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Inspiration, Method and Discovery in writing Star Beagle Adventures

Robert Bruce Scott

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I am nearing the end of posting the Star Trek Hunter series on Trek BBS.

I am now posting Star Beagle Adventures on the new Ad Astra site - here is the link:

Star Beagle Adventures - Episode 1: The Eye of the Beholder


In Star Trek Hunter, the story focused around Dr. Kenny Dolphin, a middle aged philosopher who was divorced and had two adult, estranged daughters. While there is a very big story moving around STH, at heart the story that I set out to tell was the impact of Dolphin’s philosophy on the Federation and his reconciliation and reunion with his daughters - the most important thing in his life. Dolphin is a New England WASP and is very guarded with his emotions.

For Star Beagle Adventures, I wanted a different kind of hero. It seems to me that while gay men and lesbians have been increasingly represented in fiction, gay men in particular have been largely presented as metrosexual or masculine. The more effeminate gay man - often self-identifying as queer - is largely treated as a jokey character and not taken seriously. So I wanted to show such a man in a strong leadership position.

Emotionally, Skip Howard, an aristocrat from San Diego, is the polar opposite of Kenny Dolphin. Howard is warm, open with his emotions and has no inhibitions in expressing love and compassion. I also wanted to present him as a man who was completely accepted and loved by his family. No doubt Kenny Dolphin’s family loved him, but they were uncomfortable with any big expressions of that love - in keeping with WASP culture. Not so with the Howards, who are very effusive.

Dolphin’s story with STH begins in his mid-50’s and, despite his writings having an enormous impact on Federation culture (actually in no small part because of that impact), he sees himself largely as a failure.

Skip Howard is the youngest captain in Star Fleet, entirely by nepotism, and is completely unashamed of having taken advantage of his family connections to get there and to get a plum assignment. He started out with a great hand, but he has played that hand extremely well.


After a year of writer’s block, I am suddenly producing Star Beagle Adventures at a breakneck pace, averaging a scene every day or 2 days.

One odd idea I hit on was to use the lyrics and titles of Yes songs to inspire and structure each adventure. So Episode 2 is Astral Traveller and Episode 3, which is nearly complete, is Yours Is No Disgrace. For those not familiar with the trippy acid rock lyrics of Yes - I encourage you to dig them up and listen. Wonders await beyond your wildest imagination…


In writing SBA, I don’t feel any need for a lot of high action starship battles or hand-to-hand combat. It will show up when it’s part of the story. I’m more interested in problem solving and particularly in how my characters deal with moral problems and social issues.


I have more than once talked about my writing method: Know your characters. Invent a problem. Call your characters to the stage and watch how they deal with it. I discover details of the problem with my characters. As much as possible, I try to not control their actions, but simply to observe and record them.


Right now there is a creative fervor at Trek BBS - particularly with admiralelm11, Zephram_Cochrane, BountyTrek and several others in full production.

I hope that, especially as you are in the midst of a very productive writing period, that you will take a moment and share your process, your inspiration, your motives with the other writers here - which can be particularly helpful to those currently experiencing writer’s block.

Thanks!! rbs
 
I have more than once talked about my writing method: Know your characters. Invent a problem. Call your characters to the stage and watch how they deal with it. I discover details of the problem with my characters. As much as possible, I try to not control their actions, but simply to observe and record them.
I have a similar, but slightly less collected writing style. I like the idea of building from the foundation, up, like a house; I once built houses. Lay the foundation, outline the overall structure (frame out the walls, rooms, major spaces) work your way in towards greater and greater detail and levels of finish work. Make sure the roof is on before you start doing the sheet rock, plaster, and paint. Edit, go back and fix the mistakes or apply the final finishing touches.

However, that's not how I actually write. My approach is to have a basic and very vague concept. I've thought of an inspiring hook, character, interaction, element, and I plan to do everything I just laid out above, so I start writing. But...
I keep writing. There's the opening sceme, the introduction of the main character or one of them, or however I decided to begin my story and I get caught in the build of that scene, that room, that moment of action.

At that point I figure my outline will come together as I write the story. I need my character to be a certain age for that first appearance, be a certain race and/or gender,... I write it in the story. Then, I force myself to break and open my character or notes file and I enter that new information into their profile. Sometimes I get lost in the profile and before I know it, I've written a whole other story around that character with background, family, education, quirks and idioms. Then I get back to my story to see what else pops up.

I make notes and write scenes out of context or ideas for scenes, all of which goes into my notes file. Sometimes that file is simply at the bottom of my document and I just scroll down to add entries. There are also times I write something in my story, that I realize later, conflicts with my notes and character records. Then I have to decide to either fix my story or, what happens more often, I fix my notes.

Consistency and avoiding obvious conflicts in the writing isn't as easy as it seems it should be. I've written stories where the main character's name changed half way through it. How the ... does that happen? I think I'm paying attention, then all of a sudden I realize, I finished writing about Joe when I started writing about Joan. :brickwall:

But, like rbs, I let the characters and the circumstances tell me who they are, then I try to remain true to that discovery.

Writing is as adventurous as reading, just slower.

-Will
 
Process? I’m supposed to have a process? Lol! I’m sorry. I can be humorous sometimes but my jokes don’t always zig when they want to zag. I mostly just sit at my desk, turn on the laptop, open a new document and start writing while I have music or a show from a streaming service playing in the background. I usually get lost in a trance by then with the writing. And yes, for Star Trek: Into the Void ‘Shatterhand’, I was playing a Bond movie in the background.
Anyways, that’s what I do. I also keep lists of character names that I create and I constantly update them because of my OCD that helps me procrastinate some…

Any other questions or insights?
 
I mostly just sit at my desk, turn on the laptop, open a new document and start writing while I have music or a show from a streaming service playing in the background. I usually get lost in a trance by then with the writing.

You almost certainly have a method, but it might not be too good an idea to get introspective about it - kind of like asking a golf pro details about his grip just before the big tourney...

Thanks!! rbs
 
Process? I’m supposed to have a process? Lol! I’m sorry. I can be humorous sometimes but my jokes don’t always zig when they want to zag. I mostly just sit at my desk, turn on the laptop, open a new document and start writing while I have music or a show from a streaming service playing in the background. I usually get lost in a trance by then with the writing. And yes, for Star Trek: Into the Void ‘Shatterhand’, I was playing a Bond movie in the background.
Anyways, that’s what I do. I also keep lists of character names that I create and I constantly update them because of my OCD that helps me procrastinate some…

Any other questions or insights?
I do that too with my characthers by keeping lists.
 
I’m not sure I really have any sort of detailed advice to offer to be honest. When it comes to writing, I've always thought it best for everyone to find their own approach that works. Except that when it comes to writers block, I find it helps to have multiple projects on the go at the same time. If nothing’s happening on one front, I can always set that aside and move onto something else. Write a short story. Write the great American novel. Write a letter to your cat. Write the sequel to Reservoir Dogs. Just write. To be honest, messing around with fanfics is one of the things I turn to whenever I hit a block with my other (equally unsuccessful) writing pursuits. :lol:

I tend to visualize the scene I'm writing like I'm watching a tv show.

I do this as well. :techman: Not sure if it’s a strength or a weakness, but I’m more used to writing in script/TV format, so a lot of the Bounty stories (and the series as a whole) have been pictured and structured in that way in my head. In terms of episodes/acts/scenes, plotting, story length and so on. I’m not sure it really helps me in a prose format, and it sometimes feels the stories get mired in setup and are a little slow to get going, which might not be an issue in the first act of a 45 minute TV episode, but feels like more of an issue if you’re asking someone to read a 35,000+ word story. Ah well, here we are. :)
 
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