Yeah, this is definitely one of those
"don't really think about why this is happening just go with it" type of episodes.
"Conflict of interest" seems to be a very foreign concept to future humans, because this sort of thing where people who know each other start playing court seems to happen a lot across all Star Trek shows.
A lot in this episode doesn't make sense, from the question of why that ion storm monitoring system works the way it works? Why must the pod be jettisoned? Why must the captain be the one to do it and why is it apparently so important that the only buttons he has direct control over are yellow alert, red alert (where is the button for
"double red alert" by the way?) and "jettison pod"? Why can't they beam the guy out, why can't they rig a remote monitoring system?
The blaming of Kirk doesn't make much sense either. I could buy that people would think he made a mistake, an error, but everyone, from commodore to the people from his class in the bar(what a coincidence?), jump at the conclusion that he did it deliberately. The entire case basically hinges on proving that Kirk
wants to murder people who don't like him... is that the sort of person that usually rises to command of a starship in Starfleet? Maybe in the Mirror Universe...
The rushed ending doesn't help either, they set up a Finney's encounter with his daughter, but they don't show it, they set up the danger to the Enterprise, but just solve it in a quick voice over.
Speaking of that, again there's the danger of Enterprise falling out of orbit. First... how? If they're in orbit why would they suddenly start falling down? Second, they mentioned the Intrepid is there as well, couldn't they just tractor them up if they're in danger?
Overall, revenge of an insane underachieving underling is an interesting concept, the character moments work, mostly, and a glimpse at Starfleet outside of the Enterprise is welcome, but the episode is just bogged down by so much nonsense.
Ah, and the most criminal offense this episode makes... McCoy looks for Spock's heartbeat in the wrong place.
