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August 30, 1966 Writer-Director Information (i.e., "Guide")

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Recently purchased a copy, said to be owned by the original owner since September 1966; since he provided the original postmarked Desilu Productions envelope, addressed to him, I have no reason to doubt that. Anyway, is this version of the guide well known? I could not find much info. about it online (as opposed to the "Third Revision", dated April 17, 1967). It is 20 pages long, as opposed to the 31 page later version, and as one would expect based on it preceding the airing of the first episode, there are significant differences in the character, sets and technology descriptions.

As someone who is especially interested in information related to special FX work, I found the following passage esp. interesting (bold emphasis mine):

"The two outboard nacelles contain matter and antimatter, a controlled intermixing of which creates the stupendous power needed. We are presently searching for an optical effect in, about, or between these nacelles which will make their spectacular potential seem more obvious to the eye."​

This is news to me at least; as this was of course never realized. Was it mentioned in later versions of the guide? I found one online source for the April '67 version that does not seem to mention it (presumably because it was dropped).

Another thing of interest to me is that in a copy of an MSEI press release included with the guide, it mentions that the Enterprise is so huge in fact that 'the "miniature" photographic model is over fourteen feet long'. I gather this was the germ for later incorrect reporting of the 11 footer's length for many years.

Assuming this is not old news to most, and there is interest, I can try to post some scans (not sure if my newbie status here prevents that just yet).
 
Recently purchased a copy, said to be owned by the original owner since September 1966; since he provided the original postmarked Desilu Productions envelope, addressed to him, I have no reason to doubt that. Anyway, is this version of the guide well known? I could not find much info. about it online (as opposed to the "Third Revision", dated April 17, 1967). It is 20 pages long, as opposed to the 31 page later version, and as one would expect based on it preceding the airing of the first episode, there are significant differences in the character, sets and technology descriptions.

As someone who is especially interested in information related to special FX work, I found the following passage esp. interesting (bold emphasis mine):

"The two outboard nacelles contain matter and antimatter, a controlled intermixing of which creates the stupendous power needed. We are presently searching for an optical effect in, about, or between these nacelles which will make their spectacular potential seem more obvious to the eye."​

This is news to me at least; as this was of course never realized. Was it mentioned in later versions of the guide? I found one online source for the April '67 version that does not seem to mention it (presumably because it was dropped).

Another thing of interest to me is that in a copy of an MSEI press release included with the guide, it mentions that the Enterprise is so huge in fact that 'the "miniature" photographic model is over fourteen feet long'. I gather this was the germ for later incorrect reporting of the 11 footer's length for many years.

Assuming this is not old news to most, and there is interest, I can try to post some scans (not sure if my newbie status here prevents that just yet).

I have a copy of this (also, the first draft, dated March 15, 1966, plus a few memos related to the various guides, and the latest draft, the third season most often circulated).

Not sure if that bit about the VFX is in the first draft. I will check in a bit.
 
Very interesting; stands to reason there would be an earlier version. Armed with the date (March 15), I was able to find the following information about its contents (from the description of an auction for a copy of that version):

Guide consists of 18 pages (including cover page), dated March 15, 1966, making this the first of three versions made while the series was in production, with this version being issued before a single episode was written. Guide lists James T. Kirk as the main character, Mister Spock with “satanic pointed ears,” as the principal supporting role, and lists other cast regulars as “a taciturn Scottish Engineering Officer; an Oriental Physicist; a brilliant but sometimes immature Navigator; Phillip ‘Bones’ Piper, M. D., ship’s doctor and worldly cynic; and an uncomfortably lovely Captain’s Yeoman.” guide also answers many questions the writers may come up with including warp travel, the ship’s weapons, and alien life.
Clearly has some holdovers from the second pilot.
 
Yet another standout for me at least from the August '66 guide is as follows (bold mine):

The saucer "is approximately 20 stories thick at its widest spot, containing also primary ship's departments, living accommodations, recreational facilities, laboratories, and is in fact a completely self-sustaining unit which can detach itself from the galaxy drive units and operate on atomic impulse power for short range solar system exploration."​

I am not surprised by this language with the benefit of hindsight, rather that it was considered so early. As far as I can tell, saucer-separation capability does not appear in the April '67 version of the guide.

I assume that the reference to a 20 deck / story saucer indicates either a typo (the intended meaning being 20 decks in the entire ship, close to current thinking) or "primordial" thinking.
 
Apologies for the multiple posts (as a newbie here, I can't edit post yet); I see now that in at least one example of the guide available online (hosted on Lee Thomson's site) , the earlier 20-page September '66 guide (sans title page that would include the revision date) follows the first 31-page guide from April '67.
 
Yes, I left and came back. I asked an admin. to close my account (which was not really that long standing) because I felt I was wasting too much time here, but then found I couldn't stay away.:)
 
The comment about the nacelle effect is in the very first draft of the bible (March 15, 1966, less than 3 weeks after NBC bought the show, and right around the time the first freelance writers were being drafted).
 
For those who may not have seen before:
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