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A different ending to Sacrifice of Angels

Either way it's really speculative. I guess it boils down to if they could have done something they would have. If Sisko had gotten there too late they might have just sent him back in time to prevent the ships from coming through or something along the dues ex machina vibe (not that that's what they didn't do anyway.)



-Withers-​
 
He really didn't need to know how much they valued him. He didn't go into the Wormhole to ask for their help. At first he seemed really put off by the fact that they had summoned him at all. He even demanded to be sent back to his ship and became very incredulous by telling them they had no right to interfere with his life. We know Sisko was going to try to stop the Dominion reinforcements no matter the cost. If it came to him sacraficing himself the Prophets were going to act, if not in regard to the entire Dominion fleet, at least to helping Sisko, whatever action that might mean.



-Withers-​
 
I always hated the ending to this episode. OP, sorry to get off from your premise, but a few years ago I had come up with an idea for what I consider to be a better ending (partially basing it off a conversation I had with another friend, whom I've since lost touch with, so partial credit to him).

Episode goes virtually as it did, but instead of Rom working to disable the weapons, he works to crack the station's subspace transceiver. Once that's done, and while Kira, Rom and the loyal Bajoran troops Odo brought over battle the Jem'Hadar, Odo takes the shape of the Female and contacts the Dominion fleet. While Dukat, et al watch in terror, Faux-Female orders the fleet into the AQ, BEFORE the minefield is deactivated. While partially neutered already, the field still demolishes most of the Jem'Hadar ships.

Some do survive, but they're battered and angry, and the Federation-Klingon attack force is closing on the station. The Defiant joins the attack to forcibly seize the station, but due to battle damage, is on the verge of being destroyed, when the Prophets intercede and do their the Game Must Continue blurb.

Sisko tells them to frak off, so they draw the Defiant into the wormhole long enough for Starfleet to win the day without her (perhaps just a margin of minutes, but enough to keep The Sisko alive. This preserves the penance he must pay without having the entire Federation victory be a deus ex).
 
Sisko tells them to frak off, so they draw the Defiant into the wormhole long enough for Starfleet to win the day without her (perhaps just a margin of minutes, but enough to keep The Sisko alive. This preserves the penance he must pay without having the entire Federation victory be a deus ex).

Not exactly. The point was it was HIS choice to ask for a miracle and thus suffer penance. Nor is the entire victory a deus ex machina. The Prophets just stopped the reinforcements from coming, it was still up to the Feds to defeat the AQ Domionion forces.
 
I think another possibility that would've been interesting, and would've made Sacrifice of Angels incredibly dark--what if Odo had died instead of Ziyal?

Now, don't get me wrong...I like the character of Odo. But instead of a confrontation between Damar and Ziyal, and the maddening of Dukat, imagine if instead, a sane Dukat and Ziyal, and a Damar without the guilt of killing Ziyal evacuated the station. And imagine if Kira, unable to forgive Odo for his treason (and when you get down to it, it IS treason given that Odo already knew his mind could be altered by linking and did not have control enough to prevent it), shot him dead.

You would now have a scenario where the Founders would never forgive the Federation or Bajor, and Section 31's genocide attempt would either go unstopped, or they would force the Federation to give them the cure after they successfully conquer the Federation. Which I believe would happen if you had no Cardassian Rebellion--remember, Cardassia would likely remain under Dukat's governorship instead of an increasingly weaker series of puppet leaders. Bringing the Breen in, and then having Cardassian forces unconflicted by rebellion, I think that the Federation would be defeated (especially as Gowron got more and more desperate to ensure his fame over anything else, and the Romulans might switch sides if they see this coming).
 
Sisko tells them to frak off, so they draw the Defiant into the wormhole long enough for Starfleet to win the day without her (perhaps just a margin of minutes, but enough to keep The Sisko alive. This preserves the penance he must pay without having the entire Federation victory be a deus ex).

Not exactly. The point was it was HIS choice to ask for a miracle and thus suffer penance. Nor is the entire victory a deus ex machina. The Prophets just stopped the reinforcements from coming, it was still up to the Feds to defeat the AQ Domionion forces.

I respectfully disagree with both your points.

1. While he did ask, if the gods show up and you ask them to do you a solid because they're INTERFERING ANYWAY (also known as showing up in the moments before your demise) I think the favour is enough to get them to owe you one, without you needing to go to them and ask for it. It's like God stopping the bus that's out to run you over dead in its tracks and you're like, hey, man, whatevs. Didn't ask fo' that.

2. Sort of with the same analogy above, I have to say your criteria for deeming the victory not a deus ex is a bit slim. The entire purpose of the episode was that the Dominion fleet had to be stopped or else the war was over. Period, full stop. If that fleet arrives the Federation is finished.

Starfleet's best effort didn't cut it. The ships would have gotten through if not for a miracle. Sure, there was still fighting ahead, but the effort to retake DS9 so as to prevent reinforcements from reaching the AQ failed.

Perhaps you were confused by my saying entire Federation victory. I meant during the Battle for Bajor, not the war as a whole (though it could have ended then and there, 'cept for the details).
 
You would now have a scenario where the Founders would never forgive the Federation or Bajor, and Section 31's genocide attempt would either go unstopped, or they would force the Federation to give them the cure after they successfully conquer the Federation. Which I believe would happen if you had no Cardassian Rebellion--remember, Cardassia would likely remain under Dukat's governorship instead of an increasingly weaker series of puppet leaders. Bringing the Breen in, and then having Cardassian forces unconflicted by rebellion, I think that the Federation would be defeated (especially as Gowron got more and more desperate to ensure his fame over anything else, and the Romulans might switch sides if they see this coming).

Sorry for the back to back posts, but I'm not sure I agree with your logic here. I agree that the Federation may have lost the war were it not for the Rebellion, but it's iffy.

1. Gowron wasn't Chancellor anymore. Martok was. Thus, by the time the Rebellion would be a potential outcome, that issue was settled.

2. It's not clear — and I grant this can go eitherway — that this was a last-ditch attack by the Allies on Cardassia. If the two fleets had slugged it out a while longer, and if the Allies had disengaged and returned to DS9, I'm not clear that that is a fatal blow to the Federation. It ain't good, obviously, but D-Day's failure wouldn't have doomed Britain and North America to learning to Deutsch sprechen by default.

3. Related to the above, that's why I'm not sure the Romulans would changed sides. Maybe maybe not. Hard to call.

4. The idea that the Dominion would have forced a defeated Federation to surrender the cure doesn't hold water. The Great Link was in rough shape, and even if the invasion had failed, I doubt there was enough time for the Dominion to regroup and go on the kind of sustained offensive that would have been necessary to put the Federation sufficiently on the ropes that they feel it necessary to offer up the cure. Why not just fight a holding action until they're all dead and call it a win?
 
1. Gowron wasn't Chancellor anymore. Martok was. Thus, by the time the Rebellion would be a potential outcome, that issue was settled.

Nope...Gowron retained the chancellorship in the canon universe all the way until "Tacking Into the Wind." (Remember, it was Ezri Dax who convinced Worf to challenge Gowron.)

3. Related to the above, that's why I'm not sure the Romulans would changed sides. Maybe maybe not. Hard to call.

If they felt like it would serve them, they likely would--they have a precedent of switching sides to ally with whoever they think the victor will be. Especially if the Klingons prove useless as allies, in an increasingly dire situation, and the Federation is being overrun, I think they would end up doing whatever they thought they needed to do to survive.

4. The idea that the Dominion would have forced a defeated Federation to surrender the cure doesn't hold water. The Great Link was in rough shape, and even if the invasion had failed, I doubt there was enough time for the Dominion to regroup and go on the kind of sustained offensive that would have been necessary to put the Federation sufficiently on the ropes that they feel it necessary to offer up the cure. Why not just fight a holding action until they're all dead and call it a win?

A combination of factors. If Odo is dead, in the scenario I outline, then you're going to have revenge supersede conquest as the motive for taking over the Federation...scorched-Earth tactics on the part of the Dominion, WMD deployment, and so forth, become more likely. (We know the Dominion has done such things in the past.) A tactic like this could force more than a stalemate or holding action--it could well get the Federation's back against the wall.
 
Nope...Gowron retained the chancellorship in the canon universe all the way until "Tacking Into the Wind." (Remember, it was Ezri Dax who convinced Worf to challenge Gowron.)
No, sorry...I meant when the Cardassian fleet turned en masse after Lakarian City was nuked.

If they felt like it would serve them, they likely would--they have a precedent of switching sides to ally with whoever they think the victor will be. Especially if the Klingons prove useless as allies, in an increasingly dire situation, and the Federation is being overrun, I think they would end up doing whatever they thought they needed to do to survive.
Sure, I'll grant that if the UFP and the Klingons were clearly finished, the Star Empire might seek a separate peace or even change sides. No doubt. I'm not arguing that. I'm arguing that I don't think the UFP or the Klingons would have gotten that badly off fast enough for it to matter a whit to the Great Link's prognosis. Furthermore, you'd have to assume that the Romulans would get out of it very quickly in this alternate vision of yours, else their Fleet would presumably take losses in comparable proportion to the UFP and KE, leaving them in no better position to switch sides or even sue for peace.

A combination of factors. If Odo is dead, in the scenario I outline, then you're going to have revenge supersede conquest as the motive for taking over the Federation...scorched-Earth tactics on the part of the Dominion, WMD deployment, and so forth, become more likely. (We know the Dominion has done such things in the past.) A tactic like this could force more than a stalemate or holding action--it could well get the Federation's back against the wall.
No, I don't think so. The Krajanski Founder and the Martok Founder were both cut down without the Dominion going all batty. Unless you're arguing that the third time was going to be the charm, I'm not sure why they would this time.

Recall that according to Weyoun's thinking, Earth was going to be liquidated anyway. The Dominion plays mean, to be sure, but that doesn't mean they change the rules they play by all that often, either.

See, an idea, though, that I had develop out of this that dovetails with your overall thesis (my objections to it still stand, but nonetheless...) is that IF Odo were to die in that episode, then even if my doubts hold true and the war is stalemated at the end of season 7, you might actually well get your apocolyptic vision, anyway.

With the collapse of the Great Link, the Jem'Hadar might have chosen to go all kamikaze before they ran out of the White. In that scenario, you might have wound up with the Gamma Quadrant liberated by the Founder's demise (good) and the Alpha Quadrant victorious in the war (also good) but a good many planets within range of a major Dominion last hurrah utterly laid waste, leaving the Dominion utterly gone, the Union likely exterminated and the Big Three AQ powers in ruins.

You can get to that interesting conclusion without the Female having to decide that THIS PARTICULAR dead Founder, she's pissed out. It could have gone about naturally as a result of Odo not being there to reach out to her with the cure.
 
I respectfully disagree with both your points.

Well, I guess we'll have to agree to disagree.:)
1. While he did ask, if the gods show up and you ask them to do you a solid because they're INTERFERING ANYWAY (also known as showing up in the moments before your demise) I think the favour is enough to get them to owe you one, without you needing to go to them and ask for it. It's like God stopping the bus that's out to run you over dead in its tracks and you're like, hey, man, whatevs. Didn't ask fo' that.
But the Prophets only mentioned penance AFTER Sisko asked them for a miracle. It's a big difference between doing something that affects just one man, already claimed by the Prophets as their tool, and interfering in something that is of no direct relevance to them ('corporeal matters do not concern us') but has a huge effect on the outside world. Sisko had to sacrifice himself in order for the Federation to win. If the Prophets just pull him out against his will without outside effects there's no sacrifice on his part.
2. Sort of with the same analogy above, I have to say your criteria for deeming the victory not a deus ex is a bit slim. The entire purpose of the episode was that the Dominion fleet had to be stopped or else the war was over. Period, full stop. If that fleet arrives the Federation is finished.

Starfleet's best effort didn't cut it. The ships would have gotten through if not for a miracle. Sure, there was still fighting ahead, but the effort to retake DS9 so as to prevent reinforcements from reaching the AQ failed.

Perhaps you were confused by my saying entire Federation victory. I meant during the Battle for Bajor, not the war as a whole (though it could have ended then and there, 'cept for the details).
Yeah, I meant the entire war - but even just the Battle of Bajor had to be won militarily by the Feds. They had to puncture a hole in the Dominion lines so as to enable the Defiant to get through. And no Dominion reinforcements wouldn't have enabled them to retake DS9 hadn't they, with the Klingons' help, managed to defeat the Dominion fleet.

Also, to be strict - Prophets intervening isn't really a true deus ex machina. According to wiki, deus ex is 'a plot device whereby a previously intractable problem is suddenly and abruptly solved with a contrived introduction of a new character, ability, or object. It is generally considered to be a poor storytelling technique because it undermines the story's internal logic.' There was nothing new, unknown or unlogical about the Prophets or their link with Sisko.
 
“Angels Sacrifice Nothing”

The ever-expanding explosions of the minefield spread across hundreds of kilometers. The single burst from the station’s phaser array had ignited the deactivated ordnance and the cascading blast was taking down the self-replicating mines that had kept the Alpha Quadrant from tipping into apocalypse for five months.

The crew of the USS Defiant stared in horror at the small viewscreen as the data was relayed from the forward sensor array. Lieutenant Commander Jadzia Dax, her hair disheveled and her normally sarcastic mien looked up at her commanding officer in despair. “What do we do now, Captain?”

“Take us into the wormhole,” Benjamin Sisko said with a long sigh.

”What the hell?” muttered Miles O’Brien from the engineering station. “We’re only going to meet a couple of thousand Dominion ships.”

“One ship against an entire fleet?” Dax asked. “That’s a helluva plan ‘B.’”

From the starboard tactical station, Elim Garak swiveled in his chair. “Chief? How does that poem end?”

Honor the charge they made. “You don’t want to know,” the chief said. He turned back to his console and started rerouting weapons and engine power. The Defiant made a beeline for the mouth to the wormhole and went to meet her fate.

- - -

The blue swirling verteron fields that made up the Bajoran wormhole rippled across the viewscreen and rumbled against the Defiant’s shields. “Full stop,” Sisko said. “Chief, divert all power to forward shields and weapons.”

“Captain,” said Dax, “I’m reading multiple warp signatures ahead.”

“On screen,” Sisko ordered. “Maximum magnification.”

The forward screen shimmered to the disastrous view of the Jem’Hadar reinforcements. There were so many ships, it was hard to tell where one ship ended and another began. This was the invasion force Starfleet had feared would come in and tip the scales and force Starfleet’s surrender. The captain gave his orders. “Lock phasers, prepare to launch quantum torpedoes.”

“Phaser banks fully charged,” O’Brien said.

“Forward shields at a hundred percent,” Nog reported.

“Torpedoes ready, targets locked,” the chief continued.

“Here they come,” Dax snapped.

“Fire on my command,” Sisko ordered.

“There must be thousands of them,” Nog said.

“And half of them have locked targets on us,” Garak remarked.

“Steady, people,” Sisko said calmly. “Make every shot count.”

“They’re in weapons range,” Dax exclaimed.

Sisko gave his final order as captain. “It’s been an honor serving with all of you. Fire at will.”


* * *

In the operations center of Terok Nor, Gul Damar operated the main console and reported to Dukat. “Sir, wormhole is opening.”

On the oval-shaped viewer the wormhole burst open and the mass of Jem’Hadar reinforcements emerged into the Alpha quadrant and took up a position surrounding the station. The Founder and Weyoun nodded to each other in satisfaction. “Tell our reinforcements that Alpha quadrant is ours,” the shapeshifter said.

Dukat smiled smugly. “Alert our new fleet to take up station and await instructions.”

But Damar wasn’t listening. A priority communiqué had just come through. “Sir, two hundred enemy ships have broken through our lines. They’re headed this way.”

“It’s nothing to worry about,” Dukat said. “They’ll land right into our laps and be destroyed.”

“Dukat,” Weyoun said, “you don’t think Starfleet is so stupid to risk sending ships that are outnumbered ten to one on a suicide mission, do you? They must have something planned.”

“It’s a futile attempt,” Dukat said. “Let them come. Let them see the might of Cardassia and the Dominion. And when they come we’ll obliterate them.”


- - -

Captain Edward Jellico, commanding officer of the USS Cairo, gripped the arms of his command chair as the Excelsior-Class cruiser ripped across space at maximum warp. The deck plates vibrated under the strain. Chief Engineer Hayes was putting it to the wall. It’d taken the Cairo and her taskforce of more than two hundred ships less than an hour to break the Dominion formation and head out of the Durane system and jump to warp, leaving the enemy fleet far behind.

Defiant had broken through a couple of hours ago but they’d not heard anything from Captain Sisko. Jellico turned to his first officer, Commander Wong. “Leslie, get me Quentin Swofford on a secure link.”

The first officer operated her console quickly and the forward screen shifted to a battered bridge of the Galaxy-Class USS Cortez. The ship had fallen back with engine trouble before the battle and was just now approaching the frontlines and giving the Dominion fleet a taste of its weapons array. “Ed,” Swofford said, under the thundering explosions. “I take it this couldn’t wait.”

“Sorry Quen,” Jellico said. “We’ve lost contact with the Defiant. We have to assume they’ve failed. I’m taking the ships that broke through to Bajor. Hold the line as best you can, old friend. If those Dominion ships have come into the quadrant, there’s only one chance left.”

“We’ll do our best, good luck.”

Jellico turned back to Wong. “Send the instructions to the Rotaran.”

- - -

Lieutenant Commander Worf stood at his commanding officer’s side. They were in the engineering compartment of the Rotaran staring at the mish mashed pieces of a photon torpedo casing that was strewn across the deck. General Martok snarled at the chief engineer, Commander Kav. “You will have this weapon online in time, right, Kav?”

“If I don’t,” Kav said. “I assume I’ll be gutted with a bat’leth?”

“That why I like you Kav,” Martok said. “You always know what I expect of you.”

Kav smiled broadly and accessed the ship’s computer. “All of the parts arrived from the Federation ship,” he said referring to the Cairo. “Including the trilithium samples and the magnetic pod of protomatter. Everything’s calibrated, I just need to get the components into the torpedo tube and it will await your order.”

Martok slapped Kav on the shoulder. “Excellent work, old friend. Let me know when it’s ready to launch.” He turned, nodded to Worf and the two of them left the compartment and headed for the bridge. Martok caught the expression on Worf’s face. “Worf,” he said quietly. “I’m sure she died with honor.”

“Of that I have no doubt,” Worf said. Jadzia, his beloved, had no doubt died when the Defiant had reached Deep Space Nine. The contingency plan put in place would no doubt avenge her death, but at the cost of billions of lives. Worf had once fought nearly to the death to prevent Tolian Soran from doing what they were now attempting. But the cost was the safety of this entire quadrant of the galaxy.

When they reached the bridge, Martok ordered the weapons officer to cloak the ship and gave new coordinates to the helmsman. In one hour their fates would be sealed and the Klingon Empire would survive.

- - -

“Now,” Dukat said, “we drink to the conquerors of the Federation.” He lifted his glass of kanar in salute and downed the dark syrupy liquid.

Weyoun turned away in disgust. “Keeping our ships here in the system is a mistake. We should deploy them immediately.”

“We will,” Dukat said. “In good time. The Federation is coming here with everything they have left. They’re impossibly outmatched. But they will no doubt be relaying the details of the battle back home. I want them to see the fleet that has gathered. The fleet that will soon head into the Federation and take it.”

Weyoun crossed his arms. “The Founder is not pleased. I’ve assured her you know what you’re doing. Don’t make a liar out of me, Dukat.”

Smiling broadly, Dukat refilled his glass. He looked up to see Damar ascending the steps and heading for his office. He waved his exec in and asked for a report.


“We found them,” Damar said. “Major Kira and Rom were in the central core. They were the ones who took the weapons offline.”

“For all the good it did them,” Weyoun said. “Have you dealt with them?”

Damar nodded and smiled viciously. “They’re dead. I took care of it myself.”

“What about the others?” Weyoun asked. “Jake Sisko, Leeta, Quark?”

“I have teams out searching for them,” Damar said. “Engineering teams have restored the weapons batteries. We’re ready to face the Federation fleet.”

“How long until they arrive?” Dukat asked.

“Forty-seven minutes,” Damar reported without checking his padd.

“Good. Prepare the weapons, deploy our forces and put the station on battle alert.”

- - -

Normally a starship traveling at warp speed showed up on sensors as a distortion in the subspace medium. Every FTL capable vessel since the dawn of warp drive was configured to detect ships closing at warp. But when there were more than two hundred ships traveling at warp in close proximity to each other closing on the high side of warp nine, the subspace sensors you used to detect them would overload and spit out gibberish. Such a subspace distortion was currently bearing down on the Bajoran system.

And thanks to the sensor disruption of the subspace fields, neither Terok Nor or the Jem’Hadar ships surrounding it detected the bomb that was set off three minutes ago.


- - -


“One minute,” said Lieutenant Chamberlin, alpha shift helm officer of the Cairo.

“This is it folks,” Jellico ordered. “You all know the plan. Seline,” he said turning to the Mazerite tactical officer. “Plot your firing solutions the moment we’re out of warp. Coordinate with tactical on the Venture and the Armstrong. They’re going to cover our flanks when we start our run. Remember, we’re here to hold, harass and pray to hell General Martok succeeds.”

“Thirty seconds,” Chamberlin said.

“Battle stations,” Jellico ordered. “Take us out of warp. All ships engage!”

- - -

The combined Federation-Klingon fleet dropped out of warp in precise unison less than a million kilometers from Deep Space Nine and the massive fleet of Jem’Hadar ships. Dukat shook his headed in wonderment as the outnumbered ships opened up with their weapons batteries against the conflagration of Jem’Hadar cruisers. He turned to Damar. “Fire at will,” he said.

Damar brought the station’s weapons to bear on the Federation fleet, making short work of several ships trying to attack the station. The phasers tore through the support struts of an Excelsior-Class ship, severing its saucer section. The flaming hulk, bearing the name USS Cairo blew apart from its engineering hull and collided into the deflector shields of the station.

The deck thundered under the explosions, dropping the shield integrity down to half power. The resulting antimatter explosion of the Cairo tore one of the upper pylons from the docking ring, collapsing the hull supports.

“We’ve lost the outer shields,” Damar cried out. “Collision in section fifty nine. I’ve got repair crews on the way.”


“Bring in attack wings twelve through twenty to guard the unshielded sections,” Dukat ordered. “Keep firing!”

“Gul!” shouted Cres, a Female glinn manning the sciences console. “Our scanners have picked up a massive explosion. A level twelve shockwave is closing on us!”

- - -

Five minutes earlier…

“In range at thirty thousand kellicams,” Leskit said from the helm of the Rotaran.

“Torpedo armed and ready,” Worf said. “Detonation set for nine seconds after it enters the corona.”

“De-cloak,” Martok ordered. “Raise shields…fire!”

The trilithium warhead that was armed with a protomatter detonator emerged from the forward torpedo tube of the Rotaran and detonated within the corona of the star. The solar implosion tore the vast ball of hydrogen and radiation apart, expanding in every direction in space. As soon as the torpedo had emerged from the launch tube, the Rotaran had gone to warp nine and re-cloaked.

“Victory,” Martok whispered. “Helm, set a new course, two eight seven mark twelve.”

The Rotaran would leave the battlefield of Bajor, leaving the dead and the doomed behind. They’d rendezvous with the Ninth Fleet at Olrok IV and plan the next move. Given the damage they’d just inflicted on the Dominion and their Cardassian allies, the outright invasion of Cardassia Prime would be the their next logical step.

“Course set,” Leskit said.

“Engage,” Martok barked.

As the Rotaran left the area and went to maximum warp, the songs began. The songs of victory and the songs of honor for the dead who had paid for that victory with their lives.

- - -

The supernova that erupted from B'hava'el, hidden until the last moment by the warp distortion of the allied fleet, left nothing standing. No planets, no vessels, no life.

Bajor and her moons were vaporized, torn apart at the core levels of elements. The Jem’Hadar fleet was shredded, only a dozen or so escaping the blast, only to be pursued by escaping Federation starships.

The exact death toll was never fully known. It was easily in the billions. The destruction reaped upon this once peaceful system was a dark shadow that fell across the civilized population of the Federation. The price of victory had been higher than most were willing to pay. With the destruction of the wormhole, Dominion forces had been cut off from their supply lines in the Gamma quadrant and what remained of their fleets retreated to Cardassia Prime.

Starfleet and the Klingons, and years later when the Romulans had finally come around, bottled up the Cardassian Union, stripped it of its military capability and set up no-travel zones within the former Union.

Still, to this day, twenty-seven years later, the Cardassian people are a starving, crippled civilization. The protectorates set up by the allied forces, routinely send food and medicine into the disputed zones. But their Dominion masters, even after all of this time, still attempt to rebuild their empire. The Federation never allowed the all-out invasion of Cardassian space and the occupation that would have cost millions of lives. The Debacle of Bajor was a dark stain that held back the civilian leaders of the Federation and they would never again authorize such a brutal action. They’d continue to deprive the Dominion of their military capabilities and help the sick and dying on distant Cardassian worlds, but no one had come up with a ‘Dominion Solution’ that would finally secure a peace that the galaxy desperately needed.

So the standoff and the waiting would continue.

All because a lone Federation starship had failed in her mission to garner the wrath of gods in the Celestial Temple on the fateful day.
 
That is the longest post I have ever read at this forum. Let me first say that I think you've got some skills and I hope they're put to good use (I'm an editor at a publishing firm so I like to make mention of good work when I see it.) Secondly, I like that you kept the dialogue of the characters so on point. I heard the actors as I read along rather than my own voice. So well done on that front too.

Finally, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go kill myself. The summation makes it seem like it was intentional but the tone of that was so dark it left me in the mood for Vodka in an empty hotel room with a one string guitar.

Either way I look forward to more of the same :) I'm a masochist.


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