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The problem is why even have her say she will die, promising some sort of drama, and then so casually take this out of the story completely. Even that she deeply wanted to become a doctor never again comes up in the episode. 2 completely useless plotpoints
 
More references to other starships experiencing system malfunctions, continuing the contemporary practice of carrying plot threads from previous episodes. None of this would have been seen during TOS.
You remember that there were, like, three direct sequels to "Errand of Mercy," right? It was always "the treaty" this and "the treaty" that whenever the Klingons showed up. And "By Any Other Name" was swarming with call-backs to earlier episodes.
 
On the positive side, yes I did enjoy the concept of the immigrant aliens hiding in plain sight thanks to being hidden by a black-and-white world, as mentioned by Warped, a concept very similar to Lokai and Bele whose only difference were where their skin colours were placed.

Sekara was a fun hyper-active character, though sometimes inching too close to cringey-nerdy. The ladies' costuming was really nice, however the alien men's seemed too much in the vein of 1001 Arabian Nights.

I found it strange when Sulu was planetside, and they traded Kipleigh Brown to the helm when the wigged Lisa Hansell became navigator (Brown couldn't stay on navigation to say her lines?)

all in all, yes, this was a pertinent topic having to do with tolerance and opening your hearts to your neighbours...a message too often ignored by most (a personal anecdote: for 5 years I was the immigrant joining a completely different culture. I'm so glad I wasn't treated as some are being treated when they seek a new life)
 
And then there is the fan service. We actually see a Starfleet officer wearing a TMP era outfit.
Wasn't there about 12 years (our time) between OG Trek season 3 and TMP? Unless it has been specified somewhere NOT in a Trek novel or some other nonsense that year 5 of Enterprise's mission is only a handful of years before the new suits, it seems bizarre that Starfleet would have already transitioned to the earth-colours...
 
Wasn't there about 12 years (our time) between OG Trek season 3 and TMP? Unless it has been specified somewhere NOT in a Trek novel or some other nonsense that year 5 of Enterprise's mission is only a handful of years before the new suits, it seems bizarre that Starfleet would have already transitioned to the earth-colours...
4.5 years is the most commonly cited period, I think, although it may be slightly longer.
 
a callback is NOT a running subplot

What's the difference? Should we dig up Gene Roddenberry and put him on trial like a disfavored Pope so we can confirm that no one ever expected we'd see the Klingons more than once twice thrice, or Spock wouldn't be psychic on a regular basis, and he never committed the degenerate modernist sin of thinking ahead?

Wasn't there about 12 years (our time) between OG Trek season 3 and TMP? Unless it has been specified somewhere NOT in a Trek novel or some other nonsense that year 5 of Enterprise's mission is only a handful of years before the new suits, it seems bizarre that Starfleet would have already transitioned to the earth-colours...

It's in the movie. Twice. "Two and a half years as Chief of Starfleet Operations," "You haven't logged a single star-hour in two and a half years." Sure, you can pretend there was some unseen post-TOS period where Kirk was still captaining about on a different ship with a different crew doing things that wouldn't add to his total of "five years out there, dealing with unknowns like this," but while we're being so magnanimous, why not just pretend the runner of ship malfunctions was just random production flavor (like the Romulan-Klingon alliance) which happened to be exploited by a later writer (like the Klingon-Federation peace treaty)?
 
What do you mean by our time?
It was about 12 years after Star Trek ended production and until TMP was released (don't quote me on the dates)

What's the difference? Should we dig up Gene Roddenberry and put him on trial like a disfavored Pope so we can confirm that no one ever expected we'd see the Klingons more than once twice thrice, or Spock wouldn't be psychic on a regular basis, and he never committed the degenerate modernist sin of thinking ahead?
A callback is something from a past episode that is referred to once or more. For instance your example of the Klingons and their involvement with the Organians...
A running subplot is a subplot that appears in a succession of episodes, independent of each episode's main story, that build upon each other and eventually become part of a main story and they get concluded (for example, the destruction of multiple Starships that becomes part of To Boldly Go)
 
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It was about 12 years after Star Trek ended production and until TMP was released (don't quote me on the dates)
That's what I assumed you meant.
≈9.3 years passed between the end of production on TOS and the start of production on TMP
≈10.7 years passed between the end of production on TOS and the premiere of TMP
≈10.5 years passed between the airing of "Turnabout Intruder" and the premiere of TMP
 
Upthread I mentioned one of the small(ish) things that underlines these productions feeling very contemporary is the dialogue and speech patterns and mannerisms common today that are subtly, and sometimes not so subtly, different from fifty years ago. This is also true in terms of how people move and carry themselves. Compared to today even everyday speech of decades past feels more formal, a bit more reserved and measured. And this is true of body language as well. We mighn’t pay much attention to it, but it’s there and we pick up on it even if unconsciously.

People write what they know so this is something very difficult to guard against.

But allow me to cite two examples where the writers and actors of given shows made a conscious effort to feel more authentic to the time periods their respective shows were set. Mad Men and The Gilded Age.

Mad Men is set in the 1960s. Not only did they take pains to recreate the look and sound of the 1960s, but the actors talk like people of the 1960s. They don’t sound at all like people of the 21st century running around in 1960s fashions. They not only walked the walk, but they also talked the talk. A somewhat subtle thing that really helps the viewer feel like they’re looking back into the past.

The Gilded Age does the same thing. The characters not only look like they’re in the late 19th century they also walk, move and talk like they’re from the 1880s. It really sells the suspension of disbelief.

TOS was a product of the 1960s and as such the characters were written and performed as people of that era. If you want your production to really feel like 1969 then creating nice sets, fashioning convincing visuals and using period music is all well and good, but you’re not quite there until your characters actually speak and behave as if they’re denizens of that era.

And this is where STC and pretty much every fan production trying to recreate TOS falls down—the characters don’t sound and act like people who exist in the TOS universe we’re familiar with.

Now in fairness most fan productions are essentially adult cosplay for fun. It's playing dress-up on a somewhat more elaborate than usual scale. To that end you just roll with it for fun. But when something puts itself forward as being a cut or two above the usual cosplay then don't be surprised if expectations are set somewhat higher.
 
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Mad Men is set in the 1960s. Not only did they take pains to recreate the look and sound of the 1960s, but the actors talk like people of the 1960s. They don’t sound at all like people of the 21st century running around in 1960s fashions.
Mad Men is better than most, but still had linguistic "tells" that give away the people aren't from the era, like frequently using "should" when people back then would probably use "ought" and the use of words like "leverage" in a business context that didn't exist under the Reagan administration.
 
The character of McKennah has effectively sidelined McCoy almost all together.
This was one of my gripes when watching STC. I felt McCoy got shortchanged thanks to McKennah, not that I didn't like the character. It's just something that never would have happened during TOS.
 
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