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Star Trek : Restoration

Awesome meeting, clever inclusion of more hints of the past. Pirates of the galaxy, heh? And that Klingon Code Bushido is brilliant. You have to tell what the Klingons did to lose their honor as a race at some point. I can't have that nagging at the back of my mind-and it will, believe me!
 
I'm glad that the Ferengi Admiral is going along for the ride - as the dynamic between him and our resident Klingon XO was interesting and it will be interesting to see without Kovoth there to stop her blowing up at the Ferengi.
 
Apologies to Captain Sarine. For some reason, my eyes have been registering your handle as "Sasrine" rather than Sarine. Embarrassing. But the my compliments are still meant whole heartedly.
 
I am thoroughly enjoying the story. The little hints about the state of the universe are just enough to keep you coming back for more, and the characters are superbly written. The "reluctant captain/angry XO" thing has been done, most notably by seaQuest, but you have avoided having it devolve into cliche and have set up what will no doubt prove to be a great character dynamic. Can't wait for more!!
 
Hi all,

Wow, thanks so much for such a wonderful reception!!! :alienblush:

Gibraltar

Yeah, Qwert is a clever old Ferengi - he knows when to bring in the big guns. Although, if you look at how Kalara deals with Kovoth, one has to say that if she had really wanted to... Of course, Qwert had a back-up plan.

Glad you liked Starv'a'kai - the Khitomer Klingons are a people struggling with a whole lot of complex history... We'll get to see the POV of two other Klingon factions, one which is very different to any Klingons we've seen before, in the next couple of chapters.

I hope that Ba'el/Kalara's relationship lives up to your expectations!

Kes7

So glad you liked it. I love setting up all of these dominoes... And can't wait to see them come tumbling down.

Don't put yourself down, you are most definitely an amazing writer in your own right. I look forward to every new section of the Tesseract saga with bated breath. As Kovoth said to Kalara, Magnificent! :klingon:

Diogenes

Wow :alienblush: Thanks so much for these kind words.

Like you say, Qwert had a whole flotilla of other options if Kalara lost control. I really wanted to make him seem your typical Ferengi but also show, like you said, that obviously he had a different side to him if he has risen to Admiral after the end of the Occupation

Glad you noticed the nod to Kurn, although Kovoth is the son of Kurn and not of the House of Kurn. Does that mean he is of the House of Mogh? Perhaps! :devil:

Restoration feels like it's thrumming with the barely contained tension that one would expect just post a quadrants-wide war and interstellar occupation, and a Federation held together with bailing wire, spit, Klingon ferocity, Ferengi quile and latinum, and human persistence.

Wow, that's... wow. I love that sentence, it really describes this new Federation. Oh, and don't forget Romulan ingenuity and downright sneakiness! :rommie:

You and Kes7s' fiction have become a recurrent pleasure for me--adn certainly not a guilty one. I urged my Trek buddies to read both your work.

So glad we're both writing stuff you enjoy... Maybe Kes7 and I should think about collaborating on something... ;)

Oh and no problem for the Sasrine, I actually like the Captain Sa's nickname! :)

Mistral

Afraid it's going to have to nag a little bit longer - I promise I'll deal with exactly what happened to the Klingons to make them lose their honor... eventually! :devil:

tenmei

Qwert wasn't originally supposed to be part of the mission - he wasn't even a character in the original plot. However I really enjoyed him in the first Kalara chapter and loved writing him in this one, so I had to have him along for the ride!

FleetCaptainFrost

Thanks for your kind words and welcome to the party! :)

I didn't realise SeaQuest had done this dynamic, but yes it has definitely been done. Glad you don't think it has fallen into cliche.

Well, off to rewrite the next chapter, in which we'll get a glimpse of the Redemption from the outside for the first time! Hope to have it posted tonight.

Joel
 
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Maybe Kes7 and I should think about collaborating on something... ;)

If you're serious, that would be really, really fun. PM me on Ad Astra once you sign up for the forums there. I'd love to toss some ideas around once we're both less busy with our current stories!

Can't wait for the next installment of Restoration!
 
Maybe Kes7 and I should think about collaborating on something... ;)

If you're serious, that would be really, really fun. PM me on Ad Astra once you sign up for the forums there. I'd love to toss some ideas around once we're both less busy with our current stories!

Can't wait for the next installment of Restoration!

If you're up for it, I'm definitely serious! :) I'll PM you on Ad Astra like you said.

Joel
 
I saw you said Son of Kurn. How long was the occupation, and how long since that a TNG character's son is still alive?
 
Thanks for your kind words and welcome to the party! :)

I didn't realise SeaQuest had done this dynamic, but yes it has definitely been done. Glad you don't think it has fallen into cliche.

Yeah, the pilot ep of seaQuest had the "reluctant captain" and "disgruntled XO".. imagine the quotation marks are air quotes, as it was obvious from the first two minutes that Roy Schieder's character, Capt. Bridger, would be the seaQuest's captain by the end of the show. Heck, they even used the "and he won't take the job" line early on. The XO character was upset at not getting a command for all of five seconds before falling into (plot)line.

Your story so far has deftly introduced the characters, making us care about them and be interested in what will happen to them, whilst simultaneously painting just enough of a picture of this corner of the Trek-verse to whet our appetites for more. Definitely a cut above, and to echo the other readers, can't wait for more!!
 
Mistral

I saw you said Son of Kurn. How long was the occupation, and how long since that a TNG character's son is still alive?

The occupation was five generations ago (about 250 years). Although I have tried to avoid using names of people from the TNG era, one has to imagine that some names are going to come up again and again down through the years - so although Kovoth is the son of Kurn, this is NOT the Kurn of the TNG era. Sorry for the mix-up.

FleetCaptainFrost

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Thanks for your kind words and welcome to the party! :)

I didn't realise SeaQuest had done this dynamic, but yes it has definitely been done. Glad you don't think it has fallen into cliche.


Yeah, the pilot ep of seaQuest had the "reluctant captain" and "disgruntled XO".. imagine the quotation marks are air quotes, as it was obvious from the first two minutes that Roy Schieder's character, Capt. Bridger, would be the seaQuest's captain by the end of the show. Heck, they even used the "and he won't take the job" line early on. The XO character was upset at not getting a command for all of five seconds before falling into (plot)line.

Your story so far has deftly introduced the characters, making us care about them and be interested in what will happen to them, whilst simultaneously painting just enough of a picture of this corner of the Trek-verse to whet our appetites for more. Definitely a cut above, and to echo the other readers, can't wait for more!!

I have to admit, I watched a few episodes of SDSV when it started, but never really paid much attention. ;) Thanks for your kind words, especially that it is a "cut above". I'll be posting the next chapter in the next few minutes, so you'll be getting more pretty soon! :) Enjoy!
 
Chapter 7

4th March 2631
Starfleet Construction Yard
Near Romulus

The runabout Herod dropped out of warp and began its final approach towards Starbase 2, in orbit of Romulus.

Sat in the copilot's seat, Ba'el stared through the viewscreen. Romulus hung before the starfield like a green and white marble, the surface obscured by thick cloud cover. Beyond it lay the shattered planetoid of Remus, red with rage and barren of life. The two circled around one another like the two brothers of legend that had given rise to the human name for these worlds. Ba’el stared at them, trying to capture some sense of coming home. He couldn’t. Without the presence of his wife and son, nowhere was home anymore.

Ba’el hadn't been back to his birth planet since long before the end of the war. He had escaped as a teenager aboard a Darmok garbage scow, determined to find the Resistance. Once he had joined up, he hadn’t looked back. Looking at the surface now, it didn't appear any different to the way it had looked when he left. Logically, though, he knew that it couldn't have changed more.

A dark mass appeared on the viewscreen, orbiting high above the planet’s surface. Dark red as the surface of Remus, Starbase 2 was all sharp angles and bulbous modules. A handful of Ketana­­-class frigates orbited the spinning space station, while shuttles and runabouts darted in and out of its vast docking bays. Behind the starbase hung the spidery frames of the construction yards.

The comm system crackled to life. "Runabout Herod, this is Starbase 2. Come in."

The runabout's pilot - a five tentacled Terginian with ebony scales and a long snout whose Starfleet uniform had been tailored to fit his anatomy – waved two of his tentacles in a complicated sequence of loops and twirls. The mechanical voice of his translator system spoke moments later, slow and deliberate. "Acknowledged Starbase 2. Runabout Herod carrying commander, USS Redemption, requests permission to dock."

A crackle, then, "Denied, Herod. Captain Sarine is expected planet side. Transmitting coordinates now."

Ba’el logged on to the comm system from his panel, waiting for the coordinates. When the transmission came through, he saw that they were being directed to land on one of the shuttle pads surrounding Starfleet Command. He sighed. I should have expected this.

"Understood, Starbase 2," the Terginian signed. He glanced at Ba'el. "Permission to fly past Space Dock 22 on my way down?"

There was a pause, then the docking master's voice came back on the line, the smile evident in his tone. "Affirmative, Herod. Take a nice long look."

The Terginian’s tentacles all rose and fell a half a dozen times, but the translator system remained silent. He’s laughing, Ba'el realised. He reached over and keyed the comm line open. "Thank you, Starbase 2. Much appreciated."

"Welcome to Romulus, Captain."

As the comm line cut off, the runabout veered away from the dark metal hub of the starbase. The Terginian sent them shooting towards the planet at half-impulse, the tips of his tentacles dancing across the controls. They just grazed the atmosphere, before ricocheting back into space. The space station was behind them now, while in front of them sprawled the fragile cradles of the Romulus Construction Yards, like the cocoons of some strange space-dwelling alien race.

As the runabout zeroed in on Dock 22, Ba'el allowed himself an appreciative look over the other ships under construction. Most were military frigates, Sisko-class. Dark metal hull plating of reinforced duritanium, bristling with weapons, the Sisko frigates had a single fifty deck saucer section, snub-nosed and almost triangular. A single QSD nacelle rising from the saucer section’s central hub completed the ship's configuration.

Ba’el identified a few more ship classes under construction, every single one dark and brooding. If the construction yards were anything to go by, the Federation didn't seen much different from the Resistance. Or the Dominion.

A high pitched whistle caught Ba'el's attention. He had been studying one of the massive Defiance-class dreadnaughts as it flew past them on some kind of test run, memories of his Enterprise flashing through his mind. He turned back to the viewscreen to see what the Terginian was whistling about and let out a faint gasp despite himself.

Like a beacon of light in the darkness, the ship appeared out of the night. Blazing white hull plating illuminated by the construction dock’s strobe lights, she looked like some vestige of the deep past, from a time before war and occupation destroyed the fragile balance of the galaxy. Gone were the harsh lines and bulky hulls of the military frigates. This ship before him had been made to fly.

The saucer section was streamlined, forming a perfect oval shape. As the Terginian took them up and over the construction dock, Ba’el saw that the saucer shrunk backwards into a tapered tail, sweeping into three nacelles that extended upwards and back away from the saucer section, one in the middle and two on either side.

His pilot guided the runabout back round for another pass, sweeping forward towards the front of the saucer section, slowing as they flew over the registry number and name.


USS REDEMPTION
NCC 3954

"She's a beauty, sir," the pilot said, even his mechanical voice conveying the awe he felt as they turned back around for another pass.

Ba'el could only nod in agreement.

Starfleet Command Complex
Ki’Baratan
Romulus

The runabout touched down on the shuttle pad with hardly a jolt. The pilot killed the engines, one of his tendrils rising to wrap around Ba'el's hand.

"A pleasure, sir."

"Thank you for running me out here, Lieutenant. And for the fly-by."

"You are most welcome."

Ba'el reached down and grabbed his gear from the stowall at his side. He had picked a few personal belongings – a couple of books, some holocaptures, civilian clothes. The rest of his things had been put into storage back home and would be waiting for him when he finished this mission. Swinging the bag over his shoulder, he nodded farewell to the Terginian and headed for the runabout's open hatch.

"Captain.”

Ba'el turned back. The alien had turned his chair to face him, his tendrils writhing in what he assumed was a nervous tick.

"I just wanted to say thank you. For what you did with the Enterprise.” Ba’el felt his stomach clench at the words.

“I fought at Ocara,” the Terginian went on, his metallic voice slow and ponderous, each word drawn out and painful. “If it hadn’t been for what you and your crew did… We would have been overrun for sure. A lot of my friends, they died anyway. Afterwards… Well, I saw the news, I heard what people said about you and what you did… No matter what people might say, I can tell you that anyone who fought in the War sees you as a hero."

The pilot's words propelled Ba'el back to that day. For an instant he was back in the centre seat of the Entreprise, the Seventh Fleet engaging the Dominion forces while he instructed Lieutenant Martak to set a course for Lucara. He could smell the burnt flesh of Javon, his body still smoking where he had fallen behind him. The planet grew in the viewscreen, as the ship shook under the barrage of laser fire from the last few defences around the planet. He heard Commander Kane in Engineering begging him to give the order…

He shook his head, banishing the memories. A hero? I'm not a hero. He forced a smile.

"Thank you. That means a lot." He was surprised to hear how hoarse his voice sounded.

"I just wanted you to know."

Without another word, the Terginian turned back to his controls. Ba'el realised he didn’t even know his name. He opened his mouth to ask, then thought better of it. He watched his back for a moment, then turned and walked out into the sunlight.

Two humans in Starfleet jumpsuits – red collars revealing they were Starfleet Security – were waiting for him. "Captain Sarine?" one of them, a woman of about thirty with raven hair, asked. Ba'el nodded and smiled at both of them. Her mouth didn’t even twitch. "Please, come with us."

Ba'el sighed, settled his bag on his shoulder more comfortably, and followed the two officers to the nearby stairwell. At the bottom, he found himself on a large avenue, green and blue buildings on either side. His escort waited patiently, then set off towards a large building at the end of the avenue, glancing back once or twice to make sure he wasn’t falling behind. He followed without a word. Even if the two officers knew why they were taking him wherever they were taking him, he knew that they wouldn't tell him anything.

Starfleet Command had been designed to fit in with the overall architecture of Ki'Baran. Though the military architects had chosen to avoid the willowy spires and impressive towers, the building materials were the same, a dozen different shades of blue, green and grey.

The buildings themselves were low to the ground, rarely more than two or three stories high. The exception seemed to be the vast command centre his escort was leading him to, the FAW flag flying over the vast entrance way. The building towered above all of the others, at least fifteen stories high if not more.

When they reached the command centre, the two security officers led him up the steps into the lobby. The large reception area was bustling with people, and the noise level was tremendous. Indicating that Ba'el should take a seat in a corner, the female security officer went over to a desk and began filling out forms, while the other officer posted himself a fair distance away.

Ba'el took the opportunity to glance around. Beings of every age, race and gender scurried around, most dressed in standard Starfleet uniforms. Many sat in the comfortable seats scattered in every corner. Ba’el picked out a varied mixture of humans and Romulans, Bajoran and Ferengi, Cardassians and Orions, as well as a dozen races he had never seen before.

Light filled the room, gushing in through the vast windows thart fronted the building and formed the lobby’s ceiling. Outside, he could see down the large avenue to a gated wall. Beyond that wall rose the spires of Ki'Baran. He wondered idly whether he would have time to take a walk around the city before he had to report to the Redemption. Probably not.

The female officer came back. She held out a badge that said Visitor in large red letters. "Ambassador Benjamani has asked to see you in her office."

"I'm sorry?” Ba’el said in surprise. “Ambassador? I thought I was here to receive a mission briefing."

"My instructions are to take you to the Ambassador, sir. If you'll follow me."

His sense of unease increasing by the minute, Ba'el stood. He followed her across the lobby to a security checkpoint that allowed access to the warren of offices beyond. They passed through with a cursory glance from the security officer on duty, then dove into a series of winding corridors. Having wandered through miles of corridor marked by featureless door after featureless door and climbed at least three sets of stairs, by the time they arrived at their destination Ba'el was totally lost.

His escort stopped in front of another featureless door and pressed the button to announce their presence. After a few moment's the door slid into the wall. The security officer stepped back and indicated for Ba'el to step inside. As he stepped past her, she drifted to the side, standing at attention. I guess I can expect her to be waiting for me when I come out.

Then why do I feel like I'm stepping off a cliff into the Valley of Fire?

Inside, the office was bright, Earth plants scattered in every corner. Large windows offered a view of the former Senate building, rebuilt as a circular dome and which now housed the Federation Security Council. Stood with her back to him was a short, white-haired woman wearing an Admiral's uniform. It was only when she turned around that he was able to tell she was human.

"Captain Sarine, I presume?" Her voice was cold, though not as cold as her eyes.

He stepped forward, not sure whether to salute or offer his hand. He settled for bowing his head. "Yes, Ambassador. How may I help you?"

"You can start by explaining why the hell the Laurentine Hegemony have demanded you lead the diplomatic mission I’ve spent five years trying to organise?"

He bristled at her tone, but forced a grim smile. "I would like nothing better, Ambassador. Unfortunately, I have no more idea than you do."

"You expect me to believe that?"

"With all due respect, Ambassador, you can believe whatever the hell you want."

The light in her eyes flared but instead of snapping at him, she smiled. Walking over to her desk, she picked up a padd, tapping it on her open palm. "Quite an interesting file they have on you."

He didn't need to be a Betazoid to know 'they' probably meant Starfleet Intelligence. He just stared at her, waiting for her to get to the point.

"Born on Romulus to a Romulan father and a human mother,” she began, looking down at the tab, “not unusual considering the Dominion's policy of population transference. Father was a weapon’s manufacturer, mother one of his many concubines. Recognised by your father and grew up in the lap of luxury, it seems." She looked up, eyes narrowing. "Now why would the son of a collaborator choose to join the Resistance?"

He kept quiet. He had met women - and men - like Ambassador Benjamani before. She would push him until she got a reaction, until she found a weak-spot. He wasn't going to give her the satisfaction.

After a moment, she shrugged and looked back down at the padd. He say a flicker of disappointment in her eyes before she looked away, though.

"Be that as it may, you did decide to join the Resistance. You started off in a cell here on Romulus I believe?"

He nodded.

"From what I can see, you showed an unusual propensity for tactical planning and... where was it? Ah yes here it is - a natural flare for piloting. Is that why your cell leaders went to such lengths to get you off world?"

"I suppose they believed I would be more useful in one of the more mobile cells," he said, just to keep her off balance.

She smirked. "Ah, it talks. So, you got off world and then..."

"Let me spare you the monologue, Ambassador. You don't have to prove the all knowing, all seeing power of Starfleet Intelligence or how much you know about me. As you obviously know from that file there, I ran the Resistance espionage wing for three years towards the end of the war. I know exactly what kind of information you have on me. What I don't know is where exactly you're going with all of this?"

She stared at him for a moment, expressionless. Then she looked back down at the padd. "As I was saying," she went on. “You went on to join the crew of the Resistance fighter Liberty Bell, where you met…”

Ba'el tried hard not to sigh. This was turning out to be a very long day.

Ambassador Benjamani’s Office
Starfleet Command Complex
Ki’Baratan
Romulus

Almost an hour later, the Ambassador put down the padd. Ba’el heaved a sigh of relief. Over the past hour, she had gone into excruciating detail of pretty much every mission he had planned, led or even participated in, second guessing every decision or choice he made along the way. Throughout, Ba'el had forced himself to remain totally silent, nodding once or twice to give the impression he was paying attention. As for Ambassador Benjamani, she had grown more and more cutting, her tone growing more and more ironic.

She glared at him now. "And then we come to the crux of the matter. Operation Heartstrike. The complete and utter destruction of an entire race. Genocide." She smiled coldly. "I believe it was your idea?"

He forced his face to remain totally expressionless. Here we go, he thought. This is what she's been building towards.

Now that she had reached her point, she didn't seem to be willing to just let him sit quietly. "I asked you a question, Captain."

"Yes ma'am. It was my idea."

To be fair, it had been a joint effort. At the time, the rebellion against the Dominion had finally turned in their favour. The Resistance movement had been on the rise, the Dominion on the back foot. And yet for every system they liberated, they lost countless thousands of lives, whether in battle or down to Jem'hadar revenge attacks. The ruling council had realised that they needed something big, a clear signal of intent to the Dominion that just might bring about an end to the war. Ba’el and a handful of others had been tasked with coming up with the operation. Once the general lines had been discussed, Ba’el had planned and carried it out.

"You planned the genocide of an entire race, Captain,” the Admiral pressed. “And then you carried it out.”

She jabbed her finger at him. “And now you come back here, hoping for a hero's welcome, forcing your way into a mission of peace. My mission of peace."

Ba’el had had enough. He stood up. "I didn't force myself into anything, Ambassador. If it had been left up to me, I'd be back on Earth, rebuilding my mother's house and working in my garden. You have a problem with me leading this mission? Fine. You won't hear any argument from me. I'll go with you to the office of whichever Admiral we need to see and get someone else assigned to go in my place."

When she didn't speak, he went on. "Except you can't, can you? Because the Laurentine won't even speak with you unless I'm there. I don't know why that is, but I'll tell you this, I'm damned curious to find out. So since neither of us are going to get what we want out of this, why don't you stop breaking my balls and let me do my job?"

She slammed the padd down on the desk. He heard the sound of breaking glass. "So you want it to play out like this? Very well. I don't trust you. I think you know full well why the Hegemony wants you, and I think it has something to do with the time you spent aboard Onyx Station preparing your genocide. I think you're a danger to the Federation, a man who doesn't know when to stop. And I think that you're going to jeopardise my mission by your very presence."

By the end of her rant, she was panting. Ba'el looked her square in the eye, and smiled. "There now, don't you feel better?"

She was trembling. Pointing at the door, she spat, "Get out."

He nodded, then turned, taking his time. He stopped on the threshhold of the open door, and turned his head to look at her. "I look forward to working with you, Ambassador."

He left before she could respond. He would have sworn he heard something smash against the wall as he followed the security guard back to the lobby.
 
Oh my goodness! :lol: Well, Ba'el's certainly not afraid to stick his thumb in the eye of SI. He's pissed the 'ambassador' of royally, though it was well deserved. At least now he knows he'll have one agency gunning for him on this assignment. However, Ba'el doesn't strike me as a man who fails to watch his own back with a second set of eyes.

Continued excellence!
 
That Admiral Benjamani is quite a piece of work, isn't she? I rather hope we get to see the five tentacled Terginian again - we've not met the Redemptions Helmsman, have we?

I thought the first view of the Redemption was handled fantastically well - could picture it in my mind with alarming clarity and hear the music as the Redemption appeared, the string of the Star Trek fanfare.

Keep up the good work, Sarine!
 
O' Captain, My Captain! Thanks for another great chapter. Terrific stuff, particularly with the tentacled alien. More nonhumanoids please--such diversity seems quite form-and-function, aesthetic-and-ethic of the Federation and Starfleet.

Ba'el Sarine reminds me that sometimes the most successful players are those willing to risk losing in order to win. (As Sisko quoted: "Fortune favors the bold." Or as Kirk so famously said: "Risk is our business.") But I do wonder when this very aspect of Ba'el's character will run afoul of the fact that he might feel he has little or nothing to lose--a potential ticking time bomb in a leader, some might say. Right now, he seems to be running on the steam of tarnished duty, obligation, arm twisting, and a burgeoning curiosity about the motivation of the Laurentine Hegemony. I love it when a Captain is a little dark and twisty! (He needs a serious hug. I half hoped the Terginian helmsman would draw him into a many limbed embrace.)

I'm damn curious to know just what sort of "preparation" Ba'el was up to on Onyx station before his "genocidal" mission during the occupation. And just which species was it that was wiped out? I have three guesses, but I'll keep my mouth shut and remain on the edge of my seat in anticipation of your next chapter.

Really rather excellent fare.

Thanks again, Cap'n.
 
Continue to enjoy this great story for a myriad of reasons.

The backstory of this universe but also of your characters still completely captures my curiosity, in particular of course, Ba'el, who so happens to have planned and carried out genocide *shrugs* I guess it happens.

Kalara and these new Klingons who must fight for their honor instead of taking it for granted continue to impress as well.

I love the fact that most of your characters have quite noticable idiosyncrasies. Differently to the many Starfleet characters we've come to know back in earlier days, these people very much maintain their cultural habits. Here we have Klingons not afraid to draw daggers on each other and (hilarious) Ferengi admirals who count their latinum in their free time. Priceless.

A terrific read.
 
He shoots, he scores! Unless you're a she, in which case I apologize :D The story just gets better and better. Two questions: one, do you have a design for the Redemption, or are you looking for help with that, in which case I'd looove to help; and two, I'd think the NCC number would be higher, unless there was a reset of some sort somewhere along the line?

Oh, et la France, elle me manque :D
 
Thank you all once again for your encouraging words and your enjoyment of this story. Makes it all worth while!

Gibraltar

Yeah, Ba'el doesn't have a problem pissing her off - after all, as he says, at the end of the day he doesn't want to be here anymore than she wants him there.

Just one clarifying point - Benjamani has access to SI files, but she is not part of the SI. She is a senior diplomat of the Federation, though, who has negotiated some very interesting treaties in the past few years...

tenmei

Glad you liked the Redemption reveal, I really wanted it to resonate.

We may or may not see the unnamed Terginian, but we have already met the ship's helmsman, back in Chapter 4. Sorry! ;)

Diogenes

As usual, thanks so much for your kind words. So glad you continue to enjoy this so much.

I will attempt to include some non-humanoids as we go, however this is not the Federation we know - many people decided not to join, preferring to go off on their own or ally in other ways. So the multi-racial aspect of the Federation is not what it used to be.

(He needs a serious hug. I half hoped the Terginian helmsman would draw him into a many limbed embrace.)
LOL! Ba'el does need a hug. But I wouldn't want to take away from his "dark-twisty"ness! :)

We will definitely find out what Ba'el was up to on Onyx, as well as who he destroyed. Drop me an email on jarbrown1984@yahoo.co.uk - I'd love to know who your three guesses are. And I promise I won't spoil anything when I respond.

And you're welcome! :)


CeJay

Thanks so much! :alienblush: I'm so glad that there are lots of different things you enjoy about the story and I'll keep on trying to provide that as we go along.

I really wanted these people to keep their identities and not just be carbon-cut out Starfleet officers - this is a very different time and a very different situation to the one we all know and love: the Federation and Starfleet has had to adapt, taking a little of the old Starfleet, but also of the Klingon Defence Force, the Romulan Navy, even the Ferengi!

FleetCaptainFrost

No, definitely a he! :lol:

To answer your questions:

1. I have a vague idea of what the Redemption looks like, but I have no talent whatsoever at drawing whether it be on paper or computer. If you would be willing to help design the Redemption properly I would sooooooo be on board with that! Drop me an email at jarbrown1984@yahoo.co.uk if you're interested.

2. I didn't really think about the NCC number to be honest, but yes, I would imagine there has been some kind of reset at the end of the Occupation. The only problem now is that the number seems slightly high... I'll try and come up with an explanation and retcon it! :devil:

When were you in France??!!! Vous etiez ou?

Well, I'm going to be posting another chapter tonight, then there probably won't be anything until Monday - the chapter I'm working on at the moment involves an extensive battle scene I'm struggling with so... back to work!
 
Chapter 8

4th March 2631
USS Redemption
Starfleet Construction Yard
In Orbit of Romulus

Doctor Andrew Keene heard his boss approaching and swore loudly. He toggled a button on the padd in front of him, replacing the information on the screen with a virtual gene resequencing experiment he had been working on earlier. As planned, the complex seven-helixal structure collapsed into a disparate series of proteins just as the Redemption's Chief Medical Officer peered round the door.

Doctor Malok, a hulking Klingon who looked almost silly in his Starfleet uniform and long white coat, smiled amiably, reminding Keene of a lamb ready for slaughter.

"A problem, doctor?" he boomed in his deep voice.

"This damn genome again,” Keene explained, waving the padd. “I can't get the cytosine to splice together with the phosphate deoxyribose backbone.”

“You’re still working on the ketrecel white study?”

Keene nodded. “I know that if I can find some way of modifying the key integer, I’ll be able to bring out the drug’s medicinal properties without causing the long term addiction.”

"Would you like me to take a look?"

No, I don't want you to take a look, you p'tagh, Keene thought. He frowned down at the padd to hide his savage expression and shook his head. "I'm sure I'll work it out eventually."

Doctor Malok nodded his head affably, then vanished back into his office. Keene watched him go, barely able to contain his disgust. If I had a bat-leth in my hand...

Keene – whose real name was L’goth, son of Bartok - fought back the desire to stand up, cross the sickbay and kill the false Klingon where he sat. A doctor! A Klingon doctor! Klingon ships carried medics and sawbones, warriors who had developed particular skills and put them at the service of their fellow warriors, when they weren’t fighting. No true Klingon would devote his life to the care of others.

He knew that Malok was one of the shuvoth'shu, the honorless, but that didn’t make it any better. Those false Klingons may have turned away from the old ways completely after the war, abandoning the way of the warrior in favour of pacifistic beliefs, but they were still Klingons.

Even those cursed Khitomer traitors with their twisted beliefs about honour are better than these… these farmers. Farmers! Scientists! Doctors! Klingons refusing to take up arms, no matter the provocation. If they hadn’t joined the Federation and gained their protection, the Empress would have wiped them out long before.

Keene fought back the desire to spit. P'taghs, all of them.

He forced himself to release a long, drawn out breath. Casting a surreptitious glance around the sickbay, he checked that none of his fellow doctors were watching him. Once he was sure, he keyed in the code that would release the real file he had been working on. It reappeared instantly, filling him with delight.

He had downloaded it from another padd the night before, a padd that had been left for him in a Jeffries tube by an unknown ally. On it were the command and control codes for the sensor perimeter surrounding the Romulan sector, the command overrides for the planetary defence platforms of Romulus itself, the shield harmonic frequencies for Starbase 2 and the planet below, as well as the exact locations of the Federation fleets. With this information, General K’mpak’s fleet would be able to approach the construction yard without being detected and carry out their attack on the Redemption. A glorious blow for the Empire.

Now all he needed to do was to transmit it.

His plan was in place, he just needed to create an opportunity. If it succeeded, he should be able to maintain his cover even if the attack failed to destroy the ship. It was so elegant that even if the transmission were discovered or intercepted, his plan would still create a schism between the Federation and those damned Khitomer Klingons. That would be an added bonus, though. The Empress had made his main objective very clear - the Federation could not be allowed to forged an alliance with the Laurentine Hegemony. Destroying the Redemption would be the easiest way to assure that.

Standing, he wandered over towards Doctor Malok's office. The Redemption’s sickbay was as state of the art as the rest of the ship. In his time undercover, Keene had come to respect the Federation’s ingenuity if nothing else. A vast series of brilliantly white circular rooms connected by short corridors, the medical centre held almost one hundred biobeds, a handful of stasis units and enough medical equipment to fill three planetary hospitals. The medical staff itself was three dozen strong. And Keene knew that none of it would do the ship the slightest good if his plan succeeded.

Keeping an eye on the other doctors, Keene wondered again who his mysterious ally was. It couldn't be another undercover Klingon – an agent of the Empire would simply have transmitted the information himself. That meant it was someone else, someone who also had a vested interest in seeing the Federation's mission to Onyx Station fail.

Arriving at a station near Malok's office, he bent down as if to check something in the database, and slipped a small command device from his sleeve. He had programmed it himself the night before, using the access codes that the Imperial Secret Service had provided him. With those, he was able to hack into any part of the Redemption’s computer mainframe and insert any program he wanted.

Now he activated the command code he had uploaded the night before and waited.

Within seconds, an alarm began to sound. The insufferable voice of the Federation computer system spoke over the whining alarm. "Attention, medical emergency on Deck 12. Plasma leak detected. Attention, medical emergency on Deck 12. Plasma leak detected. Attention..."

The door to Malok's office whooshed open and the burly doctor rushed out, followed by two medical technicians. Every eye in the room turned to follow them out the door. Keene took the opportunity to slip through the open doors and into the CMO's office.

Before the door had even closed behind him, Keene was round the desk and settled in the high-backed chair. Reaching into his pocket, he slipped out a tiny circular device and affixed it to his chest. The holo-emitter had cost him two bars of latinum on one of the Empire's backwater worlds, purchased from a trader who claimed to have brought it in the Delta Quadrant.

Keene pressed the button, waiting for the energy field to expand and settle around him. If anyone came in now, they would see the figure of a tall Klingon woman in a Starfleet Commander's uniform. Getting Commander Kalara's likeness had been difficult, but a key part of his plan.

The mobile emitter had a limited amount of energy, so Keene quickly called up the embedded screen in the Doctor's desk. Attaching a communication's scrambler to the computer, which would reroute the transmission through a warren of comm lines and relays, he keyed in a secure code and waited for General K’mpak to respond.

IKS Ho’dath’nek
Klingon Empire – Federation Border

K’mpak, son of Tyrel, did not like waiting.

As he sat in the command chair of the Martok-class destroyer, stroking the hair of his human slave, he gazed at the blazing stars of the Federation. That was where he wanted to be. They seemed to call out to him, a song of blood and conquest and vengeance. He let their calls wash over him like radiation, stirring his blood and quickening his pulse.

The fleet had been in position on the border for three days now, waiting for some kind of signal from inside Federation space, as per K’mpak’s orders. Those orders had come from the Empress herself – he was to keep the fleet ready, in formation, until her agent contacted him. Her agent! He turned his head to the side and spat in the bowl on the floor. Spies and secrets! That was not the way of the Klingon warrior. What kind of a weakling could have accepted such a mission? To infiltrate the puny humans’ puny little ship! A woman’s job.

"Anything?" he growled finally.

His sta'ko'mar, an officer position similar to an operations' manager, turned in his seat. He shook his head, baring his teeth. "Nothing, my general."

"What is he waiting for?" K’mpak growled, tightening his fingers in his slave's blond hair. She whimpered, drawing his attention. He looked down at her and leered. "You have something to add, my sweet?"

She shook her head, wincing as the movement pulled on her hair. K’mpak laughed and went back to stroking her head. "At least this one knows her place."

He had taken her from her husband three months before, seizing her as spoils aboard a civilian freighter carrying supplies to Mostan III, a colony world settled by the cursed shuvoth'shu. She had shared his bed every night since and crouched at his side every day. Surprisingly, he had yet to tire of her.

"General," his sta'ko'mar interrupted the train of his thoughts, voice suddenly taut with excitement. "I am receiving an encoded transmission." He turned to K’mpak with a grin. "It carries an Imperial identifier."

"On-screen," K’mpak crowed, standing up and stepping into the middle of the bridge. "Let's see him."

To K’mpak's surprise, a Klingon woman appeared on the viewscreen. A striking female, she bore scars on her face and neck. To his utter disgust, she wore a Starfleet uniform.

One of the traitors! A Federation lapdog!

"Identify yourself!" K’mpak spat. How dare this woman contact him?

"My name is not important, General K’mpak" the woman said calmly. "You need know me only as your kapamai."

"A spy," one of the bridge officers sneered. The others laughed. The only people lower in a Klingon's esteem than a spy were the traitors who had abandoned the Empire, and non-Klingons. K’mpak allowed his crew their fun, then he lifted a gauntleted fist. Silence fell like a shroud.

"And what does my kapamai have for me?"

The woman reached over to a padd by her side and pressed a button. Almost immediately, a light lit up on the sta'ko'mar's station.

"As ordered, the full command and control codes for the entire Romulan sector, including the specifications of the shipyard defence systems."

K’mpak looked over at his sta’ko’mar. The man stared at the scrolling data for a minute, then looked up at the general and nodded once. K’mpak could see the gleam of bloodlust in the man's eyes. Much slaughter will be done tonight.

“As you can see, the Federation is depending on Starbase 2 and their planetary defences to protect them,” the woman went on. “They are spread so thin that the Fourth Fleet has had to abandon their station to show their teeth to the Andorians.”

“Andorians.” K’mpak spat again.

“They pose a threat to the Federation, general. One that gives us an opportunity. You will find that the transmission also holds the shield frequency for Starbase 2, as well as that of the Romulus planetary shield. If you maintain the advantage of surprise, you should have at least an hour before reinforcements arrive.” The woman snarled. “More than enough time to destroy Redemption.”

K’mpak sneered. “Redemption is but one ship. But to destroy their command headquarters and their starbase… That would be a victory worthy of song.”

“No, General, you must…”

“What did you say?” Behind him on the bridge, he felt everyone go very still.

“My general, the Redemption is the most important part of…”

“Do not forget your place, kapamai. You have done a great service to the Empire. A deed almost worthy of a true warrior."

"I live to serve the Empire and the will of the Empress."

"When this is over, perhaps you would like to serve the will of a General of the Empire," K’mpak leered.

The woman smiled. "Perhaps. But first, you must destroy Redemption and…"

"You whine like a Ferengi, kapamai. I am in command of this fleet. I will decide what targets to attack.”

“But…”

“Do not try my patience, kapamai. We will be at your location in seven hours."

The woman seemed about to say something more, then she let out a deep breath. "Then I wish you success. Qapl'a, General."

K’mpak didn't respond, indicating to his sta'ko'mar that he should cut the communication. The viewscreen returned to the previous view of the stars. Stars that will soon burn in the Empire's name, K’mpak thought happily.

Turning back to his seat, his cloak swirling around him, K’mpak settled into the command chair, his hand returning to his human pet's head. He sensed the mounting tension in his men, the desire to taste blood this day. Still, he waited.

Only when he could sense their desire reaching a fever pitch did he turn to his sta'ko'mar.

"Soldier."

"Yes, my general."

K’mpak's fanged teeth glimmered in the bridge's dim lights. "Instruct the fleet to move into escort positions. Then take us out. The Federation awaits."

He smiled as his men roared in anticipation. Sitting back in his chair, he stroked the slave's hair and decided that today would be a good day to die.

USS Redemption

Keene disconnected the communication's scrambler from the doctor's computer with a snarl. Placing it on the floor, he stamped on it with his foot. The metal gave way beneath his boot, the electrics inside leaving a trace of ozone in the air.

Damn the fool! Everything had gone according to plan, up until now. The Empress’ plan had been flawless. But that p’tagh would ruin everything if he didn’t do exactly as the Empress had commanded. If K’mpak attacked the starbase or the planet instead of concentrating on the ship…

As he gathered the rest of his equipment, Keene wondered why men like K’mpak continued to hold his kind - spies - in such low esteem. They were warriors, just like the soldiers aboard that ship. Shadow warriors, striking from the darkness. Yes, he liked that. Shadow warriors.

At least the Empress understood. One of her first acts after coming to the throne had been to form a new secret service, a group of trusted men and women able and willing to infiltrate the Empire’s enemies. That farsightedness was beginning to bear fruit. If men like General K’mpak didn’t ruin it.

He was about to disconnect the holo-emitter when the door to the office slid open, revealing Doctor Malok. Keene froze, his heart suddenly beating wildly. Both men stood stock still, staring at the other. Luckily, Keene recovered first.

"Finally, doctor, I've been waiting for you. Where have you been?"

"Captain, I... I wasn't aware that you had arrived on board."

“I didn’t ask you for what you thought, Doctor. I asked you where you have been.”

Malok straightened. “A false alarm, Captain. One of the sensor arrays on Deck 12 seems to have malfunctioned and reported a plasma leak. As per Starfleet regulations…”

"Don’t quote Starfleet regulations to me, Doctor. I had been hoping to discuss your posting to this ship, but I have run out of time. We will have to speak of this at another time."

"Discuss my posting, Captain?" Malok’s eyes had grown wary. He knows, Keene thought. He’s afraid of what she must think of him.

"Well yes," Keene sneered, hoping to confirm the Doctor’s suspicions. "You are a shuvoth'shu after all. I'm not sure how comfortable I am serving with someone with so little honor."

Before the words had left his mouth, Malok had crossed the room and had him by the throat. Keene felt himself lifted off the floor and spun round, then found himself on his back on the table, Malok's fist clenched around his windpipe.

"For that, I should kill you here and now, Commander,” Malok hissed. His eyes were fire. “Do not mistake refusal to take up arms as a lack of Klingon honor or pride."

Keene tried to choke out a few words, but Malok’s grip was unbreakable as an iron band. His struggles did seem to cut through the doctor’s rage, through. The fire slowly faded from his eyes and his grip lessened. As he let go, Keene gasped, sucking in a deep breath. His throat burned. Malok stumbled back, his hand clenching and unclenching on thin air as Keene struggled to his feet. He was absolutely astounded at the reaction. It was the last thing he would have expected from one of the shuvoth'shu.Perhaps there is a hint of the Klingon heart in these people after all.

“Commander, I…” He bowed his head. “I have dishonored myself.”

"Not at all, doctor. Indeed, perhaps I have misjudged you," he said in Kalara's voice, hoarse from the doctor’s attack. "I... I will take this under advisement."

Malok continued to look down, refusing to meet his eyes. Keene opened his mouth to say something else, then realised he had no idea what to say. He turned smartly on his heels, instead, and marched from the doctor's office. Ignoring the startled glances he received from the medical staff, he fled the sickbay, breaking into a run when he reached the corridor. He didn’t meet anyone on the way to the nearest turbolift. Only once he was alone inside did he press the button on the holo-emitter, destroying the illusion of the Klingon commander and returning to his human form.

He heaved a sigh of relief. He'd done it. K’mpak might use the information or he might not, but he had done his part. The fleet had all the information they needed to get past the Federation's defences. If anyone ever discovered the transmission, suspicion would fall on either Captain Kalara or Doctor Malok. He had done everything he could. Now everything depended on the General.

As he instructed the turbolift to carry him back to his quarters, the spy prayed to the old gods that no one had noticed the sudden absence of Doctor Andrew Keene.
 
The deed is done, indeed. Here’s hoping the good general’s ego and thirst for fame will blind him to the necessity of annihilating the Redemption.

The fracture of the Klingon nation into three factions is a fascinating development. I’m eager to discover more about how this came about. It appears that at least the empire’s new ‘shadow warriors’ are a force to be reckoned with. Whether the warriors can capitalize on the opportunities they’ve provided has yet to be seen…
 
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