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What I concluded from this episode on ship layout:
  1. The Klingons control Deck 6 and starboard Deck 7; they started in the Crew Lounge suggesting this was on Deck 6 or 7; Kirk escapes and takes a turbolift to Sickbay suggesting Sickbay in not on that deck. (Other episodes suggest Sickbay is on Deck 5.)
  2. The majority of the crew are trapped below decks, suggesting Decks 8 and below which completely includes the Engineering Hull. I assumed the Entity influenced the crew to go to these lower levels prior to sealing the bulkheads. If true, then Main Engineering is not in the Engineering Hull, rather it is in the Saucer. (Unless there are two Engineering Rooms that look the same, one in the Saucer and one in the Engineering Hull.)
  3. Mara leaves main Engineering to go to the main life-support couplings on Deck 6; this suggests that Main Engineering is not on Deck 6. Coupled with the above statement that the Klingons control Deck 6 and part of Deck 7, so, I conclude that Main Engineering (two story set) is on Deck 7 (with the upper level extending into Deck 6). To further confuse the issue, at the end of the episode, the Entity leaves Main Engineering and seems to directly exit the ship from the fore middle level of the Engineering Hull, so, did the Entity trip and fall down a turboshaft from the saucer into the Engineering Hull on the way out? :shrug:
  4. Kirk used the Transporter Room to beam into Main Engineering. If we are to believe that the Klingons really control Deck 6 and starboard Deck 7, then the Transporter Room has to be on Deck 5 or above, or on the port side of Deck 7. Of course, there's the old argument for multiple Transporter Rooms... I prefer two Transporter Rooms both on Deck 7 (one on the port side and one on the starboard side, but that's just my opinion.
YMVV :).
I really must get around to finishing my set of deck plans one of these days! :whistle:
Just one thought:

The majority of the crew are trapped below decks, suggesting Decks 8 and below which completely includes the Engineering Hull. I assumed the Entity influenced the crew to go to these lower levels prior to sealing the bulkheads. If true, then Main Engineering is not in the Engineering Hull, rather it is in the Saucer. (Unless there are two Engineering Rooms that look the same, one in the Saucer and one in the Engineering Hull.)

When Uhura makes her statement she is on the Bridge, where technically all the other decks are the "lower levels". So this leaves open the option for the entity to have trapped the majority of the crew in the outer areas of the saucer (where I presume most of the crew quarters are). It would be easy for the entity to leave bulkheads open to enable the "Fighting 38s" to access key areas of the ship such as Engineering, even if it is in the secondary hull.
 
It does seem a little uncool for McCoy to be like "I'm dying so sure I'll marry you. What? I'm cured? See ya!"
This is how I remembered the episode, but then upon rewatching it, I noticed that McCoy actually backpedals about the marriage even before they find a cure!!
I guess he realized that wasn't for him anyway, even if he was still going to die. After all, five minutes after having the instrument of obedience implanted, he's already disobeying... Natira also realizes that, as long as Kirk & Spock are alive, McCoy's gonna keep disobeying.
 
As a kid in the 70's I used to be amazed that everything about an entire culture could be stored in a computer. Decades later I realized we do have that. We call it the internet.

It does seem a little uncool for McCoy to be like "I'm dying so sure I'll marry you. What? I'm cured? See ya!"
Probably I’m just sentimental, but I’ve always felt that if I were in charge of a TOS continuity reimagining, there’d be a reimagined version of this story in which not only does McCoy stay married to Natira, but she joins him on the Enterprise to become a regular. (Or alternately, he joins her in New Yonada and becomes a semi-regular guest star.)
 
"Day of the Dove" by Jerome Bixby

This has always been one of my favorite episodes. Yes, I would listen to Michael Ansara read a technical manual. :hugegrin:

This one throws you right in the action! Kirk, Chekov, McCoy, and a redshirt beam down to a planet. They've received a distress call, but there's no sign of a colony every having been there. Klingons beam down and capture them. Apparently, they also got a distress call and their ship has been horribly damaged. Chekov attacks, claiming Klingons killed his brother. Kang, the leader, tortures Chekov until Kirk agrees to beam them all up to Enterprise. However, he signaled Spock so the landing party beams up first. They Klingons are taken prisoner. They beam over the remaining Klingons from their ship, including Kang's wife and science officer, Mara. Then they destroy to damaged Klingon ship.

Nobody notices the spinning ball of light.

Uhura can't contact the Federation and the ship starts moving at Warp 9 towards the edge of the galaxy. "The entity then traps 392 members of the Enterprise's crew below decks by closing bulkheads and making them impenetrable. The 38 remaining members of the crew are equal in numbers to the Klingons. With tempers high – and spurred on by the sudden materialization of swords and other antique hand weapons – they begin to fight."

We find out from Sulu that Chekov is an only child. Tensions - and racism are high. Everyone is effected eventually, even Spock. Chekov attempts to sexually assault Mara at one point and it's a disturbing scene. I imagine as a child I didn't get the full horror of it.

Spock figures out there's an alien aboard manipulating them all. It appears to "feed" on hostility and war. Dying crew are suddenly fine. Kirk realizes the entity means for them to be fighting each other forever. He convinces Mara it isn't a trick and they use (dangerous) intraship beaming to get to Kang in Engineering. Kirk and Kang fight, but eventually Kirk tosses his weapon and gets Kang to see the entity and what it's doing to them. I have always loved the ending of laughing the damn thing off the ship.

A really good episode with a lot of tension and danger. I loved how Mara is afraid of being taken prisoner and her comments about the Klingons needing to expand to survive. It was good to see their point of view (even if it's propaganda). Ansara is terrific as Kang and Chekov, McCoy, and Scotty all get some nice scenes.
For me, the opening teaser is the best in all of Star Trek for quickly setting up that the main antagonist is a match for James T. Kirk and show he'll give Kirk a run for his money, and that's the scene where Michael Ansara as Kang confidently strides up to Kirk and Bitch Slaps Kirk to the ground in one blow...

Shots fired and right there you know this episode will be a test of wills between two evenly matched opponents.

A true classic episode that's in my top 10 list.
 
The great thing about Kang is he is cool and calculating. But he will recognize who his enemies actually are. While it does take convincing, he does.

I like how he is pragmatic enough to say he will fight only for the interests of his people and not needing help to hate humans.

Great character and Klingon. Fantastic presence.
 
Hear, hear. Riley was written in that scene as the funny drunk. It was a gag. At most, I say the Franz Joseph bowling alley is in a convertible space with portable fittings. The room can be configured on the fly for various activities, the way a high school swimming pool might have a slide-out floor for dances and such.

BTW, the White House has a one-lane bowling alley in the basement.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/White_House_basement
that white house bowling allet setup actually reminds me of the post-TMP torpedo bay
 
That's a good example of a third season bottle show that really works, as you say largely down to Ansara providing a very worthy adversary/ally for Kirk. The whole cast are excellent in that one.
I prefer Kang over Khan, if I'm gonna be honest. I also feel Day of the Dove was the better overall story and I feel if DOTD were done earlier, and ben done a little less over the top, it may be considered the better episode than Space Seed and we would have gotten "The Wrath of Kang" in 1982.

As it stands, I watch this one a LOT more than I do Space Seed.
 
The great thing about Kang is he is cool and calculating. But he will recognize who his enemies actually are. While it does take convincing, he does.

I like how he is pragmatic enough to say he will fight only for the interests of his people and not needing help to hate humans.

Great character and Klingon. Fantastic presence.
One of the best Klingon characters in the franchise.
 
"The Tholian Web" by Judy Burns and Chet Richards.

"The Enterprise is approaching the last reported position of the star ship Defiant, which vanished without trace three weeks ago. We are in unsurveyed territory."

Space is weird and all systems have power loss, with no reason they can determine. Sensors don't see it, but the crew see Defiant, drifting in space. Kirk, Spock, Chekov, and McCoy beam over to it, wearing space suits (for once!). Everyone is dead - and they appear to have killed each other. While checking out Engineering, Chekov gets woozy.

McCoy notices that the bodies and the ship are fading and becoming insubstantial. The party decides to leave, but the transporter isn't locking on correctly, so Kirk stays behind... and disappears with the Defiant!

Spock determines that the local space is experiencing periods of "interphase", when two parallel dimensions merge. He believes Kirk will reappear during the next interphase. Then another ship shows up, from the Tholian Assembly. Their captain agrees to wait the 2 hours until interphase for the rescue of Kirk. However, Kirk doesn't reappear and the Tholians fire on the Enterprise. Spock fires back, disabling the Tholian ship, but Enterprise has taken a lot of damage. Meanwhile, Chekov attacks Spock in a rage and has to be nerve pinched and taken to sickbay. A 2nd Tholian ship shows up. In one of the cooler looking effects of TOS, the 2 ships join and then start "weaving" an energy web around Enterprise.

McCoy acts like as ass to Spock as the madness spreads among the crew. Spock holds a small memorial to declare Kirk dead. McCoy and Spock view Kirk's last orders, which encourages them to work together. McCoy apologizes (!) and goes back to trying to find an antidote to the crazy.

Uhura sees a ghostly apparition of the Captain and runs into the hall to get to Spock, collapsing in McCoy's arms. They both assume she's losing it and she goes to sickbay. (The appearance of Kirk in Uhura's quarters was about the only thing I remembered from this episode. But I would've sworn she was wearing pink, not red.)

Scotty sees Kirk too and eventually several people, including Spock and McCoy, see him on the bridge. Uhura is released from sickbay. Spock and Scotty figure out that the exchange of phasers with the Tholians sent the Defiant elsewhere, but Kirk stayed. They calculate the next interphase and prepare.

McCoy finally finds an antidote and distributes it (Scotty wants to know if it will mix with Scotch). They lock onto Kirk with the transporter. Somehow, using ship's power throws them free of the Tholian's web. They beam Kirk aboard as his oxygen is running out.

We end with Kirk asking (with some apprehension) Spock and McCoy about any trouble they had with each other and if his last orders were any help. Spock and McCoy lie - they deny any issues and say they didn't have time to watch his tape.

Except for some plot holes (What happens to the Tholians? Didn't they pursue? Or was Enterprise thrown out of the space the Tholians claimed was theirs? How did McCoy come up with using a Klingon nerve gas derivative as an antidote?), this is a suspenseful episode, made more so by the intercutting with the web getting more complete. Nimoy and Kelley are terrific in their scenes together, and Uhura gets a nice spotlight. This is also an example of a well done bottle episode.
 
@Tallguy

Since I promised I'd watch The Lieutenant in February, and I have the extra time, that's what I'm doing. The full season playlist is no longer available on YouTube, and I can't find the series on Amazon Prime, but I did find one episode. So, I'm watching...

The Lieutenant -- "The Two-Star General" (S1E4)

Based on this one episode, The Lieutenant feels much more like a workplace drama that happens to take place in the Marine Corps. This is what I imagine TOS would be like if it took place on Earth, in the 20th Century, without the science-fiction stories, without the action/adventure, and if the main character was a subordinate instead of at the command level making the big decisions.

By taking out most of what I associate with TOS, I can see how Gene Roddenberry relished at the chance to make Star Trek and to be able to tell stories he couldn't in The Lieutenant and really use his imagination.

The main character, Lieutenant William Tiberius Rice is played by Gary Lockwood, a.k.a. Gary Mitchell. "Tiberius" is obviously later Kirk's middle name. It's also interesting to note that William T. Rice as a name doesn't look that much different from William T. Riker, Kirk's counterpart in TNG Season 1. Metaphorically, if you go from Rice to S1 Riker to Kirk, it's essentially the same character at different stages of his career from Lieutenant to Commander to Captain. There's an in-joke I never knew of before in "The Arsenal of Freedom" when Riker encounters a facsimile of a Captain Rice.

To illustrate the difference between The Lieutenant and TOS: At one point in "Where No Man Has Gone Before", Mitchell recalls setting Kirk up on a date with little blonde lab technician who he almost married. For the sake of argument, we'll call her Carol Marcus. If this were The Lieutenant, Kirk would be Rice, and the episode would be about Rice's friend setting him up with Carol, they'd fall in love hard and fast, and they'd almost get married, but something would happen so they wouldn't in order to maintain the status quo required by 1960s episodic television.

At one point, in this very episode I watched, Rice is dating a service brat daughter. The father, a superior officer, warns him to focus more on his career than on women. In what little I've seen of Rice, he seems in line with what I think of when TOS referred back to Kirk's younger days. He's a serious and uptight officer but had also been involved in a lot of relationships.

General Stone, who Lieutenant Rice is assigned to, is a Commanding Officer who takes risks and has a lot on his mind he a prepares for a conference in Washington. We don't see how Stone conducts himself during the actual conference, but the fact that he's a risk-taker is something that carries over into Kirk. After this meeting we don't see, he's promoted to a Two-Star General (thus the title of the episode). Stone also likes reading detective stories, similar to how Picard is a fan of the fictional detective Dixon Hill.

By looking at Stone's decision-making process, I can see how it translates into Kirk or Picard, and it's interesting to keep in the back of my mind when looking at the Roddenberry-created Captains. Rice, as Stone's aide, is trying to give Stone a letter from an officer's wife who Stone had to discharge. Rice says the officer's wife explained there were extenuating circumstances that the discharged officer didn't want to state. Stone cuts Rice off and says there are always extenuating circumstances. He also tells Rice that as a Commanding Officer he doesn't always have the luxury of being either fair or kind. Stone, not being a main character, doesn't have to be likable to an audience, so he can say these things that Kirk or Picard can't. With Kirk or Picard, most of the time, you have to look for subtext. But then Stone says a Commanding Officer also doesn't have the luxury of being wrong. So, when he sees what the extenuating circumstance was, he wants to have the discharged officer reinstated. The CO will do what he has to do but will make sure it's the right thing to do. That definitely translates into what we'll see in Star Trek.

At the end of the episode, Rice's temporary assignment as Stone's aide is up and he's sent back to his platoon. There was a misunderstanding earlier in the episode that Rice's ambition was to be Stone's aide and works his way up behind a desk, but Rice wants to be with his platoon. For sure this is something we'll see similarly with Kirk. It gives me some new insight into Kirk in fact, if Rice is a template. In TMP, there might've been a misunderstanding that Kirk wanted to be an Admiral, he ended up in that situation, felt duty-bound to accept promotion, but regretted it because he really just wanted to be Captain. Earlier in Kirk's career, again using Rice as a template, I imagine Kirk was thrown into all kinds of situations and that's a lot of what made his career. Being brave, taking risks, standing firm, and knowing how to take control of a situation is the rest of what made his career when he was thrown into such situations.

Since I can no longer find the entire show readily available, I can't promise to watch more any time soon, but it is on my Watch List now, and I'm glad I took the time to watch at least this particular episode. Even if I don't ever see the rest of the series, I think I got the gist of how it's part of Star Trek's DNA.
Last I checked, the entire series is on YouTube.
 
Last I checked, the entire series is on YouTube.
It was, then I made the mistake of waiting, then I couldn't find it anymore. What I saw gave me enough faith in the series that I'll buy it on DVD.

I've settled on I'm only going to do reviews of TOS when I'm in-between seasons of reviewing '90s Trek. At those points, I might work in some more of The Lieutenant too. No promises.
 
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The Tholian web is a fan favorite that I'm just not that crazy about. Whatever the fine line is between "McCoy is the flip side of Spock" and "Well, now he's just being a jerk" this episode is on the wrong side of it.

But... Spacesuits! And Tholians!
 
Yeah, I've never understood Bones' thinking that Spock somehow wants Kirk out of the way so he can be Captain. There's nothing Spock ever does or says to back that up. In fact, Spock usually shows he *doesn't* want to be Captain! So whenever McCoy brings that crap up, it just makes me mad at him.

But the spacesuits and Tholians are cool. :cool:
 
One can write off all of the erratic and out of character behavior as being caused by the area of space. McCoy said the distortion to the nervous system was affecting the whole crew, and that would include him. McCoy did admit that his behavior could be because of the area of space [transcript]:

MCCOY: Spock! It must be this space. It's getting to me too. I know it's nothing you've done, Spock. I, I'm sorry.​
SPOCK: I understand, Doctor. I'm sure the Captain would simply have said forget it, Bones.​
(McCoy collapses as Scott enters.)​

But ultimately, I think it's bad for the story, because as an explanation for the spiteful behavior it would rob us of genuine character interaction. The alternative that it's just bad writing for not being true to the characters also doesn't reflect well on the episode.

The original VFX were spectacular and resulted in an Emmy nomination. It's a shame they're now hidden behind the inferior CGI VFX.

The Tholian depiction on the viewer was fantastic, as was Babcock's multitrack(?) performance(s) as the voice of Loskene.
 
I love how Kirk and his officers don't even touch the bodies of the dead, strangulated Defiant Captain and the officer who killed him. Just leave them on the deckplating for Mirror Archer and his people to get out of the way when the ship ends up in that universe.
 
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