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"The Conscience of the King": Plot Holes and Questions.

his first duty is to his ship and his crew
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Kirk would never, ever permit himself to ... let his desires get in the way of his duty. The one time in season 1 that he's in his right mind and is tempted ... he ends up choosing duty.

I'm going to argue with you below, on more minor points; but I fully agree with you here. Season 1 Kirk is conscious of his duty, and committed to it. I think I didn't say anything to the contrary, in my post that you were replying to. But it's clear Kirk likes the ladies too, even in season 1. Not enough to overwhelm his good sense or his responsibilities; but he likes them. That doesn't make him a shallow womanizer; just a man. I'm not sure if we disagree on this, or not?


(see Rayna Kapec)

Oh god, PLEASE don't bring Requiem For Methuselah into it. That episode cannot be a basis for forming any conclusions about the character of Kirk. The episode is godawful, and Kirk is somewhere between erratic and insane in it.


The reality is ...

Um: the reality is that Jim Kirk was a fictional character who was inconsistently written.


That is hugely, hugely misunderstood by fandom. The episode makes it clear that nothing actually happened -- they danced, they talked about the stars, and that was it.

Oh please.

No, I am not confused by Helen's falsh-flashback, nor am I blinded by the myth of Kirk. Yes, something happened between Kirk and Helen prior to the start of Dagger of the Mind.

I originally wrote a long bit on this to insert here; but when I checked it I saw that it was over a thousand words. That's a total thread hijack. I want to delve into it, but I think I should create a new thread for that, out of courtesy. For here, let us just say that the notion that nothing happened between Kirk & Helen is at least highly disputable. Less politely, it's "obviously wrong." :)


Kirk's reaction to Ruth isn't that of a horny man-child -- it's deep, soulful love and longing. This is someone he cared for profoundly in his past, a painful memory of a lost love, and seeing her again overwhelms him with regret and yearning.

??? Where on earth are you getting any of that? That's a lot to read into a couple of glances, with almost no dialogue. "Painful" and "regret" are complete projections on your part. Kirk just doesn't say very much to Ruth, or about Ruth. We've got damn little to go on. When he plucks the rose and starts reminiscing, just before Ruth appears, he has a fond smile on his face. Clearly his memories of her are not all painful.

And anyway: that's all very creepy, isn't it? By the end of the episode, when Kirk walks off with "Ruth", he knows that this isn't the real girl. He isn't seeing *her* again, at all; he is seeing a simulacrum, an android or something.
(Does Kirk have an android fetish? "Ruth" and Rayna? Did he acquire it from interacting with Sherry Jackson's Andrea?)
He's seen the construct in the knight's armour. He knows he's walking off with something like that. What is he going to do? He's not going to rekindle his relationship with Ruth; Ruth isn't there. He's probably not going to have sex with fake-Ruth. So, what? Just stand there and admire her? Enjoy staring at his old girlfriend, who looks exactly the way they did when they were both ~25? That's a little self-involved.

It's odd that you would contrast Kirk's behavior vs "the shallowness of McCoy conjuring up the Rigel II cabaret girls." What's more immature than walking around with a replica of your ex-girlfriend, pretending that everything is the way it was? Unless the real Ruth is dead. I don't really read it that way, but it's possible; but that would open up its own issues. McCoy's choice of cabaret girls seems far more straightforward; in some ways more mature. He also promptly gives them up for Ensign Barrows, a real woman. Which is more than what Kirk is walking around with.

The ending of Shore Leave hits some odd notes, if you think about it.


You didn't comment on my note about Areel in Court Martial, possibly overlooked it. Kirk's interaction with her in the bar reads like he's interested in setting up a "friends with benefits" situation. Like:
"Say: you're here, I'm here, we like each other, we know we click, and you know the rules about how I'm going to fly off out of here as soon as the ship is repaired. What do you say we—?"
Nothing wrong with that. But it contrasts with your attempt to read Kirk as "tending to fall too hard and too deeply for his own good." Nothing really supports that. Requiem for Methuselah is too preposterously bad to depend on for canon; Edith Keeler is an extremely special situation; and Kirk was amnesiac when he married Miramanee. Kirk isn't this delicate flower whose heart needs to be sheathed in bubble wrap. He's a mature professional man, very comfortable in his world and his profession, who likes a good woman and would be interested in settling down with the right one – some day. But he doesn't have time for that now, given his career and sense of responsibility.
 
Shore Leave – After everything has been sorted out, Kirk is quite willing to go off with "Ruth". Which frankly seems a bit creepy.
I think it's creepier that Kirk, at 34, wants to beat up a 20 year old kid from Academy after 15 years. If he hates Finnegan that much, why not just hunt him down today and kick his ass? Maybe Finnegan was still stronger than him 15 years later.
 
And anyway: that's all very creepy, isn't it? By the end of the episode, when Kirk walks off with "Ruth", he knows that this isn't the real girl. He isn't seeing *her* again, at all; he is seeing a simulacrum, an android or something.



This part of your post made me think of Kirk's attitude towards Dr Crater in Man Trap after they knew Nancy was already dead. It's the image of Ruth, not really her, and Kirk can win "all of the arguments" Interesting parallel I never thought of before.
It also makes their bewilderment over Lincoln and Surak just a little more strange, seeing as they have had "people" created by aliens from their thoughts before. (I know they were clear they never thought they were real, but they seemed just as amazed as if it never happened, which it had somewhat.)
 
I think it's creepier that Kirk, at 34, wants to beat up a 20 year old kid from Academy after 15 years. If he hates Finnegan that much, why not just hunt him down today and kick his ass? Maybe Finnegan was still stronger than him 15 years later.

Finnegan doesn't look 20. He looks to be close enough to Kirk's own age. (There is a line later, where Finnegan calls Kirk old and says that he himself is still young. But that could just mean he's still vigorous: he doesn't look young.)

Anyway, nothing Kirk says indicates that he's still fixated on fighting Finnegan. His whole attitude during the conversation about it with McCoy, immediately preceding Finnegan's arrival, is amused reminiscence. "Ha, there was this guy..." Kirk refers to his younger self as "grim" etc, and he confesses that for years he just wanted to beat that guy up. Past tense: he's not still fixated. It doesn't become relevant to present-day Kirk, until Finnegan belts him on the jaw.

And then there's a long, long beat while Kirk decides which way to take it, before he finally says alright and joins the fight.

By the way, how is Kirk only 34? He says he's 42 in The Deadly Years, just two seasons later.
 
Finnegan doesn't look 20. He looks to be close enough to Kirk's own age. (There is a line later, where Finnegan calls Kirk old and says that he himself is still young. But that could just mean he's still vigorous: he doesn't look young.)

FINNEGAN: . . .You stupid underclassman. I've got the edge. I'm still twenty years old. Look at you. You're an old man.
By the way, how is Kirk only 34? He says he's 42 in The Deadly Years, just two seasons later.
KIRK: No, I'm thirty four. I'm thirty four years old.

I don't know if you're just making things up to be funny, or if you're just unfamiliar with things you disagree with.
 
Kirk says he's 34 years old in "The Deadly Years," which was just one season later.

And it's a little bit interesting that Cadet Kirk (age, what? 17?) was involved with a woman who was portrayed by a 32 year old actress and who therefor looks herself to be about 32 years old.


I think it's creepier that Kirk, at 34, wants to beat up a 20 year old kid from Academy after 15 years. If he hates Finnegan that much, why not just hunt him down today and kick his ass? Maybe Finnegan was still stronger than him 15 years later.

Finnegan doesn't look 20. He looks to be close enough to Kirk's own age. (There is a line later, where Finnegan calls Kirk old and says that he himself is still young. But that could just mean he's still vigorous: he doesn't look young.)

Anyway, nothing Kirk says indicates that he's still fixated on fighting Finnegan. His whole attitude during the conversation about it with McCoy, immediately preceding Finnegan's arrival, is amused reminiscence. "Ha, there was this guy..." Kirk refers to his younger self as "grim" etc, and he confesses that for years he just wanted to beat that guy up. Past tense: he's not still fixated. It doesn't become relevant to present-day Kirk, until Finnegan belts him on the jaw.

And then there's a long, long beat while Kirk decides which way to take it, before he finally says alright and joins the fight.

By the way, how is Kirk only 34? He says he's 42 in The Deadly Years, just two seasons later.
 
Kirk says he's 34 years old in "The Deadly Years," which was just one season later.

And it's a little bit interesting that Cadet Kirk (age, what? 17?) was involved with a woman who was portrayed by a 32 year old actress and who therefor looks herself to be about 32 years old.

When "Shore Leave" was filmed in October 1966, Shatner was 35, Shirley Bonne was 32, and Bruce Mars was celebrating his 31st birthday that week. According to Memory Alpha, he competed in Olympic trials for track in 1954, which might explain all his running scenes. ;)
 
I'm going to argue with you below, on more minor points; but I fully agree with you here. Season 1 Kirk is conscious of his duty, and committed to it. I think I didn't say anything to the contrary, in my post that you were replying to. But it's clear Kirk likes the ladies too, even in season 1. Not enough to overwhelm his good sense or his responsibilities; but he likes them. That doesn't make him a shallow womanizer; just a man. I'm not sure if we disagree on this, or not?

I never said anything to the contrary. Inded, I did explicitly state already that yes, clearly Kirk is a man who feels deep longing for female companionship. I have no idea why you'd think I'm denying something that I have already acknowledged more than once. The point is simply that it wasn't the shallow womanizing or even predation that some people imagine it to have been -- that most of Kirk's romantic encounters in season 1 fall into the categories of 1) old flames from before his captaincy (Ruth, Areel), 2) women he's manipulating for purely pragmatic, duty-driven goals (Lenore, Andrea), 3) women who make advances on him that he rebuffs because he's fixated on duty (Eve, Janice in "Miri"), or 4) women he's pursuing because he's in an altered mental state and isn't himself (Janice in "The Enemy Within," Helen). Edith Keeler is the only woman in the entire first season whom Kirk initiates an actual romantic relationship with while in his right mind (Areel is a pre-existing relationship), and that's after getting to know her over the course of what may have been several weeks.


Oh god, PLEASE don't bring Requiem For Methuselah into it. That episode cannot be a basis for forming any conclusions about the character of Kirk. The episode is godawful, and Kirk is somewhere between erratic and insane in it.

Actually it's one of my very favorites. True, the romance is compressed to an implausible degree (which could've been fixed simply by changing the "four hours" reference in the teaser to two days or something), and Spock is a bit out of character as a sudden humanities scholar, but the writing is brilliant and poetic.

And the point is that, whatever the problems in how the romance is portrayed, it's consistent with how Kirk had already been portrayed throughout the series. When he fell in love, he fell deeply and devotedly, even too passionately for his own good. We see it on his face when he's "reunited" with Ruth, even though we're told no specifics. We see it in his love for Edith Keeler, the only romantic entanglement that ever came close to making him abandon his duty.



Um: the reality is that Jim Kirk was a fictional character who was inconsistently written.

No need for that, now. I'm not pretending Kirk was a real person. I'm speaking of the reality of what the text of the work of fiction entitled Star Trek actually portrays about the character of James T. Kirk, as opposed to the misconceptions about the contents of that text that many people have. For instance, the myth asserted in this thread is that "The Conscience of the King" portrayed Kirk engaged in sexual predation upon an underage girl, where the reality is that the text of the episode portrays the character of Kirk using the pretense of romantic interest in a young adult woman in order to gain information about a suspected mass murderer. Do you see what I'm saying now?

As for inconsistency, yes, there was a change in the way Kirk was written after season 1, as he evolved into a more conventional '60s action hero. But even so, he was still never quite the rampant Lothario that the myth alleges. Let's go over it:

"Catspaw": Sylvia seduces him, he plays along for the sake of survival.
"Wolf in the Fold": He enjoys watching a belly dancer and suggests visiting a place where "the women are so..."
"Mirror, Mirror": He plays along with Marlena as "the Captain's woman" for the sake of maintaining his cover, and ends up winning her over by treating her with respect.
"Bread and Circuses": He is offered a night with a slave girl and makes only a token protest about her right to choose. Probably his lowest moment.
"A Private Little War": He is drugged and seduced by Nona in pursuit of her political ambitions.
"The Gamesters of Triskelion": He romances Shahna, but it's largely about gathering information and winning her allegiance to assist in an escape.
"By Any Other Name": He attempts to seduce Kelinda as part of a plan to free the ship -- and bombs spectacularly.
"Return to Tomorrow": An alien entity uses his body for romantic interaction with an entity in Anne Mulhall's body.
"Elaan of Troyius": He is drugged and seduced by Elaan in pursuit of her wish to avoid marriage.
"The Paradise Syndrome": He loses his memory, falls in love, gets married, and conceives a child.
"Is There in Truth No Beauty?": He attempts to seduce Miranda so as to distract her from Spock's meld with Kollos -- and bombs even more spectacularly.
"Wink of an Eye": He is pursued as a prospective mate by Deela and plays along, mainly in hopes of survival and escape. Since Deela is trying to get pregnant, it's probably her idea that they have sex.
"Whom Gods Destroy": He is seduced by Marta, who then tries to kill him.
"The Mark of Gideon": He is manipulated into developing feelings for Odona, which works.
"Requiem for Methuselah": He is manipulated into developing feelings for Rayna, which works astonishingly well.

Even in seasons 2 and 3, the pattern was mostly not that different from season 1. He was the pursued more often than the pursuer, and when he did pursue women, it was usually a ploy to advance a more pragmatic goal, or as a result of not being in his right mind. He was more receptive to romance than in season 1, quicker to attempt seduction as a ploy, but still he was rarely shown as the aggressor. He was willing to get some action while on shore leave, but otherwise he still put duty first. The one real outlier is "Bread and Circuses," but even spending the night with the slave girl could've been duty-driven to an extent, an attempt to lull the Proconsul into thinking Kirk was playing along (although that's a pretty lousy justification for what was essentially a rape, since a slave cannot actually give consent). In that case, I'd say that Kirk was written out of character; and "Requiem" exaggerated an aspect of his character. But otherwise, I think that Kirk was written pretty consistently.



Yes, something happened between Kirk and Helen prior to the start of Dagger of the Mind.

The whole point of the neural neutralizer scene is that the memory of the romantic encounter was false. "At the Christmas party, we met, we danced, you talked about the stars. I suggest now that it happened in a different way. You swept me off my feet and carried me to your cabin." It couldn't be more explicit that there was no actual tryst. The reason Kirk was embarrassed was simply because this was first-season Kirk, a man more driven by duty than romance and uneasy about any prospect of fraternization with a member of his crew, as any responsible commander would have been.



??? Where on earth are you getting any of that? That's a lot to read into a couple of glances, with almost no dialogue. "Painful" and "regret" are complete projections on your part. Kirk just doesn't say very much to Ruth, or about Ruth. We've got damn little to go on.

We have Shatner's performance, which was very intense and yearning and not even remotely like a shallow, predatory Lothario only interested in sex. We have Gerald Fried's music, which was sweet and pastoral and poignant and, in its bridge portion, quite sad and elegiac. That tells us all we need to know about the tone the reunion was meant to have. Dialogue is not the only way to convey character or emotion.


When he plucks the rose and starts reminiscing, just before Ruth appears, he has a fond smile on his face. Clearly his memories of her are not all painful.

I didn't say they were. I said he clearly cared deeply for her and regretted the loss of her.



It's odd that you would contrast Kirk's behavior vs "the shallowness of McCoy conjuring up the Rigel II cabaret girls." What's more immature than walking around with a replica of your ex-girlfriend, pretending that everything is the way it was?

Pretending is not immature at all. The whole purpose of that planet was to pretend. Fantasy is a healthy part of life. It would be immature to attempt to pursue a real relationship with an android simulacrum, but as a simple reminiscence in an environment where pretending was allowed and invited, a brief indulgence to be set aside afterward? It doesn't seem that bad.

Besides, I'm not talking about the present day of the episode, I'm talking about the real Ruth and the nature of the relationship Kirk seemed to have with her. It was clearly about strong emotion and caring, not shallow, detached lust.


You didn't comment on my note about Areel in Court Martial, possibly overlooked it. Kirk's interaction with her in the bar reads like he's interested in setting up a "friends with benefits" situation.

I don't see anything to debate there. Again, you seem to have the totally false perception that I was somehow denying that Kirk had any romantic feelings at all in season 1. Since that is not at all what I'm claiming, the example of Areel does not refute or conflict with my position in any way. All I'm saying is that Kirk was not Don Juan, that he wasn't an addictive womanizer who tried to bed every woman he met. He had a romantic side that he generally kept in abeyance due to his preoccupation with his duty, but he also had women in his past that he sincerely cared about, and the hope that he could someday find time for real love in his future.

Kirk isn't this delicate flower whose heart needs to be sheathed in bubble wrap. He's a mature professional man, very comfortable in his world and his profession, who likes a good woman and would be interested in settling down with the right one – some day. But he doesn't have time for that now, given his career and sense of responsibility.

We're not really that far apart here. I think you're caricaturing my position. I agree with everything in those last two sentences, but saying that Kirk has a tendency to fall in love sincerely and deeply does not mean he's a "delicate flower." It just means that he's more a romantic than a Lothario.



And it's a little bit interesting that Cadet Kirk (age, what? 17?) was involved with a woman who was portrayed by a 32 year old actress and who therefor looks herself to be about 32 years old.

I've seen a fan theory that Ruth was an older woman that Cadet Kirk had a Mrs. Robinson-ish thing for. It's kind of surprising that no novel or comic or short story I'm aware of has ever tried to flesh this out.
 
I don't know if you're just making things up to be funny, or if you're just unfamiliar with things you disagree with.

I used to be able to quote all of 'em at length, as is probably true of most of us here. Last ~20 years or so I've fallen out of touch with all but my most favorite episodes. I haven't watched the middle of Shore Leave in a long time; I'm largely going off memory here.

I'd forgotten Finnegan's line. But even as a child, I didn't take it literally. I thought it meant that he was "internally" 20, or was programmed to have the stamina of a 20-yr-old. Because he sure as hell didn't look 20, even to my 10-yr-old self. And of course he wasn't "really" 20, and he wasn't "really" Finnegan, so his assertions have no meaning.

Speaking of my memory...

Kirk says he's 34 years old in "The Deadly Years," which was just one season later.

I distinctly remember Kirk saying – this is during the hearing scene where he'd defending himself and telling them to ask him anything – he says "I'm forty-two years old!" I remember this quite distinctly.

Am I just flat wrong about that?

Ugh, please don't tell me I have to re-watch it. The only moment in it that I really like, is when a rejuvenated Kirk strides onto the bridge and snaps out "Status report!" and Chekov grins to himself, and the commodore guy leaps out of the command chair like it's hot. That's the only moment in it that I find worth watching.

We're not really that far apart here. I think you're caricaturing my position. I agree with everything in those last two sentences, but....

Not so much caricaturing as misunderstanding.

I've got a long thread-starter I'm about to post, which perpetuates that misunderstanding – I've written far too much of it to just scrap – so maybe we can nail down exactly where we agree & disagree in that thread.
 
Kirk says he's 34 years old in "The Deadly Years," which was just one season later.

I distinctly remember Kirk saying – this is during the hearing scene where he'd defending himself and telling them to ask him anything – he says "I'm forty-two years old!" I remember this quite distinctly.

Am I just flat wrong about that?

It's possible your memory is blending elements of Star Trek with The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, where the number 42 does have significance.
 
The second-season edition of the TOS writers' bible says Kirk is "about thirty-four." This must be where "The Deadly Years" got it. The Making of Star Trek, published following TOS's second season, also says Kirk is 34.

Shatner was born in 1931, so he would've been 36 in the second season.
 
The "ships theater" set was a redress of the "ship's gymnasium" set from "Charlie X" (which was a redress of the Engineering Room set).

Oh, good. A talk about the theater set.



I always assumed that angled ceiling of the theater was from the engine room, but I can't say for sure, because now I can't clearly recall what the top of engineering looked like!
 
Oh it's the same ceiling. You're looking for the shot of Evil Kirk in "The Enemy Within" just before Evil Kirk climbs down from those tall units in Engineering. The view of Evil Kirk scurrying around up there shows the same ribbed ceiling with piping.

The "ships theater" set was a redress of the "ship's gymnasium" set from "Charlie X" (which was a redress of the Engineering Room set).

Oh, good. A talk about the theater set.



I always assumed that angled ceiling of the theater was from the engine room, but I can't say for sure, because now I can't clearly recall what the top of engineering looked like!
 
This deletd scenes shot from Enemy shows off the ceiling beautifully

EngineRoomceilingALL-enemywithindeleted_zpsa1800a20.jpg~original


Well, it shows off how large it was, anyway! But the gym/theatre/engine room were all the same set, without doubt.
 
Oh, ok...thanks for that, guys! :)

It's just that when I mentally conjure up an image of engineering, for some reason I don't "see" a ceiling.

Sort of like that ring of 'tiles' around the lower ceiling of the bridge. Beyond that the ship kind of "vanished".
 
True, the set did not extend beyond the inwardly curving ciling buttresses:

bridgeceilingMOG_zpsa5bba349.jpg~original


However, the creators did insert a sort-of-ceiling panel in at least two episodes, WNMHGB and (I think) Truth-Beauty (I don't have that photo handy).


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