Interesting, but those composites are pretty terrible, and despite Mr. Taylor's input, I suspect they only crudely accurately represent what the finished scenes would have looked like. I mean, they've got Ilia in her post digitization robe, for pete's sake.
The composite was meant to be an *approximation* of how the shot would have looked -- one man's creative license used -- mine.
Since Richard Taylor himself assisted me with it, I assume it wasn't complete "crap"...although I never had any illusions of it being the end-all, be-all of how these shots would look.
I pretty much did it on a lark.
For now though, I think it would be nice just to see some feedback on the web pages (i.e., discussion of these rare images) that Ottens has setup. This is material that has rarely been seen and has been put into a format where EVERYONE can see it. And keep in mind, these are all taken from footage that people keep saying was never shot! Well, the proof is now quite clear that it WAS. Now, the FX were not completed...that is indisputable. But, let's put to rest this silliness that the sequence wasn't filmed -- because it was. The site shows imagery from the beginning, middle and END of the sequence.
If that doesn't constitute or imply a completed sequence, then I don't know what does.
Well it was only the folks who got their info through the DVD that thought there was just a bit o' testing.
Anybody who got the bubblegum card set or read ENTERPRISE INCIDENTS (or MAKING OF TMP) knew that they shot a ton of stuff for the trench and memory wall.
What'd be nice is if somebody could find some wild tracks from the shooting (assuming it wasn't MOS) and see if you could cobble together a kind of continuity with stills and dialog (and soundfx?), so we could get an idea of how the scene might have played (L-O-N-G, if trumbull is to be believed, and I do.)
Does anybody know what happened to all the film that Abel's folks actually shot? I mean, I talked to somebody who worked there about their take on the bridge probe, and he said they had lots of film on that, which was a kind of light sculpture Con Pederson headed up. Do we assume this is all in a Paramount vault, or that, like a lot of the Apogee/EEG stuff, that nobody paid to keep the elements and they got tossed?
Actually, I think it IS in a vault somewhere. I don't think they got tossed because some of the footage made it into the TV version of the film (Kirk exiting the airlock)...and Daren Dochterman claims to have seen it (and, along with Robert Wise, deemed it unuseable) when working on the Director's Cut.
But, Curt McAloney over at
www.startrekhistory.com told me once that he knows/knew a film collector who had some (all?) of the memory wall/trench footage (this might be dailies?). This was a few years ago and who knows if the person was telling the truth.
One thing is for sure, the footage hasn't shown up at startrekhistory.com, so McAloney apparently never got his hands on it...or at least a video transfer of it...
I'd like to think that Paramount will release a ST:TMP Ultimate Edition someday on Blu-Ray that will include the footage as an extra on the disc. I think the fans deserve to see the footage and it's surely the only way I'd ever buy that movie on DVD again.
You're right: A lot of people think that the test footage on the Director's Cut DVD is all that there is...and, well, some of us know that is not the truth -- but that myth seems to have gotten spread around a bit.
With regard to the light probe, Richard Taylor told me that would have been spectacular had it made it into the film. As scripted, that scene was quite a bit different than what made it into the film (the probe seems to do a lot more in the shooting script than what ended up in the film -- and the script includes the shot-but-cut security guard confrontation by phaser with the probe). In 2000, I interviewed Richard Taylor extensively (and became email "pen-pals" with him to an extent) but tried to interview Con Pederson but was met with abject silence (I assume he was not ready or inclined to discuss his work on the film) -- not even so much as "mind your own business" email -- lol!:
Kirk's voice is blotted out by a DEAFENING, SHRILL-
ING SOUND, accompanied by a multi-hued point of LIGHT
which EXPLODES into BLINDING INTENSITY, obscuring
everything for an instant. Overlapping this action,
we HEAR:
COMPUTER'S VOICE
Intruder alert...! Intruder
alert!
Continues.
207 OMITTED 207
208 THE PLASMA ENERGY PROBE (O) 208
The BLINDING LIGHT FADES and in its lace we SEE a
strange "entity" shocking us with its frightening
appearance and its ugly-sounding THROBBING HUM of
power. It is about seven feet tall and resembles a
"blob" of raw energy in shifting patterns and colors
of deep, ugly hues of upper spectrum violet. Yet,
it looks strangely alive. At the end of the "tendril"
(of light) is an "eye" (a small multi-colored device)
209 CREW REACTIONS -- ELEVATORS IN B.G. (O) 209
The bridge crew reacting hard, shocked and shaken --
the THROBBING SOUND of the Alien thing intensifies
as it begins to move across the bridge. Suddenly, in
b.g., an elevator door snaps oen and two SECURITY
MEN burst onto the bridge, phasers drawn. Chekov
shouts warningly at the Men:
CHEKOV
No weapons...!
But Chekov is too late: First Security Man FIRES --
the BLAST harmlessly absorbed by the Probe which emits
a SCREECHING nerve-grating SOUND --- sends out a SMALL
WHIPLASH ENERGY BOLT which instantly envelopes First
Security Man in a PURPLE GLOW (of implosion). Second
Security Man has almost lifted his phaser -- but now
carefully, slowly is moving his hand away from his
weapon.
210 CLOSER - THE SECURITY MEN (O) 210
PURPLE GLOW FADES, the First Security Man has simply
vanished.
210A FULL SHOT - BRIDGE 210A
Chekov, like the others, horrified, flips a switch
and the COMPUTER-VOICE ("Intruder Alert") goes OFF.
At the same time Chekov speaks into his intercom:
CHEKOV
Security... do not send further
teams!
The Probe is sending out snake-like tendrils to the
various consoles on the bridge.
These tendrils lash out in a cobra-strike movement,
the tendril-head seeming to enter
into the console
affected -- at which time all monitors and instrument
lights there come ON as if the Probe is "reading"
each console function. The crew carefully stays clear
of the tendrils.
Spock has risen, moving to Kirk's side as he slowly
brings his tricorder up,
very carefully extracting
its tiny sensor and aiming it at the probe.
CHEKOV
(shaken)
No intruder readings on other
decks, Captain...
(to Spock)
Can that be one of their crew?
SPOCK
(quiet)
A probe from their vessel...
(to Kirk)
A plasma-energy combination...
Meanwhile, the probe is now hovering near Chekov who
sits frozen, fists clenched, jaw tight.
DECKER
Don't interfere with it...!
CHEKOV
Absolutely, I will
not interfere!
210B ANGLE INCLUDING SPOCK'S CONSOLE (O) 210B
as the "probe" withdraws an energy-tendril from one
bridge station and "inserts" it into another console.
KIRK
No one interfere...! It doesn't
seem interested in us -- only
the ship...!
Kirk's words are never completed as
suddenly all the
energy tendrils withdraw from all consoles and a
larger, more powerful-looking tendril lashes out,
snaking into the science console complex.
210C CLOSER ON SCIENCE CONSOLE 210C
Where, also immediately, all the console and computer
lights are suddenly flashing wildly, rapidly --
-- There is an incredibly fast EXCHANGE OF HIGH-PITCHED
BEES --
the computer obviously in unauthorized commu-
nication with the probe!
KIRK
Computer off!
DECKER
It's taken control of the
computer...!
KIRK
It's running our records!
Starfleet strength, Earth
defenses...
As Decker moves to the main power control, Spock now
steps in, his Vulcan strength easily brushing Kirk and
Decker aside. Spock clasps his fists above his head,
brings it down in a SHATTERING BLOW on the console. It
splits open! As the bridge lights dim even more, and
as the science console shorts itself out -- and off,
Decker confronts Spock:
DECKER
We could have cut it off at the
main computer...
SPOCK
This served the purpose.
Kirk has been giving Spock a puzzled look -- Spock now
turns abruptly, and:
210D ANOTHER ANGLE (O) 210D
as Spock, in stepping back, accidentally brushes the
probe's energy tendril -- a FLASH OF LIGHT at the
contact point sends Spock sinning under the rail and
to the floor near Ilia. The probe's energy-tendril
has withdrawn from the darkened science console, hov-
ers high over the dazed Spock as if angrily seeking
the reason for the break in its computer contact.
Spock starts to rise.
ILIA
Mr. Spock, don't move...!
Decker steps toward her, AD LIBBING a grim "
Ilia...!"
But he has no chance as:
211 OMITTED 211
- -
219 219
220 CLOSER ON ILIA (O) 220
The Probe hovers over her, its whole mass seemingly
about to envelope her with a
single tendril extended
toward her, somehow freezing her into immobility -
and then the entire Probe DISSOLVES IN A BLINDING
FLASH OF WHITE, obscuring Ilia. Almost instantly
the WHITE FLASH FADES --
but Ilia has vanished -- her
tricorder clattering to the deck.
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