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A United Trek Tale - "For the Empire"

Good Lord! Aurelia trying to make "diplomatic" overtures to the Gorn! I'm sure she'll be subtle, nuanced and polite.
"Independence to Starfleet Command, Captain Aurelia reporting in. I have good news and bad news. The good news is I’ve successfully begun ‘vigorous’ negotiations with the Gorn. The bad news is there’s now a Gorn battle fleet on course for Sector 001.

Uh... good luck with that. Aurelia, out. Waaaaaay out." :lol:
 
Dnoth,

This story gets better the longer it goes. It is by far your most complex, but also your best IMO. You've taken a big challenge of writing so many characters and plotlines and hit it out of the park.
 
Dnoth,

This story gets better the longer it goes. It is by far your most complex, but also your best IMO. You've taken a big challenge of writing so many characters and plotlines and hit it out of the park.

What he said.
 
I can't say it enough: thank you! The praise is really reinforcing. Here's the next part...

CHAPTER 28

Stardate: 54380.8 (20 May 2377)
CapitalCity, Ambassador’s Hall
Qo’noS, Klingon System

Worf entered his office and checked his messages. Among the routine bureaucratic correspondence was a text message from the chancellor. It was a single sentence: ghoS puqloDlIj – ‘Your son is coming.’

He took a deep breath and leaned back. His thoughts were tortured.

*****

Supplemental
IKS Kang, Lower Decks
In Orbit of Fu’puk II

Captain Kojo’s team dare not rest. Despite the fact, it had taken nearly 30 hours for Windslow to circumvent the security measures of four ships. It was a grueling time for everyone, especially for those that had little to do other than look inconspicuous.

They were very careful to beam into isolated sections. Twice, however, were they questioned about what they were doing. The first time was on the Vaj’la. The Klingon obviously wasn’t an engineer and was satisfied with bin Nadal’s explanation of, “The computer’s broke.” The second instance proved to be more difficult to deal with. On the Grolkam, a K’Vort cruiser, a technician approached them and was beginning to become suspicious until Captain Kojo…distracted him, by picking a fight…or initiating foreplay. Ethan wasn’t sure which. They disappeared for several minutes. No one asked Kojo what happened when she returned. No one wanted to know. She came back with a grin…though, that didn’t really give any clarity.

The mock-Klingon engineer logged out of the terminal. “Ok, that’s it. Time to move on.”

Bin Nadal offered, “The Jev’Iw is the last ship.”

“Well, at least we know the transporter operator,” remembered Shalev.

The Destrier tactical chief commented, “We’ve been lucky that we have encountered more scrutiny.”

Kojo stated, “Luck is not something I rely on.”

The group moved to a more common area of the ship and called for a beam out.

*****

Supplemental
Rally Point Eight, near the PortCity of Jato
Go'hachar, Southern Continent

A small village, whose populace had not yet received the invaders served as one of several gathering points near one of the larger cities on the planet. Jato had a large number of invaders policing it. It was decided the retribution would begin here. A coordinated attack would either force the Klingons out of the city, or end the organized resistance; there were no other options.

“Are the others in place?” asked Senior Guardian Pasho.

A subordinate responded, “Yes Guardian, including the Do'hachar submersible.”

The elder warrior concluded, “Hold this position until dark morning. Then we start to take back our world.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Independence, MainBridge
At the Gorn Hegemony Border

Sintina glared at the two patrol vessels. It had become a staring match; which made it competitive…which made it a matter of pride with the captain. ‘I will stay here until hell freezes over or I get a positive response from these bastards.’

Behind the center seat, Lieutenant Soma scrolled through Hacharan documents. She’d been doing it for hours. The Andorian counselor discovered the Gorn didn’t have any real interest in the system. Though, they weren’t too pleased about a Klingon presence so close to their border. Faltyne, who helped when his duties permitted, found out the High Council made some concessions to the Gorn before invading the system. So, their reaction to the annexation was tempered, but just only.

Something caught Kimula’s eye: “Myth of the Lizard Men.” She read more. “Among conspiracy theorists, there is a belief that the state of Ko’Hachar discovered a buried alien vessel in the BothamDesert over 250 years ago. Supposedly, several mummified bodies were in the vessel. They appeared to be Hacharan-like lizard people. Those that believe this claim Ko’Hachar reversed engineered several components of the alien ship to build their advanced military machines. Machines that later played an integral part in their war of aggression. Most people believe this to be only a desperate attempt to explain Ko’Hachar’s swift expansion. In truth, it can be explained by inadequate preparation and the naivety of other states. The story also takes away from the ingenuity of own species.”

She turned around and eagerly said, “I’ve got something.”

Captain Aurelia joined her at the station.

“Read this,” the counselor suggested.

After a moment of hovering over her, Sintina replied, “It’s a start.” She looked down, “Find more specifics.”

Kimula could see the praise in her friends face, though it wasn’t vocalized. “Gladly.”

*****

Supplemental
USS Perseus, Transporter Room One
In Orbit of Qo’noS

Alexander, wearing a civilian garment, entered with Captain Hobson, First Officer Rysyl, and Lieutenant T’Pren.

“Are you sure this is wise?” prodded Anara.

The Iceman sensed her concern, “We’ll be fine.” He looked to the Klingon, “I won’t allow any harm to come to you.”

“Thank you, Captain,” he replied, “but I don’t think anyone will kill me.” He huffed and added, “I’m not worth the effort.”

“All the same, I take care of my passengers. My security chief and I will be joining you.”

“Alright.”

The three took up their positions. The transporter operator reported, “The chancellor’s office has transmitted coordinates.”

Hobson acknowledged with a slight nod, “Energize.”

END CHAPTER 28
 
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A tense but fairly quiet interlude that sets the stage for . . .

I guess we'll have to wait and see! :lol:

Wonder how Worf is going to handle the family reunion? :klingon:
 
If I remember correctly the last threat the Klingons made was quite specific... I do think Alexander has a bit to worry about here. His father might be able to protect him but for how long?

Nice setup. Question is: What happens next?
 
You know, the more I read of your work, the more I'm reminded of Tom Clancy. Maybe not as technical, but the way you handle multiple plot threads in short snippets gives it the same fast pace and intricacy I expect of a Clancy work--there's always that excitement in seeing how all of the little, disparate parts pull together in the end.

I'm definitely enjoying this...the confrontation between Worf and Alexander ought to be interesting--and I'm also going to be interested in seeing how this information about the Gorn goes. That could either be a major asset or really inflame the situation...we'll see!
 
I too really enjoy how you break your stories apart in short segments. It really pulls in the reader and makes your stories fairly quick reads.

On the grammar tip: It's supposed to be Gorn Hegemony.
 
Very nicely done. You've set up a lot of touchy situations here--Alexander and the Klingons; the Gorn; Kojo's Kommandoes :)

A lot can go wrong...
 
On the grammar tip: It's supposed to be Gorn Hegemony.

LOL, oops. :) I'll fix that. It appears I only did that once.

It could still be "Homogeny". Think about it:

"Hegemony" means "empire," obviously, but "Homogeny" could have as its root homogenous and mean "This is GORN space for GORN people only and if you don't get your non-GORN ass outta here it's gonna kicked!"

See? :D
 
A very cool set-up piece. I'm looking forward to the Resistance attack. And Alexander's "family time". And Kojo's well, you get the idea.:)
 
Sorry for the delay. Here's the next part.

CHAPTER 29

Supplemental
Chancellor’s Office, The Great Hall
CapitolCity, Q’noS

Captain Hobson, T’Pren and Alexander found themselves immediately in the mist of Chancellor Martok and Ambassador Worf. There were no guards and the doors to the chamber were closed.

The battle scarred Martok rose from his desk. “You are brave to come here. If you venture outside of these walls, I cannot guarantee you safety.”

The young Klingon stepped forward, “I come on behalf of the Hacharan people.”

“Have you not caused enough trouble for my house?” bellowed the chancellor.

He was undeterred, “Chancellor, you must reconsider…”

Before Alexander could utter another word, Martok’s heavy, gloved hand rose up; prepared to strike the boy with a backhanded slap.

With a glance, Hobson restrained T’Pren from intervening. It was their way…and a necessary step.

Worf took a step, but didn’t move to protect his son.

Alexander flinched in anticipation of the blow. It was minor, but a flinch none the less.

Just as the chancellor’s hand was about to land, it stopped. It hovered centimeters away from Alex’s face. Alexander’s reaction was all the chancellor need to see. This boy looked Klingon, but he was not. He never should have allowed the boy into his house. Sirella attempted to warn him about this years ago, but he didn’t listen. It was a matter of honor, he told her. The Son of Worf must follow his father into his house. Now, he could see his mate was correct. He lowered his hand. “I see,” was all he said.

To Worf, it was a confirmation of his worst fears for his son.

Martok turned his back on Alexander, “You have nothing to say that I will hear.”

The ambassador addressed his former comrades, “Please, let us be with Alexander alone.”

“He is under my protection,” countered Hobson, “I’m sure you understand that, Ambassador.”

Worf rose to his full height, “You know I once served on the Enterprise.”

The mention of Picard’s ship stiffened his jaw…Picard and his android. The android he was forced to serve under. Hobson pushed down the emotions and returned to the present. “Yes, Ambassador.”

“Then,” began Worf, “as a Starfleet officer, I give you my word no harm will come to him here.”

T’Pren glanced at her captain for guidance. The Iceman silently checked with Alexander, whom seemed alright with the arrangement. Hobson nodded and said to his charge, “We’ll be just outside the door.”

Worf activated the controls and allowed the two officers to assume their post out of hear shot. With a clang, the hatch slid shut. He looked to his son, “It is not practical for us to withdraw our forces from Fu’puk II, Alexander.”

“Those people are suffering needlessly!” he proclaimed.

“There are other things you must consider,” countered Worf.

“What? Your own selfish political interests?”

“Enough!” blasted Martok. “Worf, get your son out of my sight!”

The Son of Mogh looked into his pleading son’s eyes. They were not the eyes of a boy; but eyes of a determined man, seeking justice. A distant memory came rushing up to the forefront. A discussion he once had with Ezri back on Deep Space Nine.

*****

August 2375
Quark’s Bar, Deep Space Nine
Bajoran System

Chancellor Gowron was employing a foolish strategy against the Dominion. He was attempting to make himself the hero of the war…and ruin General Martok’s growing reputation. After Martok refused to face Gowron, Worf asked Dax, “Tell me what you think.”

She took a sip of coffee, “Ok, but I’m not sure you’re going to like it.”

“Tell me,” he persisted.

The counselor was blunt, “I think that this situation with Gowron is a symptom of a bigger problem. I think the Empire is dying and I think it deserves to die.”

“You are right,” he replied as he crossed his arms, “I do not like it.”

“Don’t get me wrong,” she continued, “I’m very touched you still consider me a member of the House of Martok. But…I tend to look at the Empire with a bit more skepticism than Curzon or Jadzia did. I see a society that is in deep denial about itself. We’re talking about a warrior culture that prides itself on maintaining century’s old traditions of honor and integrity. But in reality it’s willing to accept corruption at the highest levels.

He remembered saying, “You are overstating your case.”

Her come back was quick, “Am I? Who was the last leader of the High Council that you respected? Has there even been one? And how many times have you had to cover up the crimes of Klingon leaders because it was for the good of the Empire? I…I know this sounds harsh but the truth is, you have been willing to accept a government that you know is corrupt. Gowron is just the latest example. Worf, you are the most honorable and decent man I have ever met, and if you are willing to tolerate men like Gowron, then what hope is there for the Empire?”

*****

Supplemental
Chancellor’s Office, The Great Hall
CapitolCity, Q’noS

Martok repeated, “Worf, remove your son.”

Slowly, Worf shook his head, “No.”

“No,” repeated the chancellor.

“No,” the Son of Mogh continued, “Alexander is correct. If we want to lead the Empire with wisdom and honor, we must find another way to gain support. Rallying the people by presenting them with an enemy to hate is not leadership, but the lack of it.”

Martok reached for his sheathed blade. He couldn’t believe his ears, “What are you saying, Worf?”

“Don’t you see?” he persisted, “We have allowed ourselves to be drawn into this…this system of underhanded politics. We have become apart of it, Chancellor.”

Martok began to understand. “The change you seek, Worf, would cause a civil war. I will not be the cause of that.”

He nodded, “I understand, Chancellor.” He stood tall and sighed deeply, “but it is not something I can participate in any longer. I will resign my post.”

“Think about this, Worf,” beseeched Martok. “With you gone, I’ll have one less ally. It will make my role all the more difficult.”

Resolute, he confirmed, “I am sorry, Chancellor. But I fear if I stay, I will become someone I cannot respect.”

In a low grumble the former general stated, “I did not seek this position. It was thrust upon me…by you, Worf.”

Worf readied himself, “I am prepared for whatever punishment you would set.”

The chancellor walked closer, “No Worf, I will not punish you. You have been a trusted companion. You may even bear my house’s mark.” He continued, “You helped install two Leaders of the High Council.” He planted himself right in front of Worf, “My greatest wish for you is that you kill me and assume the Cloak of Leadership one day…There is no greater curse I can put upon you.”

Alexander shared a guilty look with his father.

The one-eyed chancellor plopped in his chair, “Now, go.”

With intense mixed feelings, Worf and his son exited the chamber. Martok was left, alone.

END OF CHAPTER 29
 
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Wow! That was a powerful interchange! Look's like Ezri's prediction may come true. Martok is probably the best chancellor the Klingons have had in many years, yet he's fallen into the same old patterns.

At least Worf is willing to acknowledge the truth - but at what price? And what does this bode for the immediate future of the empire?

A fantastic segment, but I fear you've left us with more, troubling questions. I look forward to how you address them.
 
It looks like the empire will fall into civil war, and this time - with Satie as president - I don't think there'll be any Federation assistance.
 
Of all the people to fall into that pattern...I had such hopes for Martok.

As for Worf--I am very pleased that he is able to stand his ground regardless of Martok's disapproval...I was so worried his love for tradition was going to win out over familial ties.

This line in particular I found extremely powerful: "My greatest wish for you is that you kill me and assume the Cloak of Leadership one day…There is no greater curse I can put upon you."

The other really intriguing thing here has nothing to do with Worf and Martok, though: it's the history between Hobson and Data, which sounds to me that it was less than amicable. I am very impressed that you thought about what it might have been like to serve under an android, especially if it was pre-emotions. While Data always came across as not that bad to deal with among those of similar rank, I have to imagine his command style took a LOT of work. During what TNG season was Hobson's service?
 
An absolutely terrific segment to once again show us the real problems underlying Klingon society.

The verbatim flashback was not only extremely poignant, it gave me a real nostalgic feeling.

I gotta say you're really doing a superb job here tackling the Klingon dilemma. It will be very interesting to see what will come out of this story. That something will, that things are going to change for better or for worse, appears to be unavoidable.
 
The other really intriguing thing here has nothing to do with Worf and Martok, though: it's the history between Hobson and Data, which sounds to me that it was less than amicable. I am very impressed that you thought about what it might have been like to serve under an android, especially if it was pre-emotions. While Data always came across as not that bad to deal with among those of similar rank, I have to imagine his command style took a LOT of work. During what TNG season was Hobson's service?
Episode: Redemption, Part 2 - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98iNFU0IDo0
 
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