for one thing nero wasnt a military commander.
he was driven more for revenge..
he already had prime spock "watching"
to do the same to new spock...
and he wanted him to live to suffer after he watched..
i think he was so over confident he never expected to see enterprise or spock as a threat..
remember at the end when kirk and spock are on narada didnt nero say something like killing spock when he had the chance..
So the story would have to feature Spock Prime coming to contact with Kirk at the story point where he did. Perhaps Kirk takes charge of a wrecked Enterprise and heads for repairs on Delta Vega, the only place he can reach?
...As written, the plot hinges on coincidence a lot, but that's okay since the plot is supposed to be about "destiny" anyway. The more problematic thing IMHO is that Kirk achieves essentially nothing. His rushing to the bridge to annoy Spock and inform Pike achieves nothing: the fate of the ship isn't altered. He also fails to save Vulcan even when tasked with the job. And it's nuSpock who gets to save Earth and then to destroy Nero's ship. All Kirk does is go grab Pike - but that looks so unnecessary because it's Scotty who transports Pike to safety. Why was Kirk needed there at all?
Timo Saloniemi
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if they come out of warp into the debris field without shields up they are possibly destroyed by the debris..
it starts smacking them right away..
kirk was the one who sent the ship after the narada..
spock wanted to rejoin the fleet. a move that would have resulted in the destruction of earth and possibly other federation planets.
also kirk was taking suggestions from his crew.. something spock seemed to be too much in shock to do. so chekov was able to make his recommendation..
and scotty sent them to the wrong part of the narada because they cant see inside the ship and its lay out isnt what is expected.
pike wasnt getting beamed out unless jim found him.
thanks to kirk's encounter with prime spock he was knew about the ship and possibly about where to find it .