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I've returned to Deep Space Nine...

Subtlety. Subtlety, subtlety, subtlety. Perceptive viewers are now alerted to something devious; imperceptive viewers will not be. Some television scriptwriters wouldn't know subtlety if it were hit upside their heads; Peter Allan Fields is not one of them, and I have a feeling I'm going to miss him when he departs the show at the end of this second season.

I think DS9 would probably be an even better show than it already is had PAF not had to leave the regular writing staff because of illness. His absence is one of the reasons (perhaps the main reason) the show seems to lose a bit of its thematic edge in seasons 3 and 4 despite an overall spike in quality in other areas, especially where sci-fi action/adventure is concerned. This gentlemen wrote most of the early seasons' best material, including Necessary Evil and Duet, which are among the series' best individual installments, right alongside later season classics such as ItPM and Chimera.

Necessary Evil is unlike anything Trek had done before, and I'm hard pressed to even find anything to quibble with or nitpick about. Subtle and raw, it's a play on the noir genre that adds a whole extra dimension to the show via flashbacks to Terok Nor, while at the same time deepening the histories of several major characters. Everything we see here will resonate throughout the rest of series. It's a masterpiece episode.
 
With Duet, In the Hands of the Prophets, and The awesome circle Trilogy (which felt epic and was paced like a feature film), DS9 had somehow elevated Star Trek to a level it had never been elevated to before in the films and episodes prior. It was starting to tell a new difficult story that somehow resonated much deeper than even the adventures of Kirk. I was in heaven when these shows first aired.

Then, a friend of mine caught Necessary Evil before me, and he said you ain't seen nothing yet.

How right he could be. This is my favorite episode of Trek. Ever. I've found some flaws with it after examining it over many years, but it still doesn't take away it's impact. The way it captured that Noir feeling you described. The way the mystery played out.

One of the simple things it did that Trek didn't often do was offer a backstory. If you think about it, once a pilot to a Trek show airs, the shows moves forward, and only forward, and isn't too interested in the past (Enterprise has a somewhat vested interested in what happened before it's pilot, but even that past is not as inherently interesting as what is here, in DS9) but DS9 the make story was so substantial, and soi intrisic to the premise. When I first read TV guide's article on the pilot, and it said that the Cardassians suddenly elft teh station, I looked it over and over, to see what the reason was, but no reason was given. In the show itself, that reason is different depending on who you talked to. How great is that

This episode was very interested in what had happened in the past. Very chilling too. I could say more, but it would take forever. Quark, Dukat, Odo, and Kira, they are all spot on. This one episode elevated the scope of the show by not looking ahead but by looking behind.
 
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I think DS9 would probably be an even better show than it already is had PAF not had to leave the regular writing staff because of illness. His absence is one of the reasons (perhaps the main reason) the show seems to lose a bit of its thematic edge in seasons 3 and 4 despite an overall spike in quality in other areas, especially where sci-fi action/adventure is concerned. This gentlemen wrote most of the early seasons' best material, including Necessary Evil and Duet, which are among the series' best individual installments, right alongside later season classics such as ItPM and Chimera.

Necessary Evil is unlike anything Trek had done before, and I'm hard pressed to even find anything to quibble with or nitpick about. Subtle and raw, it's a play on the noir genre that adds a whole extra dimension to the show via flashbacks to Terok Nor, while at the same time deepening the histories of several major characters. Everything we see here will resonate throughout the rest of series. It's a masterpiece episode.

I'd been meaning to look into why Peter Allan Fields departed. A lot of the time it's simply a matter of a writer or producer desiring to try something else out, and I'd figured that were the case here. Other times it's some blatantly negative feelings on the part of said writer or producer toward another individual and their production style or the overall direction of the series, and it's called 'creative differences' because that sounds nice and sweet. I didn't realize he'd grown ill. That's such a shame.

Your assessment of "Necessary Evil" mirrors my own. I'd expected something good because I knew the buzz was good on it, but I thought I was looking at '8.5' good, not my third perfect score.

With Duet, In the Hands of the Prophets, and The awesome circle Trilogy (which felt epic and was paced like a feature film), DS9 had somehow elevated Star Trek to a level it had never been elevated to before in the films and episodes prior. It was starting to tell a new difficult story that somehow resonated much deeper than even the adventures of Kirk. I was in heaven when these shows first aired.

Then, a friend of mine caught Necessary Evil before me, and he said you ain't seen nothing yet.

How right he could be. This is my favorite episode of Trek. Ever. I've found some flaws with it after examining it over many years, but it still doesn't take away it's impact. The way it captured that Noir feeling you described. The way the mystery played out.

One of the simple things it did that Trek didn't often do was offer a backstory. If you think about it, once a pilot to a Trek show airs, the shows moves forward, and only forward, and isn't too interested in the past (Enterprise has a somewhat vested interested in what happened before it's pilot, but even that past is not as inherently interesting as what is here, in DS9) but DS9 the make story was so substantial, and soi intrisic to the premise. When I first read TV guide's article on the pilot, and it said that the Cardassians suddenly elft teh station, I looked it over and over, to see what the reason was, but no reason was given. In the show itself, that reason is different depending on who you talked to. How great is that

This episode was very interested in what had happened in the past. Very chilling too. I could say more, but it would take forever. Quark, Dukat, Odo, and Kira, they are all spot on. This one episode elevated the scope of the show by not looking ahead but by looking behind.

That was a joy to read. It's interesting to note that once a pilot airs in Trek, the show tends to just move forward and never backward, not offering a substantial backdrop because it isn't deemed necessary. I'd argue that Voyager sort of attempted to address this with the Starfleet v. Maquis angle, but since it was by no means fully realized, it's rather irrelevant in retrospect. Enterprise is an interesting beast to examine because the producers wanted its entire first season to serve as a launchpad for the rest of the show, but UPN wouldn't allow it. In that case we would have had a very nice prelude.

Deep Space Nine really takes the cake because its premise details a world so rich and unique within the franchise, demanding exploration of the past to present its present and deliver its future. It is a show that largely stands on its own, in its own terms, compared to the rest of the franchise. And "Necessary Evil" is an episode within the show that really exemplifies how different this setting is from all the starships, and how intrigued by the premise the writers truly were.
 
2x09
"Second Sight"

"So honor the valiant who die 'neath your sword."
"But pity the warrior who slays all his foes."
-Seyetik and Sisko

Talk about a turnabout in quality from one week to the next. Don't get me wrong, I wasn't expecting another "Necessary Evil", or anything close to it. There are only so many times in any series an episode like that comes along. And while I know that "Second Sight" has its supporters, I'm sorry to say I'm just not one of them. It isn't a complete waste; in fact, it's nowhere near the worst thing I've ever seen in a show I like. Far from it. But it's still really, really mediocre.

Things begin so well. It's just past the fourth anniversary of the Battle of Wolf 359, where Commander Sisko lost his wife and mother of their son, Jennifer. This is the sort of thing I was looking forward to -- a follow-up on his bitter memories as seen through the pilot, with a sense of further wrap-up. I didn't point it out during "Emissary", partly for lack of necessity and partly for growing pangs in this whole review-writing thing, but one thing that sort of irked me was how despite the brilliance of Sisko's breakdown and the 'you exist here' lines, I didn't get a full sense of the man moving on from that, just acknowledging he was there. I guess 'irked' is the wrong word; it felt natural and visceral that he wouldn't. But I was anticipating a return to his pain and grief, and a moving-forward from it. It seemed I was in store for it here.

Sisko is remembering that dark day, stricken both by its events and by the fact that he almost missed the anniversary of his wife's death. Jake comes out to see him, and details a dream that strikes a relevant chord: his search for his father through the corridors of the station seems reminiscent of his father's search for his son's mother through the corridors of the Saratoga four years past. Jake says that he misses his mother, and the two share a heartfelt moment.

Unfortunately, the episode really loses its grip on me after that. It will return to manage a resurgent grasp on multiple occasions, but I would never regain a deep level of interest as a vested viewer again for the rest of the hour.

As I stated in my review for "Melora", most romance stories bore me. Particularly the episodic ones. Look back to that review for my analysis of their flaws and explanation of my feelings. The tie that binds Benjamin Sisko's first romantic encounter with a woman in the series is Jennifer's passing and the man's need to gradually put the past behind him. I understand this; I even appreciate this. I may have grown to like this, and I think it's a valiant effort on the writers' part to meld it together in such a human way, had the sci-fi shenanigans involving the woman Nidell and her telepathic manifestations as Fenna been even remotely compelling to me. It didn't help matters any that the majority of the dialogue between Commander Sisko and the mysterious Fenna comes off as awkward, stilted, corny and cliche.

"Do you always do that?"
"Do what?"
"Say exactly the right thing."

Here's a strong example. It's awkward because the preceding dialogue wasn't particularly noteworthy. It's stilted for much the same reason, and for a lack of discernible passion in the air. It's corny because it's a corny thing to say, though I would have been fine with that had the surrounding lines been more inspiring. It's cliche because it's cliche.

I liked seeing Sisko acting all perky, ordering a drink that wasn't raktajino (and Kira's reaction was funny) and generally just giving Avery Brooks another pre-"Past Tense" time to shine. I didn't like the romance itself, and there's a deep failing in anything the episode has to offer after that when that's its big stride, its gambit, its purpose. It's not even that Salli Elise Richardson did a bad job as Fenna and Nidell. She did a perfectly serviceable, if not award-winning, job, with what she was given. The differences in the personality of the real woman and of her telepathic projection are striking, if not on the same kind of level as the Cylons in BSG or anything. But the writing provided here just doesn't allow for much.

I'm of split thoughts on the character of Gideon Seyetik. It's no sleight against the actor: the late Richard Kiley performed well. It's just that his very egotistical nature works sometimes throughout the episode, and just annoys me in ways I doubt the writers meant it to in others. I've not spoken particularly highly of the sci-fi angle in this episode, but I will say that the idea that this very undeniably brilliant and yet difficult-to-live-with old man has gone through nine marriages doesn't surprise me in the least, and the notion that his new telepathically capable wife would go through what she went through in response is fitting enough. Since she feels she can't break off the marriage due to cultural customs, Nidell inadvertently creates someone else, someone free from her husband. Seyetik's suicide at the end of the episode seems forced, despite its heart being in the right place. That the man would do something so selfless despite his self-absorbed personality is a nifty bookend to his life, but the whole scene comes across as a bit weak. It doesn't help that I kept staring at the bit player character of Lieutenant Commander Piersall, who was in charge of the Prometheus and whose actor seemed to have the approximate emotional range of a flea.

One last thing I want to say and I'll be done with this rather underwhelming episode. When Sisko first approaches Odo and asks for his help in identifying the mysterious Fenna, Odo is briefing a pair of security officers on a telepath with short-range capabilities. It plays like meaningless fluff -- background flavor, if you will -- but it ends up echoing the plot slightly. It's an odd moment in retrospect, because it's some kind of red herring or something, but it winds up being a coincidental parallel to the truth behind Fenna.

Rating: 4/10
 
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Oh man, I watched "Paradise" through "Whispers" tonight. Lots of reviews pending.

I'm apparently masochistic.

Do you feel like something isn't right? Does it seem like the people around you are not the people you know and remember? Does it seem like everyone is in a conspiracy against you?

:)
 
2x10
"Sanctuary"

"You were right. Bajor is not Kentanna."
-Haneek

"Sanctuary" is an episode with its heart in the right place, but its execution and overall dialogue rather lacking. It should have been a deep investigation into the decision-making of a war-torn people and a look at two seemingly hopeless societies, ending on a dark, somber note. The music attempts to convey this, but the writing and way things unfold simply don't live up to the heaps of potential the premise offered. I am left largely emotionally unmoved by an hour which clearly aimed to move me emotionally, so I'm not particularly impressed.

After a brief scene between Sisko and Kira involving the commander reminding her to submit the current month's duty roster and her explanation that she's been quite busy arguing with Bajoran Provisional Government leaders, we head over to Quark's, except this time, a famous Bajoran musician is performing something just a little reminiscent of Deep Space Nine's opening theme song. Among the more noteworthy things here are Morn crying and Kira and Quark arguing over the piece the musician is playing, specifically its impact on the Ferengi's profits. It seems disagreement is going to be a bit of a theme of the episode.

An unidentified vessel comes through the wormhole, and its four passengers, Beamed Aboard Just In The Nic Of Time (TM), are having tremendous difficulty with the universal translator. Well, everyone is, really – their language patterns are hard to process so we spend much of the early parts watching Sisko, Kira and the others incapable of communicating throug the lazy Star Trek way of doing things. This is actually kind of a breath of fresh air; it's nice to see something go wrong with so convenient a plot device sometimes. It also highlights the overall message of the episode, or at least I think it was intended to: sometimes two sides just can't see eye-to-eye on things. Had "Sanctuary" delivered on its scope, this would have been an excellent opener, and as it stands, I still enjoyed it.

We eventually reach a point where the translator begins functioning properly, and by now Kira has bonded with the apparent leader of the four, who call themselves Skkreans. The leader is a woman, but she is only leader of this small group because in Skkrean society, women are rulers and men, subservient. In actuality, her place in their culture is humble, being a simple farmer. I can't help but wonder if the extremely matriarchal nature of Skkrean society is supposed to be relevant to the overall message as well; I don't quite see it, since neither Bajoran nor Federation system of rule dictates an extremely patriarchal ruling caste. It is important to note that the woman refers to Skkrean males as 'too emotional', however, given the climax of the story.

By this point, Kira and the Skkrean, Haneek, have formed a friendship; I would imagine not least of which because Kira is the woman in the highest seat of power on the station, and because she probably sees something of herself and her people in her new friend. Haneek soon explains to our lead cast that her people are scattered and seeking the Eye of the Universe – no doubt the newly-discovered wormhole – because they were conquered by a people who was in turn recently conquered, themselves... by a group calling themselves the Dominion.

The ominous music and exchanged glances here are for all the viewers who had tuned into "Rules of Acquisition" a few weeks back; the reaction from watchers during this episode's first run was probably something of slight shock at the idea that they would bring that name up again, and that it would be accompanied by a darker connotation. My compliments once again to the season's behind-the-scenes command crew for their layered way of introducing that pesky Dominion, which everyone reading this no doubt knows gets all front-and-center with us increasingly as the show goes on.

Fast-forward through some triteness and fluff; in particular, I found the bits with the Jake/Nog duo and the young Skkrean male (the late Andrew Koenig, in fact) to be rather dull and lifeless. (Although Nog's hog-like screeching was entertaining.) I get where the writers were going with this, I really do; increasing the tension between Skkrean and non-Skkrean as the station is flooded with them throughout the hour is a good idea. But the execution, as I found myself thinking more and more, not less and less, as things progressed... it didn't exactly pique my interest.

Eventually, the Skkrean farmer Haneek, now the reluctant leader of her people, comes to the conclusion that Bajor in Kentanna, the world her people were spread out seeking. A 'Planet of Sorrow', in which we're led to assume the Skkreans believed they would assist and help thrive; Bajor seems to fit the bill, so the Skkreans officially request immigration. The only problem is, there are three million of them, and the Provisional Government is definitely not going to agree. This makes the government look rather much like jackasses, but that's okay, it's in keeping with their apparent beliefs and they do have a very solid point in that their projections have indicated the odds of a Skkrean settlement succeeding are quite slim, and thus the Bajorans would need to assist them when they can't exactly assist themselves. This is all well and good, and drives the episode forward, but some of the camera angles on Haneek linger too long, the music gets a bit too melodramatic, and in your humble reviewer's opinion, "Sanctuary" flies the coop.

From hereon out, there is an attempt at something powerful, but it fails to deliver. And failure to deliver at the climax of an episode tends to erase all manner of build-up, doesn't it? Haneek is outraged by the proceedings, which is reasonable, but her behavior toward Kira afterward is annoying. Kira makes every attempt to reconcile, and hopes to remain friends, but the Skkrean will not have it. It casts an unfavorable light on the guest character; I do emphasize that it's understandable that she'd be angry, but the direction here presents her as more of a person immobilized by stubbornness than anything. Had the writing been better, we might have seen her point more clearly; as it stands, the message of the episode begins to dissipate, because we're beginning to see the Skkreans as a second group of jackasses. All of a sudden, I felt like everyone except Kira was a jackass, and personally, when I see two groups of jackasses refusing to get along, I tend to shrug my shoulders and walk away.

Then disaster strikes – the Skkrean boy played by Andrew Koenig has taken one of their many ships and run off toward Bajor. This, too, is hackneyed; while perhaps true to the boy's presentation, the last time we see him on-screen is with Jake, and though his words ring true and connect to his actions, we don't see him during the ordeal. I can see where the writers were going by never showing him – by focusing on the reaction shots of all the players involved – but it somehow only worsens a sense of a rushed, lacking finale.

And there really just isn't enough rising tension in a natural enough way to justify this kind of ending. I just didn't feel it, and when his ship inevitably blew up to attempt (but fail) to drive home a message, I was more concerned with the awkwardness of the late Andrew Koenig running off and getting himself killed given the terrible tragedy of the actor's suicide than I was with anything "Sanctuary" was trying to tell me. When Haneek departs alongside the others of her kind for the planet Sisko had insisted they go to – a genuinely good-sounding planet with mild winters and lots and lots of farmland – she reminds Kira that she believes the Bajorans were wrong. Well, that's nice. Maybe they were; maybe they weren't. At this point, I really didn't care much anymore.

The funny thing is, I'm still going to give this one a middleground score instead of a more tellingly failing one, because there is one thing and one thing only that totally kept me going from start to finish: Kira. Nana Visitor is no slouch, and my previous reviews don't hesitate to bring that up. But seeing her twisted and turned by the actions of her own people and the shattering of a friendship which strikes a certain chord with the Bajoran and her plight is truly moving. It wasn't supposed to be the only thing moving me, but it was. And yet it moved me so well that I'll remember "Sanctuary" for it and I may even smile.

Rating: 5/10
 
The funny thing is, I'm still going to give this one a middleground score instead of a more tellingly failing one, because there is one thing and one thing only that totally kept me going from start to finish: Kira. Nana Visitor is no slouch, and my previous reviews don't hesitate to bring that up. But seeing her twisted and turned by the actions of her own people and the shattering of a friendship which strikes a certain chord with the Bajoran and her plight is truly moving. It wasn't supposed to be the only thing moving me, but it was. And yet it moved me so well that I'll remember "Sanctuary" for it and I may even smile.

Rating: 5/10

Yeah, in a nutshell the issue with Sanctuary is that the Skkreans are a mess, literally and figuratively. There's just too much going on there for an alien of the week: the matriarchal social structure, the problems with the universal translator, the fact that they shed and are rather physically repulsive, the search for a promised land. None of it really works because none of it gets sufficient attention. Also, the ready availability of another planet for settlement makes the Skkreans' attachment to Bajor feel presumptuous.

As a character episode for Kira, though, it works well. Basically, it's a follow-up to Progress, but on a larger scale: the realities of Bajor's independence clash with the Major's idealism and natural sympathy for the oppressed. The writers and the actress have a pretty vivid conception of what Kira is all about at this point, so even an episode with a garbled plot is able to provide some good character material.
 
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Necessary Evil is pretty much a perfect episode, or as close as you can get. It really gets everything right - acting, direction, plot... The last scenes between Odo and Kira may be my favourite moments of DS9.

Essentially, it's DS9's The Measure of a Man - the episode made when the show was still finding its feet that shows what it's really capable of.
 
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Yeah, in a nutshell the issue with Sanctuary is that the Skkreans are a mess, literally and figuratively. There's just too much going on there for an alien of the week: the matriarchal social structure, the problems with the universal translator, the fact that they shed and are rather physically repulsive, the search for a promised land. None of it really works because none of it gets sufficient attention. Also, the ready availability of another planet for settlement makes the Skkreans' attachment to Bajor feel presumptuous.

As a character episode for Kira, though, it works well. Basically, it's a follow-up to Progress, but on a larger scale: the realities of Bajor's independence clash with the Major's idealism and natural sympathy for the oppressed. The writers and the actress have a pretty vivid conception of what Kira is all about at this point, so even an episode with a garbled plot is able to provide some good character material.

Well-said. The Skkreans are a failure, but as a Kira episode, "Sanctuary" somehow manages to remain above-water. Makes for a strange watch. Good point on it being a follow-up to "Progress".

Necessary Evil is pretty much a perfect episode, or as close as you can get. It really gets everything right - acting, direction, plot... The last scenes between Odo and Kira may be my favourite moments of DS9.

Essentially, it's DS9's The Measure of a Man - the episode made when the show was still finding its feet that shows what it's really capable of.

So true. Both happened at about the same time in their respective series, too.
 
2x11
"Rivals"

"Where are you going?"
"Back to Quark! At least then I'll be cheated by family!"
-Martus and Rom

After the very underwhelming "Second Sight" and still-underwhelming "Sanctuary", I'd been hoping for a lightweight DS9 comedy hour to break the lull in quality and get me howling with my favorite crew. "Rivals" gives me the laughs here and there, but like a slightly better version of the first season's "Q-Less" I can't say it got me going all the way. And like "Q-Less", its main, driving plot was uninspired and a bit dull.

Martus Mazur, an El-Aurian (the same race as Guinan from The Next Generation, but interestingly, their species is first mentioned by name here) is a 'listener'. (Again, just like Guinan.) But more than just a 'listener', he's also a con man. He's gotten himself involved in all kinds of things Odo would be happy to hear about, and through a set of unlikely circumstances, he comes into possession of a gambling device with, naturally, more to it than meets the eye.

The El-Aurian attempts to sell the device to Quark, who doesn't bite. Instead, he opts to open a competing bar, 'Club Martus', and after replicating several large-scale versions of the gambling device and using his silver tongue to do the rest, he steals much of Quark's customer base. The place is a hit.

Meanwhile, in the B-plot that will eventually intersect with the A-plot, Bashir and O'Brien are forming a rivalry of their own in the name of racquetball. Bashir's youth and fitness are scoring him endless points, and O'Brien, out-of-shape and a dozen or so years his elder, is quickly losing patience. I find the proceedings here much stronger than I do Martus' portrayal, which I think was intended to win us over just as the character wins over the hearts (and coins) of those he swindles. Unfortunately, whereas Bashir/O'Brien is guaranteed chemistry and a real highlight of the episode is Keiko giving her husband Japanese silk like it's the eve of battle, I was just never sold on Chris Sarandon's con man character. My lack of enthusiasm about the acting in particular really dampened my joy.

Some terrific moments abound as the episode progresses, though. Quark's antics are much more amusing than Martus', despite a visible attempt on the writers' part to make things more even between them. When Quark attracts plenty of attention for staging a racquetball tournament between the two competitors 'for the children on Bajor', everything about the scene is fantastic. Shimerman delivers his usual strength as the changes-his-image-on-the-fly Ferengi, giving Bashir and O'Brien such serious, 'heartfelt' glances until they accept. And the clever way in which the pair realize something is amiss – O'Brien is not only suddenly unstoppable, but the ball is attracted to him like some kind of magnet – is fun and well-done.

There's also a great scene between Sisko and Quark, when Quark reminds the commander that he 'owes' him, that he 'begged' him to stay on the station. He's talking about the pilot, and as Sisko quickly quips, he didn't beg him, he blackmailed him.

The gradual discovery of reversed neutrinos (even though it's ridiculous and they got the science blatantly wrong here) is amusing; I'm not usually one for straight-up slapstick, but there's something about Kira being the one to trip and fall down that's just perfect. The only cast member I think would have been even better for it is Worf, and obviously he wasn't available for this episode.

But the lack of more straight-up slapstick is actually almost detrimental to "Rivals". Joe Menosky, famous for his strange scripts, seemed to be reaching for something roaringly funny this time instead of his more typical roaringly weird. The problem, then, is that "Rivals" simply isn't one of the funniest episodes in the series. It tries to be, and at certain times it succeeds, but thanks to the iffy portrayal of the con man and some blunt technobabble for a plot resolution, it never seems to get there. I was especially mixed about some of the Quark/Martus exchanges; they lacked energy whereas I think they were supposed to be the most vibrant parts of the hour. Thus, I think I now know what happens when Menosky tries for comedy: he gets caught-up in making sure the audience knows something strange is happening, and sometimes forgets funny.

Rating: 6.5/10
 
2x12
"The Alternate"

"Constable?"
"It's a nickname I barely tolerate."
"It's an expression of affection that you find difficult to accept."
-Mora and Odo

I fancy myself a bit of a student of Jammer's reviews, because in glancing at them long before I decided I wanted to write my own, I saw the words of a young man who, above other things, is very good at deducing strong themes and weaker aspects within the shows he writes for. For the second season of Star Trek: Deep Space Nine, one of the stronger ones in his (and many others') beliefs, Jammer maintains that a glaring problem was an odd, recurring case of split-personality syndrome. Several episodes this season have a bizarre knack for tackling two stories that don't quite belong together, often at the expense of the better half. And so it is that when I sat down and watched "The Alternate", I really saw where he was coming from, and I think ultimately the title of this one is inadvertently appropriate.

During one of the best opening scenes yet, Odo is intrigued by the Ferengi business of selling the body parts of the dead. In fact, he's intrigued by humanoid death rituals in general. The dialogue between Odo and Quark here is superb; Quark simply can't believe his lobes when the constable offers to purchase a piece of a dead Ferengi. Odo soon reveals he happens to know the Ferengi isn't dead and no doubt Quark probably knew that, but it all gets turned on its head when Dr. Mora – the Bajoran scientist who had experimented on Odo for several years before the shapeshifter left his research lab and wound up on Terok Nor – arrives at the station. From the first, there's a tension from the constable; Mora, on the other hand, is warm and open, and he would love to see Odo return with him to continue his studies.

An early scene between Sisko and Jake over the topic of Klingon opera seems irrelevant, but I think there's a statement here about not just taking things at face value but really listening and understanding that ties into the message of the episode. Dr. Mora seems to be a victim of not listening for the majority of the episode. Mora, Odo, Jadzia and one of the Bajoran's associates embark on a journey to L-S VI in the Gamma Quadrant, where Mora believes he has found clues to Odo's origins. All-the-while, he clearly hopes to sway the shapeshifter into returning with him to Bajor, not truly listening to Odo's insinuations that he's found a home, and that his time at the lab was not remotely pleasant.

Another great part, and one that really emphasizes that point, comes from when Mora invites Odo to tell Jadzia the story of how he'd realized Odo was sentient. Mora interrupts Odo several times to correct his account; good-natured as Mora may be, he can be quite abrasive and stubborn, and that doesn't help matters any. Rene Auberjoinis is given the task of conveying his true thoughts on matters mainly through facial expressions, and he does so well.

Once the team arrives on the planet, a strange lifeform with DNA similar to Odo's, as well as a monolith with unknown symbols, are found and taken. The ground suddenly begins to shake, a gas shoots out from the earth and leaves everyone but Odo helpless, and the group narrowly escapes. Back on the station, the duplicity of "The Alternate" begins to rear its ugly head. While Odo and Mora continue to steal the show with strong lines and great acting, the horror schtick of typical B-movie directing really weighs things down. I'm all for a mystery when it comes to the constable – really, it's part of the deal. But the only thing missing from all the scenes devoted to the eerie goings-on is an appropriately annoying 'creepy' soundtrack.

There are some very weird red herrings in play here, designed to keep us guessing but not executed as well as they could have been. Jadzia seems a bit distant in her writing for much of the remainder of the episode, apart from a bit where she and Julian are speaking. (Which leads to a great exchange involving raktajino, and the doctor's 'she really enjoys this' regarding her teasing.) There's also the matter of the other scientist, and the monolith, and probably other things I can't recall. Speaking of the monolith, I was disappointed that nothing came of its discovery, though knowledge of future events (actually, Memory Alpha) reminds me that its appearance is similar to something seen on the Founders' home planet later on.

The race to the climax, as Mora discovers the lifeform now wreaking havoc is none other than Odo, likely affected by the same gas that nearly killed everyone but him on L-S VI, is a neat twist that makes up for some of the B-movie shenanigans. Mora confronts Odo, breaking the news to him, in a very emotionally charged confrontation that's a delight to see unfold. Unfortunately, Odo begins to transform into the creature again during the heated exchange. A plan is launched to lure the transformed Odo out onto the Promenade, keep it contained within a forcefield and remove the substance from him. Mora is the bait; Odo's current feelings toward the man used against him. It works, and props go to everyone involved for making this part work, even if I'm still not sold on the necessity for the horror-themed pieces of the episode. Mora finally realizes he needs to listen to Odo, that he has no desire to return to the lab, and that the confinement Creature Odo (TM) goes through during the showdown is reminiscent of how the shapeshifter felt during those years on Bajor.

I'd say "The Alternate" works in that it provides us with another 'who is Odo' episode, keeping us intrigued by the question without answering just yet. It also works because Odo's interactions with Mora are invariably strong. It doesn't work because at some point Bill Dial and Jim Trombetta, the episode's writers, decided they needed something cheesy to happen in order to threaten everyone in 'frightening' ways instead of providing more natural drama between the stars of the hour. For that, it is simply decent.

Rating: 7/10
 
I can't help but wonder if the extremely matriarchal nature of Skkrean society is supposed to be relevant to the overall message as well; I don't quite see it, since neither Bajoran nor Federation system of rule dictates an extremely patriarchal ruling caste.
What I find odd is not that the Skreeans have a matriarchal society, but that Bashir finds this so notable that he requires extra clarification.

How many societies has the Federation encountered in its time? We're quite familiar with patriarchal societies - Klingon and Ferengi for example. For Bashir to react with such amazement that there actually exists a woman-run culture seems oddly sexist for a supposedly enlightened Federation citizen. It's like, "Well, yeah of course male-run cultures. But female-run cultures? Wow, really? Craaazy."
 
The TNG crew faced the same thing in Angel One - there was even a suggestion that Betazed was female dominated.

I liked the episode because it tried to show something a bit different, like what happens when the translator doesn't work, and not only a female dominant society, but a polygamous one;
"don't you sleep with your males?"

TNG and TOS was good at building those devices, but DS9 got creative in showing what happens when they don't work.

I like the Skrreean characters because they were humble..nothing complex or grandstanding about them.

Did anyone tell Haneek that beggars can't always be choosers? I have to admit, her reaction seems odd, considering they were willing to find a very hospitable planet for them to settle on..

It seems like it was an episode about immigration without saying it was an episode about immigration.
 
I think "Sanctuary" would have benefited the most had Bajor held a more specified uber-important role than the never-clarified 'planet of sorrow'; without more context, things just get pretty ridiculous.

"Armageddon Game" and "Whispers" should have reviews up by midday tomorrow. I've slowed down temporarily because life's sped up, like I said a few reviews back. I don't mind for now; I know the forum will always be here and all. I just hope people don't stop reading because of my posting speed.
 
So in a hackneyed attempt at maintaining thread momentum despite slowdown, the undeterred Jeff O'Connor has put forth a challenging question of intrigue and inspiration:

What are your top three episodes of the second season, and why?
 
Well then. I might change this answer tomorrow but for now I'll say:

Necessary Evil - You've already covered this one. Stepping beyond what Trek had done before, introducing tension between two main characters, the layers and layers of subtext.

The Wire - Garak is my favorite character and this is where he goes from being a harmless enigma to a dangerous and developed character with more depth than Harry Kim ever had. Watching Bashir naively trying to follow Garak's stories before realizing that he's never going to hear the truth, but decides to save him anyway, is great. Meeting Tain for the first time is a delight as well.

The Jem'Hadar - All season we've been hearing about the Dominion, a vague power that seems to pull the strings in the Gamma Quadrant. Here we see their teeth. It's amazing that such a great episode starts with a little science survey camping trip with banter between Sisko and Quark, but ends with a new power revealed, a Galaxy class Starship destroyed, and a long, long summer for first-run viewers.
 
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