Sacraments of Fire by David R George III
In-universe date: A week or so from September 1st 2385, then a 3 month time skip (during which the rest of the fall and the missing et al. occur), then December 2385. Kira has been sent back in time to 2377ish (250 days after the Soul Key)
Published: August 27th 2013
This is the follow-up to DRGIII's Revelation and Dust, and given the first sub-book is set directly after, it feels like he wanted to just keep writing after his book ended. This feels like a hefty tome, though not being many more pages than other recent novels. I think that that's because a lot of it feels like rehashing, or realpolitik, or both. The sub-book shows how Altek Dans (The Bajoran from the past from the end of Revelation and Dust) is treated with suspicion after the assassination of Bacco, which is understandable, but is much more thematically in the fall. I feel like most of the scenes would have fit better incorporated into other books of the Fall. I could see a version of this and Revelation where everything from the first half of this replaces the Kira bits of Revelation, and then the Kira-in-the-past bits could be book 1 of this (or a separate novella or something). But this keeps a mix of the present moving along with that stuff, which might not have sold well separately.
We get a bit of Akaar being distrusting towards Ro in the first book here, but at the same time telling her to "do what is right" which again fits in with how he operates in the fall. Ro stirs a bit on this, noting her history with Akaar presiding over the military tribunal of Ro’s first court-martial on the USS Wellington. Is this something that happens in a book? or is it just worldbuilding?
There's also a lot of self-deprecation from Blackmer in this chapter, as Starfleet command is distrusting of him as well, and he's extra hard on himself. I do not think he's as incompetent as others in this thread do, I think we just only see the worst experiences of the man. Ro gives him a pep talk here, and I wondered if this was partially supposed to be a meta redemption of the character.
Aside from "Altek Dans adjusts to the present and attempts to get repatriated to Bajor", there's a small plot of Odo going to see the discovered shapeshifter from Revelation, which turns out to be
something, but not revealed what in this book. We get some scenes with him and Sisko, as well as some scientists, and Odo is quite Gruff/serious, but reaches a rapport with them. I don't know entirely how I feel about his characterization, but perhaps I just prefer Odo in less serious situations.
The main plots are the Ohalavaru cult attacking a moon of Bajor, Endalla, and the Kira plot filling in the gap between "The Soul Key" and "Typhon Pact". The Endalla plot features on Ro's First Officer, the Bajoran Cenn Deska, who through multiple attacks discover that the moon is built around a falsework (or temporary structure) that was used to construct the Bajoran Wormhole (according to the Ohalavaru). This shakes the foundation of his beliefs, and our new Kai prepares for the effect of this information on the Bajoran populace as well. I admittedly forgot what the Ohalavaru were about (they are rationalist atheists, and I think all of this starts with the book first found in Avatar Book 1), but the book does a good job in describing what they are about. I'm still unclear what happened in their first attack and how it relates to the Ascendants (in the previous books, my hazy memory got the Ascendants, the Eav'oq, and this Cult confused).
The Kira plot has her appear in the Delta Quadrant 5 years (7 years?) earlier, with the
Even Odds, where we meet back up with Taran'atar. Kira knows (I don't know if it's been discussed in other books) that the
Even Odds and Taran'atar sacrifice themselves in the battle with the Ascendants (Which the battle itself has been alluded to multiple times). She mulls over if she will die there, if she should save Taran'atar, if she is the reason the
Even Odds ends up there, and the temporal prime directive. Time travel is inconsistent in trek, but this seems like a standard "you were there all along" type, where Kira is the reason the
Even Odds is there. Taran'atar does not know this but takes over the Even Odds, leaving Kira in a dropship, and heading to stop the ascendant invasion himself. She follows behind him, and this is the cliffhanger we end on.
Kira's plot feels a bit oddly placed in relation to the Soul Key and Ilana Ghemor. At the end of the Soul Key, Inana is deemed "the fire" and sent to the Ascendants, to lead their invasion. This seems to be very odd action for the prophets to take, and not necessarily in the best interest of Bajor based on descriptions of the battle previously resulting in some loss of life. Kira, meanwhile, is dubbed "the hand" and is just sent back to DS9 at the end of the Soul Key, and then has 5 years of linear time, before ending up in the wormhole again (and is in the wormhole or Bajor's past for 2 years?) and then being sent to the Delta Quadrant. Some if it makes me wonder how much was meant to happen in new books directly after the Soul Key that was dropped in favor of a time skip, and how much of this was storyboarded.
A couple of other things:
- I found one typo while reading (the eBook on Kobo), where Sisko resolves "never to waist a moment with his wife".
- Every background character here gets a name. As someone working on entering character appearances, the level of detail was almost distracting, but that could just be a "how I'm consuming" problem. It is good to have things fleshed out, like Ensign McKnight having a name in TNG, I just don't necessarily expect it with as much detail as is gone into here.
- Nog works on getting Vic connected to the new holodecks (he's apparently not compatible), which we see discussed in "The Light Fantastic". He has a bit of a minor breakthrough but then has to get going. I think there was a line about he thought someone else was working on this, but it's unclear if this scene would be pre or post The Light Fantastic.
In reading Stevil's thread, Sci replied with this about Revelation and Dust:
To me it felt like an interesting set of character studies followed by this sudden mid-narrative crisis that came out of nowhere. Which is very much what real crises like that often feel like.
I think I agree about revelation, but don't think that that extends to this book. I do think this book does a good job setting up for the next one (at least I hope) but there's a lot of extra I was annoyed having to dig through. The second half is interesting, the Kira half is interesting, but the fall stuff felt a bit out of place after reading a lot of non-fall.
The Star trek reading order (Which I'm helping do appearances for and will suggest corrections to the ordering of) does put the book directly post-fall, but I don't know how well it fits there either. It's a bit hard because it does have this 3-month gap in the middle. If it could be divided I'd say to split it before poisoned chalice and after the missing.
I'm excited to dig into Ascendance next! Though my next post in this thread will probably be notes from a re-read of Avatar book 1.
It's been a long time, but IIRC it was a one-page scene on the Defiant during a montage sequence showing the crisis was affecting people all across space.
I spotted this on Memory Beta as well, and that is what I assumed. I haven't bothered to go find it, but I might at some point to enter it in.