I don't know if this is so much an error as a preference thing but I've never cared for the way ellipsis are often used. I know the three dots are called an ellipsis. I'm not sure what the four dots in a row are called. Consistently, S&S uses an ellipsis with a period at the end to make-up the four dots and that's not the same thing as four dots in a row. The first three will look properly spaced with one dot bunched up at the end. I'm not sure how it looks on other readers but it doesn't look quite right on my Kindle. I always search these out and replace them with four periods. This is an issue in almost every single Star Trek ebook out there.
Also, as far as ellipsises (ellipsi?) go, sometimes they actually use the proper ellipsis character, sometimes they use three periods, sometimes they use three periods with spaces in between them. Sometimes there are spaces before or after the ellipsis or both, sometimes there aren't. I always search out all these variations and replace them with the proper ellipsis character with no space before or after. This issue is hit or miss throughout the TrekLit line. Some ebooks are perfect, by my standards, others are not.
Again, this is a very minor and, admittedly, picky issue on my part but I've noticed a lot of variation and thought I'd mention it.
- Byron