I liked it, actually. . . it was a very Meta ending that basically said that it is all Star Trek's (and in the comic specifically, Spock's) fault there is so much "Mary Sue" fan fiction the world. . . Mary Sue may have first shown up in the Star Trek Universe, but now, (because hopefully writers in the ST universe recognize her as a threat and "killed" her) no universe is safe from her. . .(witness Harry Potter stories, X-men, Star Wars, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, Sonic the Hedgehog, Bleach, Sailor Moon, My Little Pony. . .etc.) it's very clever.
~FS