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A United Trek Tale - "For the Empire"

You gotta give it to our Starfleet heroes. They just saved a planet without taking any single offensive action thoughout this crisis. Of course they had help from the inside, as the Klingons appear dangerously divided.

The reprucusssions of this will be felt all the way to Qu'nos. Is this the beginning of the Second Civil War, I wonder?
 
Is this the beginning of the Second Civil War, I wonder?
Wow… ugly thought. A destabilized Klingon Empire at war with itself would only add to the existing political and economic chaos in the Alpha Quadrant right now. And without the comically bumbling Duras sisters, these Klingons could actually be dangerous in a civil conflict! ;)
 
Is this the beginning of the Second Civil War, I wonder?
Wow… ugly thought. A destabilized Klingon Empire at war with itself would only add to the existing political and economic chaos in the Alpha Quadrant right now. And without the comically bumbling Duras sisters, these Klingons could actually be dangerous in a civil conflict! ;)

Definitely--this has the potential of getting really ugly--especially when you throw in all the other stuff brewing. The dangers of spillover are great.

Ch'Pogh has also made a dangerous enemy here in K'Vada and we've seen already how his patron, Lorath, has no problem with using and then discarding those whom he no longer needs. If I were Ch'Pogh, I'd have my escape routes already planned out--I have a feeling he's going to need them.

As for the Gorn--they don't seem to be too terribly aggressive as regards expansion--but then when opportunity beckons...
 
Others have pretty much said what I would've said, so all I can really add to that is to repeat that I'll be very interested in seeing how the Gorn handle the situation from here: would they treat the Hacharans with more honor? Maybe some kind of protectorate status (with home rule) would be a good idea. Might be nice to see instead of the cliched "Federation protectorate is best" thing that's usually seen in Trek.
 
Tremendous segement! You did a masterful job of bringing the threads together. I do agree that this does not bode well for the Klingon empire - the seeds of civil war have been planted, watered and fertilized. It remains to see what springs forth and when.

I have to wonder about the Gorn. Bringing them into the mix was a brilliant move, but I have to wonder if they will be any better than the Klingons? Perhaps they will take their honored dead and leave, perhaps not.
 
CHAPTER 34

Stardate: 54387.5 (22 May 2377)
The PortCity of Jato
Go’hachar

Elder Tahocha and Lord Nilu walked side by side among the rubble that was once one of the planet’s most modern cities. The skyscape was made of sharp points and jagged edges. Glass, stone, and blood littered the streets. Invader and Hacharan bodies had yet to be disposed of.

The young Nilu looked around, “My gods, how will we recover from this?”

The wise older man scanned the scene for a moment and rested his eyes on his former enemy. He said, “Together. We will recover from this together.”

A sudden grin emerged on Nilu’s face. He nodded, “Agreed.”

Some ran up franticly to Nilu, “Milord, I have news.” He obviously wanted to discuss it away from present company.

The Do’hachar head of state commented, “We no longer keep secrets from the Go’ha. Speak.”

He bowed and cautiously proceeded, “Milord, our facility in the Botham Desert has been discovered and raided. The ship, the remains, everything has been taken!”

Tahocha looked over, “Is there something you want to explain to me?”

*****

Supplemental
IKS Kang, Fleet Commander’s Chambers
En Route to Klingon Space

After his confrontation with Captain Ch’Pogh, the Jev’Iw broke formation and made for the Khemet Sector.

The general did not shy away from his responsibility. He looked at Martok over subspace, “I will accept any punishment you deem fit, Chancellor.” He added, “However, I must make you aware of the treachery I was forced to deal with, first.”

“Go on.”

K’Vada explained, “There are records indicating that Captain Ch’Pogh assisted the Hacharans by undermining my troop movements and patrols. He also allowed saboteurs to disable the fleet’s weapons and transporters. That is why I could offer no fight for the Gorn and was forced to abandon the planet.”

“Saboteurs,” the chancellor repeated, “Our own warriors did this!”

“It is possible the Gorn infiltrated our ranks,” offered the general. “Their…timely arrival is more than coincidence.”

“It seems my enemies are everywhere!” blasted Martok. He leaned into the screen, “However, it appears you are not one of them.”

K’Vada thought for a moment. He replied, “I live and die for the Empire.”

The words reminded Martok of something he once said to Gowron, ‘I will fight any battle, anywhere…for the Empire.’ He leaned back, “It is obvious to me, the blame for this failure is Captain Ch’Pogh’s, alone. He is a traitor.”

“I agree, Chancellor,” rejoined K’Vada.

A few minutes later, the fleet commander tapped the terminal off.

Captain H’ta, who had sat silently across the desk during the conversation, curiously observed, “Why did you not tell him about Lorath’s involvement?”

He leaned back in his seat, “It is too early for us to…as the humans say, tip our hand.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Perseus, Captain’s Ready Room
At Rally Point with the Independence and Destrier (Near the Hacharan System)

Karim, appearing human again, entered the large, lounge-like office. He went up to Hobson’s desk, “Captain, I just wanted to give you the courtesy of…” He looked over at the book self, “Is that Meditations by Marcus Aurelius?” He examined it closer, “That’s real leather. When was this printed?”

The Iceman couldn’t help but smirk. He got up and joined bin Nadal, “Eighteen sixty-two.” He added, “There’s a 1905 copy of Augustine’s City of God next to it.”

The Independence commander thought for a moment and quoted, “As to those things which truly confer dignity upon mankind, namely, security and good morals, I entirely fail to see what difference it makes, aside from the most empty pride of human glory, that some men should be conquerors and others conquered.”

Hobson nodded, “An all too common trait in the galaxy, it seems.”

“You even have some of Ibn Rashid's works,” continued Karim.

Chris stood next to him, gently reminding his visitor that he came there for a reason.

Bin Nadal assumed a more professional posture, “Sorry, sir. I just wanted to relay how well Lieutenant Shalev conducted himself while he served with our team.”

“I knew he would,” replied Hobson, “but I appreciate the courtesy, none the less.” He returned to his seat, “And from all accounts, so did Commander Windslow.”

“I don’t know if I can take credit for that, sir,” he said, “but I’ll pass it along.” He moved to dismiss himself, “If you’ll excuse me, sir. I have a division meeting in a few minutes.”

He acknowledged with a nod, but said before Karim could leave, “Commander.”

“Yes sir?”

“Do you happen to know how to play bridge?”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, Main Lounge - “Jinal’s”
At Rally Point with the Perseus and Destrier (Near the Hacharan System)

The large recreation lounge was the default place for members of the three ships to congregate. In the morning, the small fleet would disband.

Velen placed the miniature humanoid, which represented his character, on the table. He wasn’t yet back on active duty. So he and T’Pren decided to try a game that was all the rage on the Indy; an old Earth game. They called it, D&D.

Soma, Velen, T’Pren, Ensign Weston, and another Indy crewmember sat around the small, simulated landscape. Jonin Faltyne walked up to the table.

Kimula warmly offered, “Want to join in?”

The male Andorian raised a hand, “I’ll just watch for the moment.”

“Ok. Let me set the scene…” started Kimula. “You’re in a dark, damp chamber.”

T’Pren observed her Denobulan crewmate begin to shift in his chair. Ever since he was revived by Doctor Nor, he was…subdued, nervous. His normal light-heartedness had faded. She assumed it had to do with emerging from the induced hibernation, but now, she had her doubts.

The Indy’s Andorian counselor continued, “It’s totally dark and…”

Suddenly, Velen got up, “I’m sorry, excuse me. I’m…I’m afraid I can’t play right now. I’m sorry.” He left.

The others seemed to look to T’Pren for an explanation. She stood, “I’d better go see what’s wrong.”

Kimula began to join her, “Maybe I can help.”

“Thanks,” rejoined the Vulcan, “but I’ll talk to him. We’ve known each other since the academy.”

“Are you sure?”

The Perseus tactical officer waved her down, “I’m sure. Enjoy your game.”

Reluctantly, Soma sat back down. She looked at Jonin, “It seems we’re in need of a barbarian.”

Confused, he asked, “What?”

END OF CHAPTER 34
 
A lot of people will have to deal with the fall-out of this mission. Nobody more, I'd say than the Klingons.

But clearly there are some scars amongst the Starfleet crew as well.
 
What a ride. I just got to read Chap 31 on and it was great. Is there more coming to explain the aftermath?
 
This story's wrapping up nicely. The Klingons have some serious problems--the rot in their society is a deep one and it won't be resolved easily.
 
It appears that the Gorn were willing to take their property and go - very good news for the Hacharans. It also seems that the shared struggle against the Klingon invaders is serving to unite the two factions - also good news.

Nice scene between Captain Hobson and Karim. The two bibliophiles seemed to have made a connection.

Velen's state of mind seems pretty fragile. Hopefully, he'll recover, but I found his sudden departure from the D&D game ominous. Perhaps I'm reading too much into that.

Great story! I hate to see it wind down, but all stories need their ending. Looking forward to the epilogue.
 
I look forward to seeing how things wrap up in the epilogue. I wasn't expecting the Gorn to get the blame for the sabotage, but it worked quite well. I also like how at the end, it's rather difficult to tell what side Martok's on regarding the Klingon internal disputes (at least, I found it a little tough, given that I don't have a lot of background on what's already happened in the UT universe): that to my mind provides fertile ground for a worsening of the situation.

As for Velen...his reaction makes me wonder if perhaps his mind wasn't still while he hibernated.
 
Well, as regards Velen, I will say that more will be revealed about his experiences in an upcoming Perseus vignette/short story which will also explore his friendship with T'Pren.
 
This is it. I hope everyone enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

EPILOGUE

Supplemental
USS Perseus, Holodeck Two
At Rally Point

“No, no,” reminded Treasure, “Mount on the left side, the left.”

Ethan hopped along with one foot stuck in the stirrup. Fine dirt was kicked up with each hop. The environment reminded him of Arizona or New Mexico. The American Paint Horse continued to inch away from the inexperienced rider. Paul, Jeff, and Susan Windslow were already on their mounts, thanks to Lieutenant Barrows. The boys were laughing unrestrained at the sight. Susan was just barely holding her smirk. Finally, he got his foot out.

The North Star native expertly guided her palomino near the flustered former captain. She looked down at him, “Lady always was a bit picky about that. Wanna legup?”

He grinned. Obviously, he found it just as amusing as everyone else. “No thanks.” He looked into the chestnut colored mare’s large eyes, “Let’s try this again.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Perseus, Holodeck Two
At Rally Point

T’Pren caught up with the Denobulan in the corridor. He seemed to be hyperventilating, “What’s wrong, Velen?”

He paused, leaned against the bulkhead and slowly slid down. He held his head and said into his hands, “I woke up after they buried me, T’Pren.”

“You woke up?” she repeated.

He sobbed gently, “I was terrified.” The Perseus science officer wiped at his cheeks, “I was so scared, I couldn’t move. …And…and then I don’t remember anything.”

She squatted down next to him, “Your mind must have induced your hibernation as a safe-gap measure.”

He didn’t respond.

The emotional Vulcan wrapped her arms around him, “It’s ok. We’ll get you through this.”

*****

Stardate: 54389.8 (23 May 2377)
USS Independence, MainBridge
At Rally Point

The Latin American captain viewed her peers on a split screen.

The blonde-haired Kriosian began, “I cannot delay any longer. I must make for Tholian space.”

“It seems,” observed the Iceman, “we make an effective team after all.”

Sintina grinned devilishly, “Did you have any doubt?”

With a perfect poker face, he rejoined, “Of course not, Captain Aurelia.”

Kojo nodded with respect to both of them, “Good journeys, Captain Hobson, Captain Aurelia. Destrier out.”

The screen now displayed only the Perseus captain. Hobson took a moment to make eye contact with bin Nadal, “Commander, for the record, you and Anara got lucky. I believe a rematch is in order.”

Karim smiled wide, “You’re on, Captain.”

Hobson nodded in acknowledgement, gave his regards to Aurelia and closed the channel.

Immediately afterwards, Sintina spun around and joshed, “Make a new friend, Karim?”

It was subtle, but he could detect a hint of jealousy in her tone. He shrugged, “I guess so.”

Captain Aurelia turned around with a roll of her eyes. She ordered, “Ensign Weston, get us to the Victory.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Perseus, Operation’s Officer Quarters
En Route to Starbase 90

His eyes were cold. They almost seemed lifeless. Miller sometimes wondered about Captain Collins. He had an artificial cheeriness about him.

Zackary Collins spoke to Devon over a secure channel, “You’ve done well, Commander. Your information will prove very useful to us.”

Miller fidgeted, “I feel…uneasy. Captain Hobson won’t get into trouble because of it will he?”

The Philadelphia captain grinned unemotionally, “No, no, this is merely an evaluation program for Command. We’re not out to punish captains.”

Devon absently nodded.

“And you,” added Collins, “have demonstrated, through your participation in this program, what type of captain you will be someday soon.”

The operations officer grinned at the thought.

*****

Supplemental
Jato, Go’hachar
Ikula nuv/Fu’puk II

In a large, doomed structure the remaining leadership of the Hacharan people began to decide their fate. Sunlight shined into the chamber through an improvised skylight, courtesy the invaders.

“A confederation seems the most reasonable why to join our three very different types of government,” offered Elder Tahocha.

The crowded chamber burst into a series of incoherent objections. The arbiter banged a gong in vain to regain order.

Suddenly, three green, glowing pillars of light appeared on the floor. Terror caused everyone to be silent. Guards readied their weapons. After a moment, three bipedal lizards stood amongst the assembly. A common gasp could be heard.

The formidable reptilians calmly observed the room. One of them began, “We represssent the Gorn Hegemony, an interssstellar government not far from here.”

Tahocha stood, “Do you associate yourselves with the Klingons?”

The raptor-type being swooshed his head around to look at the mammal, “No.” He took a few steps and addressed the crowd, “Your planet isss near three galactic powerss: the United Federation of Planetss, the Klingon Empire, and usss. The Federation will not interfere. The Klingons want to ensslave you. We offer to asssisst in defending yoursselvess againsst another Klingon attack. Your enemy iss our enemy.” He locked eyes with Tahocha, “We are the only alliess you have. Do you acccept our offer?”

*****

Stardate: 54396.0 (25 May 2377)
Starbase 90
In Orbit of Cestus III

Worf approached his son. A large window next to on of the docking ports dominated the background. Several vessels glided into and out of view. Alexander had a duffle over his shoulder. Worf, once again, donned his red-trimmed Starfleet uniform.

“Are you sure this is what you want, Alexander?” began Worf. “I could still sponsor your application to the academy.”

The young Klingon shook his head, “I’m sure father. If there is one thing I’ve learned it’s that I must find my own way.”

Somberly, the Son of Mogh nodded, “I understand. Working with the sentient rights’ group is an honorable path.” He placed a hand on his son’s shoulder, “Your mother would be proud…as am I.”

Alexander grinned bitter-sweetly, “Thank you, father.” He stumbled, “When…when will you be leaving?”

Worf removed his hand, “My transport taking me to the Enterprise will arrive in a few hours.”

The hatch to the docked ship finally opened, allowing travelers to board.

“It’s time for me to go,” observed Alexander.

His father stiffened up, “Be well, Alexander.”

The Son of Worf decided not to press for a hug. Instead he said, “I love you, father,” and headed for the hatch. He didn’t expect a response.

“Alexander,” called Worf.

He paused and turned back.

“Thank you. You have reminded me that strength is not a trait exclusive to warriors.”

With a knowing smile, Alex nodded and continued to board.

*****

Supplemental
IKS Jev’Iw, Transporter Room
Undisclosed Location

‘And the blood of his foes moistened the dirt. He jerked his mate next to him, violently grabbed a lock of her hair and shed blood with his dagger-like teeth. pItlh’

Finally, Ursva was done. She tossed the novel on the terminal. ‘I’ve read better,’ she thought. She twisted around to a display built in the bulkhead and activated it. It was a news broadcast. She turned it on for background noise. She wasn’t particularly interested in it.

‘…It is also reported the untrustworthy Gorn have broken another agreement with the Empire and have made the inhabitants of Fu’puk II their protectorate. Many council members are blaming the Chancellor for this turn of events…’

THE END OF “FOR THE EMPIRE”
 
A most excellent ending. You've given me some good story hooks with Velen and Miller--Thank You! :)

Also, I like the idea of Alexander going to work for a sentient rights group--much better than the standard going to Starfleet Academy route--kudos!

And Martok has some internal political battles to wage--never a good thing--he'll need all the good luck he can get--especially now that the one he could most rely on has left his side.
 
Truly an epic work. Your best in my opinion and an awesome example of how to make our United Trek universe mesh together and tell a really big story. You did a good job giving voice to so many different characters, and keeping the various storylines in order.
 
NICE!

Others have said many of the same things I would, but here are some of my own favorites as far as the ending goes:

That's unnerving to think that Hobson's got a "mole" on his staff who's gunning for his job...he'd better watch his back from now on!

I was also very pleased to see the Gorn protectorate bit at the end: it's nice to see an alien race take a different view towards the Prime Directive and yet NOT be portrayed as evil, exploitative, or anything else.

For Worf and Alexander...I think you offered them both some very needed character development that a) made Alexander believable and NOT a buffoon and b) helped Worf to come to terms that he cannot treat his son like he ought to be his clone. And it's also good to see some exploration into what good civilians do in the Trek universe, given that most of the time, the focus is on Starfleet.

But finally...I LOVE LOVE LOVE that you brought it back to that transporter operator finishing up her novel! I literally laughed out loud--it was a perfect, unexpected punchline, yet that serious message right at the end that she was completely oblivious to...

Good work overall--I'm not even normally a fan of Klingon stories, but you really made me enjoy yours! :)
 
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