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ST: Gibraltar - Gravity

Junt is shrewd, but he's still playing an angle. He sees profit here, no doubt. Ramirez best be careful how he responds, lest he inadvertently make a deal with the devil.

I liked the reference to Nemo - gutsy move and it fits in well, especially a reference to using Borg technology for mining. 'Course now, you've opened up a whole can of worms regarding the future of the UT/JJ universe. ;)

*Note to self: Must start adding lens flare to new JJ-verse Border Service stories. Replace Akinola w/ 22 year old stud and increase size of Bluefin to roughly the size of a freakin' Sovereign. *Mutter, grumble*

Thanks, Gibraltar - thanks a lot! :lol:
 
Hey, a new chapter! Hooray! Very well written as usual. And a new mystery to boot. Hopefully, you won't leave us hanging as long as the last time. :)
Thanks for the review, and I sincerely hope the next installment won't be quite so overdue. ;)

OMG, this was fantastic. The little tidbits you throw in there!
a legal database only three AI points away from full sentience
That deserves its own story. The whole idea of rating AI for sentience and purposely limiting it is something that's in the backdrop of my story, too, but I haven't had time to explore it much. But in one line, you really sort of fleshed it out.

And Nero and Borg tech? Whoa. Where is that going? I wonder if we'll be seeing more about that in this story.

And now we have a missing crewman.

Junt really impressed and kind of scared me, here -- just as he did Ramirez. Your writing really captured their reactions and mental games very well. I also loved the descriptions of Ramirez's office. This wasn't a blow-things-up kind of chapter, but I found it exciting anyway, and worth the wait.
Much obliged for the kind words! :) As for the AI reference, I figured after the M-5 and other rogue thinking machine debacles (not to include Data and his ilk) that the Federation would have strict provisos against fully sentient machines.

As for Nero and Borg tech, it was postulated that the appearance and capabilities of the Narada were due in part to the inclusion of Borg technology in the design.

The mental game of chess being played between Ramirez and Junt was a pleasure to write, a conflict on a purely cerebral and emotional level. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Terrific stuff as usual. Junt is the kind of smart Ferengi who doesn't seem to be motivated only by his greed for latinum. In other words: the most dangerous kind. Ramirez is clearly playing right into his hands even if it seems clear that the man doesn't trust the Ferengi.

And the mystery deepends. Is this going to be a race for the solution? Well it better not turn into a fight cuz Gibraltar will end up as the underdog. Not that Sandhurst and crew know any other way.
Ain't that the truth, though! :lol: And yes, Junt is undeniably dangerous, when he has a mind to be. He thrives on exploiting other species' bias against 'typical' Ferengi behavior to his advantage.

Have I told you how much I love Junt? Does this man have Cardassian blood? Sometimes he reminds me of Garak: shrewd, powerful, and knows everything going on around him. Honestly, if the Ferengi had been like this from the start, they could have been a true, worthy adversary of the Federation, not a laughingstock. This guy is no coward or idiot, and whether it's for right or wrong, he is willing to really, truly put his ass on the line instead of cringing and shrieking when the going gets tough.

Oddly enough, I think he and Nog have a lot in common, though Nog's idealism sets him apart and makes his intentions indisputable.

And now Juneau has a missing-person case on her hands...

(The Nero comment was awesome too.)
I hadn't thought of the Nog/Junt comparison, but it is apt from the perspective of two Ferengi breaking their society's strict behavioral modes. And Junt is idealistic too, in his own way.

Junt is shrewd, but he's still playing an angle. He sees profit here, no doubt. Ramirez best be careful how he responds, lest he inadvertently make a deal with the devil.

I liked the reference to Nemo - gutsy move and it fits in well, especially a reference to using Borg technology for mining. 'Course now, you've opened up a whole can of worms regarding the future of the UT/JJ universe. ;)

*Note to self: Must start adding lens flare to new JJ-verse Border Service stories. Replace Akinola w/ 22 year old stud and increase size of Bluefin to roughly the size of a freakin' Sovereign. *Mutter, grumble*

Thanks, Gibraltar - thanks a lot! :lol:
Nemo? I think you've got the Romulan mining captain and the tropical fish confused! :lol: That would be a terrific short story title for a Trek vignette, Finding Nero. ;)

If you're thinking of JJ-izing the UT universe, I'd suggest the guy from the Old Spice commercials for a younger Akinola. "Welcome to the Border Service. Anything is possible when you smell like a man and have a giant red Orion sidekick! I'm on a horse!"

Though just because Nero exists in the UT universe, even latinum says history won't unfold in quite the same way for him there... not if I have anything to say about it, anyway.

Thanks for the comments.
 
Nemo? I think you've got the Romulan mining captain and the tropical fish confused! :lol: That would be a terrific short story title for a Trek vignette, Finding Nero. ;)
Damn and blast! You had me so shaken by the possibility of a JJ-verse version of UT I started babbling about an animated Clown-fish. :wtf:

If you're thinking of JJ-izing the UT universe, I'd suggest the guy from the Old Spice commercials for a younger Akinola. "Welcome to the Border Service. Anything is possible when you smell like a man and have a giant red Orion sidekick! I'm on a horse!"
Double-damn and blast!! Now you've made me spit iced-tea all over my key-board.

Though just because Nero exists in the UT universe, even latinum says history won't unfold in quite the same way for him there... not if I have anything to say about it, anyway.
Thank God! Reason and sanity are restored. Sorry Old-Spice guy - maybe you can do a cameo on Fringe.

JJ-verse allusions aside, this is a great story - just keep it coming! :)
 
I don't think the JJ-verse HAS to be a bad story. It will just take some worldbuilding and sophistication to make it happen, and I think that many of the authors here would have the talent if they ever happened to have the desire. Whether or not the next movie provides that to the degree I'd like, I don't know, but somehow I think I'll end up with yet another alternate universe. (Heck, I already did it once, in a short story. Did I ever post "Cardassian Sunrise" here?)
 
As for Nero and Borg tech, it was postulated that the appearance and capabilities of the Narada were due in part to the inclusion of Borg technology in the design.
Oh, I know. I was just shocked to see you open that can o'worms. Here we go ... :devil::borg:

If you're thinking of JJ-izing the UT universe, I'd suggest the guy from the Old Spice commercials for a younger Akinola. "Welcome to the Border Service. Anything is possible when you smell like a man and have a giant red Orion sidekick! I'm on a horse!"
:guffaw: Keyboard. You almost owed me one. :lol:
 
hee hee - the whole JJ universe sedge-way is just priceless. the Nero mention is a fun bit of continuity porn and in fact adds more depth to what lacked onscreen in terms of his story [but that's a whole other story].

As to the story itself, wow, out of the ball park again Gibraltar. The power play and word games between Rameriz and Junt is just par excellence. I loved the delicious intricate balance between the two and the set up this has for trouble down the line. Every word feels as though it was carefully chosen and weighed. Quite an impressive piece of writing that conversation. Excellent.
 
Add to the above the fact that you throw in Nero, sentient AI protocols, Borg, etc as little tidbits without any course of explanation but as mere little nuggets of gold for the reader to stumble across just shows your skill at doing this - it gives a professional, sci-fi feel to the proceedings and of course reads as super slick and uber cool.
 
Once again, late to the party, but still working on catching up with all my back reading. As I'm sure I've said before about this one, WONDERFUL! Again.

I also liked the many little tid bits you've thrown in here, including the Legal Database reference (it's the lawyer in me; so sue me.) And the Nero reference especially to the extent that (unlike others assumptions about JJ-izing UT) this may merely be a recognition that the Prime Universe must have a version of all the people who also appeared in the JJ-verse.

And I very much like your characterization of Junt, as well as how you've really taken the idea of what it would be like to deal with a "typical" Ferengi to a much more realistic extreme than we have ever seen on screen. Junt strikes me, perhaps, as more of a Ferengi in the "Yankee Trader" vein (as referenced in the TNG ep where they were first introduced) than the Ferengi we came to know in later screen depictions. I very much like the dichotomy.

And I love a good mystery. Bring it on!
 
hee hee - the whole JJ universe sedge-way is just priceless. the Nero mention is a fun bit of continuity porn and in fact adds more depth to what lacked onscreen in terms of his story [but that's a whole other story].

As to the story itself, wow, out of the ball park again Gibraltar. The power play and word games between Rameriz and Junt is just par excellence. I loved the delicious intricate balance between the two and the set up this has for trouble down the line. Every word feels as though it was carefully chosen and weighed. Quite an impressive piece of writing that conversation. Excellent.

Add to the above the fact that you throw in Nero, sentient AI protocols, Borg, etc as little tidbits without any course of explanation but as mere little nuggets of gold for the reader to stumble across just shows your skill at doing this - it gives a professional, sci-fi feel to the proceedings and of course reads as super slick and uber cool.
Thank you for the review! :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading that exchange as much as I enjoyed writing it. As for the continuity tid-bits, I liked giving the scene that added bit of depth and backstory, and I'm pleased to see it came across as I intended.

Once again, late to the party, but still working on catching up with all my back reading. As I'm sure I've said before about this one, WONDERFUL! Again.

I also liked the many little tid bits you've thrown in here, including the Legal Database reference (it's the lawyer in me; so sue me.) And the Nero reference especially to the extent that (unlike others assumptions about JJ-izing UT) this may merely be a recognition that the Prime Universe must have a version of all the people who also appeared in the JJ-verse.

And I very much like your characterization of Junt, as well as how you've really taken the idea of what it would be like to deal with a "typical" Ferengi to a much more realistic extreme than we have ever seen on screen. Junt strikes me, perhaps, as more of a Ferengi in the "Yankee Trader" vein (as referenced in the TNG ep where they were first introduced) than the Ferengi we came to know in later screen depictions. I very much like the dichotomy.

And I love a good mystery. Bring it on!
Junt's an atypical Ferengi, to be sure, but he's every bit the trader/mercenary/brigand/entrepreneur that would thrive in the post-Dominion War period. Smart, savvy, and with plenty of business acumen. Plus, he has the good sense to surround himself with talented people, some Ferengi, some not.

Oh, and I'm glad you're enjoying the mystery aspect as well. Thanks for the great feedback.
 
Gravity - Chapter 6, Part III

Chapter 6, Part III

Acheron Particle Fountain PFMR-1


Sandhurst exited the shuttle ahead of an automated anti-grav pallet full of specialized equipment being guided via remote by Ensign Belinda Lascomb, Gibraltar’s assistant chief engineer. The two officers paused at the bottom of the egress ramp to inspect their surroundings, a compact and cargo-filled shuttle bay brimming with activity. Pallet loaders and civilian engineering personnel scurried about in a ballet of hectic purpose.

A knot of dour looking technicians stood nearby observing the new arrivals, and giving off a decidedly unwelcome air.

Lascomb glanced up from the padd she was using to maneuver the pallet and examined the recalcitrant technical crew. “Wow,” she murmured to Sandhurst, “tough crowd, sir.”

“Looks that way,” he assessed.

One of the civilians finally stepped forward, a tall, Caucasian human with silver hair and matching goatee. His eyes tracked visibly to the rank insignia on Sandhurst’s collar as he offered a weak, damp, and thoroughly lackluster handshake to the starship commander. “Janik Ebolsarr, assistant project supervisor, Captain…”

“Donald Sandhurst.” He gave Ebolsarr’s flimsy hand a perfunctory shake before releasing the clammy appendage.

“Forgive me, Captain Sandhurst, but we were expecting some engineering assistance.”

“Yes,” Sandhurst said with a patient smile. “We’re it.”

Ebolsarr’s frown was pronounced. “One engineer? Really? This is the much-touted Starfleet help we were promised?”

It was everything Sandhurst could do not to laugh outright. His sense of tragic irony had shifted into overdrive in the face of this blatantly hostile reception, especially so soon after the happenings aboard Hades’ Apex. His smile at once grew wider and more insincere. “Two engineers, actually, and I was under the impression we were serving as technical advisers. You were expecting us to build the fountain for you, perhaps?”

“For as long as it took you to get here, we could have built three fountains!” Ebolsarr shot back.

“None of which would have worked, either, apparently,” Sandhurst countered without hesitation.

The outraged Ebolsarr raised a hand and appeared to be on the cusp of poking Sandhurst in the sternum with his index finger. “You’ve got a helluva lot of nerve—“

“I wouldn’t,” Sandhurst cautioned, his saccharine smile faltering.

“Janik, for the love of all that’s holy, will you shut your damn mouth?” an exasperated female voice called out from behind them. Sandhurst glanced over the man’s shoulder to see a dark-skinned human female clad in a utility jumpsuit approaching. A look of recognition flashed across the captain’s features as he registered the warm smile he remembered so well.

“Janik, you’re as brilliant as you are egotistical, but if you want to compete with Donald Sandhurst in engineering aptitude, you’re going to find yourself quickly humbled,” the woman announced as she stepped up to where the two men were facing off.

As he stepped deftly around Ebolsarr, Sandhurst wrapped the smaller woman in a tight hug. “Oh my God, Davra, I had no idea you were working here!”

Davra Caritas laughed, the familiar sound music to Sandhurst’s ears as the woman allowed herself to be engulfed in his embrace. “I’m the project supervisor here, actually.” She drew back to look up at him. “It’s so good to see you, Donny!”

Her laughter was joined by his. “You always were the only one I’d ever let call me that.”

After a moment, Sandhurst released her and turned back towards his young companion. “Ensign Lascomb, I’d like to introduce you to Davra Caritas. She was chief engineer on the first ship I ever served aboard. She took a green young ensign under her wing and molded him into a serviceable officer and a promising engineer.”

Lascomb smiled. “A pleasure, Ms. Caritas.”

Ebolsarr stood silently by, still visibly irritated but having decided to hold his tongue in the presence of his supervisor.

“Likewise,” Caritas said as she gestured towards the exit and summarily dismissed the headstrong Ebolsarr. “Janik, team three needs help aligning the graviton accelerators in the core.” He nodded obediently in response and retreated as she turned back to the Starfleet officers.

“I can’t tell you how pleased I am that you’re the one they sent to assist us, Donald. LaForge and I… well… you remember.”

Sandhurst smirked. “Indeed I do. The two of you are too similar for comfort, Davra.”

She grunted sourly, though the smile remained. “I’m going to ignore that, though I’m sure you meant it as a compliment. Come on, you two, let me give you the nickel tour. We’ve got a lot to accomplish in the next few days if we’re going to keep Mr. Ramirez’s schedule.”

“Lead on, Chief,” Sandhurst said lightly as he and Lascomb fell in behind the energetic older woman.

*****

USS Gibraltar
Sickbay


Issara Taiee looked up with undisguised shock as Lieutenant Ashok walked into Sickbay. The two stood mutely, staring at one another for a long moment before Taiee was finally moved to speak.

“Are you lost?”

Ashok cocked his head slightly, regarding the much smaller woman with a kind of clinical detachment usually reserved for engineers and the criminally insane. “This appears to be Sickbay,” he observed dryly. “I am where I intended to be.”

Taiee smirked and toggled the tissue analysis series she was overseeing to automatic before giving the towering Bolian her full attention. “Aside from your yearly medical workups, I can’t remember the last time I saw you wander in here.”

“Sickbay, like the Livodian flu, is something best avoided,” he replied in his deep, resonant voice, which seemed unusually loud in the quiet confines of the nearly empty compartment. Ashok gestured towards the ward’s large display screen, set into the inner bulkhead of the main examination bay. “If I may have a moment of your time, Lieutenant?”

Taiee fell into step behind him like an errant asteroid drawn into the gravity well of a star. “I’ll try not to take that personally,” she laughed easily, “and yes, you may. What can I do for you?”

Ashok’s fingers danced across the display with what Taiee thought to be surprising deftness for so large an individual. As he called up a sensor log from the shuttle Kon-Tiki, he explained, “Lieutenant Trumbley’s assertions appear to be accurate. One crew member from their scout remains missing, though according to the survivors, he was on the flight deck when the ship experienced its inexplicable power failure.”

In response, Taiee nodded thoughtfully. “But no sign of him when you and the captain beamed the crew off.”

“No,” Ashok confirmed, “nor any indication of where he may have gone, or by what means.”

“Couldn’t someone have beamed him off?” Taiee offered.

“Possible, but unlikely,” he replied. “Harrier was in sensor range of both Hades’ Apex and Gibraltar from the moment the ship lost attitude control until it had descended to approximately fifteen-hundred meters into Acheron’s upper-most ammonia cloud layer. Unless there was an undetected craft pre-positioned below our sensor range, and in extremely close proximity to Harrier, a successful transport would have been nearly impossible.”

Taiee bobbed her head reluctantly. “Sounds a bit far-fetched to me, too.” She looked momentarily thoughtful. “Perhaps something happened to him onboard? Hell, I suppose if he thought he was facing a death dive into the heart of a gas giant, he might have vaporized himself with a phaser?”

Ashok appeared dubious. “During their descent the crew of Harrier was subject to in excess of five g’s of centrifugal force. Even if a person could get to a phaser housed under one of the cockpit consoles, adjusting the phaser’s default stun setting into the lethal range and aiming it while being spun like an Orion dervish simply isn’t feasible.”

Taiee blushed and shrugged her shoulders. “Uh… fair point. I’m just spit-balling here, Ashok.”

The engineer hesitated, seemingly on the cusp of saying something. Having been shipmates with Ashok for the past year and a half, Taiee knew to wait rather than trying to coax whatever it was out of the notoriously introverted man. After what seemed to be an agonizingly long moment of indecision for Ashok, he finally blurted, “I… I have an idea.” The bifurcated ridge dividing the Bolian’s face grew a shade darker with his evident discomfort.

The weight of Taiee’s comparatively tiny hand coming to rest on his shoulder caused Ashok to stiffen as if startled. “It’s okay,” she said. “Whatever it is, however crazy you think it might be… if your idea doesn’t pan out, nobody but me will know.” She leaned into his line of sight until Ashok’s eyes broke their thousand-meter stare and found focus on her. “I promise.”

His nod was so subtle as to be almost unnoticeable to the untrained eye. With slow deliberation he extended a finger to touch the image recall icon on the LCARS display. The screen flared to life and presented the image of a spherical, reddish object set against the murky backdrop of Acheron’s turbulent atmosphere.

“We scanned this object passing the shuttle as we pursued the falling scout ship. It didn’t seem relevant at the time, especially given the hyper-electrical activity common to the planet’s outer layers.”

He reached out again to touch a series of controls that prompted a cascade of analytical data on the seemingly energized orb. “I cross-referenced the phenomenon with the corporation’s atmospheric database, and found that it does not correspond to any known naturally occurring meteorological activity on Acheron.” Ashok glanced sidelong at Taiee as he enlarged a specific set of equations. “When I expanded my search parameters, I found something interesting. Does any of this look… familiar, Lieutenant?”

Taiee stepped forward, arms folded across her chest as she absorbed the information. A minute ticked past, then two. The nurse practitioner’s eyes widened fractionally as she began to piece together the associative values. “No - that can’t be right…” She extended a hand, tapping fluidly at the interface to power through a series of subroutines that pared the volumes of displayed information down to a single, seemingly insignificant statistical footnote.

Finally, she opened another display window and expanded it to overlay the graphical representation she’d created of the energy pattern in question. The peaks and valleys charted on the two graphs were not identical by any means, but they were very similar… similar enough to suggest something that both officers had difficulty grasping.

“That,” Taiee announced in a subdued voice thick with wonder, “is the energy pattern generated by humanoid neural activity.”

Ashok let out a sigh that seemed a release of pent up angst, pure relief that his musings hadn’t been a work of baseless fiction. “And this pattern here,” he added in an equally somber tone as he called up a third display window, “shares a ninety-two percent match with a matter/energy transport signature.”

“But there’s no transporter beam indicated…” Taiee’s voice trailed off.

“No,” he agreed. “The data suggests total matter-energy conversion at the subatomic level, independent of any obvious transitional matrix.”

“Gods,” Taiee murmured, turning and resting her back against the wall. “You think that sphere was our missing crewman?”

Ashok turned to face her, a surge of confidence now unmistakable in his voice for the first time since entering Sickbay. “I think that it’s a strong possibility.”

*****
 
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Now that's very interesting. Not sure at all what to make of it yet but whatever it is, it's probably not good. Also, good bet it's going to get worse.

I really liked the awkwardness between Taiee and Ashok. The large Bolian is a truly odd fellow, isn't he? Good thing Taiee understands this perfectly.
 
I enjoyed Sandhurst's reunion with Caritas. Nice to see a friendly face in hostile surroundings. It's obvious there's some rich history shared between Sandhurst and his old mentor. Janik, on the other hand, has a real chip on his shoulder - I foresee problems from his corner.

Like CeJay, I also enjoyed the awkward encounter between Ashok and Taiee. They are such opposites, yet show they are true professionals and shipmates as they work to solve the mystery of the missing Harrier crewman. I must say, the possible answer is as astounding as it is ominous.

Wonderful stuff! :)
 
Wow wee to the possible whereabouts of the missing crewman! That's ... well mad. How can it be? Damn - so many different compelling elements to this tale. We have the strange disappearance in part explained by the ball of light but whihc only raises new questions. Then there is whatever else is going on with the Particle Fountain. Are these different threads linked in some manner or way?

Meantime, Sandhurst meets his mentor, he's meeting a lot of old ghosts on this journey it seems. And his engineering skill is going to put him in the fore of whatever is going on here. Another captain might have been disadvantaged by not having the requiste skills and being out of the loop. The bad thing is that Janik and whatever other trouble makers may be about may take umbrage to his presence.
 
What in the world .... ? Wow, weird and intriguing don't begin to describe Ashok's theory. I loved the scene between him and Taiee. He's a favorite of mine and any time we get more of him, I'm happy.

As for the first scene ... you did a great job painting a realistic introductory picture of Janik. Sweet guy, eh? :rolleyes: The limp, flimsy handshake, the whiny attitude ... we all know people like that. You are so good with characters. And now we meet one of Sandhurst's early influences. Should be interesting. LOVED Sandhurst's handling of Janik, by the way.

More! More!
 
Now that's very interesting. Not sure at all what to make of it yet but whatever it is, it's probably not good. Also, good bet it's going to get worse.

I really liked the awkwardness between Taiee and Ashok. The large Bolian is a truly odd fellow, isn't he? Good thing Taiee understands this perfectly.
That she does. :lol: He's an odd duck, to be sure... a large, blue, bifurcated duck with daddy issues...

I enjoyed Sandhurst's reunion with Caritas. Nice to see a friendly face in hostile surroundings. It's obvious there's some rich history shared between Sandhurst and his old mentor. Janik, on the other hand, has a real chip on his shoulder - I foresee problems from his corner.
Yes, Janik is one of those kinds of people whose entire self-image is linked to his prowess in his chosen field, in this case, engineering. This breeds arrogance and a casual disdain for anyone not measuring up to 'his' standards.

Sandhurst and Caritas do indeed go back a long ways, and just as Monica Covey and Sabrina Diaz were role-models to Sandhurst in the arts of command, Davra Caritas is the mentor who taught him how to be an outstanding engineer.

Like CeJay, I also enjoyed the awkward encounter between Ashok and Taiee. They are such opposites, yet show they are true professionals and shipmates as they work to solve the mystery of the missing Harrier crewman. I must say, the possible answer is as astounding as it is ominous.

Wonderful stuff! :)
Thanks! :)

Wow wee to the possible whereabouts of the missing crewman! That's ... well mad. How can it be? Damn - so many different compelling elements to this tale. We have the strange disappearance in part explained by the ball of light but whihc only raises new questions. Then there is whatever else is going on with the Particle Fountain. Are these different threads linked in some manner or way?
An excellent question! :evil:

Meantime, Sandhurst meets his mentor, he's meeting a lot of old ghosts on this journey it seems. And his engineering skill is going to put him in the fore of whatever is going on here. Another captain might have been disadvantaged by not having the requiste skills and being out of the loop. The bad thing is that Janik and whatever other trouble makers may be about may take umbrage to his presence.
Yes, this assigment falls neatly within Donald's expertise, but as we've seen, there's no shortage of people involved here with ulterior motives and their own interests at stake. Thanks for the review.

What in the world .... ? Wow, weird and intriguing don't begin to describe Ashok's theory. I loved the scene between him and Taiee. He's a favorite of mine and any time we get more of him, I'm happy.

As for the first scene ... you did a great job painting a realistic introductory picture of Janik. Sweet guy, eh? :rolleyes: The limp, flimsy handshake, the whiny attitude ... we all know people like that. You are so good with characters. And now we meet one of Sandhurst's early influences. Should be interesting. LOVED Sandhurst's handling of Janik, by the way.

More! More!
Many thanks. :D Ashok's definitely an overly-sensitive sort, as terrified of his theory being seen as preposterous as he is of being wrong. After all, he's just the engineer, right? Sandhurst, Ramirez, Lar'ragos, Shanthi... those have always been the idea people.

Ooooh...something tells me that some being is angry at Ramirez and company...
I can neither confirm, nor deny your hypothesis. ;) Suffice it to say, strange things are afoot at the Circle-K... or... uh... Hades Apex.

Thanks for your review!
 
I love that you've made not one, but two people spew their beverages via your comments, Gibraltar. Oh, good times.:beer:

I'm catching up here, I just love Junt. I totally agree with others in saying he is what Ferengi should have been.

This story has all the makings of a really good mystery. I'm looking forward if what I think is going on is going on...

...probably not.

Great story, though!
 
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