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TMP - from hater to avid fan…

I seem to remember reading that originally Roddenberry wanted to have a shot of the entire Solar System silhouetted against the even larger V’Ger Cloud, before realizing or being told that at that scale, none of the planets would have been visible.
 
Yeah. In the theatrical cut they mention the Vger cloud as being 82 AU in diameter—thats insane. Subsequently in later director’s cuts they scale that back to 2 AU—still crazy big.
 
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Which is weird because there are storyboards depicting it in a more frightening fashion, a big silhouette eclipsing the sun, and so forth. The DE approach is almost literally the least imaginative way to show it.
The final version of that shot in the 2022 DE also looks... weird, too. It looks far too much like CG, and the effects of the dissipating cloud fade away too fast. Really clashes with their original objective of trying to look like 1979 effects.
 
Yeah. In the theatrical cut they mention the Vger cloud as being 81 AU in diameter—thats insane. Subsequently in later director’s cuts they scale that back to 2 AU—still crazy big.
Pluto's orbit is 40 AU in diameter, so twice as big as that. That's very insane. 2AU is past the orbit of Mars into the asteroid belt.
 
While I admit I prefer TWoK for its superior pacing, characterisation, and its banging score, I think that the flaws and plot holes in TWoK do stand out more as you get older, whereas as you come to admire TMP's attention to detail even more. Of every Trek movie, it's the one that feels the most credibly science fiction.

There is plenty of characterisation in TMP, it's just that it's more subtle, and the characters are less sympathetic than in TWoK. The score is entirely on par with TWoK and I think the Enterprise and V'Ger flyovers are important parts of the emotional journey for the characters and for the viewer. I would not want to see them shortened any further.

I do prefer the extra character scenes in the SLV to the point where I made my own hybrid version of the DE with the extra SLV scenes. I think each of the characters get to contribute in their own niche with a smattering of their established characterisation from TOS but many of those moments are so organic, they may not register.

The only bit that drags for me is the final scene at V'ger's core. The characters spend too much time looking at flashing lights and listening to V'ger clucking. If they shortened that by 5 minutes, I would not miss it.

The only things I would have liked to see would have been:-

- A scene where Chapel and McCoy actually speak directly to each other
- A scene where Sulu, Uhura, Chekov and Rand interact together to evoke some TOS camaraderie between the more junior crew
- Uhura assisting Spock on the V'ger signal instead of Decker
- Rand in the second half of the movie, either manning the engineering station or taking over Ilia's station
- Rand on the bridge with Scotty and Chapel at the end
- A landing party following Spock inside V'ger to try and inject a bit of action
- Either trim or use CGI on the little rubber dude on Epsilon IX

It's a beautiful movie with incredible effects. An under-appreciated gem.
 
The final version of that shot in the 2022 DE also looks... weird, too. It looks far too much like CG, and the effects of the dissipating cloud fade away too fast. Really clashes with their original objective of trying to look like 1979 effects.

It's awful. The only reason it's not my least favorite thing in the DE is the Officer's Lounge scene lasts longer. (And how did they screw up the tram station? It's a finished shot, fer crying out loud!)

I heard someone (Fein or Matessino?) say that the second go round took less of the approach that the 01 version did: "Make it look like they did it in 1979." Which of course was a mistake. It was a noble goal and one that really kept the TMP:DE from straying into Star Wars SE territory.

It always feels to me like I'm bashing on the DE. I love the DE. It's my go to version. (The 01 was not.) It's just that it's so dramatically marred in some weird ways.

But Matessino made "2 AUs in diameter" sound like an actual sentence in the 22. :)
 
TMP had, in effect, two directors: Robert Wise and Doug Trumbull.

Wise let Trumbull direct the entire sequence of the travel pod approaching the Enterprise, and Trumbull also directed Spock's journey into V'Ger and subsequent mind meld. In addition, due to the pressures of time, Wise basically just inserted Trumbull's effects sequences into the film unedited, so Trumbull's approach and vision had a very significant effect on the final film.

The pace of the film, which may here decry as "slowing down the story," was a very deliberate approach by Trumbull. To use an overly cliched phrase, it is a feature, not a bug. It is one of the reasons I adore TMP. And the attempts to "correct" it in the DE only make the film worse, IMHO. Not every film has to move fast. TMP is designed to project a sense of awe and wonder and it does so marvelously.

"This sequence was all about arriving at the Enterprise and cruising around it and doing the series of reveal shots. As you approach, you have to look through this drydock to the Enterprise which is docked inside of it so you never quite get to see it. ... The shuttle comes around and it turns and it faces the Enterprise from the front. That's the big reveal shot. And that was where Goldsmith cut lose with the most beautiful music cue ever. And you get to see the Enterprise in its full glory."

"I wanted it to be this beautiful, epic, spectacular sequence that had no dialog, no story, no plot. Everything stops. And let the audience just love the Enterprise. I wanted everybody to buy into the beauty of space and the beauty of their mission and the beauty of the Enterprise itself. And just have everybody get out of the way and let that happen, which was something I'd really learned with Kubrick on 2001 -- stop talking for a while and just let it all flow."
-- Doug Trumbull

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TMP had, in effect, two directors: Robert Wise and Doug Trumbull.

Wise let Trumbull direct the entire sequence of the travel pod approaching the Enterprise, and Trumbull also directed Spock's journey into V'Ger and subsequent mind meld. In addition, due to the pressures of time, Wise basically just inserted Trumbull's effects sequences into the film unedited, so Trumbull's approach and vision had a very significant effect on the final film.

The pace of the film, which may here decry as "slowing down the story," was a very deliberate approach by Trumbull. To use an overly cliched phrase, it is a feature, not a bug. It is one of the reasons I adore TMP. And the attempts to "correct" it in the DE only make the film worse, IMHO. Not every film has to move fast. TMP is designed to project a sense of awe and wonder and it does so marvelously.

"This sequence was all about arriving at the Enterprise and cruising around it and doing the series of reveal shots. As you approach, you have to look through this drydock to the Enterprise which is docked inside of it so you never quite get to see it. ... The shuttle comes around and it turns and it faces the Enterprise from the front. That's the big reveal shot. And that was where Goldsmith cut lose with the most beautiful music cue ever. And you get to see the Enterprise in its full glory."

"I wanted it to be this beautiful, epic, spectacular sequence that had no dialog, no story, no plot. Everything stops. And let the audience just love the Enterprise. I wanted everybody to buy into the beauty of space and the beauty of their mission and the beauty of the Enterprise itself. And just have everybody get out of the way and let that happen, which was something I'd really learned with Kubrick on 2001 -- stop talking for a while and just let it all flow."
-- Doug Trumbull

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NCC-1701 was as much a star of the show as any of the actors. I got exactly why Trumbull shot it that way.
 
So you missed the entire point of my post, then? It wasn't raw footage at all. It was directed and edited by Trumbull with Wise's permission. The sequences were as designed and were the pace they were deliberately.
I missed nothing.

It was deliberately paced by Trumbull.

Wise said he would have cut it down, had he had time. Did you miss that?

It was that hard release date that was a significant factor in why we got the imperfect film that we did.
 
I missed nothing.

It was deliberately paced by Trumbull.

Wise said he would have cut it down, had he had time. Did you miss that?

It was that hard release date that was a significant factor in why we got the imperfect film that we did.
Directors are not always the best judge of their own work. Nick Meyer, Leonard Nimoy, and William Shatner all wanted to do things to their films that would have made them worse.

I do agree with Nick Meyer's oft repeated phase that "art thrives on restrictions." The pressures of time often result in a better product than endless tinkering does.

In this case, Trumbull wasn't just a visual effects artist. He was a director in his own right who was trusted by Wise to actually direct several sequences. The fact that Wise may have directed them differently doesn't make them "raw footage." The sequences were deliberately put together as they are. If Wise had chosen to then go in and cut them down, he would have been mistaken, IMHO.

But, then again, I'm one who, while loving both films, thinks that TMP is superior to TWOK, so I always assume my opinion is in the minority.
 
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