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Any chance of an unmade scripts book?

Would you like to read a scriptbook collecting unmade episodes and movies?

  • Hell yeah.

    Votes: 20 90.9%
  • Meh.

    Votes: 2 9.1%

  • Total voters
    22

Saul

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There must be a ton of unmade scripts from TOS, TAS, TNG, DS9, VOY, ENT, Phase II and the Movies. What do you think of collection of some of the best unmade scripts as a book? We've had script books before of already filmed episodes but I think there is a lot of interesting stuff we haven't read.
Of course there are probably a lot of complications in publishing such a book but I always think it's a shame that the majority of this stuff will never see the light of day.
 
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Doctor Who have made this into a cottage industry. They've unearthed some fascinating unmade scripts and story outlines over the years.
 
While I think this is a a cool idea, I wonder if enough of the scripts would have been completed to make a book of them. I don't mind reading scripts, but I think I would rather see them adapted into novels.
 
While I think this is a a cool idea, I wonder if enough of the scripts would have been completed to make a book of them. I don't mind reading scripts, but I think I would rather see them adapted into novels.
I believe there are phase II scripts which are competed. The Romulan War and Starfleet Academy scripts are complete. Insurrection alternate scripts etc.
 
I didn't realize those had already been written, I they were pretty much all just concepts, or maybe basic outlines.
 
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This is a great idea. I think the Phase II book had some story outlines, but not full scripts.
 
As I recall the Phase 2 book had the original script for "In Thy Image" (what later became "Star a Trek The Motion Picture") and the first three episodes.

But the James Blish Anthologies of the late-60's, early-70's should also be mentioned because some of the stories differ based on what was broadcast because Blish was using a lot of early scripts.
 
There was an Allan Asherman "unproduced scripts" book that was announced in 1988(?), with cover art advertised - and I think the book was even printed then pulped, due to legal complications. Studios like to hang onto their old scripts: sometimes they do get used (eg. TNG's "The Child" and "Devil's Due", previously shelved "Phase II" scripts).
Cover pic:
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/15418663-the-star-trek-that-never-was
https://www.amazon.com/Star-Trek-That-Never-Was/dp/0671614428

A "Files Magazine" by John Peel had the same title, featuring different script (summaries), but was unofficial.
 
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I didn't realize those had already been written, I they were pretty much all just concepts, or maybe basic outlines.
There is a script review of Academy years and Star Trek the Beginning here.

Some Phase II scripts popped up here on Trek BBS a long time ago but you won't find them now for obvious reasons.
'Planet of the Titans' reached script phase. The Roddenberry Vault released some TAS unmade scripts. Must have been a few Star Trek II scripts before they got to TWOK.
 
Equally valuable to the original scripts would be a synopsis-style summary that helped the reader get a feel for the plot structure. without having to wade through the whole script. (Both would be included in the book?)

Possibly illustrations in a comic format as well to allow more visual thinkers to comprehend better too.
 
Hey, that's my cover scan on Goodreads. Certainly looks like it, anyway. For the second time today, from the ol' Lost Books page (https://web.archive.org/web/20141017111042id_/http://www.well.com/~sjroby/lostbooks.html#88st)"

The Star Trek That Never Was (1988)

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On a quarterly basis, Locus, the "newspaper of the science fiction field," lists books due to be published in the next several months. In June, 1988, Locus listed The Star Trek That Never Was by Allan Asherman as a planned October, 1988 release from Pocket Books. It was also listed, with a reproduction of the cover art, in the September, 1988 issue of Science Fiction Chronicle, again as an October release. According to novelist Margaret Wander Bonanno's website, this book "was produced, shipped to the warehouses and, the night before it was due to arrive in bookstores, sent to the shredders instead."

Judging by the cover copy ("adventures written for the original series and its planned sequel"), this was a book about unproduced episodes of Star Trek, covering the same subject as the thin, overpriced books The Star Trek That Never Was and The Star Trek That Almost Was published by the Star Trek Files Magazine group (also known as Schuster and Schuster, Couch Potato Press, Pioneer Books, etc.). Those little ripoffs had plot summaries of episodes written for the original Star Trek and the aborted Phase II series. Interestingly, the cover copy for Pocket's book says that it was "compiled by Allan Asherman, featuring material by Norman Spinrad" et al. Perhaps this book actually reproduced scripts and story treatments, rather than just summarizing them.

As if by coincidence, the Asherman book was due for publication during a writers' strike in Hollywood, and "The Child", the premiere episode of The Next Generation's second season, was based on an unused Phase II script. Did Paramount order Pocket to drop the book so they could have some unused scripts to work with? Maybe. Another script was retooled ("Devil's Due"), and only now has a book on Phase II been published (Star Trek Phase II: The Lost Series by Garfield and Judith Reeves-Stevens).​

As for the original series material, Theodore Sturgeon's proposed episode, which would have been in this book, has since been adapted into novel form (The Joy Machine by James Gunn), but we may have lost some other intriguing stories.​

As for the Files Magazines, there were two, The Star Trek That Never Was and The Star Trek That Almost Was. From my old Complete Starfleet Library website:

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The Star Trek That Almost Was

This being a Hal Schuster production, it should come as no surprise that the cover blurb actually describes another book, The Star Trek That Never Was (see below). This book contains skimpy retellings of plot outlines for proposed episodes for the original series that were never filmed. Stories summarized are "Rockabye Baby, Or Die," by George Clayton Johnson (who wrote "The Man Trap" and several Twilight Zone episodes), "The Joy Machine" by Theodore Sturgeon (who wrote "Shore Leave" and "Amok Time" and many classic science fiction stories and novels; this was turned into a novel by James Gunn); "The Lost Star" and "The Godhead" by John Meredyth Lucas ("The Changeling" and several other TOS episodes), "Shol" by Darlene Hartman, "Pandora's Box" by Daniel Louis Aubry, "The Aurorals" by Frank Paris, "Perchance to Dream" by J.M. Winston, and "He Walked Among Us" by Norman Spinrad ("The Doomsday Machine" and several classic SF stories and novels).

There may be as much as twenty pages' worth of text in this book. The rest of the space is filled with black and white behind-the-scenes photos from the original series, at least one used twice. While it's interesting to read summaries of proposed episodes by the likes of Sturgeon and Spinrad, this is still a rather typical Hal Schuster book: badly produced, short on content, overpriced.

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The Star Trek That Never Was

In a typical Hal Schuster publishing screwup, this book's back cover blurb proudly describes the contents of another book entirely -- in this case, The Star Trek That Almost Was (see above). This is the book described on that book's cover, a very brief exploration of the unproduced Star Trek Phase II series from the last 1970s. Described in this book are the unfilmed episodes "In Thy Image" (which eventually became, with extensive rewriting, Star Trek: The Motion Picture), "Kitumba," "Dead Lock," and "Tomorrow and the Stars." Considerably more information is available in the Star Trek Phase II book by Garfield and Judith Reeves-Stevens, published by Pocket.

Because the author had only a few pages of material on the Star Trek II series, the rest of the book is full of photographs and a section on Star Trek soundtracks.
Norman Spinrad's unproduced script He Walked Among Us was available as an ebook on Amazon for a couple of years, but was gone the last time I looked.
 
Hey, that's my cover scan on Goodreads. Certainly looks like it, anyway. For the second time today, from the ol' Lost Books page (https://web.archive.org/web/20141017111042id_/http://www.well.com/~sjroby/lostbooks.html#88st)"

The Star Trek That Never Was (1988)

asherman.jpg

On a quarterly basis, Locus, the "newspaper of the science fiction field," lists books due to be published in the next several months. In June, 1988, Locus listed The Star Trek That Never Was by Allan Asherman as a planned October, 1988 release from Pocket Books. It was also listed, with a reproduction of the cover art, in the September, 1988 issue of Science Fiction Chronicle, again as an October release. According to novelist Margaret Wander Bonanno's website, this book "was produced, shipped to the warehouses and, the night before it was due to arrive in bookstores, sent to the shredders instead."

Judging by the cover copy ("adventures written for the original series and its planned sequel"), this was a book about unproduced episodes of Star Trek, covering the same subject as the thin, overpriced books The Star Trek That Never Was and The Star Trek That Almost Was published by the Star Trek Files Magazine group (also known as Schuster and Schuster, Couch Potato Press, Pioneer Books, etc.). Those little ripoffs had plot summaries of episodes written for the original Star Trek and the aborted Phase II series. Interestingly, the cover copy for Pocket's book says that it was "compiled by Allan Asherman, featuring material by Norman Spinrad" et al. Perhaps this book actually reproduced scripts and story treatments, rather than just summarizing them.

As if by coincidence, the Asherman book was due for publication during a writers' strike in Hollywood, and "The Child", the premiere episode of The Next Generation's second season, was based on an unused Phase II script. Did Paramount order Pocket to drop the book so they could have some unused scripts to work with? Maybe. Another script was retooled ("Devil's Due"), and only now has a book on Phase II been published (Star Trek Phase II: The Lost Series by Garfield and Judith Reeves-Stevens).​
Wow, so no copies of this have ever sneaked out? What a pity if the answer is no.
 
Wow, so no copies of this have ever sneaked out? What a pity if the answer is no.

When i was trying to recall the exact title, I did perform a Google search that found a webpage that boasted to be a print-on-demand version of this cancelled book, but I have no intention of supporting it. (It may only be the "Files Magazines" publications reprinted was a false title?)

Norman Spinrad's unproduced script He Walked Among Us was available as an ebook on Amazon for a couple of years, but was gone the last time I looked.

Yes, it vanished when CBS requested that the "Phase II" fan films not go ahead with their plans to adapt the script as an audiovisual production.
 
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The Star Trek That Never Was by Allan Asherman as a planned October, 1988 release from Pocket Books. It was also listed, with a reproduction of the cover art, in the September, 1988 issue of Science Fiction Chronicle, again as an October release. According to novelist Margaret Wander Bonanno's website, this book "was produced, shipped to the warehouses and, the night before it was due to arrive in bookstores, sent to the shredders instead."
:barf2: ugh gods....
 
What a disgusting waste. That sort of thing should be illegal.

I'm sure that it would have been and there is no chance that the materials would have been turned into something else, like other books, newspapers or bog roll. Nope, no chance at all.
 
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