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Is it weird that I want to read this now? :lol:

It can be found in an old paperback anthology: Alien Pregnant by Elvis, edited by Esther M. Friesner and Martin H. Greenberg (DAW Books, 1994).

It was an anthology of stories based on tabloid-type notions. My story was titled "Danny's Excellent Adventure."
 
It can be found in an old paperback anthology: Alien Pregnant by Elvis, edited by Esther M. Friesner and Martin H. Greenberg (DAW Books, 1994).

It was an anthology of stories based on tabloid-type notions. My story was titled "Danny's Excellent Adventure."
Have you done any other tabloid-style stories besides this and "I Had The Green Hornet’s Love Child"?
 
I'd be interested in knowing that, too.

I wrote a fanfic short story, back when I was taking Short Story Workshop at Orange Coast College, with a kind-of sensationalized title (blurred in case it might be construed as a story idea): "Interview with Dr. Ambrose Crater, or 'The Salt Vampire Ate My Parents'."
 
Have you done any other tabloid-style stories besides this and "I Had The Green Hornet’s Love Child"?

See also "Credibility Problem" (Fantasy Book magazine, March 1985). Recently reprinted in Dubious Pleasures, my new collection.

It's about a tabloid reporter who can't get anyone to believe him when he uncovers a genuine paranormal menace. Kinda Kolchak meets the Boy Who Cried Wolf.

Hard to believe I first sold that story more than forty years ago!
 
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It can be found in an old paperback anthology: Alien Pregnant by Elvis, edited by Esther M. Friesner and Martin H. Greenberg (DAW Books, 1994).

It was an anthology of stories based on tabloid-type notions. My story was titled "Danny's Excellent Adventure."

Sounds fun! Sadly, not on Kobo, but maybe I will run across it some day. :)

(Although when I was looking, the search results returned some rather... "interesting" results. Had no idea that was a whole subgenre! :lol: )
 
When Stephen King released his unabridged version of The Stand, he updated it to include then current cultural references.
He also went back to the early Dark Tower novels to bring them more in line with later publications.
Didn't Diane Duane eventually do new updated versions of her YA fantasy books? I can't remember the name of the series, but I remember her or someone else talking about how she went back and updated things like the computers and pop culture references.
Art with different versions of itself over time is quite the can of worms. I take it on a case by case basis and decide how much time, effort, and money I think my preferred version is worth. Most of the time, the core of what I love is in the easily available version.

Sometimes, there really is no one right answer. A famous example in classical music is Mahler's Symphony No. 6. Debate rages to this day over whether to put the Scherzo or the Allegro before the other one.
I tend to just go with the author's preferred version or if it's part of a series then which ever one is most consistent with the rest of the series.
Yes, the placement in the timeline was moved from a pre-TMP Phase 2-ish second 5-year mission to a post-TMP five year mission. Ranks changed, I think something to do with Nurse Chapel was altered as well as uniform descriptions.

But it was a long time ago so I may be mis-remembering.
Wasn't that done because the last 3 books were solidly placed post-TMP, so it created a more obvious inconsistency when you had all of them together?
 
Didn't Diane Duane eventually do new updated versions of her YA fantasy books? I can't remember the name of the series, but I remember her or someone else talking about how she went back and updated things like the computers and pop culture references.
Young Wizards. There were a few reasons she went back, ranging from her rawness as an author when she was first starting, lack of relatability for today's kids, and fixing some compounding "sliding timeline."

 
No bears in Africa, either. <Sulu>Oh, my!</Sulu>

(If I can quote movies I've never seen, I can certainly allude to a certain 1939 movie that I've seen, and intensely dislike!)
 
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Didn't Diane Duane eventually do new updated versions of her YA fantasy books? I can't remember the name of the series, but I remember her or someone else talking about how she went back and updated things like the computers and pop culture references.

As David mentioned, she did that for her Young Wizards novels, although not for the parallel Feline Wizards novels in the same continuity (which, despite being about talking cat wizards, are not YA), so there are some chronological discrepancies between the two now.


Wasn't that done because the last 3 books were solidly placed post-TMP, so it created a more obvious inconsistency when you had all of them together?

Actually, no. When Swordhunt, the followup to The Romulan Way, was originally written (and published in two halves as Swordhunt and Honor Blade, because The Empty Chair was delayed but they'd already reserved two slots on the publishing schedule), it was written to take place during the 5-year mission, with an opening editor's note explaining the discrepancy with the previous books. That was under John Ordover's editorship, but by the time Duane was ready to get back to work on TEC, Ordover had left and Marco Palmieri had taken over the project. At that point, they decided to shift the setting to post-TMP for the whole series, so My Enemy, My Ally, The Romulan Way, and Swordhunt (reunited as one book) were all revised to be post-TMP. (Changes in Swordhunt include changing Uhura's rank from lieutenant to lt. commander and removing a reference to "The Doomsday Machine" being "not so long ago.") The Empty Chair is the only Rihannsu novel (and the only Duane novel other than Spock's World) that was unambiguously post-TMP in its original version.

Although, as with Young Wizards, it creates a discrepancy, since The Wounded Sky and Spock's World are part of the same continuity but did not have their chronological references, ranks, etc. updated with the rest. Which is why I still prefer the original versions of MEMA and TRW. Which is still reconcilable with the newer books, more or less, since the new ones are set after Spock's World and thus should be post-TMP anyway.


Another famous example: The original magazine version of "Tarzan of the Apes" by Edgar Rice Burroughs had a scene where Tarzan fights a tiger -- in Africa?

When it was pointed out to ERB that tigers are not native to Africa, he changed it to a lioness in all subsequent editions.

Except that there really aren't any jungles to speak of in Africa either, at least not of the type Burroughs depicts in the novels. So it's incongruous that he changed that one thing but kept the rest.
 
Maybe because it was an easy fix?
Makes sense.

A lot of television shows say they're in places that they're obviously not. If you travel, you pick up on this pretty fast. Or they lie a bunch. If you ever went up to the top of Saint Paul's Cathedral, then you know the scene where Tom Cruise goes from the whisper gallery to the roof is not possible in the time-frame in the film. There is an assumption that the audience doesn't know better.

Starting at 1:37 he's in the whisper gallery. Some how he teleports to the roof. It's still a long way up from the whisper gallery having made my way to the top the last time I visited England. No idea how he made it to a roof.

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If the reader doesn't know any better, I can definitely see this happening in much older books before we had the Internet. It's still happening in film.
 
Actually, no. When Swordhunt, the followup to The Romulan Way, was originally written (and published in two halves as Swordhunt and Honor Blade, because The Empty Chair was delayed but they'd already reserved two slots on the publishing schedule), it was written to take place during the 5-year mission, with an opening editor's note explaining the discrepancy with the previous books. That was under John Ordover's editorship, but by the time Duane was ready to get back to work on TEC, Ordover had left and Marco Palmieri had taken over the project. At that point, they decided to shift the setting to post-TMP for the whole series, so My Enemy, My Ally, The Romulan Way, and Swordhunt (reunited as one book) were all revised to be post-TMP. (Changes in Swordhunt include changing Uhura's rank from lieutenant to lt. commander and removing a reference to "The Doomsday Machine" being "not so long ago.") The Empty Chair is the only Rihannsu novel (and the only Duane novel other than Spock's World) that was unambiguously post-TMP in its original version.

Although, as with Young Wizards, it creates a discrepancy, since The Wounded Sky and Spock's World are part of the same continuity but did not have their chronological references, ranks, etc. updated with the rest. Which is why I still prefer the original versions of MEMA and TRW. Which is still reconcilable with the newer books, more or less, since the new ones are set after Spock's World and thus should be post-TMP anyway.
OK, thanks for clearing that up. I haven't read them yet, so I was just going what I thought I remembered reading on here and Memory Beta, and obviously I remembered wrong.
Young Wizards. There were a few reasons she went back, ranging from her rawness as an author when she was first starting, lack of relatability for today's kids, and fixing some compounding "sliding timeline."

Oh OK, thanks.
 
This one?


Finding legit good eBooks is tough when they're public domain.
It seems to be; my Penguin Classics edition doesn't have a tv tie-in cover, but that edition does credit Tim Dolin, who edited the Penguin Classic version. (I had forgotten that the Penguin Tess has an intro by Margaret Higonnet, one of my professors in grad school. A delightfully eccentric woman.)
 
I also decided to omit a few older stories that had probably passed their sell-by date -- like that satirical time-travel story about Vice President Dan Quayle . . . :)
In the summer of 1991 William Barton and Michael Capobianco published a near-future science-fiction novel about the Russian space program, Fellow Traveler. I recall that, at the end of the book, there's a President Dan Quayle. Capabianco was married to Ann Crispin, and when I met him at a convention I had a little bit of a geek-out moment over Fellow Traveler.

Tangentially, the Barton/Capobianco team wrote a nice Sherlock Holmes pastiche for DAW's Sherlock Holmes in Orbit anthology in the mid-90s, "The Adventure of the Russian Grave."
 
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