was a delay at the transporter station, some sort of bug in the pattern buffer.”

“Sit, Commander.”

“Aye, sir.” Sam did as instructed. He noticed the admiral’s uniform was nearly as crisp as the ensign’s who’d just accosted him, while his own was rumpled and very obviously – and recently, and frequently – slept in. Great, he thought sourly. Just great.

Adm. Sterling consulted a nearby notepad. “So, Commander Sa…” The admiral paused, chuckled a bit cruelly. “That’s your given name? No wonder you go by Sam.”

Sam blushed slightly. “There are family stories as to why that name, sir. Personally, I’m convinced alcohol was involved. Lots of alcohol."

Adm. Sterling chuckled again. “No doubt, Commander.” He hefted a timeworn manila envelope stuffed with paper, let it thump forcefully on the desk. “Do you know what’s in this?”

Sam started to sigh, but recalled the ensign’s warning. “Yes sir. I’m very aware of what’s in my service jacket, Admiral.” Sam recalled that Adm. Sterling liked using actual paper when he could, especially to make dramatic points when grilling subordinates.

The admiral coughed. “Graduated Starfleet Academy 2260, steady rise through the ranks, a little faster than your contemporaries but not meteoric. Above average ratings in all assignments. After promotion to commander, served with distinction as first officer on USS Citadel, USS Roosevelt, USS T’Challa. 2267, in line for promotion to captain and starship command.” He fixed a tired stare at Sam. “Instead, you’ve been commanding various desks at remote, dead-end Starfleet facilities for the last 26 years. Why is that?”

“The Otorem Incident.” The stare went from tired to intense. “It killed my career faster than a Tamaranian cheetah.”

“Indeed,” said Admiral Sterling. “And why you weren’t cashiered out of Starfleet after that, I have no idea.” He coughed again. “If we didn’t have the need, by God, it’s a mistake I’d be thoroughly pleased to correct, and this meeting would see you Other Than Honorably discharged.” His eyes lost focus for a moment, apparently considering his options. “It might be a better choice, Commander.”

“Need, Admiral?”

Adm. Sterling’s voice was quiet, as if the words were distasteful. “For a starship captain.” For a moment, Sam thought the admiral might actually spit in an effort to clear his mouth. Instead, he continued.

“We lost the USS Resolute two weeks ago in the Palatine Sound. She’s the fifth ship lost in as many months.”

“Palatine Sound, sir?” Sam asked, incredulously. “The concentration of spatial and supposedly temporal anomalies in that chunk of space is unmatched anywhere else. Begging your pardon, sir, but why are we sending ships in there?”

Adm. Sterling sighed. “Forgive the cliché, commander, but what I’m about to tell you is highly classified. We’re well aware of the various anomalies, but there’s a source of dikronium in there, the purest we’ve ever come across. We have a small mining operation, and the ships were sent to guard it. But for some reason, they keep disappearing. Although, two of the ships, USS Lightning and USS Caladan, reappeared last month, ten sectors away with all hands.. well, let’s say dead and leave it at that.” Sam swallowed in a suddenly dry throat. “If the dikronium wasn’t so valuable we’d scuttle the mine and salt the earth so no one else could excavate there.

“We need a ship to guard that mining operation, Commander. The only reason you’re here is, quite frankly, no one else will take the assignment. Not to mention, the only ship we have available is a Block II Constitution uprated build, USS Bunker Hill, NCC-1775. She’s not a refit, but she is one of the older Connie builds, and well, she’s seen better days. They’re working on her now, but we have to get a ship to the Palatine Sound a week ago, so she won’t get the attention she needs.

“And yes, I know you’re not completely stupid – at least I hope you’re not – but to answer the question you likely have as to why we don’t send a task force in there, well, can you imagine the attention it would attract? So we send one ship, ostensibly to support the quote-unquote research facility and escort the quote-unquote supply ships that arrive periodically.

“If you take the assignment, your only objective is to protect that mine, and that at all costs. You are not to investigate the anomalies. You are not to try to find out why the other five ships disappeared. Make no mistake, Commander, that mine and its output are obscenely more valuable than you, the ship, and her crew. If you don’t, I punch your ticket now, and with an OTH discharge in your pocket, you’ll need divine intervention to get any job other than restroom maintenance at Utopia Planitia.”

A decidedly malicious grin crossed Adm. Sterling’s face. “By the by, Commander, if you do take the promotion and the command, you will be reporting directly to me, and if I think there’s a shadow of a shadow of a chance that you’ve screwed up, not only will I punch your ticket out of Starfleet, I’ll clean your chronometer while I’m at it.

“Those are your choices, Commander.”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Sam Saberhagen walked out of Admiral Sterling’s office with a frown on his face, obviously lost in thought. He ignored the questioning look on the face of the ensign who’d accosted him on his way in. Sam muttered to himself as the turbolift doors opened, and was shaking his head slightly as they closed.

“Self-righteous son of a bitch…”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Westbridge (suburb of Boston), Massachusetts, Earth

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

Sam Saberhagen put down the razor and wiped his face with a nearby towel. He looked tiredly at himself in the mirror. Like just about everything else in his home, the historic Spellman House – it had been in his family for hundreds of years – it was an antique.

Like that ship they gave me, he thought with a wry smile. And like me. His face, once handsomely chiseled, had gone somewhat craggy over the years, and the hair that had been obsidian-black was now a granite grey.

“Lord help me, I’m too old for this,” he said to the empty bathroom. “Can’t believe I said yes…”

* * * * * * * * * * * * *

The Beginning...


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Very cool. I'm digging it.
Other Than Honorable discharge
Thank you for getting that right. I cringe every time NCIS and other such shows throw around the terms Dishonorable Discharge and Bad Conduct Discharge as being routine. Granted, things my change between now and Trek, but in today's world, those two can only be the result of a Courts Martial.
With an OTH discharge in your pocket, you’ll need divine intervention to get any job other than slinging burgers at McDonald’s.
Yep, pretty much. Job options will be somewhat limited. One of my troops screwed up enough to get an OTH. Last I heard, he was a window washer on high rise buildings in Dallas. And then there's the loss of a lot of benefits (no VA medical, no government backed home/student loans, etc).
 
Minor edit: the Palatine Expanse has become the Palatine Sound, mainly because there are way too many "expanses" in Trek IMO, lol, and Sound was the word I was looking for when I posted the entry, I just couldn't think of it at the time :D
 
I just noticed this:
Part I
Part XIII
Part XXI
Part XLII
Part LVIII
So, it took 58 tries to get it right? Stubborn cuss, isn't he?

Now then, thinking about my own story TIMELINES (see link below) it makes me wonder what happened 'next' in all those other bifurcated universes........
 
I just noticed this:

So, it took 58 tries to get it right? Stubborn cuss, isn't he?

Now then, thinking about my own story TIMELINES (see link below) it makes me wonder what happened 'next' in all those other bifurcated universes........

I thought that "Part I, Part XIII etc" was pretty clever, lol. And yes, Sam has a stubborn streak. There were other forces at play though, as evidenced by the very minor differences between the Parts (aside from him saying yes) which I hope/plan to explore in future stories.

As far as what happened in the other Parts when he said no, I don't know if that's a can of worms I want to crack open :D
 
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