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A United Trek Tale - "For the Empire"

Excellent segment. I'm eager to find out if things will continue to go this smoothly once the Klingons enter the picture ... or should I say Starfleet enters the Klingon's picture?

In any case, things will probably be as smooth as those Klingon foreheads (post TOS of course.)
 
Something's gonna hit the fan, and I'm eagerly looking forward to what, or who.

Aurelia sure has some growing up to do and Hobson is only following the regs, whether he likes it or not. The tactically superior ship is deferred to. As for Kojo, I have a feeling she's as much a warrior as any Klingon.

I'm liking this very much.
 
The tactically superior ship is deferred to.

True, and the reg is also probably the dumbest thing to come out of canon Star Trek. It throws away the tried and true methods of determining command authority (rank and seniority) and reduces it to the methodology of the bully: "My starship can kick your starship's ass so I get to be in charge, so there! :p"

Only in Star Trek, ladies and gentlemen!
 
Well actually its the same for most Navies as tactically superior ships are given to officers as they move up in seniority. Trek is actually odd in that in most navies, a lot of Captains aren't even captains, but junior officers given command of smaller ships
 
Well actually its the same for most Navies as tactically superior ships are given to officers as they move up in seniority.

We are not talking about who gets command of an individual ship. We are talking about what happens when two or more ships rendevous to operate together and a chain of command must be laid out, and no navy on the planet run by people with half a brain will tell its officers "if your ship is tougher, you get to be in charge," because that's just begging for interfleet mutiny. Multiship chain-of-command is determined by rank and seniority, period. It's why a Vice Admiral with two years in rank on a command ship with no guns can tell a Vice Admiral with one year in rank on an aircraft carrier what to do. Trek's way, the carrier admiral can tell the command ship admiral "f-you, i'm doing it my way and if you don't like it, i'll sink your ass!" Only in trek does that make any kind of sense!
 
Blame the Voyager "Equinox" writers: Berman, Braga, and Menosky. It makes me wonder which one came up with it. :vulcan:
 
Yeah, it is a pretty stupid rule.

Say, uh, *ahem* maybe we could, uh, change it? Maybe Janeway was under the influence of some alien parasite that made her say irrational things. Frequently.

It could have happened.

Just sayin' ;)
 
Yeah, it is a pretty stupid rule.

Say, uh, *ahem* maybe we could, uh, change it? Maybe Janeway was under the influence of some alien parasite that made her say irrational things. Frequently.

It could have happened.

Just sayin' ;)
How dare you, sir! HOW DARE YOU!!! :klingon: How could you even suggest that something appearing on Voyager not be considered canon!

:lol:

Works for me, man. I don't think someone who gets her ship stranded on the opposite side of the galaxy actually deserves to determine who gets to command their little flotilla.

Just sayin'...
 
See, I think command should devolve to the guy with the bigger-oh, wait, some of these captains are women. Forget I said anything.:p
 
While I agree, it's an odd reg., in this particular situation, it's a moot point. Kojo is also the senior captain.

I have no problem kinda...ignoring that little detail in the future. ;)
 
While I agree, it's an odd reg., in this particular situation, it's a moot point. Kojo is also the senior captain.

I thank thee for clarifying. :)

I have no problem kinda...ignoring that little detail in the future. ;)

That would be nice. The main problem with the concept is that the definition of "tactically superior" is always arguable and every captain wants to prove how bad-ass his command is. In this particular case, it's always been my contention that the Defiant-class design is an overhyped piece of crap, and if Kojo had been put in charge simply because she commanded one, I would have suggested the other captains throw down with her and make her prove how superior it is.

But that's just me, and it's unnecessary anyway. ;)
 
In this instance, it would be the ship with the most firepower, the biggest ship, so as said, moot point.
 
In this instance, it would be the ship with the most firepower, the biggest ship, so as said, moot point.

An aircraft carrier is bigger and has more firepower than a submarine, but submarines have advantages that would allow them to sink or at least severely damage carriers. That's why carriers need escorts. Bigger and more guns doesn't automatically mean "winner".

So, like I said, I would have made her prove how tough it is.
 
CHAPTER 9

Supplemental
IKS Kang, MainBridge
In Orbit of Fu’puk II

General K’Vada strode on to the metal deck like a predator, “ja’

Captain H’ta, an Order of the Bat’leth member, promptly reported, “Sa’K’Vada, three Federation ships have entered the system and are on an intercept course.”

Though, K’Vada expected this, he was annoyed; annoyed that General Lorath correctly predicted the event, annoyed that he was involved in his scheme, and annoyed that he now had to play his part. A low grumble evolved into, “naDev Suq ghorgh

H’ta turned toward his sensor officer and scowled.

The officer seemed to fear for his life as he confirmed and relayed the data, “At full impulse, they’ll be here in 20 minutes.”

The Kang captain closed the gap between him and the general, “All three vessels have their weapons active…and their shields down.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Perseus, MainBridge
In the Fu’puk System in delta formation with the USS Destrier and Independence

The Iceman sensed the room. The bridge was tense, yet professional.

Captain Kojo was adamant about their posture.

Outwardly, Captain Hobson was stoic. Inwardly, however, he was concerned. He wasn’t sure this gesture would be received as it was intended.

*****

Supplemental
IKS Kang, MainBridge
In Orbit of Fu’puk II

K’Vada stood a bit straighter at the revelation, “cha’jIH

At his command, the viewer displayed the Starfleet formation with tactical data overlaid.

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, MainBridge
In the Fu’puk System in delta formation with the USS Destrier and Perseus

Rap, tap, tap. Rap, tap, tap. The sound permeated the bridge. Kimula glanced around. It was not distracting only her. Finally, she left her post to confront the culprit.

“Sintina,” the Andorian counselor whispered, “I thought we talked about making the bridge crew nervous.”

Aurelia stopped rapping her fingers on her armrest and looked up, “Better?”

Lieutenant Soma grinned and returned to her seat.

“Have they noticed us, yet?” questioned Aurelia.

Faltyne answered, “I sure they have, ma’am.”

The Honduran captain crossed her arms and said a barely audible, “I hope she knows what she’s doing.”

*****

Supplemental
IKS Kang, MainBridge
In Orbit of Fu’puk II

The general nodded in respect, “chaH van

H’ta stepped back in bewilderment.

“You heard me,” pressed the general, “They have honored us. We shall salute them in return.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Destrier, MainBridge
In the Fu’puk System in the lead position with the USS Independence and Perseus

Kirce Carrick, a rather attractive human female, reported, “Captain, the Klingon fleet has powered up their weapons.”

“And their shields?” asked the Kriosian task force commander.

Lieutenant Commander Carrick responded, “Down, sir.”

Kojo smirked in triumph. Her knowledge of Klingon naval tradition would put her on a respectable footing with the general.

“The Kang is hailing,” said the tactical officer, “it’s General K’Vada.”

The Destrier captain stood, “Patch him through.”

An image of the Klingon general appeared. Kojo noticed gray forming in his long, black locks.

The Klingon seemed to begrudgingly admit, “You honor us with your show of respect.”

Kojo curtsied, “As you honor us.”

K’Vada then dropped all pretence, “What do you want, Starfleet?”

“I’m Captain Nandali Kojo of the USS Destrier,” she elaborated, “we are here to observe your actions on the planet.”

“Observe us,” repeated the general in a tone of a rebellious teenager.

Kojo went on, “We have reports that your warriors are acting dishonorably.”

“What would you know of honor, you Kriosian ghew?” spat the general.

She stepped forward, “web qaq Hegh

His face hardened and he huffed with his nostrils, “Perhaps.”

The general’s response forced her brows to crunch up.

He ended with, “If you do more than…observe…you will be fired upon.” The channel closed.

*****

Supplemental
USS Perseus, MainBridge
In the Fu’puk System in delta formation with the USS Destrier and Independence

Hobson ordered the conversation to be shown on split screen. Once the images dropped off, helmsman Shalev turned back, “What did she say?”

web qaq Hegh,” said the captain. He translated, “It means: death is preferable to disgrace.”

Tactical Officer T’Pren questioned, “And the general said, ‘perhaps?’”

He looked back at her with intent and repeated, “And the general said ‘perhaps.’”

CHAPTER 9
 
"Perhaps?"

Wow! You seldom get an ambivalent response from a Klingon! That was spookier than if he had just opened fire on the Starfleet ships.

This is really exceptional writing! I love your heavy use of the Klingon language as well as Klingon customs. Obviously, Captain Kojo is a real asset in this situation.

But is that going to be enough?
 
K'Vada's response is a loaded one--it apparently gave Kojo pause. This situation has the prospect of escalating quickly out of control.
 
CHAPTER 10

Supplemental
USS Perseus, Captain’s Mess
In Orbit of Fu’puk II along with the Federation and Klingon Task Forces

Shortly after the initial contact with the Klingon Eighth Task Force, Captain Kojo called a conference. She wanted all the senior staff from all three ships to meet at once, to minimize any miscommunication. Hobson offered the Captain’s Mess on the Intrepid class ship as the meeting spot.

The tables in the dining hall were rearranged in a circle for the impromptu conference. As he looked around the room, Marcus Bolden, the Destrier’s XO, found it amusing how the crews tended to keep to their own groups. The helmsman of the Perseus glared at the Independence’s chief engineer for some reason. The engineer, and everyone else, pretended not to notice.

Kojo continued, “I am amazed at General K’Vada’s lack of outrage.”

“Or surprise,” added Commander Rysyl.

Captain Hobson chimed in, “According to my research, K’Vada is a pragmatist. He’s much more calculating than your typical Klingon.”

“So he won’t go in guns blazing without thinking about it first,” surmised bin Nadal.

“He’s still a Klingon,” corrected the Iceman in an even tone, “He won’t think twice about lashing out if he feels the need. We’re talking about the man that tamed the Crolsa System, after all.”

“Tamed,” repeated Aurelia, “That’s an interesting word for it. I’d say he kicked the snot out of ‘em.”

A few muffled and humorless chuckles dotted the room. The Independence’s new security chief, Faltyne, developed an evil smirk. He derived a twisted sense of satisfaction. Cardassians in the Crolsa System were responsible for his captivity and torture. He darkly mused, ‘Maybe I owe K’Vada one.’

Kojo struggled with the quote, “’Kicking the snot out of people’ is what he does best. No doubt, his actions in the Crolsa System were considered when he was assigned this mission.”

Counselor Kimula Soma spoke, “But that doesn’t answer why he was so…unresponsive to our showing up.”

“He threatened to shoot us,” remembered Kirce Carrick, the Destrier tactical officer, “I wouldn’t call that ‘unresponsive.’”

Lieutenant Commander Miller, of the Perseus, wondered aloud, “Since the son of Worf is involved, I have to believe there is something more going on here.”

“What does K’Vada think of Worf?” asked Sintina.

Captain Hobson replied, “I haven’t found any evidence that the general has any misgivings toward him.”

The Kriosian’s blonde hair swayed as she shook her head, “No, K’Vada isn’t prone to subversion. If he doubted his leaders, he would challenge them.”

After a short silence, the Iceman refocused the discussion, “Our first priority is to gather more information about the situation on the ground.”

“A preliminary scan of the surface,” began Tang Zian, the science officer on the Indy, “indicated the Hacharans have a global database that is still operational. We could download it.”

“That would be a good start, Lieutenant,” concurred Hobson.

Miller leaned in, “We should try to contact Alexander again.”

“We need boots on the ground,” inserted the Latina captain. She uncrossed her arms, “That’s the best first hand intelligence we can get.”

Hobson countered tactfully, “Captain, with respect that could lead to a whole new set of problems that could be avoided.” He saw her annoyance growing. The Perseus captain knew he had to walk a very, very fine line; mostly because of all the subordinates in the room. He continued, “Not the least of which is the Prime Directive.”

Kojo voiced Aurelia’s response, “The Prime Directive seems to be irrelevant, Captain Hobson.”

Hobson hesitated slightly. This debate shouldn’t be held in present company. “Captain Kojo,” he finally said, “perhaps we could discuss this in my ready room.”

“If you have a concern,” she persisted, “voice it. I do not fear a break down in ranks, here.”

The Iceman glanced at Anara and the rest of his crew. He wasn’t concerned about his crew’s reaction. He was embarrassed for his counterparts. They shouldn’t have to be reminded of one of the cardinal rules of Starfleet. He explained, “Just because the Klingons have invaded that planet doesn’t mean the Prime Directive is no longer valid. We have rules about contact with other species, the Klingons don’t. Yes, there has been a dramatic change to Hacharan society in recent weeks, but doesn’t mean we can add to it.”

For such a crowded room, there was an unusual still.

“Isolation suits,” said Windslow. Unexpectedly, everyone’s eyes fell on him. He continued a bit more subdued, “We could observe in isolation suits. The mission could be treated just like a duck-blind.”

Bolden commented first, “That would have the added benefit of hiding us from any Klingons on the surface as well.”

“Unfortunately, the suits won’t hide us from a scan,” observed Velen, the Denobulan science officer on the Perseus.

“Still,” started Kojo, “it seems our best option.”

“I’d like to gather more information through…other channels as well,” suggested bin Nadal.

“What did you have in mind?” questioned the Task Force Commander.

He gestured to all three vessel masters, “With the captains’ permission, I’d like to covertly board one of the Klingon vessels and hack into their records.”

Hobson began, “If the Klingons catch you, Commander…”

“He knows,” Aurelia interrupted. “It wouldn’t be the first time Karim has been behind enemy lines.”

Though his facial expression didn’t viably change, Hobson’s eyes betrayed a growing animosity toward Aurelia from her lack of courtesy. He was about to make a rebuke when the Destrier’s captain ended the debate.

“We’ll board the Jev’Iw. If the son of Worf is still alive, we’ll want to talk with him.”

It was obvious, several people disagreed with the decision; Hobson, Bolden, and Miller among them. To their credit, they remained silent.

The Chief Medical Officer of the Perseus, Helen Nor, ventured, “I hate to be the pessimist in the room, but if this goes sour, what are our chances against the Klingons?”

Jonin Faltyne fielded the query, “I ran five battle simulations. Our three ships against a Vorcha, a K’Vort, a Fek’lhr, and two CharghwI’ class troop transports.” He looked around the room as he revealed the results, “We win the battle, but the Independence or Perseus is either severely damaged or destroyed.”

“It’s a moot point,” declared Hobson, “we can’t afford to spark a war with the Klingons.”

The Kriosian captain took charge. The time for discussion was over. “Then we’ll need three teams: a research team, a duck-blind team, and a boarding team.”

Hobson offered, “I suggest we utilize the personnel we have according to their talents, regardless of whose command they’re under.”

“Agreed,” said Kojo.

Aurelia less enthusiastically confirmed, “Fine.”

“Commander Rysyl,” began Kojo.

“Sir?”

“Assemble and lead the researchers. Attempt to find Hacharan accounts regarding the invasion.” Then, the Destrier captain looked to her own first officer, “Commander Bolden, organize the duck-blind.” Her gaze then fell to bin Nadal, “Commander, as much as I would like to go with you on your mission, I believe it would be best if the captains stayed with their ships. Pick two others to accompany you.”

“Aye, sir.”

Kojo then stood, “Let it be done. Dismissed.”

END OF CHAPTER 10
 
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Nice setup, but there's a slight mistake to Miller's rank that we missed in your rough: Miller's a Lieutenant Commander, not Lieutenant.
 
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